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MSK04

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Posted: 7 years ago

#541

Originally posted by: toshibelekar
Good, take care. update story as per ur convenience.

We love ur writings.

Thank you so much Toshi...!! 😃

I am taking care of myself for sure... 😳

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Ankita.jaiswal

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Posted: 7 years ago

#542

Dear mou ...a lovely write up... I m not surprised...I m now used to your high standards

I m a absolutely in love with this bold naina who is out to fulfil her bodily and heart's desire...

I wish to see this side of her persona in the serial Roto but I m not much hopeful.

You have beautifully portrayed sameer's growth in terms of his character and worldly wisdom ...he has become a pucca businessman outsmarting his step father even .

One favour I hope I can ask...please end this dadi chapter in your story...I barely tolerated her in the serial and I don't want to be reminded of that bundle of unpleasantness in any form...

Eagerly waiting for the next update

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MSK04

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Posted: 7 years ago

#543

Originally posted by: Hitanshivyas
First of all welcome back moumita di and i hope your fine now 😊 and now come to the update it's awesome as always i just love the bold naina they are madly in love with each other I just love them and now eagerly waiting for the next update update soon lots of love to you 😳

Thank you so much Hitanshi...!! 😃

I am doing well now... no worries.

I am glad you loved the update... yes, bold Naina is my personal favorite too... I always feel that she had this special side to her personality that can clean-bowl Sam..and I can't stop myself from exploring it in my stories... 😳

I will try and update soon dear..!

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MSK04

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Posted: 7 years ago

#544

Originally posted by: richurachna
Amazing update.
like sameer attitude

thanks for PM

Thank you so much dear...!! 😃

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MSK04

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Posted: 7 years ago

#545

Originally posted by: Uv78
Welcome back mou, u were missed on forum girl..
Kya hot update tha...and naina!! What a bold avtaar!!
Sameer ko clean bowled toh yahi aavtar kar sakta hai!!!!
For once i thought k manhoos wala track yaha b na aa jai...but u did not bring that...thank u...
Love ur penning...

Thank you so much Uv...!! 😃

I missed the forum too...

Haha... yes... Sameer was impatient after that touchy-touchy bike ride.. .and that unleashed the urgency within Naina too... 😳

Ah... not at all dear... no place for manhoosiyat in this story... You see, Sameer returned from Delhi after 2 months only, and he had ample time in Ahmedabad to develop his skills, learning business, studying.. Naina had made his realize that he needs to fulfill Nanu's dream.. so here there is no scope of him being so foolish... 😆

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MSK04

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Posted: 7 years ago

#546

Originally posted by: -vandy-
Mou🤗
How are you now????

Thanks so much for this lovely update...

I'm simply loving this progression in relationship...
I liked how Sameer was already thinking about marriage. ..

And the bike ride was the star of the update...I'm sure we are going to see the dupatta covered thing in the show very soon...

I loved how comfortable Naina has become with Sameer... intimacy has started coming naturally between them...

Thank so much for updating...last 2 weeks I was going crazy without anything to read..
U have no idea how much I missed your story that u read and re read all your stories again...

And can't wait for tomorrow.. ..Kal bhi update milega. .yayyy

Hey Vandy... I am fine dear... doing much better... 😳

Missed the forum and you... 🤗

Sameer always wants Naina to himself... and he is sad that after 12th they won't be meeting daily.. so but natural his mind lands on the perfect solution to have her all to himself forever... plus he is always possessive and impatient...

Ah the bike ride.. I am still eagerly waiting to see it in the show...

Yes, she was completely comfortable.. and didn't even realize how she was holding him... but it did have an effect on Sameer... He enjoyed it but it also made him impatient enough to kiss her without warning and waiting... this unleashed the urgency within Naina too... 😃

Ah dear... I really wanted to write and update... but simply didn't have the energy to focus and concentrate... plus the medicines made me drowsy...

