Sameer-Naina SS: Lights of Eternity (Deleted...) - Page 57

Originally posted by: Ankita.jaiswal

Dear mou ...a lovely write up... I m not surprised...I m now used to your high standards

I m a absolutely in love with this bold naina who is out to fulfil her bodily and heart's desire...

I wish to see this side of her persona in the serial Roto but I m not much hopeful.

You have beautifully portrayed sameer's growth in terms of his character and worldly wisdom ...he has become a pucca businessman outsmarting his step father even .

One favour I hope I can ask...please end this dadi chapter in your story...I barely tolerated her in the serial and I don't want to be reminded of that bundle of unpleasantness in any form...

Eagerly waiting for the next update

Originally posted by: Mayashika

I was waiting for this update so eagerly yet I became the last one to read and comment...

No worries dear...!! I am so late in replying to comment too...

That student who was asking for five minutes would be me...I remember once I literally cried when I couldn't write the answer to the last two questions of biology paper which contained three and four marks respectively...he snatched my paper...mujhe itna gussa aaya invigilator pe😆

Going over the question again...Sometimes I do it too par Social ke liye nahi..You know how I hate Social and I suck at it also😆

Hahaa... I too sometimes asked for extra time... but yes these things are so relatable... like they happen in all schools. I never liked going over the question papers, usually when the exams ended my mind was already on a story book or comic that I wanted to read... 😆😆

They wrote the exam with each other's lucky pen😳 It's their utmost love and faith on each other that has made this particular object lucky for them...

Yes, indeed... they are lucky for each other... so everything surrounding them, related to their love automatically becomes lucky too... 😳

Judaii se pyaar aur gehra hota hai, Sameer. Two weeks will pass very soon when you'll be with your siblings.

Hehe, Sam is in the process of instilling marriage talks in Naina's mind. Good going, Sam.😉

Ek baar judaai ho gai na... iss story me to sirf 2 mahine ki thi.. fir bhi he doesn't want it to be repeated again... I truly miss that desperation or should I say yearning of spending more time alone in the show... I keep thinking don't they want to talk...

Haan, yahan to Sameer already shaadi ka jaap japne laga hai... 😉

Well, everyone thinks Possessive Sam is dangerous and I agree too, his anger is quite dangerous but I just have one warning, "Do not underestimate Naina Agarwal"😆

When Naina's patience hits the limits, well no one can save the victim of her wrath😉

I loved how Naina became bold and accepted their relation infront of their classmates😳

Oh yes... You know there's a saying in Gujarati, "shaant paani unda ghana" - it means calm waters has more depth... I always feel it's true for people like Naina... she is usually all calm and patient, but the one day she would burst everyone has to watch out for this girl. 😃

I know because I am like that, completely calm and patient, but when I get angry everyone around me including my husband shuts up... Even my boss, who is the managing director of the company doesn't utter a word. 😆

I liked how you added when Sameer actually started liking Naina..

For me in the show, he was slightly smitten by Naina from their first twirl, their first meeting ; Remember how he looked back at her twice😳

That first twirl was magical... yes, I remember how he looked at her... I felt that he was intrigued more than smitten... like trying to sense what exactly he was feeling but ignoring it... I am adding this perspective in the next update... Hope you will like what I have to say. 😳

A piece of advice for Naina: Don't touch Sameer a lot during bike rides as it can be harmful later on and we don't want you two to end up in hospital...It could be harmful to you in the other way too, I hope you get me😉

Hahaa... 😆😆 I don't think Naina considered it to be harmful... She returned the favour rather enthusiastically... 😉

Uff☺️That kiss...okay let me take a deep breath...

Their body language easily conveyed the urgency...When they broke the kiss, they were still left unsatiated...

Naina slowly exploring the thoughts which has been told forbidden...Naina needs to have a conclusion on her doubts why is she craving for intimacy with Sam...

Yup, girl is growing up... and even though they have progressed in physical intimacy somewhere she feels and realizes that there's more...

Pink and open hair...Sam, I pity you😆

It reminded me of the love confession costume Naina wore...She looked so beautiful😳

Yep yep,... she looked like a doll.. However, here I picturized the Mt. Abu pink dress... the candyfloss one... 😃

Cuddling while watching a movie in the warmth of the home That's so romantic...

Biting ❤️I don't need to explain how I feel after this particular scene, do I?

I completely enjoyed their mini make out session☺️Beautifully penned down!

Thank you...!! I wanted to show their comfort level as well as their own struggle for control... of course such moments are so cute and romantic... 😊

I am totally loving this independent Sameer..He indirectly avenging all he was subjected to by Dadi

Dadi,

Sam is too busy to pay attention to your silly antics so please get a life!

I liked how you took a dig at Keshav by calling his parathas horrible🤣 Thank you from my side too😆

You have mentioned Harshad Mehta scam too...Cheers for you to pay attention to all the details..

Hahaha... Yes, I wanted to close Dadi chapter... show that Sameer is not at all affected by her... and Keshav, that vile pathetic creature... glad you noticed my take on his cooking skills... 😆

Bold Naina at the last partI am totally loving your Naina, Mou di!

Good you didn't stretch the judaii here...

