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drfizaahmed thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: raginisharma

are fiza you suspended this ff na ..to try to resume it after some times ..

and please tell us you are not going to stop writing..



i m not at all quitting writng... i cant..writing gives me strength ...so not anytime soon... Parichey is still on
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Posted: 13 years ago
di I am not getting what happened in this story..I was not active since 15 days...so I am unable to understand it...yet u finished...don noe why..but thank u for summarizing it at the end ...nice story indeed.

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Posted: 13 years ago
really miss this ff fiza
hope you write another ff like this
god bless you
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Posted: 13 years ago
hmm..pata hai aap kaafi hairaan hongi yeh note dekh ker...hona bhi chahiye. hum to kisi ki bhi thread pe dikhayi nahi dete...aajkal to khud k bhi nahi 😃 But as I was going thru those nights of insomnia, I started reading this FF...halankein 2 parts hi parhe hai woh bhi kaafi random the woh. bas soch hi rahe the k waqt nikaal ker parhlenge poora kyunki ek bohat khaas insaan ne humain kaha tha k isse kabhi mat parhna and obviously my curiosity got an upper hand 😕. per aapne FF suspend ker di dekh k kaafi bura laga. aapki shaksiyet ka iss pehlu ki wajood pehli bar mehsoos kiya kyunki aisa pehle bhi hua hai jab haalat saazgar nahi the per aapki tehreeron per unhone kabhi asar nahi rakkha. kher...aap ne kaha k iss FF ko band karne ki koi wajah na pooche aur aapke readers ne nahi poocha..hum bhi aapki faisle ka ahteraam karte hai aur koi wajah nahi poochenge. per ek ilteja to kar sakte hai na aap se...as a reader? jitna likkha hai usse to phir wapas le ayye...hum jaise kitnay hai jinko shayed utna bhi parhne ko naseeb nahi hua...hum sab ke khatir usse phir se revive kar sakte hai na!

Aur ek guzarish aur bhi...aapne abhi tak apna koi kaam adhura nahi chora..kam se kam ek panna likh k iss kahani ko ek haseen anjam de dijiye. humain yaqeen hai yeh khwahish sirf hamari nahi...aapke unn tamam readers ki bhi hai jinhone shiddath se aapke iss kahani me aapka saath diya. umeed hai aap hamari alfaz ka maan rakkhengi aur jis kashmkash se hum guzar rahe hai usse humain rahat milegi.

-Neela


p.s. humain pata hai aap ne mana kiya hua hai sab readers ko phir bhi humnain yeh himaqat ki...issi liye har woh gustakhi jo aapko shayed taqleef pohunchaye usske liye hum maafi maangte hai. I am sorry...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: NorthernLight

hmm..pata hai aap kaafi hairaan hongi yeh note dekh ker...hona bhi chahiye. hum to kisi ki bhi thread pe dikhayi nahi dete...aajkal to khud k bhi nahi 😃 But as I was going thru those nights of insomnia, I started reading this FF...halankein 2 parts hi parhe hai woh bhi kaafi random the woh. bas soch hi rahe the k waqt nikaal ker parhlenge poora kyunki ek bohat khaas insaan ne humain kaha tha k isse kabhi mat parhna and obviously my curiosity got an upper hand 😕. per aapne FF suspend ker di dekh k kaafi bura laga. aapki shaksiyet ka iss pehlu ki wajood pehli bar mehsoos kiya kyunki aisa pehle bhi hua hai jab haalat saazgar nahi the per aapki tehreeron per unhone kabhi asar nahi rakkha. kher...aap ne kaha k iss FF ko band karne ki koi wajah na pooche aur aapke readers ne nahi poocha..hum bhi aapki faisle ka ahteraam karte hai aur koi wajah nahi poochenge. per ek ilteja to kar sakte hai na aap se...as a reader? jitna likkha hai usse to phir wapas le ayye...hum jaise kitnay hai jinko shayed utna bhi parhne ko naseeb nahi hua...hum sab ke khatir usse phir se revive kar sakte hai na!

Aur ek guzarish aur bhi...aapne abhi tak apna koi kaam adhura nahi chora..kam se kam ek panna likh k iss kahani ko ek haseen anjam de dijiye. humain yaqeen hai yeh khwahish sirf hamari nahi...aapke unn tamam readers ki bhi hai jinhone shiddath se aapke iss kahani me aapka saath diya. umeed hai aap hamari alfaz ka maan rakkhengi aur jis kashmkash se hum guzar rahe hai usse humain rahat milegi.