Have updated the wedding FF too, hope you have read and enjoyed that one as well..! 😊

Thank you so much for the lovely note...!! 😊

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MSK04

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Posted: 7 years ago

#547

Originally posted by: meinfrau14
Hi. I have just discovered your ff's ! you write so weel..especially the 18+ stories without making them sleazy or cheap ! Thats a rare talent...writing about passion and intimacy in such a sensuous way without making anyone cringe at it ! well done and hope to hear lots from you !!

Thank you so much for the appreciation dear...!! 😃

I am so glad you loved all the stories... 😊 Haha, those 18+ OS... started writing them on public demand... and turned out I was quite good in that... Thanks a lot...!

You will definitely keep hearing from me, because as you know I have a SS and FF ongoing.. and I am going to come with a new story soon! And I hope to keep hearing from you on my updates... 😳

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MSK04

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Posted: 7 years ago

#548

Originally posted by: Samaina_1990
Mou! Ise kehte hai angreji me back with a bang! Haha...I loveeedd reading this one...ab I'm finding it difficult to select my fav out of the ones you've updated here n in the wedding FF...but I'm glad you updates this one first...kaafi time se pending tha...
Pehle to dono ka board exam dena...aur Naina ka lucky pen Sameer ke pass n Sam ka gift Naina ke paas...boards me bhi eyelock mil hi gaya...vaise wo sir pls 5 mins more wali student main hun! Lol...
N that confrontation with Kamya! Thank you yaar...mere dil ko sukoon mila...friends ke samne Sam wasn't leaving Naina's hand...n I so knew Naina will hold his hand in front of Kamya ..maza aa gaya padhke...Mt.Abu time se...thank you yaar...Kamya ka chehra phak!
Aur wo movie plan...Sam ko ghar pe...the bike ride...Naina suddenly embolden ho gayi...lagta hai school khatam, Naina ka darr khatam, n Kamya ka kissa bhi khatam...n thanks for not including Safari suit in this update...kyunki kuch log to paida hi muh me karela leke huye the...wo hota to is meethe update ka taste bigad deta...
Naina didn't even realize where she'd kept her hand...shoulders se seedha waist...I just loved Sameer's reaction...I always feel Sam ka to control hi toot jayega...I remember something similar in my own dating days...ek din my hubby, then bf was taking me somewhere on a scooty...first time tha...n I didn't realize but held onto him for support...uska reaction kaafi kuch abhi ke Sam ke jaisa tha hehe...he was like kya kar rahi ho...ye two wheeler hai n I was like maine kya kiya...so u again brought out yaadon ka pitara :)
And that kiss upstairs...main confuse ho gayi ye sweet wale Samaina hai ya expectedly unexpected wale...kahin bhi shuru ho gaye...glad Sam didn't need to do anything...n Naina kissed him of her own will! N wanted more...the way she looked at herself in the mirror aroused...Sam sahi hi keh raha hai...ye dono ko shaadi jald hi kar leni chahiye hehe...oohh n ya...Naina ka baalon ko khula chodna hehe..sone pe suhaga!
I especially liked kaise tumne friends ko bhi busy kar diya...u gv us Preedit, Swamun yay...now our Samaina are free to romance in their presence n no one's gonna notice...master stroke!
I loved the entire romance there...the holding of hands, clutching each other tighter, grazing hands over her arm, around her waist...Naina biting his lip...n Sam ka badla...haaye too hot! Naina melt nai hogi to kya karegi! Suddenly I'm craving chocolate hehe...the emotions were so on point here...the control almost getting lost...n what to say of the parting gift n the welcome gift...Sam darwaza band kar toot pada ...considering the bed in the room, I was thinking baat yahan rukegi ya nahi hehe...n Naina ne aate time bhi sabko bhaga diya Sam ko kiss karne ke liye...aag dono taraf barabar ki lagi hai...
Somani ka popat...dadi ka bhi...acha hua Sam ne suni to apne dil ki...hehe...
Loved it to the core dear Mou! Eager for more kyunki ek se mera kya hoga!

Love
Sur

Sur... yaar... I love to read your notes... 🤗

Yes, this was pending since a long time... shaadi wale romance ke chakkar me innocent school romance reh jaata tha... 😆

I really wanted to cover the aspects of school... somehow missed those in the show.. matlab there was no exam at all... and Sameer to school kab gaya and kab pass hua pata hi nai chala... so filled that gap here in this story...

