Thanks! I can post the first half as it is, if you all allow, anyways.Originally posted by: LizzieBennet
No harm done! Hota hai.
Take care of yourself, de-stress and come back to contribute when you’re feeling better! ☺️ Parm is doing the next one.
Originally posted by: Quantum-Dot
Thanks! I can post the first half as it is, if you all allow, anyways.
I’ll leave it to Parm to decide since she’s the creator and is doing the next segment as well
Ladies,
There will be a little delay with next segment! I have both kids under the weather and I barely slept 2-3 hours per night in last few nights🥱
Segment #18
Jiya texted the Panther: “Thank you <3”
Sai was dead. Just as his beloved wife Shweta. Both deserved to die.
Revenge, Jiya thinks, is a beautiful tool but a tool nonetheless: it must be used with the right people!
But why didn't she feel satisfied? Why wasn't that weight that oppressed her heart lightening? What was missing?
Old memories crowded her mind.
A young Jiya smiled ecstatically at the idea of their imminent marriage.
He was perfect, he was her whole world, he was hers…
"I am sorry but I am breaking up with you, Jiya..."
Sai’s words died away like a distant echo. Her phone rang twice before she picked it up!
"Is your little vacation now ? I need you in Brazil for your next contract" said an icy voice.
"One trip to post office and I am done with my…vacation" replied Jiya!
"Your plane leaves in 2 hours! Check your email for details" And the call disconnected! Jiya was ready to leave the chapter named Sai behind her!
—-
The day was dull, big black clouds swollen with rain chased each other on the horizon. A gust of icy wind sent leaves left and right, destroying a mound patiently collected by a caretaker of the cemetery
A funeral is never nice. Just one can be excruciating, a waking nightmare. Two funerals now filled the venue that day. Families and friends were united to mourn their loved ones. Sai and Swetha were dead.
——
Veronica sipped the hot coffee, while staring at the flames meandering in the fireplace. It was raining cats and dogs outside.
She hadn't seen Sam for a few days and she already missed him like crazy but that detachment was necessary, she had to reflect ... think.
She loved him immensely and everything had been great between them until three weeks ago.
Until the day after Sai and Shwetha’s funerals!
Until the courier delivered an envelope to her and she opened it.
Samrat and Abhay DNAs report! 99.9 % match…twin brothers!
She sighed heartbroken, how would Sam have reacted knowing this secret? She put a hand to her head pounding…she was afraid to lose him…she didn't want to lose him…she wanted to be with him.
Forever!
She had to tell him, she couldn't hide anymore, but how? Like all brothers, albeit twins, they were different in character and appearance. As a rule, twins like them have similar traits, while these two couldn't be more different. They were day and night! Light and dark!
Jiya is turning out to be the mastermind villain in this - Panther toh uska kathpulti nikla! 😈 Abhay, you are in so much trouble!
Wow, and now Vero knows about Sam and Abhay being twins? How and why did she think of getting the DNA test done? Did she always suspect something?
So much for next writers to explore now.
Just making sure here, it's 3 weeks after they go to Maldives, so they're back in Kolkata now?
Jiya is off to Brazil (without Abhay I presume) so wonder if that threat has been dealt with for good, or if the Panther still wants to take Abhay out for being with her. Is Sam still 'protecting' Abhay in that case?
Please update the summary too when you can, Parm! ❤️
Originally posted by: WildestDreams
Segment 2 by Quantum-Dot
Segment 3 by DreamOfEndless
Segment 4 by Shibani
Segment 5 by Bee222
Segment 6 by Quantum-Dot
Segment 7 by DreamOfEndless
segment 8 by Shibani
Segment 9 by Bee
Segment 10 by Simi
Segment 11 by Shiri
Segment 12 by Shibani
Segment 13 by Tia
Segment 14 by WD
Segment 15 by Simi
Segment 16 by Riya
Segment 17 by Tia
Segment 18 by WD
Taking segment 18 but before that, are Saikat and Shweta dead? Since we did see cremation and what happens to characters is basically a creator's call, m puching (not that I have anything in mind for them, but m confused)
Also, is this updated, didn't qd write a segment?
