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Plot Pundits

Posted: 2 years ago

Updated Segment 18. Updating the summary of this segment in a few hours.

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Posted: 2 years ago

Who is Maanav? Did i miss something?

Also, wasn't it a murder investigation and not an attempt to murder investigation 🤔

Edited by oh_nakhrewaali - 2 years ago
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Plot Pundits

Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: oh_nakhrewaali

Who is Maanav? Did i miss something?

Also, wasn't it a murder investigation and not an attempt to murder investigation 🤔

Manav is Kangana's husband, Abhinav's son-in-law. I converted the sequence of the murder into a mere dream of Samarth.

Tia is behind their lives and I am saving their lives 😆😆🤣

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Mystery Masterminds

Posted: 2 years ago

I will take next segment 😆


Kab tak hai jaan for Sai and Shwetha?!?🤣


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Narrative Ninjas

Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: Quantum-Dot


Segment #18 (Quantum-Dot)

  • It's revealed that the murder of Saikat and Shweta was happening in Samarth's dream.
  • Veronica informed Sam that both of them got their senses back, and will be released from hospital in a few days.
  • Veronica and Sam decided to explore Maldives on this joyous occasion.
  • 29 years back, Kangana revealed her past affair and pregnancy to her husband, Manav on their wedding night. The two share a complex relationship.
  • Manav felt that he had been cheated by the Basus and thus fled to Australia to do a MBA training course where he fell in love with Jennifer and gave birth to their daughter, Veronica.
  • Jennifer died soon after Veronica's birth.
  • Manav gave Veronica to his childhood buddies who adopted the girl.
  • Manav accidentally revealed Veronica's truth to Kangana during an argument regarding Abhay.

Saikat & Shweta have Yamraj's blessings! 🤪😆 Or they are blessed with 9 lives like cats!


Is the part where Jiya is texting The Panther also a dream?


In my segment, I had mentioned that Manav did not know about Kangana's affair & the truth of the twins' birth.


Only 4 people - Abhinav, Kangana, Vishwas and Jairaj knew. Vishwas and Jairaj are dead now. So the only living people that know the truth are Abhinav, Kangana and now Samarth. (This is written in my summary below my segment as well).


Ok, let's presume Manav knew and kept it quiet from Abhinav and Kangana that he knows the truth.


Now coming to the revelation that Manav is Veronica's bio-dad.


It's been established that Sam, Veronica and Abhay are all the same age (they went to college together and were in the same batch). So Kangana was already pregnant when Manav left for Australia. Let's say she was about a month pregnant when she married Manav and there would be no suspicion that the child was his. He was away during the birth so he didn't know he had twins, so Sam was given away without Manav knowing and he believed Abhay was his son.


Even if he left immediately after discovering her deception, it's a stretch for him to meet Jennifer, fall in love with her, and have a child with her who's the same age as the twins.


Another issue is that if Manav knew Abhay and Veronica were step-siblings and still encouraged their marriage - it becomes a problem of borderline incest. If Manav found out the truth recently when he and Kangana were arguing, then it would be okay because by the time Abhay and Veronica were already married and there was little he could do at that point.


And now in the present timeline, it makes Veronica and Sam step-siblings who are in a relationship.

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Mystery Masterminds

Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: LizzieBennet

Saikat & Shweta have Yamraj's blessings! 🤪😆 Or they are blessed with 9 lives like cats!


Is the part where Jiya is texting The Panther also a dream?


In my segment, I had mentioned that Manav did not know about Kangana's affair & the truth of the twins' birth.


Only 4 people - Abhinav, Kangana, Vishwas and Jairaj knew. Vishwas and Jairaj are dead now. So the only living people that know the truth are Abhinav, Kangana and now Samarth. (This is written in my summary below my segment as well).


Ok, let's presume Manav knew and kept it quiet from Abhinav and Kangana that he knows the truth.


Now coming to the revelation that Manav is Veronica's bio-dad.


It's been established that Sam, Veronica and Abhay are all the same age (they went to college together and were in the same batch). So Kangana was already pregnant when Manav left for Australia. Let's say she was about a month pregnant when she married Manav and there would be no suspicion that the child was his. He was away during the birth so he didn't know he had twins, so Sam was given away without Manav knowing and he believed Abhay was his son.


Even if he left immediately after discovering her deception, it's a stretch for him to meet Jennifer, fall in love with her, and have a child with her who's the same age as the twins.


Another issue is that if Manav knew Abhay and Veronica were step-siblings and still encouraged their marriage - it becomes a problem of borderline incest. If Manav found out the truth recently when he and Kangana were arguing, then it would be okay because by the time Abhay and Veronica were already married and there was little he could do at that point.


