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Posted: 2 months ago
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Angad and Revati arrived at the Restaurant and went inside to meet AJ and Guddan 


Angad:-Bhai bhabhi kya baat hai aapne hum dono ko bulaya kyaa 


Guddan:-haa angad ji bohot zaroori baat karni hai hume aapse 


Revati:-lekin diii baat kya hai 


Guddan:-Chutki yeh sab jo ho raha hai usme parv ka haath hai kyuki vo Janta hai Teri aur uski shaadi ke beech sabse bada kaanta hum aur Angad ji hai isiliye hum nhi toh ab vo angad ji ko fansa raha hai


Angad:-toh hum karenge kya ab 


AJ:-parv ke munh se khud uska sach ugal vayenge aur iss kaam me siddhi humari help karegi 


Guddan:-Chutki tujhe bass parv ko gumrah karke rakhna hai baaki hum siddhi ji ki help se sab sach uske muh nikalva lenge 


Revati goes to parv and pretends that she has forgiven him this made him extremely happy and he gives divorce papers to siddhi which made her angry but her brother Kunal is under his under captive so she can't do anything parv leaves after giving divorce papers to her 


Siddhi:-itne saalo tak mai police officer ke naam par ek criminal se pyaar karti rahi 


AJ and Guddan arrives in the siddhi's room and consoles her and assures her that they will save her brother Kunal after sometime parv again returns to Revati but to his unknown AJ and Guddan were already present there Guddan was hiding under the curtains and AJ was hiding In the corner of the cupboard 


Parv:-Revati ji mai Siddhi ko Divorce paper de aaya 


Revati:-lekin uski kya guarantee hai ki vo sign kare dengi 


He was about to say something just then he notices some movement in the curtains he pushed Revati aside and started moving forward towards the curtain just then Revati breaks the glass which distracts parv 


Parv:-yeh kaise toota 


Revati:-kuch nahi bass paani peene ke liye uthaya tha phisal gaya koi baat nahi mai saaf kar dungi 


Seeing the chance AJ holds Guddan's wrist and Pulled her closer to himself which lead to wrapped his arms around her waist and her hands were on his shoulder


AJ:-Ache se ache jasoos ko bhi kabhi kabhi madat ki zarurat padti hai tumhe kya laga ki mai tumhe aur revati ko iss shaitan ke saath akele chod dunga kabhi nahi 


After some hours AJ got Call from the police that Kunal is safe Guddan msged siddhi and told her That Kunal is safe and now she tears the divorce papers and Throws it on parv's face 


Siddhi:-Ab mai tumse nahi darti parv mai in papers par sign nahi karungi aur uss raat tumne Guddan ji ko maarne ki koshish Kari aur jab vo vaha se gayi aur mai aai toh tumne mujhe gira Diya vaha se aur uss raat bhi tumne Guddan ji ko nuksaan pahunchna chaha lekin fans gayi bechari durga ji 


Parv:-Jhoot hai yeh Mai tumhe hi chatt se giraya tha haat pakad ke aur Maine Guddan ko fasane ke liye Durga bhabhi ko aag me rakha kyuki ek vahi Guddan ke khilaaf thi maine yeh sab kuch Revati ko paane ke liye Kara 


Parv realised that he spoke the truth and he sees that Guddan and AJ are standing with the police the police made him wear handcuffs and Takes his away with them Siddhi finally signs the divorce papers and she wipes her sindoor and removes the mangalsutra and she goes to her parents house 


In the Night, Guddan was lighting the diya in front of her Antara's and her mother's portrait she got emotional Looking at her mother's portrait


Guddan:-dekha maa tumahari Guddan ne Kar dikhaya Aaj bhi 


Just then AJ comes in the room calling her name she quickly wiped her tears and puts a smiling face 


AJ:-Guddan zara suno


Guddan:-Haa Jindal Saab kahiye  


AJ looks at her and notices her moist eyes he understood that she was crying he realises that she is missing her mother 


AJ(Cupping her face):-Kya hua Guddan kyu ro rahi ho tum Maa ki yaad aa rhai hai 


Guddan nods in yes with teary eyes and Hugs him tightly he too wrapped his arms around her and caressed her hairs 


Guddan:-Jindal saab aaj agar Maa hoti toh kitni khush hoti na 


AJ:-Guddan Maa jaha kahi bhi hai vo tumhe dekh kar khush hi hongi aur tum unhe yaad krke rougi toh unhe bura lagega na 


He parts himself from Guddan and wipes her tears 


AJ:-Guddan Tum apni maa ko yaad karke muskuraogi na toh unhe bohot acha lagega aur rougi toh bura lagega na toh ab se no Rona dhona tumahari aankhon me ek bhi aansu mujhse bardasht nahi hota 


