Mohabbat Yun..last part PG 132 - Page 54

Originally posted by: love.mayurarti

nice part

thanks

Originally posted by: vinan2050

heyy sry fr late cmmnt read 18,19,20 th at once awsm update but abhi aage kya ????????

Plzz update soon

thnks alot

picture abhi baqi hai meray dost

mere mayu ko thik karo...

Originally posted by: -Nyx-

Hi Fiza...long time I have been away from commenting but somehow I did manage to read this FF as a silent reader and I think its about time I share my views.

I dunno how others will feel about this comment as I fail to agree with the overwhelming responses I see against Mayank. Yes..I do agree that Mayu does occasionally behave like a child and seeks 200% attention from Nupur all the time and Nupur is very much aware of it as well as in one of the latest chapters she was reflecting on her thoughts how this person wants every cell of her 24/7. Despite of being fully aware of his needs and his ways, she fails to provide him that repeatedly. Her lack of expression wrt her feelings about him which is far more stronger than what she actually shows him, way she hides things from him like the UK selection bits, doesn't celebrate her bday as per others convenience yet allows her family to do that i.e. repeatedly letting Mayank feel that he is lesser than her family (which could be very much true but does she always have to impose it on him knowing how he feels abt her?) ...she does all that and we don't see how Mayank is feeling abt it. What we always see how Nupur is feeling in reaction to Mayu's behavior. As a writer aren't you being slightly partial to Nupur??

Either way, all the above doesn't justify Mayank's sudden U-Turnish behaviour towards Nupur. He loves her ...he loves her above and beyond everything he knows and believes and even couple of chapters ago he was pulling the stars down on earth for her. Suddenly...through the portrayal of random scenes, Mayank is repeatedly acting weird and causing pain to Nupur..why and how? Yes he is insecure but that's because Nupur has never expressed anything to reassure him on their relationship, he is childish but only to her as he seems quite practical and level headed in his job and career..so what is it? what's the cause that in literally 2 chapters or couple of weeks of story time, he is actually breaking up with her!!!! So what's happening here? What is he hiding? Why is he so desperately trying to push Nupur away from him esp at a time when Mr. PC has entered the scene now...I would never believe that Mayank would do this to Nupur...and if he is then there is a reason which you will reveal later on I hope. But now you are only preparing your readers for a decision Nupur is about to take which needs justification...am I right? Well if Nupur decides to leave Mayank with him being the one taking full responsibility for it AND chooses someone else to marry, I, myself as a reader will never forgive her for not having faith in Mayank and not even trying to understand the rationale behind his behaviour. I know you kept on telling us to view things from Nupur's perspective and you did everything to steer your readers that way but I cannot seem to go completely blind on Mayank's behalf.

Here's hoping that you will drive the storyline to its rightful ending where we get to see more balance in both Mayank and Nupur. Afterall...being in a relationship is all about filling each other's gaps to give that jigsaw puzzle a complete picture 😊 Great story...and great control over readers thoughts..


p.s. Sorry for the long comment..it is my first one for this ff in 20 chapters. Hope you don't mind...

Hello..nice to see you back... but a request even as a silent reader pls do press the like as that make me know who are reading this n who are not..

u know sumtimes i feel blessed to have such wonderful readers that can even guess that im playing with the thoughts of them...
this ff til now or maybe 2 updates more is about like nupur telling her story.. u rightly said that i havent said a think wht mayank feels..n thats why i have rpld to sum of reader saying i will justify him..
if u look at the title n proglogue its Muhabbat Yun... both of them have contrast ways of telling tht to each other...
ur right she lack expression or rather i should say she has wierd ways of leting them know to the other... the point of birthday celebration ..why mayank didnt object was becuase he did understand ...why she didnt let him celebrate it before tht... if u look at that day.it wa just another day in her life and has alwasy been... it wasnt important.. doesnt matters to her... yet he made it THE day... and she did cherish it.. he knew her family didnt actually celebrated and the will that she want him there at that very day with her.. just at tht moment...

i am being not partial ..i m taking it the way i want to give it a thought... if i would have shown both of them's feeling than u all wouldnt have felt the effects of the words...feelings wouldnt have been like this...

if u take a male prospective they will say its okay ..kuch kah diya kahbi tu kya farak parata hai..n its sum how right yet u have to justify or atleast make other feel that ... it isnt nupur's fault that she lack expression or she is dam practical... he knew it right from the strt... and she knew it that he has wierd demands in love... but the point is of acepting these from both...
nupur was a person needed to be handle with extrem patience..n its not mayank's fault that he is born short temper... n sumhwere mayank's fault was that he never tried to look beyond things..he tried to make things perfect his way... the way he things...

this stroy is about imprefections... more about the differnce in a girl n boy thoughts of experisons or abt words... yet how a girl accept 60% of the time more than a boy

this story is sumhow based from the real life expernces and the way a couple has made there most beautiful relaltion turn sore...
sumtime we think fine its isnt worth puting ur efforts into such relationship...yet whn its isnt around u feel ... efforts or no efforts the person was there.. it was enough...n u feel it desperately

and truly said its about fullfilling the gaps.. not making one... but it cant be oneside...
this story has lot more to cum... mayank needs to know his fault tht he certainly still donot know.. and i know its not even his fault to...


thanku so much for ur such beautiful n meaniful comment... it makes me so glad when my readers live stories rather than just reading... they gave it a thought it stay there in their mind for sumtime...