Eagerly waiting for the next! Love you!

P.S. When are you concluding Lights of Eternity dear?

And did I hear a new story? Will you give a hint about the plotline or are you keeping it a surprise ?

Lights of Eternity is closing today... The last part is ready and I will post it soon...!! 😃

About the new story, it's "Over the Edge." I already gave a small hint in my story index thread... but let me add that it's a different concept from the show... the character traits will be slightly different too... and it's a bit daring concept... I am not sure how the response will be, but hopefully people will like it... 😊

Originally posted by: KhwabonKiRani

Awesome update

Originally posted by: Rucha21

Another Super Update..

Aww sam is unhappy as he wont be able to meet naina everyday as the exams are over..bechara sameer..😆😆

Delhi bhi jana hai use naina ko sath leke...😛😛

Wow, I like this bold naina, she declared the relationship in front of Kamya and Hema...also authoritatively put her hand on his...he reciprocated the same..😊😊

Samaina bike ride...❤️

Ahem ahem naina absentmindedly put his hand on his waist..😉😉😉

Their kissing sessions..yaar kitna sensuous tha...😳😳😳

Naina also kissed him back..

Girl is becoming bolder in sameer's Pyaar...👍🏼

Movie scene was also described beautifully..with 3 couples..👍🏼

I like this sameer who without any inhibitions puts forward his thoughts with Mr. Somani..and his instinct was proven right..

Oh..and what a surprise and welcome back gift...superb...😊😊😊

Originally posted by: doublecross

While reading this update my train of thought somewhere meandered to rains. Rains that come as a relief after a long period of drought. When the leaves are all dried up, the sun at its scorching best is seen burning the earth and its inhabitants while the lull of the summer's take away the sheen of the nature. Then rains come in as the answer to all the prayers.

What a beautiful analogy Pooja...!! 😃 Thank you so much... 🤗

The kisses were just like rains, where two parched souls were quenching their thirst of each other. Sameer and Naina while this new found intimacy can mean a lot of things, for me It depicts their trust for one another and the complete surrender of their souls. They are leaning on to each other while kissing but the support they are seeking from within. The warmth that passes between the two is the heat generated from the feelings which are a fusion of love , dependence and new found lust. But this lust is nurtured and nourished with love and so it's depth can't be measured in any way.

Indeed, their intimacy is born of love and trust... the faith they have in their relationship... And sometimes, there is really no need of words... All the feelings and emotions can be expressed without speaking anything... and that small amount of distance looming in the future, makes these souls even more impatient to come together. 😳

The update had some lovely moments. We are already witnessing quite a bold naina these days on the show. Infact sometimes seeing the scenes of now, I wonder whether the cvs actually are taking cues from some of the writers here on this forum. In this update too we saw naina taking a bold stand while declaring her love and proclaiming as sameer as her own. Obviously she had the jaws hanging open of their friends but somewhere she extended an olive branch of strength and support to sameer by proclaiming her love for him in the open fortifying his confidence in their love. I loved the part. The feeling of claim, oneness and possession was very well depicted and executed. Kudos to you!

Thank you!! I really wish the bold Naina would come back in the show... 😊

Yes, here Naina has utmost faith in Sameer and their relationship... so she displayed her right on him and openly accepted the relationship. It brought a closure to Kamya's flirting and more than that it showed how much belief she has on their future... 😊

The easy love and romance that flowed between the two was quite refreshing to read about. The bike ride and they way you described made my heart and baby flutter! It was simply perfect! How I wish we get something this on our show.

Glad you loved those sequences... I wanted to show their comfort level with each other. 😊

Hypothetically if I would have had the reins of the show in my hands I would make you the creative, since am living the way you are going on about with this story.

Like you had mentioned, I thoroughly enjoyed reading this part, though I had read two days back but i kept relishing it and I don't know as to how many times I have read it and still it seems new every time i read it.

Continue soon

Will be waiting!

Originally posted by: NikiAries

Mou last part jitna emotional tha utna hi yeh wala sensual tha! 😳 If I had a mirror in front of me I am sure it would catch me blushing when reading your romantic scenes.

I love how most of your stories show Sam as an emerging business man in addition to being a student...gives his character so much more depth and reality than what we are seeing in the current soap. Like why can't Sam learn ropes of the business rather than lazing around on Manhoosiyat concept😆 Sameer toh Shaadi ke liye ghodi pe tayyar hai, poor Naina hasn't comprehended how serious he is...only if the legal age for guy's marriage was 18 yr she would have learnt how he means business.

Bike ride was like a building climax, Naina unknowingly gave Sameer much more than he desired😉That stair way kiss took the cake for me; upar dost niche Ramdhari aur bich mein Romeo Juliet.

The small sensual details you described made an ordinary kiss out of the world. Another fav was when Sam slid his hand on Naina's waist while pretending to be engrossed in the movie, there was something so passionate about that scene...can't put it into words Of course I can go on and on but to sum it up this part fits all the must haves for the perfect school romance sprinkled with unconditional love these two share. I loved this part as much as Sam loved Naina's surprise kiss😊

Sorry about the late reply! Keep writing :)

Cheers!

Neha