Mohabbat Yun..last part PG 132 - Page 72

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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice update.
Poor Mayank feeling sad for her bt I m also sad for Nupur.This time it will be very difficult for Mayank to break the shell surrounding Nupur.
Gosh... Mujhe MJHT s2 ki yaad aa gayi when Mayank first saw Nupur after accident it was raining.
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Posted: 12 years ago
nyc update fiza... 😊


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Posted: 12 years ago

Chapter: 28

He went office quite early and as he supposed there was no one in office yet he pretty well knew that sum one has a very old habit of cuming office early, he straight away went to nupurs cabin and knocked…she was surprised to listen a knock on her door….

Com in..

She wasn't to much shock to see him..but wht shocked her was the nervousness so clear on his face…

Mayank: nupur mjhy tum se…

Nupur: Mr Sharma I think u forget even yesterday I told u donot call me with my name…

Mayank: nupur plss sirf ek baar meri baat sun lo ..mein sirf..

Nupur: MR SHARMA.. I wont tolerate that… this is my office and …wht to u want to say… anything related to work..

Mayank: nhi mjhy

Nupur: so than wht.. u have problems at accommodation

Mayank: Nupur mjhy humaray baray

Nupur: enough MR Sharma..if I m being nice with u as ur our guest doesn't means u stop respecting ur limits… if u donot have anything to talk related to work ..u may plss leave or u have any thing more …wait a min…

She called mike n ask him to cum in..

Mike: yes ma'am…

Nupur: mike pls take care wht mr Sharma wants to ask or tell.. I will feel great if u will try to handle this on ur own..not letting people just for little thing directly cuming to me..

Mike: yes..

He just kept looking at her, hurt but more because what she has become..she was so clam so clam saying all this to him….she was na helper.. a so much helper that even if the other department person will cm n ask her to help..she will be doing so as politely as she can.. but today asking his employ to not to bother her for any kinda problem was shock..yet it was more increasing his burden …

Mayank: I am sorry Ms bhushan…

He couldn't help yet to let his words reflect his hurt.. and she can read it to clearly..Mayank Sharma is too bad at hiding n controlling his emotions..Nupur bhsuhan wht so ever has always been the best reader of his..

Mayank went to his cabin making mike satisfied sumhow… yet he was sigh..this was getting hard to take in…

…..

At home he tried 1000 times literally to call her yet she didn't picked it up… and when she did she was is same tone..

Nupur: what is so urgent Mr Sharma…

Mayank: can I meet u ms bhuhsan…

Nupur: yes.. at office 2morow..

Mayank: no can I do so sumwhere else..

Nupur: no…

Mayank: okay I need to say sumthing..plss..

Nupur: mr Sharma I will appreciate if u please dono disturb me at this hr…wht so ever is the talk we can have it at office..okay… plss it isn't India and I have my work rules I donot work after working hrs… so pls… Good nite…

Mayank: pls just lis….. she already hanged up

In between many a time he try to cut her, yet she didn't listen…

………….

Days were just passing he was feeling extremely helpless he just donot know wht to do, how to make all this alright….

The day even he tried yet was going all in vain, she was so determine and he was too too determine.. yet his affords weren't neither effecting her nor she was listening once to him… it was closing hr and he already was in parking waiting for her..

He saw her cuming to her car and he rushed to her…

Mayank : nupur pls ek bar meri baat sun lo pls…

Nupur: ahh..Mr Sharma I think ur to habitual on calling people my name tht I so hate…and plus ur extremely stubborn…

Mayank: pls nupur… mein koi saafi nhi dayna chahta sirf ek bar meri baat sun lo pls..

He was almost runing beside her and she as walking pretty fast , she opened the door of her car threw her things in..

Nupur: whts the maater mr Sharma.. I donot think so apny asa kuch bhi kiya jis k liyan apko saafi dayni hoo…

Mayank: but pls listen… I am sorry… he said completely helpless ..they way she was behaving as they never knew each other, so unaffected , so so cold.. was making slowly loss the battle…

Nupur: wht for.. calling me Nupur.. its okay u better not repeat it.. pls take side..

She didn't waited for him to take the side strted the car, n almost made him aside and went away…

He hided his face in his palm and spread his hand in his hairs…

Mayank: I am sorry.. I really am…I am..pls sirf ek bar sun lo plsss….. yet there was no one to listen him…

With weak step he went to his car and rush to his hotel..

He has nothing in his hand, today he is feeling just not helpless, he is feeling lost, he sumhwere s getting a believe tht these 15 days tht are about to finish will end and he will be gone.. and he will never able to tell her wht he wants to….

But sumhwere she is right, when she wants to tell her wht is actually the matter than he never listen so now he deserved it, he so deserved it.. with the thought that this will be the end to there lovestroy his breath was cuming so uneven…so much…

He need to talk to sumone, any one, maybe who can guide her…he took his cell n dialed a number not sure even she is gonna listen to him or not…

Diya: hello..

Mayank: diya… his voice came as whispere..and she was shocked to listen to him like that… he sound to broken to much…

Diya: mayank.. kya hua hai tum thik ho,..

Mayank: nhi.. mein thik nhi ho.. kuch bhi thik nhi hai…

Diya: mayank kya baat hai bol nah.mein sun rahi ho…kuch solve kerlay ga…

Mayank: per woh nhi sun rahi… ek bar bhi nhi sun rahi.. woh mjhy pechanti hi nhi hai… khati hai mayank kaun… hum kaun…

Diya: mayank kya bol rahy ho…kaun nhi sun rahi ..kaun nhi pechnta..aur tum UK mein kya ker rahy hoo…

Mayank: nupur…

Diya: wht…tum nupur k pass… mayank tum UK nupur…

Mayank: han… mein us ko dekhny aya tha… sirf ek bar ek bar us se baat kerny aya tha.. mjhy maafi nhi chaiy mjhy pata hai woh mjhy ab khabi nhi mil sakti… per sirf ek per meri baat sun lay..meri taraf nupur ki tarha dekh lay bus… jasay woh hamesha sunti thi … per woh tu asa dekhti hai jasay sach mein nhi pechanti hoo.. us se kaho nah plss….

