Mohabbat Yun..last part PG 132

Mohabbat Yun'.

 

As promised to all of you that after closing my three ffs, I will be soon coming up with new. So here I start the new one. It's a different story, with a different character sketch . the kind of I haven't written yet.

A.     It's a love story of two poles apart person, not only in natures but also in believes and principles.

 

B.     Plus this story may have typical dialogues like aj chand zameen per utar aya kind of, I know its highly irritating yet one of the character is such and believe in such expression, not literally yet it will have little bit strong dialogues'

 

C.     Ur feedback is extremely important as even I am pretty reluctant about the character sketches I have in my mind.

 

D.     It will not be a regular update, as I have written only one chapter, so cant say when and how frequent I will be updating it.

 

E.     But to all, its is a love story for sure, and have a different shade of love, someone will agree with it and some not, but u have to say whatever u feel they way u said always in GMYH

 

F.     Plus in bolds..it is an mayank nupur love story completely, so donot panic at one point of story'

 

G.    Donot get afraid after seeing the prologue, it isn't in pure urdu..

 

H.    And for Pms pls add me to ur buddy list, and those who donot want..pls ignore them as I donot maintain a pm list.

 

Mayank: 26 years, a well established mature person, working in multinational firm. He is a different person from his set of people. He is a firm believer of love, affection expressions.

Nupur: 27 yrs, a strong headed working girl. She works as a product manger. Is very intellectual. Everything for her is about brain, corrections and perfections. Love for her is an emotion and she has her own ways of expression to it. She is a girl of principle

 

 

 

 

Edited by drfizaahmed - 11 years ago

Prologue:

Na tumahray her lafaz mein pazeerai hoon, na meray her harf mein taghfakur, na her lamah izhar ho, na meray haraf haraf shikayatein.. .gar tum khabi sharikay safar na raho,han  humsfar magar tum hi tum rahoo

Neither in my words there will be all time praise for u, nor there wil be a deliberate ignorance, neither confessions all the time, maybe  if u not remain the one to walk along with me, yet u will be the one who will always be in my paths

Tumhara sath ho, tumhari khusbo her taraf tumahra chehra, tumhara sparsh, tumahri ankhein, tumahri baatein, tumahri yaadein, tum hi tum ho tamaam rahoon mein, tumhi tum ho meray din aur raato mein, tum se shoro ho tum per kahtam ho, yeah zindagi ab sirf tum hi tum ho'.

Ur togetherness, ur fragrance, ur expressions, ur touch, ur eyes ur talks, ur memories, u is all about.. u r the one in all my paths,ur the one in my nights and  days, from u my life strts and end there too, life is neither not me not you its US..with u

Tumhary lafzo, tumhary taver( expressions)  se chalakti beinteha muhabbat ho, meri honay se tumhari duniya na honay se besukoni(restlesnness) hoon, mjh per simat(conserve)  jay tumhary dono jahan..Muhabbat Yun k bus ab na mein na tum hoo'muhabbat yun k ab bus sirf hum hi hum hoon'.

Ur words, ur expressions ur confessions hold immense love for me, love should be ur whole world with me, without me nothing should be at peace for you. Ur both worlds conserve at me..love should be such tht now for u there should be no u no me….

 

Muhabbat yun ..k jis mein koi dawa na ho, muhabbat yun k jis mein koi izahar na hoo, muhaabt yun k jis mein koi ass na ho'muhabbat yun k jis mein koi sharat koi takaza na ho..muhabbat sukoon ho,  muhabbat tum ho muhabbat mein hoon'

 

Love such that there is not declaration, no confessions, no hopes, no demand no compensations, love is peace, love is me love is u

Yun mukamal hojay jis k honay se sara jaha , bekhray(disperse)  tu sara jaha , simtay tu sirf mein sirf tum ho'

Muhabbat yun'''..