Originally posted by: raginisharma

mere mayu ko thik karo...

kerti hoon kerti hoon
abhi aram se raho..abhi sad sad hai sab 😕

Originally posted by: -Anila-

Awesome update API...

Beautifully written...

loved ur writing..

Sigh!!!!!!! so finally it came wht i feared for...

mujhe uss Hospital wale update ke time laga tha ke koi nhi dekha inhe asa kese n here uss Adha--Raaj ne akhir dekh hi liya..ufff

n God!! i know its not seemed to be good bt still asa kese uski family usse asi ghatiya sawal kar sakti hain...

dey talked so much rubbish abt her n her character...

dat was enough!!! i loved wht Nupur said to dem..

good...dat she cleared wht she feel for him n she will marry him...

i know it is sigh n a sigh... and even gave a hint sumwhere back tht she will stod whn needed...

hayee ALLAH yeh kya kar diya apne..

Mayank let her go away from him...Sigh!

bt i want to know wht is his problem n why is he sooo upset n worried...

asa kya hain jo woh Diya se share kar sakta hain bt Nupur se nhi...

asi problem jiski wajah se woh iss hadd tak pagal ho gaya hain ke Nupur se ase behave karein...

Awww...feeling horrible for Her...

she loved Him so much..😔

when she hugged him n her last peck...Gosh!!

dis Girl loves dis Man to d Highest Extend!!!...Sigh!

i hope as u said ke kuch updates mein Mayank ko pata chal hi jayega yeh..

m eagerly waiting for dat only!!

ab mujhe aur iss Mayank ke behavior ko tolerate nhi karna...Sigh!!!

loved it...

Love u lodsss API...🤗🤗🤗

dekho mayank k POV will be cuming in few parts... i wont gave any explanations as whn i will fiinsh there both areas,,, i will let u guys descide wht u felt...
this is abt realties ..not fantasy... so it has to be such... yet phir bhi woh stroy hai tu i have in my hand to make it happy ending... so dont wrry abt tht

Hey guys.

Rplyd to u all…

As sumone corrected mentioned I m telling it through nupur's point of view… mayank's view n his life will strt soon.. I need u all to feel both of them individually so u can make the correct POVs abt them… if would have took it parell than reaction would always had a justification n tht I donot want..

Hope u all are oky with it….

Plus pls silent readers press like…even many who are commenting are not… this is how I count how many of u have read it… n at times delay knowing sum have not…

Han but those who don't like pls don't press like button J

Nice one.. from the past two updates what i felt there is Nupur fault too,when you are in relationship you have to balance it,,,sometimes we have to sacrifice for him whom we loved and sometime we expect from him he too sacrifice for us..

Originally posted by: Maria.

Nice one.. from the past two updates what i felt there is Nupur fault too,when you are in relationship you have to balance it,,,sometimes we have to sacrifice for him whom we loved and sometime we expect from him he too sacrifice for us..

But Nupur is somewhere forget if she loves Mayank ,before leaving she should.ve tried to understand him but No she has to fulfil her dream so she did not care about him and i dont like it about her...

if Mayank is wrong and taking things wrongly she was mature enough to mend everything between them but she did not try..i did not expect it from her as he was the only one who loves her,who cares her..

dont take it offence in any way..it just my Pov..

anyways continue soon

i cant take ur words as offense dear. never...
my readers POVs are very important and i m here to answer it.. so dotn feel so ..n tht is why a respond to each n every comment


dekho at times u get tired ..she is too a human.. how much u want her to compromise how much she can listen there is point to her tolerance too.. ..aur woh bhi woh sab jo woh shayd hamesha se hi face ker rahi hai..

it isnt just a dream... it was her life time dream... and if she has stopped everything in her life for him.. shouldnt he be there at this moment of her life...

i wont agree on the part that she didnt tried ... she was handling it from past so many things..
just becuse u love the person or the person loves u .. u dont get the right to do wht so ever u want to...
atleast once he need to control..once...
i know the timing whn nupur's tolerance reached threshold was extremly bad... and yes ur right she is too at fault.. i wont say she isnt..

thanks dear for ur coment😊