Also also, 15 days to go, so is the story (and the other two) ending by midJuly?
Nica sees DNA reports 😲
Did she suspect something pehle se 🤔
I am so hooked now, can't wait for the next segment
Simi deleted her segment so WDs is a continuation from T’s. So I guess Shweta and Saikat are dead. And yes to your second question though T’s story (Fichain 3) could be extended a bit. Writers, you should start working towards resolution for the characters. Also think of a title for your Fichains.Originally posted by: oh_nakhrewaali
Taking segment 18 but before that, are Saikat and Shweta dead? Since we did see cremation and what happens to characters is basically a creator's call, m puching (not that I have anything in mind for them, but m confused)
Also, is this updated, didn't qd write a segment?
Also also, 15 days to go, so is the story (and the other two) ending by midJuly?
Originally posted by: LizzieBennet
Jiya is turning out to be the mastermind villain in this - Panther toh uska kathpulti nikla! 😈 Abhay, you are in so much trouble!
Wow, and now Vero knows about Sam and Abhay being twins? How and why did she think of getting the DNA test done? Did she always suspect something?
It’s Jiya who delivered those paper to her! She mentioned trip to post office😆 She wanted to create havoc in Nica’s life with the news!So much for next writers to explore now.
Just making sure here, it's 3 weeks after they go to Maldives, so they're back in Kolkata now?
Jiya is off to Brazil (without Abhay I presume) so wonder if that threat has been dealt with for good, or if the Panther still wants to take Abhay out for being with her. Is Sam still 'protecting' Abhay in that case? Up to next writer for this😆
Please update the summary too when you can, Parm! ❤️
Originally posted by: LizzieBennet
Summary (as of Segment # 16)
Segment # 1 (WildestDreams)
- Samarth is trying to make amends, telling Nica not to compare him with Abhay - telling her 'not to keep him out of this'.
- His family is also involved in some way (Nica telling him she doesn't want him or his family, calls them hypocrites)
- She realizes she has been deceived by someone she trusted ..again (i.e. Samarth)
Segment # 2 (Quantum-Dot) Flashback
- Veronica & Abhay Mehta have been married for 3 years
- Nica is an orphan who lives with her uncle, Ashutosh Gupta and her cousin, Shweta. He paid for the wedding
- Abhay is a Micro student, a topper and from a rich, business family
- Samarth is Shweta's friend and knew of Nica by reputation only (as Abhay, the topper's gf)
- Abhay & Veronica dated in college and they were a popular couple
Segment # 3 (DreamofEndless): Flashback
- Post-marriage Nica starts to notice a lack of interest from Abhay
- He leaves on a business trip & she finds out he's cheating
- She also hears him arguing with his parents
- She decides to leave and go to her uncle's house with no explanation
- After 7 days of being in her uncle's house Sam comes to visit her (brings papers that Abhay sent)
Segment #4 (Oh_Nakhrewaali): Flashback (diary entries)
- Samarth is seeing a therapist who’s asked him to maintain a diary
- Sam & Nica began to know each other in 2013 (they volunteered together), the first time they had any sort of interaction
- He had a girlfriend in college
- After college, he decided to stay away from her
- Abhay & Nica married in 2019
- Sam saw Abhay kissing another woman in 2021
- In Dec 2022, he meets her (7 days after she leaves Abhay)
- Nica gets a note from a doc telling her she's pregnant
Segment # 5 (Bee222)
- Nica had left pregnancy test results at home for Abhay (he sends it back with Sam)
- Abhay & Nica had been together for 8 years
- She finds something else (a blue note) in the envelope with the results
Segment # 6 (QD)
- Abhay has written a note saying he wants nothing to do with the baby or Nica.