Sensing the need for comfort he placed a soft kiss on her forehead


Guddan:-jindal saab ab sabko vapis bula lete hai na Humara Mann nahi lag rha hai 


AJ:-Kal sab vapis aa jayenge aur sabko hum log sach sach bata denge 


Guddan:-Saru bahu par pata nahi kya beetegi Jindal Saab


AJ:-woh sab chodo filhaal aur chalo so jao Raat bohot ho gayi hai 


After their conversation AJ and Guddan slept Cuddling to each other and with a peaceful smile on their faces Next Day, AJ and Guddan were preparing breakfast for the family members together


AJ:-Guddan woh upar wale shelf me Aata rakha hai laana zara 


Guddan:-Ji 


But the shelf was a little bit high due to which Guddan was having difficulty on seeing this AJ holds her from her waist and pulls her upwards so that she can take the aata she took the aata and gave it to AJ but she stumbles before she can fall AJ holds her in his arms 


Guddan:-Thank you Jindal Sahab


Guddan tied her hair in the bun she inserts her pallu in the saree and then she started helping AJ after an hour they kept every dishes on the table just then they heard a doorbell Guddan opened the door and hugs everybody one by one 


Lakshmi:-areee waah itni achi khushboo


Vardhan:-chole bhature, matar paneer, pasta, samosa, kachori aur bhi bohot kuch hai 


Durga Bahu:-vardhan ji ki shakal dekh kr lag raha hai ki vo Sara khaana aise hi kha jayenge uski khushboo soongh ke 


Everyone laughed on hearing Durga's remark and Vardhan pouts everyone settled themselves on the chairs after having the breakfast 


Durga Bahu:-AJ vo doshi ka kuch pata chala kon hai voh 


Kishore:-haa papa kuch pata chala 


Guddan:-haa Kishore ji pata chal gaya hai 


Saraswati bahu:-kon hai vo


AJ:-Parv 


Everyone gets shocked on listening this especially Saraswati bahu


Saraswati bahu:-yeh sach nahi ho sakta 


Guddan:-yehi sach hai Saru Bahu


AJ plays the recording on the TV screen and everyone gets shocked on seeing this Saraswati sits on the sofa with a thud she can't beleive that her own brother could do this she apologized to everyone but they asked her not to apologise Durga apologizes to Guddan and accepts her as her saas wholeheartedly they both hug each other tightly after that everyone went to their respective rooms 


In the Night, Guddan was sitting on the bed holding her head just then AJ came in the room and got worried on seeing Guddan


AJ:-Guddan kya hua 


Guddan:-kuch nahi jindal Saab vo sar me dard ho raha hai bohot zor se 


AJ:-kya tum apna bilkul bhi khayal nahi rakhti Guddan 


Luckily he found the hot oil in the bowl he opened her hairs and started massaging her head she felt relaxed after getting the massage from her Jindal Saab 


Guddan:-Jindal saab aapko yaad hai na Kal Maa ki barsi hai 


AJ:-Mandir me Pooja rakhwai hai Guddan kal ke liye theek hai filhaal tum utho aur aaram karo 


Dadi was coming into Akshan's room but she saw that Guddan is laying her head on AJ's chest and he is patting her head he made Guddan sleep on the bed properly and planted a soft kiss on her forehead he came after changing his dress Guddan snuggled into him and he too holds her arm and sleep like that Dadi prayed to her kanha ji for her children's and family's happiness 





















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Posted: 2 months ago
#2

How will they get Parv to admit to wrongdoing? What game will they play to make it happen?

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Posted: 2 months ago
#3

Is Siddhi part of their plot? Is she working with them? Or she is just a pawn for now?

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Posted: 2 months ago
#4

Guddan almost got caught when Parv saw the movement behind the curtain. But Revati saved the situation.

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Posted: 2 months ago
#5

Parv played along just like they wanted him to. He admitted the truth from his own mouth.

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Posted: 2 months ago
#6

Siddhi provoked him by lieing to him which lead him to confess the truth 

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Next Day, Guddan woke up early and she got ready in a Full traditional Type saree she tied her hair in a braid in the meantime AJ also comes down and everyone left for the temple after an hour everyone reached the temple AJ and Guddan sat on the puja's place Guddan lights the diya just then a strong wind began to blow due to which diya was blown out and the garland on the photo fell down Tears welled up in Guddan's eyes she hugged AJ and began to cry he puts his one hand in front of his face and was holding Guddan's arm from other hand just then a middle aged lady came with a slowly steps Guddan left AJ and she too started moving forward everyone realised that she is Guddan's real mother and everyone gets shocked on seeing this but they were happy for Guddan as she got her mother back but kaushalya was happy as a mother but she got insecure as a wife 


(Note:-Imagine shalini kapoor as Guddan's real mother)


