Mohabbat Yun..last part PG 132 - Page 4

res Edited by drmaha - 12 years ago

awesome start

Hmm so finally u updated...
Loved the prologue dii...Though 70% of the urdu has gone over my head but the eng did its work...😆
Its interesting...So jaldi update karna...
Im really eager to read this unique one...😳

wow a news FF...!!!!!!!!
Congo Cascade
Awesome concept. ilovedit except one thing.why umade nupur1 year older than mayank...l???ol lol lol... r ai m kidding pyaar main age doesnt matter- aur 1 saal tou kuch bhi nehi..:D

btw r prologue was too tough to digest..so krypa karke update thora easy tarah se likhne ki koshish karye plz...
love ya
take care

Thanku all for ur support and love..and welcoming the new ff…

The strt is more about there intro may sound a bit quick…

Hope u like it..

Fiza

Edited by drfizaahmed - 12 years ago

...Edited by drfizaahmed - 11 years ago

Fiza janiii
By GOD what an update
it was amazing part sweetu
Mayurs  argument was just wonderful...bapre both of them r very intelligent ...hehehe both of them r workaholic -sirf kam aur kam
maynk and nupur got hyper-but thanx GOD they  controlled their anger.
and loved nupur a lot.
veryyy nice part cascade
awesome start
keep it up

Edited by -Faria- - 12 years ago

Awesome part API...Edited by 18anila1 - 12 years ago

Nice part..

Wonderful update

Loved mayank-nupur first meeting n their little argument.