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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: pinalkpatel

Oh my god !!!! This update was sooo hot!!! Please keep it!


Thank you so much...!! 😳
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: bushraurooj

thank you so much for the wonderful update... it was full of love and romance..


Thank you so much dear...!! 😃
Glad you loved the update...
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: aman.bindra

Mou mou mou!!

First of all hope you are all better now!!

For the story hayee Kya bolun...I loveddd this bold Naina!! All her gestures from hand hold, waist hold, and going all in for the kiss😳. .totally blushing throughout!! I think I have re-read it 3 times in a single day and still have same lingering effect each time!!

Love the way you are progressing their relationship!! Can't get over it!! I think in all your stories your portray Naina as not so seedhe that Sameer gets cleaned bowled every time! 😆 maza AA gaya!!


Omg Aman...!! 3 times in a single day...!! You made me so happy dear...

Hahaa... what can I do yaar... I am not so seedhi myself... and I always felt Naina has this hidden side to her personality.. and see it's slowly coming out in the show as well... 😃 I just can't help myself from exploring this side of her... Sameer, we all know, is romantic, flirty, passionate... And Naina has all the skills to match up the level of his heat and sometime even stun him...

Glad you loved the update dear... And I am much better now... 😳
Thank you so much for the lovely note and the appreciation dear...!!
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Posted: 7 years ago

Thank you...! 😃
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Adeeba.Ayub

First of alll , welllcccooomeee baaack !
Oh how much I missed this brilliance <3
Hope you are doing well now.
*huuugg*

The way Naina's eyes crinkled with smile , mine did too when I saw your message. Wohooo

Thanks for the welcome Adeeba... Hugs right back at you...!! 🤗
I missed the forum and all of you too... am much better now... trust me, I wanted to write even in those 2 weeks, my mind was exploding with ideas, but I just didn't have enough energy to focus and concentrate on writing... and the medicines, yuck, they made me so woozy... 🥱

Okay , how can you keep getting better and better?! <3
I loved every single bit of this update.

From the screeching of pens in the last five minutes to the bold declaration of love.
@Bold: Is it? Really? Thanks a lot for the appreciation dear...!! 😳

Naina reprimanding him to focus on the paper though . Haha
And like an oh so good student he answers all her questions before her asking anything.
CUTEST

Hahhaa... he knows his Naina very well... so he obediently answered even before she could ask him... 😉

And how mature is this 18 year old Maheshwari.
'Shaadi wala pyaar' right there.
Maybe this was 'un dinon' ki baat where guys were not sacred of commitment and had their priorities sorted.
Though Naina is still timid and it is justified. It is a big deal for a girl.
But Naina sang Sameer toh hoke hi rahega.
' I am always yours' . <3

They are already committed at heart... they belong to each other... And we know how Sameer is always demanding her attention... so his mind landed upon the perfect solution to have her all to himself... marriage... 😳 And yes, un dinon har aashiq ki daastan sidhe shaadi tak hi pahonchti thi... they didn't think of dating and flirting... it was always direct shaadi... ah, those days!

Is he really a bholuram ? Hahaha
Naina , my girl !
Sorry not sorry Kamya.
And the best part was the happiness reflecting on their friends' faces.
Bless their friendship and love :)
I love how honestly Samer confessed 'usse bhi pehle se' <3

Hehee... yep, bholuram didn't understand why to meet in vacation... shows how flirting with any other girl is something that he cannot even think of... but girls are usually fast to catch-up on these things, especially if its happening to your partner...

Naina has grown so comfortable around Sameer.
The bike ride was enough proof for that.
She didn't even realise. The things just happened. The trust amongst the both of them is so endearing to read. And their love <3
Sameer acting on his instincts. He knows her now.
And she is just holding on to him. And is also making things difficult for him. Hahah
My poor heart is all in a puddle of mushiness.

Yes, she is so comfortable that she didn't realize how she was holding him... but Sameer couldn't ignore it... It had a strong impact on his body... so, this time around he didn't take time to wait patiently for her to initiate or come closer... he just took the time to make her realize what she did to him and then straightaway jumped into it... this impatience unleashed the urgency in Naina too.. and she ended up surprising Sameer with her boldness... 😃

I love this Sameer who is confident and is not taking any shit from Dadi.

