Sameer-Naina SS: Lights of Eternity (Deleted...)

Hello Friends... Inspired by all the wonderful writers I have the had the opportunity to meet on this forum, I have also started to weave a story out of my heart. This is my first attempt at story writing.

I am simply so much in love with YUDKBH that I dared to attempt this. Also, the encouragement I have seen pouring in from all of you for all the writers, be it new or experienced, has given me the courage to pen down my thoughts.

This SS is based on the time after Sameer returns to Ahmedabad post Nanu's death. I am mainly trying to focus on the dynamics of Sameer and Naina's relationship both emotionally and physically.

Hope you all enjoy the read. And please let me know your feedbacks and thoughts. 😊

Criticisms and Ande-Tamatar are also welcome. 😃

Part - 1: Return to Ahmedabad https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/146439750

Part - 2: Feeling of HOME https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/146457811

Part - 3: The Rhythm of Love https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/146534441

Part - 4: Change is a way of Life https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/146542025

Part - 5: Acceptance and Belonging https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/146640709

Part - 6: The Time of Many Firsts https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/146752757

Part - 7: You & I are Chemistry https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/146814503

Part - 8: The Birthday Surprise! https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/146881102

Part - 9: Bold in Love https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/147194613

Part - 10: Lights of Eternity https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/147539600

Originally posted by: moumita04

Hello Friends... Inspired by all the wonderful writers I have the had the opportunity to meet on this forum, I have also started to weave a story out of my heart. This is my first attempt at story writing.

I am simply so much in love with YUDKBH that I dared to attempt this. Also, the encouragement I have seen pouring in from all of you for all the writers, be it new or experienced, has given me the courage to pen down my thoughts.

This SS is based on the time after Sameer returns to Ahmedabad post Nanu's death. I am mainly trying to focus on the dynamics of Sameer and Naina's relationship both emotionally and physically.

Hope you all enjoy the read. And please let me know your feedbacks and thoughts. 😊

Criticisms and Ande-Tamatar are also welcome. 😃

Bring it on dear 👍🏼👍🏼

WOW Dear👏👏 This is so beautiful.Felt like reading a page from Ruskin Bond.I always have a strange fetish for trains.Pagal Me.😆 But the entire scene took my heart.And that bookmark..Brilliant idea 👍🏼 Loved the flow and coherence and the suspense of past that lurked around.

If this is your first attempt, then I want be there when you write your 100th story!!!

Originally posted by: TereLiyeMINU

WOW Dear👏👏 This is so beautiful.Felt like reading a page from Ruskin Bond.I always have a strange fetish for trains.Pagal Me.😆 But the entire scene took my heart.And that bookmark..Brilliant idea 👍🏼 Loved the flow and coherence and the suspense of past that lurked around.

Thank you dear for penning it and update the next part soon.

Plz PM me for the next one.

With love-

Minu 😳

Originally posted by: MysticRiver

interesting..

Originally posted by: shelly_nair

Nice one.

Originally posted by: Muggle_Diaries

If this is your first attempt, then I want be there when you write your 100th story!!!

One paragraph in and I already knew I have to read the entire story.

The flow was so natural, the feel of the characters on point.

Be it Sameer, Naina, Or Munna.

The entire scene was written in a way that made me part of his train journey. Brilliant beginning.

Love

Kshithi

Please update soon...as all are having different imagination...

You writing is beautiful as if story is playing in front of our eyes...


Please continue and update next part soon

I cant believe this was your first attempt... So good and beautiful... You described sameer's thoughts in such a beautiful way... Loved it... Will be waiting for the next part... Pls update soon