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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: vinan2050

Awsm update fizaa tooo emotional so touchy Jst imagine rati and Arjun

dng ths scene and it will create havoc of emotions...
awsm very well written



thanks dear

i actually do so evrytime i write 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Chapter: 31

Making a bit space between them, he looked her cupping her face softly

Mayan: nupur I am sorry… I am

Nupur: Mayank pls… mjhy kuch yaad nhi kerna.. please kuch bhi nhi

He nodded in yes

Mayank: per mein kuch bholna nhi chahta..i donot want to repeat ths sin again…promise me tum mjhy hamesha rukh do gi agr asa kuch bhi kero ga…

She smiled softly and nodded in yes..

Mayank: tumhari tabiyat thik nhi hai tu bahr kya ker rahi hoo…woh bhi itni dhnad mein… yaha se chalo

Nupur: I donot have a place here..

Mayank: tumhain thik lagay tu.. mery sath.. I have room at hotel.. v will try k ek aur

Nupur: mayank pls..donot embarrass me such… I trust u always.. this baat k kab sawal utha…

Mayank: it was his moment to smile…. Tum pls sath chalo.. I m drain.. I want to absorb u.. pls.. he said so as if his life depend on her one yes… and surely it was…she nooded in yes

Hugging her from side they made their way to his hotel, the journey was incomplete silence maybe because they donot know where to start.. and where they have to put things perfectly .. but perfectly was out of the list of things they want in their life now, as this term.. making things there way perfect has made everything that was beautiful …ruined completely..

As they reached his room, maybe because of so much of tiredness of these months, or maybe because she have find her support back she was loosing her strength that was holdig her..

She hold her head as it was spinning abit, she wasn't alright she knew it..samrat said strictly she need rest, but if she would have she wont be here.. samrat.. thanks to him who made her believe that forget n forgive is sumthing that will give peace to them…

Mayank: nupur… ur oky… tum thik kaha ho.. u need to rest… he grip her tightly

Nupur: mein thik hoon..

Mayank: ur not.. ek tu pori drenched ho…. If u feel fine tu change kerlo..

God he was so carefull even choosing his words, act, this was sumwhere strange and weird..

Nupur: I donot have anything with me… mein bus direct hi…

Mayank: thik hai I m giving u sumhting change kerlo…aur pls phir rest kerlo…. Buhat stress hai tum per..

Giving her cloths he shifted from room to the balcony, giving her full space away from him, but the thing he was still not reading was the way he was careful and not imposing himself and his closeness on her was also making her feel away from him, she wasn't feeling him around herself that she desperately want now…

He came inside believing she might have change and he was right…he couldn't help to smile.. siting there in his cloths..she was looking cute.. so cute.. but the way she was clutching the bed feared him sumthing… yet he wanted to sound normal

Mayank: ur looking cute…

She chuckled pit fully and looked up to him.. it was as her eyes made her way straight wear they strike the best.. more than in his heart to wards his soul… she was looking at him as if asking him sumthing, wanting him.. hopelessness… tiredness.. she raised her hand to ask him to hold her.. and he moved or rather rushed to her…

Encircling his arms around her he embrace her completely in himself… she snuggled more n more close as if she literally want herself in side him…. Away from everyone .closing his eyes he was basking in the warmth of her body pressed against him. It was giving him all he wanted.. knowing she need rest..she really needs it.. he slowly dragged her with him and made her lye down… not in a mood to let him go..she snuggled more in him, making it more n more difficult for him to resist the warmth… lyig beside her..he was just making himself feel her.. yet the silence was prevailing between them to much….

Nupur: tum riya se milay thy….

Mayank: hmm… ek party mein gaya tha.. she actually recognized me n came.. kitni bari hogi hai.. kafi dino baad dekha tha usko… he was caressing her head slowly….

Nupur: aur baqi sab… she raised her head to look at his expression wch changed.. to stern

Mayank: baqi sab mein kaha janta hoon… per riya misses u a lot.. ek bar us se tu mil latyti…

Nupur: u know koi faida nhi hai…per how cum she sended u gift n all

Mayank: she gave me ur number..he smiled.. she is with me… she smiled too… aur us ko tumahin kuch gift dayna that u woh mein ny skool jaker collect kerliya tha simple..