The parting and the welcome back gift . ^_^
I love your idea'
I love you'
I love you too'

And I love you Moumita. :D
Much love and God bless <3


Thank you so much for lovely comment as always Adeeba... 😳
You replies are just so soothing to read... my comments are in blue for you...

And I love you too... 🤗

Love,
Mou


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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: TereLiyeMINU

Mou! My sweetheart 🤗

Missed you..Really glad that you are back.Hope you take care of yourself more...❤️

Not finding words to pen down...I mean I am confused as to write what..😆
Still trying...

For me all it meant was this--

There's a drive in them ;the drive searching for acceptance, companionship, belonging, and immense love. The slightest boldness ignites a spark that leads to something meaningful.The meaningful is both emotionally and physically fulfilling.

What I loved about this update is that the gestures did all the talking and words ceased because they could only have come out as superflous.The Kamya scene and the scenes on bike..
And they sharing moments shedding all the inhibitions,fears and limitations shows how far they have come in this journey.The journey more cherishing than the goal.

There was a blissful oblivion around and I blushed at the rubber band..☺️ That was surely something that slid me into mindlessness.

Beautifully you have detailed Dadi scenes..and the parting and welcome gift...Looks like the couple is full of 'perfect' ideas for each other 😉

Loved all of it.

Thank you for te PM and update soon please.

With love-
Minu


Oh Minu... I missed you too sweetheart...!! 🤗
Yes yes, I am taking care of myself... and my hubby goes into panic mode whenever I am sick, doesn't let me do any work... I haven't even cooked since so many days now... Haha... 😆

I am so happy to know you loved it... they are indeed moving ahead in their relationship together at each stage... there is no disconnect, nothing uncomfortable... they can understand each other's silence, so why would they need words to convey...

Ah the rubber band... Whenever I saw Naina in ponytail I wondered if we would see such gesture from Sameer once they are physically comfortable with each other... You know how Sameer turned the fan towards her during Pooja's mehendi ceremony, it was like declaring you are mine and I like to see you with your hair open... 😳

Hahaa... Naina's subconscious touch made Sameer impatient, which in turn unleashed the urgency in Naina... so he got a reward in form of parting gift... and when he demanded welcome gift teasingly, he didn't expect it to be fulfilled, but how can Naina not give him what he wants... 😳

Thanks for the appreciation Minu...!! 😃

Love,
Mou

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: angelic567

As usual stupendous update!

Bold naina is always a treat to read... Truly love has emboldened her... Loved her boldness in both ways... Firstly holding his hands in a possessive way in front of everyone... The way she claimed him to be hers and she wont tolerate any other girl hitting on him... Kamya ki toh bolti bandh kardi usne... N sameer... So so loved how he proudly said he was in love with her always... He was so proud to claim her as his... They both completes each other.

So it was the last day in school... If it was their last exam, then they must be wearing uniforms right?... The how come naina was wearing pink dress... That thing confused me a little... Sameer was right in planning the evening at his home... Romance karne ke liye isse acchi jagah nahi ho sakti😆

That staircase romance was just wow... It kept me blushing throughout 😳... How magically u writes about their intimacy abd kisses... Bike ride was amazing with Sameer ko current lagaoing😆... Naina poor girl didn't even knew what she was doing to him... Sam teasing her about the bike ride... Telling her how he loves her boldness... Love it. 😉

Sam doesn't shy away from romancing her even when his friends were around... Naughty naina bit his finger😳... Bold and and naughty nains is a deadly combo... Sameer can't resist this naina. 😳

Samaina friends are so understanding.. They gave them privacy and left the room... Sam toh wont even waste a second... Slow kisses have turned into wild ecstasy now... Loving this urge they both had while kissing... They wanted to get the most out of each other... Naina kissing him again waz such a treat... Sameer ke liye best parting gift... Loved the way he said he'll keep dreaming about this bold naina.

