Arjun-Draupadi FF:Shubh Punah Milan#3|Part 69|23/2

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sirivalli

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Posted: 10 years ago

#91

awesome update...

loved it...

karan is back...

rakhi is coming...

eagerly waiting for d next part...

thanks for d pm 😊

Edited by sirivalli.t - 10 years ago

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LiveYourDream

@LiveYourDream

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Posted: 10 years ago

#92

The story is very interestingly poised Yagya

I guess we will have to wait and watch whose side Karna is on !

And the Raksha Bandhan flashback was great ..I am looking forward to that

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yoga123

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Posted: 10 years ago

#93

Wonderful chapter...thanks for the PM

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8520NK

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Posted: 10 years ago

#94

Victory...I have finally managed to unres.

Please forgive me for not unresing any sooner, it just slipped out of my mind.

Anyway, let me come directly to the chapters😳

I really like the way you are going ahead with the plot, especially the introduction of Karna and Vrushali. Also, the dilemma of ArDi whether to trust him had been portrayed exceptionally well...I hope he is on the good side, I really do, or rather on their side.

This relationship between Arjun-Draupadi-Karna has always been extremely controversial, but the way you are going forward with this plot, explaining their apprehensions is really nice.

And obviously the cherry on the cake here is that our protagonists have finally crossed the boundaries of their past and accepted their love for each other, therefore they are facing the problems together and of course, Draupadi has been accepted into the Kuru family is just another plus point!

Aah, although Draupadi and Govind having started the tradition of tying Rakhi is a little debatable but you have beautifully weaved it into the update and their bond instantly brings a smile to the reader's face. The updates were wonderful and I am really looking forward for more..!

Finally, I really liked the little filmy back story of Karna, hehe! *big smile*

P.S. - I am sorry for not updating the ArShi FF, but I'll PM you the update very soon😊

Edited by 8520NK - 10 years ago

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Aishwarya Kommu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#95

long time no see.karn and vrushali...
we gonna mingle him with dury now?...
whats been going on with him??
yagya...spice it up. its all your's now 😃
make it mind-blowing (not like you already do)
update jaldi from now on...its a pain not being able to read these updates

n eagerly waiting to see everyone's reactions..especially drau's towards karn's😆

and yaar..not to forget.. where have you been all these days? busy? understand if you are. im in your shoes then. 😉

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mahima

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Posted: 10 years ago

#96

Hey yagya!! 😊
wonderful ff! :) you r a brilliant writer!! (:
but why have u stopped updating? 🥺 🤔
plz continue! :D

Edited by Mahiima16 - 10 years ago

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Yagya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#97