-Neela


p.s. humain pata hai aap ne mana kiya hua hai sab readers ko phir bhi humnain yeh himaqat ki...issi liye har woh gustakhi jo aapko shayed taqleef pohunchaye usske liye hum maafi maangte hai. I am sorry...



agar hum yeah khay k hairan nhi hoay tu ...
apko nhi lagta us khass insaan k khay k apko ahteraam kerna chaiy tha...phir bhi apny read kiya..
yeah ff shayd kuch had tak dil se utar gaya hai... phir bhi jasay k apny kaha ap ko mana kerna shayd muskil hai humary liyan... khabi dil ny ijzaat di tu shoro ker day ga... hum vaada nhi kertay...
apni tahreer ko adhora chorana hi kafi bara fasala tha... aur jazbati nhi tha jasa k ap sab ko mehsoos horaha hai... tu us ko dobara shoro kerna buhat muskil hai

apko kisis bhi chees k liyan maffi mangny ki zaroorat nhi hai...ap janti hain humain yeah pasand nhi hai...
hum khosish keray gay...per shayd muskil hai


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Posted: 13 years ago

Surprised to see the pm.. u should be… but maybe it was an habit not to leave incomplete things or belonging to this ff.. as it was them most difficult for me to write whn came to the character sketch.. or the requests and love affection of u all who wanted to see this ff back…i think the last one the most

So here I am continuing it.. not re-publishing previous part but moving it further.. if u want any of previous one.. pm me…

No thanks can be justified for u guys who always stod beside me when I feel even I cant stand on my own…

A request I am trying to write its end so.. updates maybe not frequent..

Thanks a lot to u all… hope u remember and continue to like it

Fiza ahmed

Edited by drfizaahmed - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago


Chapter: 26

It was few days he has joined the office, and now somehow he feels good with this decisions, somehow moving towards thing which belong to her was giving him more peace than he ever got in past few years…

He thought running from her was the bestest things to do, yet lying evry moment with her was now seems to be the bestest feling ever. He knew it will be never that he can see her, might be possible he can if destiny allows him… he did try to find out any one working there with the name of Nupur bhushan there… yet nobody at Pharma was working with this name….

Sigh maybe she change the city too, didn't want him to contact..ya ya really did u bothered to contact.. Nopes I didn't so she should get out of that city , it holds to much of us all around it….

Vikram: hello… can I cum in

He opened his eyes and looked at the door…idot vikram.. he was hating evry person who was against her, including himself..evey one around her..

Mayank: ya sure… pls

Vikram: u aren't well

Mayank: nah just a slight headache

Vikram: is chair mein problem hai lagta hai.. sab ko sir dard hojata hai

Mayank: han yaha bhaitny waly ki kisamt jo karab hoti hai…

Vikram: KYA

Mayank: sir dard jo hojata hia..tum suna kya hoa koi problem

Vikram: problem tu hogi na yaar…tum man hi nhi rahy ho yaha permanently hony k liya I mean 3 months is too short…

Mayank: sorry but only that much I have for u…

Vikram: khair… yaar tumhain UK jana hai next week..

Mayank: Kyun…

Vikram: Manchester mein company k kuch kam hai…kinda all regions conference there, plus ek chota sa project waha se yaha lana hai… so almost 15-20 days k kam hai… tu tum ko hum waha bahij rahy hain… as tum se acha aur koi is kam k liyan honhi sakta….

Mayank: per mein hi kyun tum chaly jao khud…

Are u nuts UK jany k moqa… u can find her there sumhwere..ur true jerk

Vikram: tu yaha kaun dekhy ga…agar tu ko problem hai tu ..

Mayank: nhi its okay kab jana hai…

Vikram: next week… thanks yaar…

Mayank: thank u….

He looked up to the God, praying to give him one last chance, just maybe not he seek forgiveness, yet he wants to ask one… he don't need anything else, he just want to once tell her that it was his fault , he is guiltily and deserve to be punished…

…………

A hectic day GODDD… she rested her head back n closed her eyes for sum moment… these headache seems to now live with her… she was slightly pressing her head with her fingers…

When she felt the strong one pressing her nerves lovingly…

Nupur: mayank.. tum.. koi dekh lay ga

Mayank: chup kero… koi dkeh lay ga… relax ..door band hai..samjhi… aur khabi tu befikar ho ker koi moment feel kiya kera kero..har baat per alarmed hojati ho…sara effect is moment k khtam hojata hai …

She chukled and he was standing behind her chair presseing her head…

Nupur: itna pyar kyun araha hai…

Mayank: tuhari headaches bhar nhi gai… itna larti jo ho mjhy se…. is k kuch kerti kyun nhi hoo

Nupur: kis k tumhara…she opned her one eyes and asked mischievously

Mayank: is piece k tum kuch nhi ker sakti … is mein buhat sari technical faults hai…. Headache k kuch kero….kyun mein shayd tum ko yeah dayta rahoo ga

Nupur: woh tum ker tu rahy hoo… shabash ….lagy rahoo… he kissed her forehead… mayank mein ny sir dabany ko kaha tha….

Mayank: nopes,. Ap ny kaha k mein in headaches k kuch kero…. Tu I can make u forget them… he pecked her cheeks..and moved forward..to silence her further protest…

She opened her eyes with a jerk, they were deprived of any emotion, she was breathing heavily… spreading her hand on her face she just get herself back to work… it was best to do so… nothing can be much better than this….

Gunjan: may I cum in

Nupur: sure u can… yes tu kya hua..