So u used harshad mehta scam here for somanis... Liked it... Sam has Nanu's ways kf dealing with business... Thats much better than somani's ways... Somani and daadi are so prejudiced about sameer... Glad that they got what they deserved... Sam still offering them help was such a nice gesture.. It was the result of Nanu's upbringing. 😊

Sameer though wanted the welcome gift from her, he never thought she'll actually manage to fulfill his demand... The girl has topper brains... She managed to reach his house and even send everyone away to get some alone time with him... That was great... Sam is again bowled by her..😉

Now that school life has ended, hoping to read about their college life... Can't wait for the next update... Excited about the next phase of their lives. 😃


Thank you so much for the lovely note Simi...!! 😃

Like always, bold Naina is my personal favorite... I can't seem to stop myself from exploring this side of her... 😳
She had tolerate Kamya's flirting since so long... couldn't see it happening any more... And Sameer, he simply couldn't comprehend at first, because he cannot even think of flirting with any other girl apart from Naina... but girls usually have an amazing grasp of situation in these cases.. and of course he loved when she declared him as her own... he had seen her jealous before, but this time she was possessive and came clean about their relationship.

Ah... well... farewells usually happen before board exams.. and during board exams it's not required to wear uniforms... at least that's what happened when I gave my board exams, but that was not in 90s... as far as I know it was the same case in 90s... plus it also depends on which school your roll numbers falls, so it's not necessary they were in PVKM... just for the sake of the story I kept all of them in the same school. Hope this cleared your confusion... 😊

Yep, Naina was so comfortable being close to him that she didn't even realize how she had held him... But Sameer couldn't ignore her touch... it had an impact on his body... that's why this time he didn't patiently wait for her to initiate or come close, instead he just waited enough to let her what she had done to him and then jumped straightaway in the act. And see how he was rewarded... His impatience unleashed the urgency in Naina and she kept on wanting more and more...

The act on the bed during movie was innocent teasing and flirting, they started it without understanding the consequence and the impact it could have on each other.. Sameer almost lost control... and then when he got her alone again, he just couldn't wait one moment more... And Naina too gave in to what she wanted, surprising Sameer... 😳

Sameer and Naina had one year togther since he returned from Delhi, they grew together, solved their problems together, supported each other... and so I wanted to show the difference between the sad insecure Sameer who had returned versus the one he is now... and what better way than showing it in Delhi itself... Plus I wanted to close the Delhi chapter, let those folks know that Sameer Jaiprakash Maheswari isn't one to be intimidated... 😊

He had demanded the welcome gift teasingly, but he didn't really expect it to be fulfilled... But how can Naina not fulfill his demand... She would always find ways to give him what he wants... 😃

Oh dear.. This SS was only based on school life... In fact the next update would be the last one... I will not be delving into college scenario for this story... maybe later if I get some ideas and motivation, I will plan a sequel... but for now this one would end... and it would always remain close to my heart as my first ever creative attempt..

I want to start my new story too after I close this one... Cannot handle three stories at the same time... Hope you will enjoy the other one just as much... 😊


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Posted: 7 years ago
Amazing update dear ..
I have always noticed naina in your fictions is always bold than sameer can ever think off and see your idea has been stolen by the makeers too this time ... It was sweet romantic update loved every bit of it ... Especially that hand hold in front of everyone it was great ... Waiting for next update
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: suhaaniladki

Amazing update dear ..

I have always noticed naina in your fictions is always bold than sameer can ever think off and see your idea has been stolen by the makeers too this time ... It was sweet romantic update loved every bit of it ... Especially that hand hold in front of everyone it was great ... Waiting for next update


Thank you so much Suman...!! 😃

Hahaa... yes yes, I just cannot resist exploring the bold side of Naina... and I was so happy to know that something like this is going to be shown in our show as well... 😳😳

I am so glad you loved the update dear... Will try and update the next one soon...!
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Posted: 7 years ago
Another Super Update..
Aww sam is unhappy as he wont be able to meet naina everyday as the exams are over..bechara sameer..😆😆

Delhi bhi jana hai use naina ko sath leke...😛😛

Wow, I like this bold naina, she declared the relationship in front of Kamya and Hema...also authoritatively put her hand on his...he reciprocated the same..😊😊

Samaina bike ride...❤️

Ahem ahem naina absentmindedly put his hand on his waist..😉😉😉

Their kissing sessions..yaar kitna sensuous tha...😳😳😳

Naina also kissed him back..

Girl is becoming bolder in sameer's Pyaar...👍🏼

Movie scene was also described beautifully..with 3 couples..👍🏼

I like this sameer who without any inhibitions puts forward his thoughts with Mr. Somani..and his instinct was proven right..

Oh..and what a surprise and welcome back gift...superb...😊😊😊

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