Mou, I had missed out on reading the end to this story due to my busy schedule and then honestly I forgot😆; I just don't do well on the waiting front.😉 Lights of Eternity was and is indeed one of my favs on the forum! 😊 This reply is probably way too late but then better late than never!
You gave a wonderful closure to numerous topics which we have not and would never receive in the serial; honestly expecting the same level of writing as you from the CVs at this point is a joke on us😆
Romance and soulful passion are your forte therefore any praises I write won't do justice to your writing. All I can say is it never gets redundant or old and weaves perfectly into each story rather than being a stand alone moment. Always leaves me blushing 😳
This last part was pure magic; the trust Naina showed on Sameer, outdoor trip, opening the pandora's box of secrets from the past, first experience of being alone with each other in a secluded place, star gazing, and just finding peace in each others arms.
Conversations are what make any story beautiful; especially frank, truthful, and from the heart. Loved how Sameer spilled his heart out to Naina and so did she. It was important for him to find out just how deeply loved he is and will be for eternity.
It is amazing that every Sameer you carve is goals...each one different from the other but still the same. I am not saying he is flawless which would have been unrealistic but the basic qualities of being understanding, strong, principled, addressing one's folly, loving, uplifting his girl, owning up to his mistakes, and clarity of thoughts are commendable.
Similarly for Naina, it is a pleasure to read her bold side being manifested. Her love for Sam remains unparalleled and full of trust, such a treat to read.
To sum it up, you are a talented writer Mou. This story was a fairy tale without being too filmy or melodramatic, well so are your other stories 😃 Cheers!
P.S. I am looking forward to reading Always and Forever but kinda lost track where I left last but I am sure of being way behind. Over the Edge has my heart for now!😊
Edited by NikiAries - 7 years ago