Gunjan: Mumbai office send us a fax, they are sending sumone from there office to get all the know how on this project….

Nupur: okay… mjhy us ki sari details day do.. the person tht is cuming uski bhi…. Personally tu mein handle nhi kero gi.. but yes I will be leading it… thik hai..inform Mike to about it…

Gunjan: okay… ma'am I will…

………

He wasn't excited he was in fear, wht if he still didn't get any kinda knowledge about her… wht if he cant find her… if just he knew where she is , is she even in UK, and where in UK …. It huge place to locate a person.. he was praying God to plss help him ..pls.. do it…

Vikram is not the right person to ask. He is already being suspious to him..than whom

Just than an idea clicked him and he didn't know how to execute it..Riya ..riya is the only person who can tell him, atleast can gave him her no. though he can ask vikram to yet he will not they way this person has define her, he will never asked him anything related to him..

He went to his home, after ages, and ask his nephew to cum to him, bribing him with loads of chocolate he gave him Nupur's home no. praying tht today is Sunday and Riya should be there… he asked his nephew to call and ask he wants to talk to riya… ad told tht say he is mayank… he donot want to raise any suspicious in NM or suhain's eyes so he was asking his nephew do it…

Riya on other hand was abit surprise to see mayank's call but than very silently she rash to the phone believing maybe he asked her massi to cum back and she has agreed..

Riya: hello

Mayank: riya.. beta mayank baat ker raha hoo… but donot tell anyone oky massi ko bhi nhi..

Riya: ji uncle…

Mayank: riya kya apko pata hai massi kaun se city mein hai..

Riya: JI?? Uncle kya apko nhi pata.. kya apki bhi lari hoi hai massi se..

Mayank: hmm. Asa hi kcuh hai… aur mery pass massi k no bhi nhi hai..riya mein UK jaraha hoo, tu massi se milna chah raha tha…. Tum meri help kero gi….

Riya: really ab uk ja rahy hoo… mjhy bhi milna hai massi se… acha mein apko unka no doon gi..per ap mera ek kam kero gay…

Mayank: sure kero ga..

Riya: ap jab un se milo ga tu un ko kahao gay k waps aajy plss…

Mayank: mein try kero … force nhi kerskata….ap yaha duwa kerna..maybe apki sun lay woh.. aur sab thik hojay

Riya: okaaay.. acha woh Manchester mein hai…aur woh jis no se call kerti hain hamesha mein apko woh dayti hoo….mayank uncle mjhy masi k liyan gift bachna hai plss… mom nhi bachny dayti kuch bhi….

Mayank: np…ap k skool kaun sa hai.. mein jab ap kaho gi tu apk skool ajao ga… ap mjhy waha day dayna…asa kisi ko pata bhi nhi chaly ga..thik hai…

Riya: she grinned widely…. Thik hai.. apko bato gi… apko call ker k tthankuu…

Mayank: thank u bachy… apny meri itni bari muskil asan ker di..god bless u..bye

Manchester… he smiled…thanku… lord.. ap meri itni galtiyoon k baad bhi meir madaat ker rahy hoo…thanku so much….

He saw the no. and it appears to be a landline no.. without wasting a min he dialed the no and the recorded voice told him that it was the no. of the her office and was asking to puch in the desire extension..but wht made his heart warm and closed his eyes in relief was tht this is the no. of there company's Manchester office, where he is going within few days…

He has no words to thanks lord, who is now making things just the way they were back 2 years, when he joined her company as project coordinator… and still he is going to her company on the same position, but the only thing tht is different is today he don't know how he will face her, he donot know wht will happen when she is goona see him there… how it will feel to feel her aura alla round him once again…

He was now more n more afraid… scared, horrified.. wht if she never forgive him, wht if she had moved on…yet he will not let any of his mind thoughts distract him at all, no way not at all… he will follow his heart and will atleast tell her, wht he feels, and how sorry he is about evry little word he said..and how much he didn't mean it ever…completing knowing the fact that she might never forgive him, and even if she did things might never be the same..

Edited by drfizaahmed - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update API...
Thank u sooo much for Posting n re-starting this ff once again...
i loved it sooo much!!!
Sigh!!!!!!!! so finally God is making way for him to repent...Sigh!
i love d way he remarked on Vikram's statement abt the chair...
u know API...aj jab parh rahi thi srsly!!! i was able to imagine what u wanted me to imagine...😆
Yes!!! Imaan jab Riya baat kar rahi thi toh mujhe imaan ki shakal zehen mein a raha tha waise Adorably baat karte huye...MA!MA!MA!
loved it sooo much!!!
Their past was sooo Beautiful na...Sigh!!!!!!!
Awesome update...
Beautifully written loved it to d coreee
loved it lodsss
love u lodsss API...🤗🤗🤗
Edited by -Anila- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
thanxx fr the update finally u started ths FF again wooo but mjhe Pm nahi kiya ????

Awsm update jst Lvd it hope nupur frgvs Mayank :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
thnk u fiza. u again start the ff. thank u

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