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Narrative Ninjas

Posted: 2 years ago

Jiya is turning out to be the mastermind villain in this - Panther toh uska kathpulti nikla! 😈 Abhay, you are in so much trouble!


Wow, and now Vero knows about Sam and Abhay being twins? How and why did she think of getting the DNA test done? Did she always suspect something?


So much for next writers to explore now.


Just making sure here, it's 3 weeks after they go to Maldives, so they're back in Kolkata now?

Jiya is off to Brazil (without Abhay I presume) so wonder if that threat has been dealt with for good, or if the Panther still wants to take Abhay out for being with her. Is Sam still 'protecting' Abhay in that case?


Please update the summary too when you can, Parm! ❤️

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Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: WildestDreams

Segment 2 by Quantum-Dot

Segment 3 by DreamOfEndless


Segment 4 by Shibani


Segment 5 by Bee222


Segment 6 by Quantum-Dot


Segment 7 by DreamOfEndless


segment 8 by Shibani

Segment 9 by Bee

Segment 10 by Simi


Segment 11 by Shiri

Segment 12 by Shibani


Segment 13 by Tia


Segment 14 by WD

Segment 15 by Simi

Segment 16 by Riya

Segment 17 by Tia


Segment 18 by WD

Taking segment 18 but before that, are Saikat and Shweta dead? Since we did see cremation and what happens to characters is basically a creator's call, m puching (not that I have anything in mind for them, but m confused)

Also, is this updated, didn't qd write a segment?

Also also, 15 days to go, so is the story (and the other two) ending by midJuly?

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Narrative Ninjas

Posted: 2 years ago

Nica sees DNA reports 😲

Did she suspect something pehle se 🤔

I am so hooked now, can't wait for the next segment

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Narrative Ninjas

Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: oh_nakhrewaali

Taking segment 18 but before that, are Saikat and Shweta dead? Since we did see cremation and what happens to characters is basically a creator's call, m puching (not that I have anything in mind for them, but m confused)

Also, is this updated, didn't qd write a segment?

Also also, 15 days to go, so is the story (and the other two) ending by midJuly?

Simi deleted her segment so WDs is a continuation from T’s. So I guess Shweta and Saikat are dead. And yes to your second question though T’s story (Fichain 3) could be extended a bit. Writers, you should start working towards resolution for the characters. Also think of a title for your Fichains.
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Mystery Masterminds

Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: LizzieBennet

Jiya is turning out to be the mastermind villain in this - Panther toh uska kathpulti nikla! 😈 Abhay, you are in so much trouble!


Wow, and now Vero knows about Sam and Abhay being twins? How and why did she think of getting the DNA test done? Did she always suspect something?


It’s Jiya who delivered those paper to her! She mentioned trip to post office😆 She wanted to create havoc in Nica’s life with the news!

So much for next writers to explore now.


Just making sure here, it's 3 weeks after they go to Maldives, so they're back in Kolkata now?

Jiya is off to Brazil (without Abhay I presume) so wonder if that threat has been dealt with for good, or if the Panther still wants to take Abhay out for being with her. Is Sam still 'protecting' Abhay in that case? Up to next writer for this😆


Please update the summary too when you can, Parm! ❤️

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Mystery Masterminds

Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: LizzieBennet

Summary (as of Segment # 16)


Segment # 1 (WildestDreams)

  • Samarth is trying to make amends, telling Nica not to compare him with Abhay - telling her 'not to keep him out of this'.
  • His family is also involved in some way (Nica telling him she doesn't want him or his family, calls them hypocrites)
  • She realizes she has been deceived by someone she trusted ..again (i.e. Samarth)


Segment # 2 (Quantum-Dot) Flashback

  • Veronica & Abhay Mehta have been married for 3 years
  • Nica is an orphan who lives with her uncle, Ashutosh Gupta and her cousin, Shweta. He paid for the wedding
  • Abhay is a Micro student, a topper and from a rich, business family
  • Samarth is Shweta's friend and knew of Nica by reputation only (as Abhay, the topper's gf)
  • Abhay & Veronica dated in college and they were a popular couple


Segment # 3 (DreamofEndless): Flashback

  • Post-marriage Nica starts to notice a lack of interest from Abhay
  • He leaves on a business trip & she finds out he's cheating
  • She also hears him arguing with his parents
  • She decides to leave and go to her uncle's house with no explanation
  • After 7 days of being in her uncle's house Sam comes to visit her (brings papers that Abhay sent)


Segment #4 (Oh_Nakhrewaali): Flashback (diary entries)

  • Samarth is seeing a therapist who’s asked him to maintain a diary
  • Sam & Nica began to know each other in 2013 (they volunteered together), the first time they had any sort of interaction
  • He had a girlfriend in college
  • After college, he decided to stay away from her
  • Abhay & Nica married in 2019
  • Sam saw Abhay kissing another woman in 2021
  • In Dec 2022, he meets her (7 days after she leaves Abhay)
  • Nica gets a note from a doc telling her she's pregnant


Segment # 5 (Bee222)