 

PS: I hope ur getting the color differentiation

Edited by drfizaahmed - 12 years ago

index

CHAPTER:1
CHAPTER: 2
CHAPTER: 3
CHAPTER:4
CHAPTER: 5
CHAPTER: 6
CHAPTER: 7
CHAPTER: 8
CHAPTER: 9
CHAPTER: 10
CHAPTER: 11
CHAPTER: 12
CHAPTER: 13
CHAPTER: 14
CHAPTER: 15
Chapter : 16
CHAPTER: 17.
Chapter: 18
CHAPTER: 19
CHAPTER : 20
CHAPTER: 21
CHAPTER: 22
CHAPTER: 23
CHAPTER: 24
CHAPTER : 25
CHAPTER:26
CHAPTER: 27
CHAPTER: 28
CHAPTER: 29
CHAPTER 30
CHAPTER: 31
CHAPTER: 32
Last Part
Edited by drfizaahmed - 11 years ago

Is it a new mayur ff??????
yeeepeee congo dear
waiting for update...

Awesome Starting API...Edited by 18anila1 - 12 years ago

beautiful start. nupur is older than mayank? fiza plz language thora simple karo. mujhe samjh nehi aa raha hai specially dialogue in brown colour. plzzz

Originally posted by: mayuloveu

beautiful start. nupur is older than mayank? fiza plz language thora simple karo. mujhe samjh nehi aa raha hai specially dialogue in brown colour. plzzz

DONOT WORRY..i said before..it will not be in urdu...bus mera prolgue asa likhny k dil tha...
yes Nupur is older than mayank...

fiza ...mai apne vichar ..update padhne ke baad dungi...

kunki mujhe prologue samjh nahi aayi...

kripya kar hume samjhaye...

Originally posted by: drfizaahmed

Mohabbat Yun'.

 

As promised to all of you that after closing my three ffs, I will be soon coming up with new. So here I start the new one. It's a different story, with a different character sketch . the kind of I haven't written yet.

thank u so much fiza. thanx 4 cuming with new ff. So nice of u

A.     It's a love story of two poles apart person, not only in natures but also in believes and principles.

wah. it seems really very interesting...

 

B.     Plus this story may have typical dialogues like aj chand zameen per utar aya kind of, I know its highly irritating yet one of the character is such and believe in such expression, not literally yet it will have little bit strong dialogues'

hmm so we gonna read some beautiful sher and shayeri frm u- not bad at all. though iye mera samjh ki bahar hai but pher bhi i'll try to understand them...

 

C.     Ur feedback is extremely important as even I am pretty reluctant about the character sketches I have in my mind.

😃😉😃

 

D.     It will not be a regular update, as I have written only one chapter, so cant say when and how frequent I will be updating it.

errr😡😡.. i hate it. why u wont give us reglar update. aise bilkul nehi chalega..

E.     But to all, its is a love story for sure, and have a different shade of love, someone will agree with it and some not, but u have to say whatever u feel they way u said always in GMYH

Haye it seems a different   mayur love story . i m really very excited.

 

F.     Plus in bolds..it is an mayank nupur love story completely, so donot panic at one point of story'

yeee thank u somuch.sothere is  no tragedy ---- right????????😉😆😃

 

G.    Donot get afraid after seeing the prologue, it isn't in pure urdu..

 

H.    And for Pms pls add me to ur buddy list, and those who donot want..pls ignore them as I donot maintain a pm list.

 

Mayank: 26 years, a well established mature person, working in multinational firm. He is a different person from his set of people. He is a firm believer of love, affection expressions.

Nupur: 27 yrs, a strong headed working girl. She works as a product manger. Is very intellectual. Everything for her is about brain, corrections and perfections. Love for her is an emotion and she has her own ways of expression to it. She is a girl of principle

hmm so nupur a year older than maynk. interesting. and nupur is perfectionist. its totally opposite of our actual nupur.. interesting yaar...

 
 

Originally posted by: raginisharma

fiza ...mai apne vichar ..update padhne ke baad dungi...

kunki mujhe prologue samjh nahi aayi...

kripya kar hume samjhaye...

lolz...
ap pls humain batain k apko kiya kiya samhj nhi aya...CC k agla mission tum ko urdu sekhna hai😆
thik hai wasy i will be psting frst chpt soon