Part 65

The day of Raksha Bandhan, the festival celebrating the beauty of brother and sister bond was here. And this time, like all the time in the past, Kanha and Yagya were among the most ecstatic ones.
The memories of their dark and dreaded past which held this golden relationship in its lap were flooding in their mind and were making their way out through their lotus like eyes.
Yagya was dressed up in the favorite colors of the Almighty himself; blue and golden. On the other hand, respecting the likes of his dear friend and a sister from divinity, red-orange kurta and patiala adorned Kanha. To say that Arjun was overwhelmed to see the two most important people of his life, so happy would surely be an insult to the storm of feelings raging inside his loving heart.
Everyone assembled in the Pooja Room and the rituals for the Raksha Bandhan had started. Going by the traditions, Subhi came forward to tie Rakhi to her dear brother with a sweet smile on her face.
She devotedly did his aarti, drew a tika across his forehead before doing the rest of the rituals. She made him wear the Rakhi, strengthening the bond which never wavered through the ages.
" So Bhratha, where is my gift?" asked Subhi with a naughty smile on her face.
Arjun leaned towards Kanha and said with a smirk,
" Madhav, assume that your bank balance will come down by half."
Throwing a glare at Arjun, Subhi forwarded her hand asking for her gift while Kanha dug out a beautiful velvet box from his pocket.
" For the time being, Subhi. If you need anything else, then give me the time to get a paper and a pen as I am sure I can't remember more than 15 things for a list." joked Kanha, while Subhi pouted in fake anger.
" Achcha Achcha, if you don't mind, can I complete my rituals now?" asked Yagya, because she knew that this brother-sister duo would not cease fighting once they start.
" Make sure you ask something very good, Yagya." said Subhi, while winking at her.
Yagya dutifully completed her rituals without breaking the eye-lock of immensely divine love and respect, which she and Kanha were sharing. In fact, she even bent down to take blessings of the Almighty because it was only Kanha who stood by her, whenever she needed someone to hold her hand and stay with her.
Before Yagya could actually open her mouth to ask for her gift, Kanha was trying to open the gift kept on the table beside him when Yagya stopped him.
" Govind, I don't need that." said Yagya, shocking everyone there.
" Do you want something else, Yagya?" asked Kanha, even though he knew the answer which he was going to get.
" Your presence, Govind. If I have that one gift from your side, then I am the most fortunate lady and there can never be a gift more precious and memorable than that." said Yagya, in a loving tone while everyone realized why their relationship was beyond the imagination of many.
Their relationship was something which was not defined by any materialistic feeling or object in the vast universe. Their relationship was something, which was profound and divine from both the ends. It was located at the peak of intensity of love. The love, Yagya and Kanha was something which few understand, a very few feel but actually can not be explained by anyone.
Kanha looked at Yagya with a loving smile while there were tears of ecstasy in the lotus eyes of Yagya. After years of pain, it was the first time, it was just tears of joy coming out from her eyes. Every other time before, they were either mixed with the tears of pain or blood of the arch enemy.
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The music started at the request of Yagya who wanted to dedicate a musical performance for her dear Govind.
Meri Aankhon Mein Tu MuskurayeMeri Dhadkan Pe Hain Teri SaayeinPoojati Hai NazarTujhko Aaton PeherKoun Tere Siwa Yaad Aaye
Whatever and however the time was, Yagya and Arjun knew who would stand by them always. Their eyes literally worship the image of the Lord pictured in their hearts all the day. Their eyes maybe filled with the tears of pain but once the sight of Kanha laughing comes in front of them, every sorrow ceases to concern them and every pain turns into pleasure.

Zindagi Ke Karam TujhseHar Khushi Har Gham TujhseWaadein Aur Kasam TujhseHar Khushi Har Gham Tujhse
Yagya knew that everything of their life and in fact everyone's life is associated with just Kanha. Whatever we do, every sorrow, every happiness, every vow and every promise we do is nothing but a deed committed towards him. Regardless of him being the Almighty, Yagya's devotional love towards Kanha was so much that automatically her every action was hinted towards him.

Aake Dekhe Koi YahanApne Hote Hai KaiseJashn Khushiyan Maanati HaiGhar Jannat ho Yeh Jaise
When she wanted someone to call as her own, she had none except for Kanha. Her husbands abandoned her, the elders turned ignorant towards her but there was one person who never forgot his duty towards the divine bond, he and his dear Sakhi shared, and that was Kanha. Yagya reminisced how even the painful cottage during their exile turned into heaven everytime Kanha visited them.

Ek Dooje Ke Bandhan Mein Bandh Gaye Hai Ham AiseKoi Shikwa Na HoDaur Jaisa Bhi HoFaasla Beech Mein Ana Paaye
Their bond was something which was bound even before the universe and time began. It was beyond the understanding of people, the definition of love and all-over-powering time itself. Their relation was such that, no obstacle could ever separate them because they were soulmates who vowed to support each and complete each other for eternity. The divinity in Yagya's voice was soul-touching but the pain in her while singing this song was realized by only one person like all the times in the past, Kanha.
Kanha just hoped that he would be able to save her from pain again as he himself knew that she bore enough pain to last for eternity but the time chose a hard way for her yet again.
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How was it? I know extremely late update but I am extremely busy with my exams and some serious stuff.

Edited by Yagyaseni - 10 years ago

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NONIE

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Posted: 10 years ago

#98

Mindblowing part Yagyaseni👏

The divine bond of Yagya and kahna is beyond human nature⭐️

Edited by Nonie12345 - 10 years ago

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mahima

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Posted: 10 years ago

#99

i'm so glad that you finally updated!! 😊
it was very nice and now plz update soon :D

Edited by Mahiima16 - 10 years ago

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sadiasaba68

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Posted: 10 years ago

#100

part:64
yup everyone wants to know karn is on which side...
bt as govind is here so not to fear
part:65
truly beautiful 👏
such a special celebration... n when it is celebrated by special persons like govind draupadi n shubhi it's divine 🤗
loved the shubhi govind convo 😊
n govind - draupadi part was superb ⭐️
continue soon 😃