Nupur: kya baat hai… wasy u both get along well

Mayank: ya we have one thing deadly in common

Nupur: han sharatein..

Mayank: n that we really love u….

He said the last words spreading his fingers on her face… it was undefined feeling that she felt hearing his confeesion after so long…. It was as if the world came back to her.. everything is just back… more than she wanted.. all that she wanted… she was just looking in those eyes wch has so much of love for her.. and wish he can see the reflection to… and he can.. he can see everything there….

Mayank: Ghar chalo nupur..

She groan and hugged him back

Nupur: mjhy waps nhi jana mayank.. mein waha se door hi rehna chati hoon… mjhy mein waha k ek bhi shaks apni life mein nhi chaiy.. raisng her head she relized sumthinng she didn't asked him what he has thought…per..tum yaha agr nhi rehna chaho tu

Mayank: he placed his hand on her cheek…. I just want to be with u… it doesn't matter here, there or anywhere ..just want u.. bus.. han per phir I need time .. I mean.. mjhy yaha job k liyan apply kerna hoga… milti hai k nhi.. u know how it is…

Nupur: hm… agar nhi hoa tu we will go back…

Mayank: I have to go back 2morow.. lemme clear things there.. and start them here.. acha pls ap thora rest kerlo… yeah sab hum baad mein dekh lay ga.. pls..

He made her head rest again on her chest.. with the warmth that has engulf her after so long, seduction that were caused by his finger… was actually making her losing it… and slowly she was at peace… but she wasn't the only person who was feeling so… no matter how much he thought he will move away as soon as she will drift in sleep.. he himself after endless sleepless nights.. doze off…

It was sumwhere in the night, when some new feeling and surrounding made her open her eyes, and she gasp at the sight…the ticklish sensation was his breath on her neck, and the feeling was the way he was holding her… more over it was his warmth that was all around her…

She has all the time to look at him.. tired he seems to be, still was having a frown..seems he was still worried.. and he must be… with just a second the way he agree to her thought od staying here… was the fact he will do anything she will say.. without even thing who n when… he is still scared of making things alright for her… but this is wasn't the thing she wanted from him, she want her old mayaank..at times complaining at times loving to death.. anger possives..all her mayank with all his flaws… atleast he being himself… she donot want to be so careful around her.. this isn't she want.. yet she knew it isn't the matter of a day.. they both need time…. She moved forward and kissed his forhead..and he snuggled more to her, and she made herself more close to him… she love this feeling and want to have all now.. knowing it just the night they have … he will be leaving 2morow.. and she hugged him back more…

Morning came and the sunlight made him open his eyes.. and he was starlet to see him like this.. completely snuggling into her.. he has slept like this.. sigh man… this was not done.. not even he has asked or talk much about all they should strt with and here he is lying there with her.. he should have taken it slow.. he dnot know wht she has thought about all …

But one think he still cant believe was she is there back in his life… he cant believe she forgive him.. and back there.. he wont let her go now never .. he will not let her go anywhere.. anywhere… he has died evry min… without her… he spread his hand on her cheeks very slightly.. how can she forget his all such sins just like that… he placed his forehead on her and a tear droped from his eyes on her…. He promised he will never let anything bad happen between them…

With the moisture on her eyes she moved a bit and he tried to move away, when he felt she has tangled her hand with his… she opened her eye…and find her almost siting beside her..

She cant help to blush knowing how she was actually being all night… as soon as she let him go he went away to freshen up…she sigh knowing sumwhere he cried abit just now.. he came back with some food n brought two cup of coffees… but than sumthing strike him

Mayank: tum cafine lay sakti hoo abhi…he moved the mug away.

Nupur: she pouted… itny dino baad tu pee rahi hoon..

She was actually missing his food.. his ways.. he smiled…

Mayank: coffee nhi.. jab thik hojao gi tu roz subha mein hi peeloa ga…

Nupur: aj tu ja rahy hoo..