And now in the present timeline, it makes Veronica and Sam step-siblings who are in a relationship.



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I loathe this trope! Please Simi fix this scenario 🙏🏼

Edited by WildestDreams - 2 years ago
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Narrative Ninjas

Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: WildestDreams



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I loathe this trope! Please Simi fix this scenario 🙏🏼

Parm finally using an HR gif instead of her fave Nathan Fillion one! 😆
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Dream Weavers

Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: LizzieBennet

Saikat & Shweta have Yamraj's blessings! 🤪😆 Or they are blessed with 9 lives like cats!


Is the part where Jiya is texting The Panther also a dream?


In my segment, I had mentioned that Manav did not know about Kangana's affair & the truth of the twins' birth.


Only 4 people - Abhinav, Kangana, Vishwas and Jairaj knew. Vishwas and Jairaj are dead now. So the only living people that know the truth are Abhinav, Kangana and now Samarth. (This is written in my summary below my segment as well).


Ok, let's presume Manav knew and kept it quiet from Abhinav and Kangana that he knows the truth.


Now coming to the revelation that Manav is Veronica's bio-dad.


It's been established that Sam, Veronica and Abhay are all the same age (they went to college together and were in the same batch). So Kangana was already pregnant when Manav left for Australia. Let's say she was about a month pregnant when she married Manav and there would be no suspicion that the child was his. He was away during the birth so he didn't know he had twins, so Sam was given away without Manav knowing and he believed Abhay was his son.


Even if he left immediately after discovering her deception, it's a stretch for him to meet Jennifer, fall in love with her, and have a child with her who's the same age as the twins.


Another issue is that if Manav knew Abhay and Veronica were step-siblings and still encouraged their marriage - it becomes a problem of borderline incest. If Manav found out the truth recently when he and Kangana were arguing, then it would be okay because by the time Abhay and Veronica were already married and there was little he could do at that point.


And now in the present timeline, it makes Veronica and Sam step-siblings who are in a relationship.

The story line appears to be following an undesirable plot line. Rules forbid making a different connection between the siblings.

Before anyone raises a complaint, let's do our best to clear up the haze.

The plot should proceed logically and within the bounds of societal norms.

One thing I must say is that every single participating author contributed a lovely perspective to the story, each chapter is quite engaging, and it once again demonstrated that IF is teeming with some wonderful authors.

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Plot Pundits

Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: LizzieBennet

Saikat & Shweta have Yamraj's blessings! 🤪😆 Or they are blessed with 9 lives like cats!


Is the part where Jiya is texting The Panther also a dream?


In my segment, I had mentioned that Manav did not know about Kangana's affair & the truth of the twins' birth.


Only 4 people - Abhinav, Kangana, Vishwas and Jairaj knew. Vishwas and Jairaj are dead now. So the only living people that know the truth are Abhinav, Kangana and now Samarth. (This is written in my summary below my segment as well).


Ok, let's presume Manav knew and kept it quiet from Abhinav and Kangana that he knows the truth.


Now coming to the revelation that Manav is Veronica's bio-dad.


It's been established that Sam, Veronica and Abhay are all the same age (they went to college together and were in the same batch). So Kangana was already pregnant when Manav left for Australia. Let's say she was about a month pregnant when she married Manav and there would be no suspicion that the child was his. He was away during the birth so he didn't know he had twins, so Sam was given away without Manav knowing and he believed Abhay was his son.


Even if he left immediately after discovering her deception, it's a stretch for him to meet Jennifer, fall in love with her, and have a child with her who's the same age as the twins.


Another issue is that if Manav knew Abhay and Veronica were step-siblings and still encouraged their marriage - it becomes a problem of borderline incest. If Manav found out the truth recently when he and Kangana were arguing, then it would be okay because by the time Abhay and Veronica were already married and there was little he could do at that point.


And now in the present timeline, it makes Veronica and Sam step-siblings who are in a relationship.

I haven't read the summary again...I just read your segment where Manav's role was not clearly mentioned as far as I remember, so I can't get away with the fact just like that Kangana's husband didn't know the truth. Plus this couple didn't have any other child too. So that way, I made Veronica the ultimate heir and owner of the Mehta Enterprises who is Manav Mehta's daughter. Sam and Abhay are nowhere a part of the Mehtas. This whole twin angle and the logic behind it got over my head to be honest. Well my thoughts got messed up with the extreme work pressure...so I am removing my segment. Next persons can please continue.
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Plot Pundits

Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: WildestDreams



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I loathe this trope! Please Simi fix this scenario 🙏🏼

I am removing my segment...You please carry forward...I am already very messed up with work in real life, its not possible for me to rewrite the segment. All my thoughts are messed up with this twins angle.

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