Sumati cupped Guddan's face and hugged her tightly but Guddan was standing still she didn't reciprocate the hug she parts herself from her and ran towards her old Gupta House as it was nearer to temple AJ called her from behind 


AJ(running behind her):-Guddan 


But Guddan didn't hear she took the car keys and drove towards her old home and locked herself in the room AJ sent Dadi, Sons and Daughter-in-laws back to Jindal bhawan after 5 mins AJ with Bhushan kaushalya and Revati arrived there 


On hearing that everyone is here she came out of the Room and went towards her mother 


Guddan:-Kahan thi aap 


Sumati(Guddan's mother):-Guddan beta 


Guddan(a bit loudly):-humne pucha Kahan thi aap itne saalon se 


Sumati:-kismat ne bohot hi Bekar khel khela tha humare saath Uss Raat jab hum Car me band ho gaye the aur uske baad car khai me gir gayi thi tab humare Shareer aur sar par kaafi gehri chotein aai thi jiski vajah se hum 2 saal Tak coma me the jab hosh me aaye toh sab kuch bhool chuke the hum kuch yaad nahi tha hume fir hum 6 mahine doctor sahiba ke ghar me ruke the jinhone humara ilaaj kara fir ek din hum unke saath said(walk) par Gaye the aur unka paon pahadi se fisal gaya aur ussi dauran unhe bachate bachate hume sab yaad aa gaya humne faisla Kara ki hum apne Ghar apne parivar ke paas apni beti ke paas Laut aaye lekin 


AJ:-Lekin kya aap aai kyu nahi Guddan ke paas 


Sumati:-Fir hume laga ki aap sab log aage badh Gaye honge toh fir humne socha ki hum ateet hai aur ateet ka saya hum nahi padne Dena chahte the apne parivar par 


AJ:-fir aapki zindagii ka kyaa 


Sumati:-vo doctor sahiba ke bhai humare dost the lekin fir dheere dheere humare saathi ban gaye vo 


Guddan:-Aap itna sure kaise thi aapke Bina hum papa aur baki sab khush honge aur aage badh Gaye honge 


Sumati:-Zaahir si baat hai beta hum laga 


Guddan:-waah laga aapko laga ki hum aage badh Gaye aree jis insaan ko yeh lagta hai na fir bhi vo ek baar aata hai apne parivaar ke paas aap toh yeh bhi jaanne nahi aai ki aapki beti Guddan zinda bhi hai ya marr gayi bachpan se hum maa ke pyaar ke liye maa ki Mamta ke liye taraste reh gaye lekin Hume kabhi vo naseeb nahi hua kabhi bhi nahi Maa ka pyaar kya hota hai Maa ki mamta kaisi hoti hai Hume kabhi pata nahi chala 


Kaushalya looked with shocked expressions at Guddan 


Guddan:-Haa Mummy aapne sahi suna shuru shuru me aap theek thi fir chutki ke aane ke baad bhi kuch time tak sab theek raha lekin dheere dheere aap bhi baaki sauteli maao jaisi ho gayi mummy choti choti baaton per hume daantna inke accident ki baat ko leke hume manhoos bolna duniya ki awaz me awaz Milana Guddan tumse na ho payega bolna galti karne par hume maarna torcher karna yaha Tak humse galtiyo wali chits likhwai humare birthday par humse chits par likhwaya ki hum aage aur galtiya na kare humesha aapne chaha ki hum chutki se zyada kaamyaab na ban paaye humari sagi maa aur sauteli maa ne milkar humara bachpan barbaad kar diya 18 saal humari zindagi ke 18 saal lauta payengi ki aap humari masumiyat humara bachpan sab barbaad kar diya 


Guddan fell on her knees and started crying bitterly AJ came towards Guddan and he too sits on the floor and hugged Guddan she hides her face in his chest and began to cry hard he was caressing her hairs somehow she composed herself and began to talk 


Guddan:-bass ek kaam acha kara aapne aur uss parv ne dono ne milkar humari shaadi Jindal Saab se karva di jinhone har kadam par humara saath diya hum par bharosa kara hume itna strong banaya hume khud par bharosa karna sikhaya ki hum se sab kuch ho sakta hai hume Jo izzat mil Rahi hai na duniya me vo sab inhi ke vajah se mil rahi hai inhone Hume ek jhalli Guddan se Guddan Akshat Jindal banaya Jo ki Jindal parivar ki saas hai bahu hai aur inki patni bhi hai 


She looked at AJ with a smile he too smiled and Kissed her forehead she was feeling exhausted and tired as her pain and wound was very deep it was not physical but mental and emotional wound 


Guddan:-aapne jo humare saath Kiya na Mrs. Sumati uske liye hum aap ko kabhi maaf nahi karenge kabhi bhi nahi aur mummy aap ab bhale hi kaisi bhi ho lekin jab hume aapko zarurat thi tab aap humare saath bilkul bhi nahi thii 