Mayank: sigh he holded her hand…. Nupur if u want I can stay for sometime…

Nupur: nhi I know tum ko jana hai..

Mayank: jao ga nhi tu waps kasay aao ga…

Nupur: hmm… tu office per contact per kyun hoo…

Mayank: kuch dino k liyan as consultant they asked me to work… islyn donot worry I am not out of job… he said mischievously and she smiled…. nupur I might sound rushing things but..

Nupur: u are rushing things??... I m finding u extreme settle and so so carefully.. complete not u…

Mayank: he smiled… so I am cuming back to my character… marry me please…

She looked at him surprise.. man he isn't trusting anything..

Nupur: kya abhi

He actually laughed and she felt like smirking fullest…this was him.. his laugh … amazing..

Mayank: nupur.. nhi obviously… per when how ..

Nupur: lemme close things here…mein chute lay ker waha aao gi.. magar tab jab tu decide kerlo gay k yaha rehna hai k waha… mayank I just want to go there for us nothing more… tum janty nhi ho waha kisi ko

Mayank: I know.. waha ksis ko tumhari fikar nhi hai… and that includes me..

Nupur: mayankk

Mayank: nhi sach hai nupur… mein ny khabi jany ki khosih bhi nhi ki jany k liyan tum kasi hoo … mera ego meri feelings se kab itna bara hogaya k mein ny sab khatam kerdiya mjhy pata hi nhi chala… aur phir jab mjhy dard ho mjhy akleay laga tu here I m back.. ihave acted as the most slef fish person

Nupur: stop it mayank…. Baat yeah hai k galti hum dono ki hi thi.. mein yeah bhi janti thi… k tum kya irritate ker raha hai mjhy kiya ..per na mein ny tum se bola.. na tum ny… agar ek baar hum dono bhait ker baat kerly tay tu..itni takleef nhi hoti hum dono ko… but pls mein woh sab bhool na chati hoon…. Sab kuch.. aur asa sirf tum kersakty hoo

Mayank: mein woh sab kuch kerny ki khosih kero ga …just made me realize if I am wrong..

Nupur: hmm.. shall I talk to mom..

Mayank: no.. u wont… let me handle them.. I certainly donot want k woh tum ko kuch bhi kahay noway…

The sudden out burst made her feel weird.. he had seen sumthing there

Nupur: kya hua hai mayank

Mayank: kuch ni… mein mom se baat kero ga apni.. and will asked her to talk to ur mom… u just need to give her a call and tell k I am cuming for the purpose…woh shayd tumhain buaht kcuh kahay

Nupur: she laughed… mayank I m use to of all that that u are planning to protect me from… and honestly it doesn't matter….

Mayank: mein tumhain Manchester drop kerta hoo.. get ready.. meri sham ki flight hai we have to rush… u will take care of urself nah….

Nupur: I have reason to take care now…

Pecking her forehead he went to pack his things back… and she went to get in her cloths back…

……………….

London they donot have much time to spend together… and he was not feeling like leaving her.. abhi tu milay thy.. but than he has to.. to have her with him forever.

As he bid bye.. she hugged him tight sumwhere she was not feeling like leave, fear was still engraved in them.. still there… what if they will not meet again…

He looked at her and sumhwere he has an urge that he was subsiding form so long.. to feel her.. to stole a kiss… but than he left it aside.. nupur wasn't expecting his utterly romantic mayank to be biding her goodbye so unromantically… he was looking cute with nervousness, apprehensions

Nupur: mayank..she stoped him..

Mayank: hm..and he turned around..

She moved forward and captured his lips softly. Her gesture took him completely off gurad... the sudden touch and feel left both of them with an udefined feeling… they both shuddered with the feel… griping her close … he lost his all inhibition and was back to the demanding on.. empowering one… the way she gave him rights on her always make him feel as the owner…

Breaking away slowly he looked at her caressing her cheeks… when she placed her hand on his cheek..