  • Nica had left pregnancy test results at home for Abhay (he sends it back with Sam)
  • Abhay & Nica had been together for 8 years
  • She finds something else (a blue note) in the envelope with the results


Segment # 6 (QD)

  • Abhay has written a note saying he wants nothing to do with the baby or Nica.
  • Flash forward to 6 months later when Nica & Abhay are now divorced (May 2023)
  • Saikat comes to meet her and she cries on his shoulder
  • She moved out of her uncle's place and is renting a flat


Segment # 7 (DreamofEndless)


Present-day timeline (July 2023)


  • Nica overhears Sam telling Shweta that he loves Nica and that he saw Abhay with another woman
  • She slaps him and refuses to trust him


Segment # 8 (oh_nakhrewaali)


Flashback to Jan 2023


  • Veronica listens to baby's heartbeat on the Ultrasound, decides to terminate
  • Runs into Samarth and asks him to accompany her for the procedure
  • It was traumatic for her - she's thinking about the day in present timeline


Segment # 9 (Bee222)


  • Samarth recalls his grandfather and Abhay's grandfather's friendship & how the two boys would tag along with them on morning walks
  • The idea that Abhay is competitive and used to winning and Sam enables him by deliberately losing is introduced here
  • Sam's dad was transferred to Dehradun, where he died in an accident
  • He & his mom returned to Kolkata, his mom was clinically depressed and his grandfather was dying
  • Abhay's grandfather, Abhinav Naanu helped out a lot
  • To repay him Sam begins to work for the Mehtas (Abhay's family) as a chauffeur
  • Sam does have some fond memories of Abhay but the grown-up Abhay has changed, & only wants the best
  • Sam admires Abhay
  • He had told Mrs. Mehta about Abhay cheating on Veronica
  • Sam wants to feel wanted, needed and valued


Segment # 10 (Quantum-Dot)


Present day July 2023


  • Shweta and Saikat are honeymooning in Maldives 8 months after their marriage
  • Saikat sees Abhay in the hotel lobby and gets into a scuffle with him
  • Shweta realizes that Saikat will always put Nica first & also that Sam befriended her because he wanted to get close to Nica
  • Shweta & Saikat argue about this


Segment # 11 (ExoticDisaster)


  • Samarth's desire for Nica reveals itself
  • Abhay's grandfather talks to his mother about Abhay and Samarth being fraternal twins
  • Abhinav worries about Abhay's feelings if the truth was revealed whereas Kangana is worried for Samarth.



Segment # 12 (oh_nakhrewaali)


  • Samarth's seduction of Nica is revealed to be a dream
  • He decides to confront her (after the slap incident)
  • We get a snippet of Abhay & his girlfriend Jiya in the hotel in Maldives.
  • Abhay drifted away from Veronica because she had become too possessive.
  • He loves Jiya but his family won't accept her
  • His family wanted him to stay with Nica; he is tired of pretending for the sake of his family's reputation
  • Samarth goes to Nica's place. Nica has come to rely on him during the months before her divorce. She is also attracted to him.
  • She asks him if he truly loves her and he admits it again


Segment # 13 (DreamofEndless)


  • Veronica and Samarth kiss
  • Shweta leaves the hotel at night. Saikat goes after her
  • While arguing, they are run over by a truck
  • Abhay is told about it since the hotel staff has seen him arguing with Saikat


Segment # 14 (WildestDreams)


  • Veronica and Sam go on a date
  • Next day, Kangana- Abhay's mother comes to give her the news that Shweta & Saikat have passed away.


Segment #15 (Quantum-Dot)


  • Veronica is grieving the loss of both Saikat & Shweta
  • Samarth arrives and begins to doubt the truth of the news since it was delivered by Abhay
  • He too grieves Shweta
  • A scene at the hospital in Maldives tells us that Shweta and Saikat are still alive but critical
  • Jiya goes to the hospital to visit them, it is revealed that she and Saikat were engaged but it was broken off before marriage because of Veronica. Jiya decided to destroy Veronica and Abhay's marriage as revenge.


Segment #16 (LizzieBennet)


  • Abhay relays the news about Shweta and Saikat being alive
  • Abhinav naanu visits Samarth and asks him to come back to work for the Mehtas
  • Samarth had quit that job when Veronica had terminated her pregnancy.
  • He used to moonlight as a chauffeur but in reality was their bodyguard. He has trained in jiu-jitsu.
  • Abhinav tells Sam that Abhay's life is in danger because of Jiya who is a dangerous druglord, Vikrant Chaddha's ex-girlfriend. Saikat may have been attacked by him too.
  • He also reveals the truth about Samarth and Abhay being twins- they are Kangana Basu and Vishwas Varma's children.
  • Samarth agrees to go to Maldives when he learns Nica is also going.


Segment #17 (DreamofEndless)



The remaining segments can be summarized by quoting this post each time and adding your own.


