Arjun-Draupadi FF:Shubh Punah Milan#3|Part 69|23/2

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NONIE

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Posted: 10 years ago

#51

Congrats for the new thread Yagya👍🏼

All the three chapters are amazing 👏

Finally ardi have reunited😃

Loved the romance between them😳

Waiting for next part

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bluesky10

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Posted: 10 years ago

#52

Beautiful update

Love it

It was full of passion and love

Thanks for the wonderful update

Thanks for your pm

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LiveYourDream

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Posted: 10 years ago

#53

Wonderful update

Filled with love and controlled passion... Beautifully written

And the last words or phrases of Arjun were bang on👏

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ilardi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#54

beautiful would be an understatement! so full of passion!! I am just drooling over it!! continue sooon!!!!!!!!!👏😃

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sadiasaba68

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Posted: 10 years ago

#55

what an update 👏
extremely awesome...
parya romance
so passionate n hot ☺️
beautifully written yagya 👍🏼
sorry 4 being extremely late...had exams so couldn't comment earlier 😒
waiting for more loving n cute updates 😃

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Yagya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: Krishnaa_Nair
truly beautiful dear...
i am smiling here rteading this.. i will not call it hot.. but its was more than passion.. love... beautiful graceful emotions tied by the longing... wwooww...
this chappie is really soothing dear..

Thanks a lot, Di!

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Yagya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: .Sanskruti
Beautifull update filled with such pure love!
It ws soothing and flawlessly written... loved ur arrangement of words and use of grammar that ws really done brilliantly👏 okay okay now b4 u tell Jethanijee u sound like a judge let me say this I always felt it while reading ur pieces 😳
Brilliantly written darling well done😃 nw Shaadi updates de do na😳 some with complete Kuru family having fun time like go on a small vacation somewhere filled with romance bet ArDI nd new entries😉 jst a small demand😊

Thanks a lot, Jethanijee! I am overwhelmed at this now!

Shaadi ke updates? Usse pehle drama baaki hai!

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Yagya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#58

Teaser of Part 63

" We all got a second chance in our lives but there is one person whom I don't think, got it." said Yagya, thoughtfully.

Arjun was confused at Yagya's words and hence posed a question,

" Who is that, darling?"

" Your worthy competitor, the eldest son of your mother, Kunti Mata and a great warrior who used bad words for me in that darkened royal hall, Karna. If he is not reborn in this Yug, then the injustice is not completely reversed. And I am sure he would be born too. But the question is on which side will he be if he enters the frame?

Dharm or Adharm? Ours or again that Duryodhan?" asked Yagya, logically and Arjun knew that it was a question which only his Madhav can answer.

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I am not feeling well so just a teaser!