Reserved
Jaldi karungi unreserve...😃
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Okay, I have tears in my eyes now...The chapter was so emotional especially after you said that you're going to write about the first twirl and explore his feelings in the reply to my previous comment so I was looking forward to this...I logged in IF with a plan to read A&F but I just couldn't help but read this, this is the last part but like they say, all good things must come to an end.
I still remember when you started, I had gotten attracted to this story because it started on a railway...railways have their own charm that I can never get in flights. I didn't join IF that time so couldn't really comment, my bad. I think it was from 6th chapter, The time of many firsts, that I started commenting...I called you just Mou that time which now feels weird as I am so used to calling you Mou di😆
Don't mind the rants, I blame it on my emotional state right now.
And, how sweet of you to dedicate this to the baby Prishita😳 ❤️
The description of the summer vacation reminded me of the summer this year, it was literally burning here in Kerala, I literally ran out of crop tops to wear, ugh... I am glad that monsoons came which hopefully inspire me to write despite school...😃
The 'man chaha var' reference was lovely, something tells me that I am going to binge on the episodes leading to and the episodes of the Mount Abu trip tonight, hehe. Me 24x7😆
I feel the same happiness when I read about everyone getting above 60% in 12th as I got when my my brother's result of 12th came out, he had gotten 83% in PCMB, CBSE😳
I am indeed happy about Sam getting 79% but my eyes were searching for Preeti's marks, glad you mentioned it and I am happy🥳
The hug I loved how you put across that he just wanted her in his arms, close to her and the sweat, the messy hair, nothing mattered to him...😳
Swati's dadI, dil le lo😎...In Yeh Un Dinon Ki Baat Hai, if someone mentions DadI I get scared😆 Now, I guess if someone mentions Dadi, I will think of your Swati's dadi, hehe.
"Families are like branches on a tree. We Grow in different directions yet our roots remain as one."
That was a good note, dear. Family does influence our character infact every person in our life influences us someway, good or bad.
The way Sam proposed her for a date, such a gentleman he is...This scene was dripping with sweetness with whole Sam blushing, him seeking permission, Naina's thoughts on her Sameer Such a gentleman!
Arjun's part was well written, just like a protective brother 👍🏼 I am glad that this character which had a lot of potential is at least used properly in the forum fictions!
The days before the date was perfectly described, the anxiousness, the excitement on what to expect and what not to...How both of them put an extra effort from their side to make the day special, very special 😳
Gifting the bouquet and the cheesy line😉😳 I would have cringed if anyone else would have said that but Sammy is an exception, I remembered that Mount Abu 'Zulfein Aandhi' I forgot it, hehe. That was so cheesy but yet I was still in their love filled land😳
Another Mount Abu memory which I remembered when reading Naina gifting Sameer guitar shaped key chain was how Naina had gotten jealous of the mouth organ and asked him to play guitar instead, that was cute😆
How you take care of all the minute details amazes me as always👏
Jungli toh hai hi Sam par Naina is a born tease😉
The kiss raised my heartbeats😳
And a slight smile came across my face when I read how Sam was looking the others side when giving soap and towel to Naina...these small actions shows how perfect Sameer's character is sketched😳
The detailing of the place was so beautiful to read👏😳 I wanna go somewhere now, waiting for my mid term vacations😃
I completely loved it how you gave closure to the Nainital wali girlfriend👏That was dealt amazingly.
Sameer always had gone around said he is 'Hawa ka jhonka ' but really he just wanted someone to love him for who he is and he would have given it back with dedication, the sense of belonging he craved for...Sometimes humans contradict what they show and what they actually want!
They have opened up a little more deeper with all those honest confessions😉😳
And that 'Shaadi wala pyaar' confession was hilarious...I literally could imagine Sam's astonished face😆
I have read a little too much of werewolf stories that I kinda like 'Bhediya'😉 But yeah, facing it would be a whole different thing...I remember once my cousins and myself were trekking through a jungle and we had seen a fox looking at us, lord, we were scared AF but it ran away, phew!
'Nashkatra' My eyes instantly welled up and I let out a chuckle too, if that was possible...That night was one of the best, their heart to heart talks with that innocence😭😳 And what followed was so overwhelming and heartwarming, I have no words!
Beautiful is a short word for this chapter dear Mou di! In the show, with MunDit he always talked about different ways to make her say ILU, she was literally in his mind always...And how you described his feelings changed in the whole Mount Abu trip, I can't thank you enough and I was reminded of 'Tum kis kahani ki pari ho Naina?' His monologue tore me up😭 Perfectly described about Naina's anguish post bet..!
I am such a sensitive and emotional person that I cry when ever something touches my heart, silly me
Zara bhi behes ki to tumhare sandwich me cheese nai daalunga...Such a funny threat that was😆 But yeah, do not mess with the Chef MaheshwarI🤣
Naina's confession of liking him from the first time she saw him was subtle, they literally opened up very deeply to each other this trip😳
Aah, how he took care of her love for watching constellations, this is so adorable!
The kiss and the mini make out❤️ I could literally feel their love when they were kissing each other with passion..and how Sameer protected her from his desires, time will teach and allow them to explore the forbidden. Aah! I loved it.
The way you concluded with the star's shine, aesthetic Mou di!😳
I will miss this story very much but the only comfort is that, this story will stay here and I will be re-reading this one...! It's not a goodbye to this story from my side😃
Edited by Mayashika - 7 years ago
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