Just then her vision got blur and she fainted in AJ's arms which made him anxious


AJ(patting her cheeks):-Guddan aankhein kholo 


As he touched her cheeks he realised that she is having high fever he carried her in his arms Kaushalya and Sumati tried to come forward but AJ stopped them with a glare after that he took her back to the Jindal bhawan Revati came with him but not before passing the hatred look to her mother on the other hand,


Bhushan:-tum toh aage badh gayi sumati lekin meri bacchi abhi bhi vahi ki vahi hai meri bhi galti hai mai ek acha pita nahi ban paaya sirf ek pati ban kar reh gaya nahi de paaya apni beti ko ek achi Maa


He left from there leaving kaushalya and Sumati alone they were all guilt stricken On the other hand

AJ reached the jindal bhawan he carried Guddan in his arms again and took her to their room Jindal family came in the Room running worried for Guddan 


Dadi:-Lalla kya hua Meri Guddan ko uska chehra aise laal kyu pad Gaya hai 


AJ:-main aapko baad me batata hu maa Durga Bahu aap zara barf le aayegi paani me daalke 


Durga Bahu:-Ji AJ 


Lakshmi Bahu went downstairs with Durga Bahu and they brought the cold water AJ puts the damp cloth on her forehead and in the meanwhile doctor arrived she asked everyone to wait outside after 20 mins she came outside


AJ:-Doctor kya hua Meri Guddan theek hai na 


Doctor:-Ghabrane wali baat nahi hai Zyada Rone ki vajah se inhe bukhar hua aur anxiety ki vajah se yeh faint ho gayi but make sure aage se aisa na ho unhe jitna ho sake khush rakhiye otherwise Inke brain ke nerves break ho sakte h aur inhe bachana bohot mushkil ho jayega 


The doctor left from there and Kishore dropped her to the gate after that he came back and asked AJ about the incident AJ told everything to them and all left in the tears especially Dadi 


Durga Bahu:-Hey bhagwan yeh kaisa zulm hai abhi kal hi toh saasu maa itni khush thi 


Lakshmi Bahu:-Saasu maa ki Maa ne yeh bilkul theek nahi kara apne parivar ke saath 


Saraswati bahu:-kaushalya ji se hum kuch expect hi nahi kar sakte Lakshmi Dii kyuki unki vajah se Saasu maa itni galtiya karti thi agar saasu maa ki Maa sahi time par aake unhe bacha leti in sab se toh aaj haalat alag hote 


Kishore:-abhi in sab baaton ko chodo aur Guddan Maa pe focus karo hume unhe kaise bhi karke khush rakhna hai 


Vardhan:-Haa bhaiya sahi bol rahe hai lekin papa hume kuch karna hoga Guddan Maa ke liye


AJ:-Haa lekin ek baar vo hosh me aa jaye fir dekhte hai abhi aap sab jaake aaram kariye 


Everyone went in their Rooms and starts discussion the plans AJ sat on the stool beside Guddan and starts putting damp cloth on her forehead when he felt fever is reducing he kissed her forehead and started caressing her hairs after 10 mins Guddan opened her eyes but still she was feeling weak she tried to get up but AJ came in the nick of the time and helps her to sit properly he cupped her cheeks from his one hand 


AJ:-Tum theek ho na Guddan 


Guddan nods in yes and she hugged him again tightly and started crying again 


AJ:-bas Guddan shaant ho jao Mai hun na tumhare paas


Guddan:-humare saath hi kyu hota hai aisa Jindal Saab Mummy toh chalo shuru se hi aisi hai lekin humari apni maa ne humare saath Aisa Kara hume yakeen nahi hota lekin ab aap aur yeh parivaar hi humara parivaar hai aur Jindal Saab hum bhi apni ek pehchan banana chahte hai ek interior designer banna chahte hai aap denge na humara saath 


AJ:-Bilkul Guddan mai har kadam pe tumhare saath hun lekin ab chalo aur kuch khaa lo niche


AJ took Guddan downstairs and made her sit on the chair just then Angad arrived with her one of the favorite dish samosa and kept on the table Daughter in laws with aloo ka Paratha and sons with her most favourite Gol gappa AJ started feeding her with his hands after that everyone in the family started feeding her with their own hands one by one Guddan felt most cherished woman on the earth and the remaining day went awesome as they all spent some family time together 


After some days, Guddan became fit and fine she decided to confess her love to her Jindal Saab and in these days AJ also realised his love for his Guddan they both decided to confess their Love


Precap:-confession in next part 
















Edited by Srishti_124 - 1 months ago
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Posted: 2 months ago
#8

The mom suffered injuries and was in a coma for along time. Finally she made her way to her daughter.

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Posted: 2 months ago
#9

Both Guddan and AJ want to confess their love to each other. They should make it special.