- Flash forward to 6 months later when Nica & Abhay are now divorced (May 2023)
- Saikat comes to meet her and she cries on his shoulder
- She moved out of her uncle's place and is renting a flat
Segment # 7 (DreamofEndless)
Present-day timeline (July 2023)
- Nica overhears Sam telling Shweta that he loves Nica and that he saw Abhay with another woman
- She slaps him and refuses to trust him
Segment # 8 (oh_nakhrewaali)
Flashback to Jan 2023
- Veronica listens to baby's heartbeat on the Ultrasound, decides to terminate
- Runs into Samarth and asks him to accompany her for the procedure
- It was traumatic for her - she's thinking about the day in present timeline
Segment # 9 (Bee222)
- Samarth recalls his grandfather and Abhay's grandfather's friendship & how the two boys would tag along with them on morning walks
- The idea that Abhay is competitive and used to winning and Sam enables him by deliberately losing is introduced here
- Sam's dad was transferred to Dehradun, where he died in an accident
- He & his mom returned to Kolkata, his mom was clinically depressed and his grandfather was dying
- Abhay's grandfather, Abhinav Naanu helped out a lot
- To repay him Sam begins to work for the Mehtas (Abhay's family) as a chauffeur
- Sam does have some fond memories of Abhay but the grown-up Abhay has changed, & only wants the best
- Sam admires Abhay
- He had told Mrs. Mehta about Abhay cheating on Veronica
- Sam wants to feel wanted, needed and valued
Segment # 10 (Quantum-Dot)
Present day July 2023
- Shweta and Saikat are honeymooning in Maldives 8 months after their marriage
- Saikat sees Abhay in the hotel lobby and gets into a scuffle with him
- Shweta realizes that Saikat will always put Nica first & also that Sam befriended her because he wanted to get close to Nica
- Shweta & Saikat argue about this
Segment # 11 (ExoticDisaster)
- Samarth's desire for Nica reveals itself
- Abhay's grandfather talks to his mother about Abhay and Samarth being fraternal twins
- Abhinav worries about Abhay's feelings if the truth was revealed whereas Kangana is worried for Samarth.
Segment # 12 (oh_nakhrewaali)
- Samarth's seduction of Nica is revealed to be a dream
- He decides to confront her (after the slap incident)
- We get a snippet of Abhay & his girlfriend Jiya in the hotel in Maldives.
- Abhay drifted away from Veronica because she had become too possessive.
- He loves Jiya but his family won't accept her
- His family wanted him to stay with Nica; he is tired of pretending for the sake of his family's reputation
- Samarth goes to Nica's place. Nica has come to rely on him during the months before her divorce. She is also attracted to him.
- She asks him if he truly loves her and he admits it again
Segment # 13 (DreamofEndless)
- Veronica and Samarth kiss
- Shweta leaves the hotel at night. Saikat goes after her
- While arguing, they are run over by a truck
- Abhay is told about it since the hotel staff has seen him arguing with Saikat
Segment # 14 (WildestDreams)
- Veronica and Sam go on a date
- Next day, Kangana- Abhay's mother comes to give her the news that Shweta & Saikat have passed away.
Segment #15 (Quantum-Dot)
- Veronica is grieving the loss of both Saikat & Shweta
- Samarth arrives and begins to doubt the truth of the news since it was delivered by Abhay
- He too grieves Shweta
- A scene at the hospital in Maldives tells us that Shweta and Saikat are still alive but critical
- Jiya goes to the hospital to visit them, it is revealed that she and Saikat were engaged but it was broken off before marriage because of Veronica. Jiya decided to destroy Veronica and Abhay's marriage as revenge.
Segment #16 (LizzieBennet)
- Abhay relays the news about Shweta and Saikat being alive
- Abhinav naanu visits Samarth and asks him to come back to work for the Mehtas
- Samarth had quit that job when Veronica had terminated her pregnancy.
- He used to moonlight as a chauffeur but in reality was their bodyguard. He has trained in jiu-jitsu.
- Abhinav tells Sam that Abhay's life is in danger because of Jiya who is a dangerous druglord, Vikrant Chaddha's ex-girlfriend. Saikat may have been attacked by him too.
- He also reveals the truth about Samarth and Abhay being twins- they are Kangana Basu and Vishwas Varma's children.
- Samarth agrees to go to Maldives when he learns Nica is also going.
Segment #17 (DreamofEndless)
The remaining segments can be summarized by quoting this post each time and adding your own.
Segment 18
as timeline, one month happened since SaiShwetha’death, 3 weeks since their funerals ( it took one week to get the bodies back in India n all paper works)
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