Wonderful chapter Yagya. 😊 Lol... This is my patent dialouge for every FF.😆
Now, let move in to some details.
I really liked it when Yagyaseni held Arjun's hand. It was something which symbolized that both of them were wanting each other even if they did not say it. That is the biggest proof of love, want for love even if you cannot say. Wonderful part, that was.
Yagyaseni's words to Arjun are wonderful. I have grown to be the biggest fan of Yagya here. Bigger than that of Arjun. Her progression graph is just perfect for a Kalyug Draupadi. Her pride, her agony, her passion for love and finally her love for Arjun. Wonderfully written. You have crafted out Yagyseni really well maybe because you can closely relate to her.
Arjun was sweet again. We a,l are aware how much he lobed her and when she finally accepted her, he was bound to be the happiest person on earth. I am really happy for Arjun. He finally got what he is worthy of.
All though usually ArDi overshadow all, I love Govind and Shubhi here. They are just too good. Govind, we all know would be happy to see two people, really close to his heart, together. And obviously Shubhi would be so happy to see his Arya and Jiji together forever.
Before I leave, I will not say congratulations for a new thread. Because that actually limits the possibilty of continuing till great lengths. And all I want is, this FF should not end until it has touched the soul of the very lobe of ArDi.
Edited by Angela_Grokes - 9 years ago
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