Hahaa... me too, me too... scribbling furiously in the last minutes... matlab teacher desk tak aaye tab tak likhte raho... 😛

Kamya confrontation - me too wanted to see it yaar... show me kaise suddenly friend ban gai and ekdum sudhar gai... mujhse hajam nai hua somehow... glad you loved it here... 😃 Waise hum dono ki thinking kaafi milti hai, so I guess its natural that we wanted the same sequences...

Hehee... no no... itne time baad update kiya tha.. wanted to keep it all about love and romance... Safari Suit aur romance ek saath kaise ho sakta hai... 😛

Ah... oh... So I manage to remind you of your dating days always... how cure na... I can imagine Jijaji's condition... hahaha... kya kar rahi ho... I hope he explained to you later on ke kya kiya tha tumne... and Sameer ke style me explain kiya ho to aur bhi achcha... *cough, cough* 😉

Ab kya kare... Naina ko to realize nai hua ke usne kya kiya... lekin Sameer pe to touch ka effect ho gaya na... so he just waited for a bit to make her understand what was happening was because of her touch and then straightaway took the dive... thoda bold tha for them... but given Sameer is so impatient, this suited him... plus hamesha to seedha sharif banke intezaar nai karega na ke Naina saamne se initiate kare...! And see how he got the reward... his impatience unleashed the urgency in Naina and she felt that one kiss was not enough... she wanted more and more... 😃

The movie time romance was like a foreplay and yet innocent... They both didn't know what impact their actions could have on the other... Sam was desperate to complete the incomplete sensation from the brief kiss they had shared earlier.. and Naina didn't disappoint him... rather took him by surprise by her own boldness... yep, yep... ab Sameer ne welcome back gift maanga tha to Naina kaise nai deti... especially after Sameer truthfully assured her that he loved this bold side of her... 😳

Haan... friends ko busy karna zaruri tha thoda.. warna bed pe yeh sab kaise hota... 😉 And when Sam closed the door and kissed her, bhagwaan kasam, I too thought about the bed... but they are still too young yaar... so I controlled myself.. and controlled them too... 😃

Thanks for the amazing comment and for the appreciation...! 😳

Love,

Mou

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MSK04

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Posted: 7 years ago

#549

Originally posted by: SixteenAgain
Hi Mou,

First of all good to see that you are feeling much better and back in action again :)

Awesome update dear! Completely bowled by the bold Naina.. Sameer and us readers too ;) I guess this part is dedicated yto transformation.. Naina shedding some of her inhibitions and slowly emerging as a woman. Sameer changing from a young lad to a confident businessman who has learnt to trust his instincts and make wise decisions.

Loved reading the Delhi trip and the way Sam stood up to Dadi and still balancing his relationships with his siblings.

Thank you so much dear...!! 😃

I am much better now... missed the forum so much!

I am glad you loved the update... the transformation had been happening over the whole year since Sameer returned... He was turning into a businessman slowly and steadily... and Naina was shedding her inhibitions to support Sameer... by this time their relationship had grown so much that they are completely comfortable with each other, which is why Naina didn't even realize how she held him... Sameer who usually waited and coaxed her to initiate the kiss, was affected so much by her touch that he was impatient and kissed her straightaway... which led to Naina to find the same urgency in herself... 😳 As for Sameer, I wanted to compare the sad insecure boy to the confident successful businessman he had become in the period of this one year, and what better way to compare than Delhi... 😊

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MSK04

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Posted: 7 years ago

#550

Originally posted by: Azraa01
Absolutely loving the bold Naina and the mature Sameer.
This was an amazingly feel good update. Loved the way you described the passion and emotions between the two. And now not only is Naina bokd but possessive as well.
Loved the update.
Thank you for the pm. Eagerly awaiting many more chapters.

Thank you so much Azraa...!! 😃

Yes, yes... Naina was always possessive... but this time she declared it... wanting to put and end to the flirting.. and she was definitely bold... 😳

Glad you loved the update dear...