Segment 18

  • Sai and Swetha are dead! Their funerals happens in India
  • Jiya leaves for Brazil for her next contract. Without Abhay
  • Nica was delivered Abhay n Sam DNA reports by Jiya
  • She wants to tell this secret to Sam but is unsure on how and his reaction

as timeline, one month happened since SaiShwetha’death, 3 weeks since their funerals ( it took one week to get the bodies back in India n all paper works)

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Narrative Ninjas

Posted: 2 years ago

Oh man! I totally missed connecting Jiya going to the post office = courier arriving for Nica! 😆

But how in the heck does Jiya know?

She probably had Abhinav and all of Abhay’s family thoroughly investigated before hooking up with Abhay. 🤷🏽‍♀️

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Posted: 2 years ago

Segment #19

*tw: domestic violence*

Veronica jumped in surprise when the doorbell rang, and was pulled pit of her thoughts. She opened the door and Samarth smiled at her, food parcel bags in his hand.

"We didn't get to spend much time this week, so I took a few hours off."

Veronica nodded and let him in. She watched him as he served the food. How was she to tell him? Maybe the reports were wrong. But of they weren't, would it change anything between her and Samarth? She knew his reason of existence, his very being would change, would she also knew that she was the only person who could help him when he found out.

They are their food in a comfortable silence and Samarth offered to do the dishes. Veronica tried to find something to keep her busy till he would be back, but the images of the paper haunted her.

"Nica, can I ask you something?" Samarth asked as he sat next to her on the sofa. She nodded.

"What would you do if you found out that you had been lied to your whole life? Whatever you knew about yourself wasn't the truth, but the truth also puts you into a complicated mess?"

"I don't know. I guess I'll just go with the flow."

"But of going with the flow means hitting someone you love the most?"

"They'll forgive you if they know the emotional mess you are in. It's not your fault in the first place that you didn't know you were Abhay's brother." Veronica answered without thinking. Samarth gaped at her in shock.

"You know?"

Veronica looked at him for a few seconds and then handed him the reports.

"I thought that I would lose you when I read this, but then I realized, I was being stupid. It's not your fault you didn't know the truth. And no matter who you are, I love you, isn't that matters in the end, at least when it is about us, that we love each other?" Veronica asked. Samarth nodded and held her hand.

"I was going crazy since the day Nanu told me, I am so glad you know the truth now. I think you are right, I'll just go with the flow, and since you know the truth, I won't even betray you. It used to hurt me so much working for them knowing what they did to you, to me. But I will just soldier through."

Veronica smiled and kissed him.

"I love you."

"Me too." He smiled against her lips.


________

Jiya applied concealer on the big wound mark across her neck.

"Sorry about that, baby." Vikrant said as her stood behind her and looked at her reflection in the mirror.

"It's nothing, baby, you just get a little rough," She answered, though she didn't remind him that she had begged him to stop choking her, that he was hurting her, but he hadn't listen.

"Where does Abhay think you?"

"Bhubaneshwar, I told him I have a meeting with a startup company based there."

Vikrant scoffed.

"The pretty lies that you tell him make you so hot." He gave her a lovebite on the nape of her neck. Jiya almost shrieked in shock and pain, but she was used to it, so put on a mask of a woman in love as soon as he looked at her."

"You know what, I am bored of Abhay. The aim is to hit that oldie Abhinav where it hurts him the most, right? What was the name of the other son? Samrat?"

"Samrath."

"Yeah, ditch Abhay, kill him after this deal with Sousa is done. Anyway, Abhay has been touching you for far too long and I don't like how you smell of him when you come back." Vikrant smiled viciously. "The Abhinav will know what's the pain of losing someone."

Jiya wanted to point out that Abhinav didn't even know Vikrant's existence apart from him being the Panther, but chose not to. Abhinav and his family were not worth her head rammed into the mirror.

"But baby, Samarath isn't even a part of the family."

"I know love, but he is sleeping with the woman you want to hurt so bad." He said and smirked, seeing the red in Jiya's eyes. She may have left the chapter named Saikat behind, but she could never get enough of seeing Veronica in pain.

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If you didn't realized, Ver still doesn't know Abhay-Sam's real parentage, she just thinks both are the heirs and he is a mere chauffeur.

I also realized Vikrant going on killing spree just because his "girlfriend" has a past wasn't really a great character arc, so... If he is wasting his resources, it should do him some good, am I right?

Edited by oh_nakhrewaali - 2 years ago
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Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: WildestDreams


Segment 18

  • Sai and Swetha are dead! Their funerals happens in India
  • Jiya leaves for Brazil for her next contract. Without Abhay
  • Nica was delivered Abhay n Sam DNA reports by Jiya
  • She wants to tell this secret to Sam but is unsure on how and his reaction

as timeline, one month happened since SaiShwetha’death, 3 weeks since their funerals ( it took one week to get the bodies back in India n all paper works)

Segment 19

  • Ver-Sam decide to not let the fact that Sam-A are bros affect their relationship and their lives
  • Vikrant changes the target from Abhay to Sam
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Dream Weavers

Posted: 2 years ago

The plot has reached a fascinating turning point with a clear path forward.

Who is presenting the next segment?

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