Nupur: mayank mein ny us mayank se pyar kiya hai …jo bina sochay mjhy se sab mang hi ni layta tha..per us k dil mein jo khwsih hoti thi woh lay liya kerta tha.. us ko haq hai mjhy per aur mjhy yeah yaad dilny ko zarrorat nhi thi… aur ek aur baat thi us mein…

He smiled..

Mayank: kya.. he was mesmerized with the way she was speaking, boldly yet shyly… expressively ..tht she donot do so often..

Nupur: woh itna un romantic nhi tha..

He smiled more with the pout and he chained his arms around her waist..pulling her close…

Mayank: oh really… mjhy nhi pata tha London ki huwaoo ny tum per itna asar kiya k airport per hi tum.. itni demanding horahi hoo.. he said with a smirk teasingly..

And she actually looked around freak they were at the middle of the most crowded airports of the world.. and she was kissing him..

Mayank: ap koi faida ni hai.. she slapped him on his arms.and he hugged her tightly for sec crashing her and than let her goo…. Closing his eyes.. I have to go… take care… call kerti rehna samjhi.. bye..

Nupur: bye..

He moved to peck her forehead than smiled and peck her lips…whispering bye he went away… she sight and hugged herself… pls lord no more twist in our story pls…

Edited by drfizaahmed - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Han plzzz Fizu api no more Twist plzzz
Gosh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! that was again another BEST part of this Awesome ff
it was sooo Beautifully written
Hats off to u...⭐️⭐️⭐️
loved it to d coreee
Awesome update api
loved it lodsss
i was just left sighing..Gosh!
i love MN here sooo very much!
they are just perfect for each other n i love them to d coreee...By God!
Gosh! their hugsss!!!! i just love their hugsss alwaysss no matter 4 what, when or why?? lolzzz bt gosh!!! their hugs in this part actually felt soothing to ur soul...Sigh!
loved Mayank's conscious n Nupur's demanding nature...it was worth waiting for their re-unity!
Sigh!!!!!! awww...loved d way Mayank hided what he heard from Nupur's mom n her sis...huh!
n i loved d way he wanted to protect her from any hurting thing or any bad thing...Sigh!
n WOW!!!!!!!!! he proposed!!!!!!!!!!! yay!!!!!!!
i sooo loved dis Flirty n smirking Nupur 😆
She was back! n made her Mayank too loved that!!!
n OMG!!!!!!! Nupur Bhushan kissed that too in the middle of a crowdy airport! 😲😉
i sooo loved it...😆😳
the BEST highlight of this update for me was from start to end spcly! their hugs n their snuggling n their kiss 😆☺️
o loved it to BITS!!!!!!!
loved it sooo very much!
hoping all the best things for them...Sigh!
loved it lodsss
love u lodsss API...🤗🤗🤗
Edited by -Anila- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -Anila-

Aj bhi reply nhi kiya i know net problem hain so koi nhi API 🤗

n han i hope mein sequence kharab nhi kar rahi 😳



haan sorry
thora thakan bhi hai islayn bhi...aj hi Arriz gaya hai nah... n sumhwere im not planning to... as yeah already 125 per chala gaya hai aur mein new thread nhi kholna chati for this ff

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Posted: 12 years ago
beautiful update. ab mayur ko alag mat karna
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome updt fiza
no more mayur separation plz
cont soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb update. I also hope that there will be no more twist in their relationship. Continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved Nupur's last words no more twist in their story plzz Fiza..
as the update totally adorable, loved how they snuggled each other in n Nupur's demand about want old Mayank that' amazing sis..
The whole update was very Peace, cute with adorable Mayur..
thank u Fiza for the wonderful update n the pm
love Samira
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Posted: 12 years ago
that was so good part..
it's awsome...
great...

loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
awww thanx GOD after long time my Mayur got peace.
Loved their wonderful moment.
awww it was damn beautiful.

mayank became so much calm and supportive.
Nupur was right-yah he has changed a lot...he was not bossy type as he used to b4 this separation

even i want to back the old mayank
and by GOD this time i dont want any bitter twist.
wanna c them happy 4ever

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