Diya actually didn't knew wht to say to him, he was just not sounding weak, he was completely broken and the more painful part was he was excepting it too.. he never ever shows when he is broken… her heart came in a fist listen to his such way of talk… n she don't know what to say ,..how to make things better

Diya: tum us k office ja ker kahin bahar jaker baat kerna ki khosih kero…

Mayank: he chukled… woh meray hi office mein hai..mein us k hi under hon…tum janti ho woh mjhy khud ko nupur bhi bolny nhi dayti…. Ek bar bhi us ny mera naam nhi liya..ek baar bhi nhi.. hazar khoisih kerli hazaroo…woh kahti hai kya baat hia..personal tu hoi nhi sakti…ap ko mein asa janti hon kya… diya khabi khabi such mein asa lagta hai woh mjhy nhi janti na pehchati hai… woh jasay dekhti hai nah…us ki ankhein itni khali hai…aur yeah sab mein ny kiya hai sab…

Diya: mayank…dkeho jo hochuka us ko tum nhi badal sakty maagr jo tum is waqt feel ker rahy hay us ko dekhao shaysd…

Mayank: kasay.. woh sunay tu nah…

Diya: ek kam kero tum us k ghar jao…asay bahar shayd us ko tamsha nah hojay islyan daar ho…. Zabradasti us k ghar jao us se maat pocho… aur waha khosih kero us se baat kerny ki…

Mayank: hmm..

Diya: asay har many se kuch nhi hoga… jab tum jan hi gay ho k woh kya hai tumahry liyan tu us ko bhi tu batao nah …jao….woh zaroor aj nhi tu kal tumhari baat usnay gi…abhi tu tumahray yaha kafi raat horahi hogi bulalky subha hony wali hogi…kal jana… aur office mein us se koi baat nhi kerna jo us ko ghusa dilay…

Mayank: hmm…

Diya: take care..aur han….i m here..bye..

Mayank: thanks..bye

Diya: Mayank Sharma, listening to everything without a single argument… janti thi jab tum khud ko saaza dayny se bahar niklo gay… tu asay hi hojao ga…thaky hoay haray hoay… kitna hi inkar kerlo mayank tu us ko buhat chahty hoo.. khuda keray woh sun pay…us k bhi tu kasoor nhi hai..

Diya was right it was almost morning, he couldn't sleep from the time he has arrived her, and today he wasn't even feeling like living…

He changed his cloths, freshen up, took his things and left for office…

It was so early tht there was no one in office, the guard surprisingly opend the door and he went inside to his cabin… he was tired dam tired… tired of himself than anything else around him…

He kept doing his work for sumtime, and completely engrossed himself in it… his face was showing now the story of his life, he was completely disheveled…

The office hrs strted and nupur enter the office, as soon as he bypass his cabin she was stopped in her track..she was dam surprised…today she came early as she needs to prepare sum things.. plus she is planning to leave early as aditya has a function at his skool, and Samrat ask her to join them.. yet wht shocked her was his presence ..more than that they he was there…

His head was on his desk and he was asleep, his face was showing the picture of complete torn soul, he was looking so weak, and messy….

She cut her thoughts and went inside her cabin, as soon as mike arrived she asked him to chk Mr sharma, as he didn't seems to be well, its better he went to his hotel n rest..

Mike sumhow convince mayank, as mayank has already completely all that was need to done here, and plus only 3 days were left in his departure, so he has nothing much to do in office… and he didn't have strength to argue .he collected his things and at half day was leaving…

He was moving in parking area when he heard similar giggles wch he haven't heard in eternity…he sneak from the side of pillar, and his face broke in to a subtle smile… yes it was her smiling really smiling… though sumthing broke inside him pretty hard looking at her…

She was with aditiya and smarat and all three of them were smiling n laughing on sumthing.. ..it pain sumhwere knowing maybe she has moved on, and even if she has alteast she is smiling n seems happy..wht else he can ask for…he knew he donot deserve at all…

Nupur turned around as she feel the same gaze on her yet she didn't found anyone there…

Mayank left to his car and drove back to hotel… he will go her house tonite , for the final attempt..

Gunjan: good afternoon ma'am..

Nupur: hay gunjan… tum ny kaya khaya tha jo yeah asa hai..

Samrat n gunjan both laughed…aditya was surely doesn't seems to be there child.. aditiya was gunjan's son..nupur got to know tht once she ws leaving the skool… and gunjan got to know tht smarat her husband is doing her treatment when once nupur fainted in office and gunjan took her to hospital…

Nupur's anxiety attacks at that time were very frequent…and so she too medical help for that.. Samrat was her doctor, and when gunjan took her to Samrat he told gunjan that she is in a very sever mental health..and she is dam careless about it…

Nupur always admire this family, they were only people of personal know how to her here..and they always make her feel good specially aditiya..

Aditiya: han pochy pcohy taky woh diet official diet ban jay aur sab meray jitney Smart paita hoon

Gunjan: sach kaho ma'am such mjhy lagta ha yeah hospital mein change hoga…

Samrat: oh hello.. meray beta hai yeah..

Gunjan: han aur kuch kuch tum per hi gaya hai

Nupur: dr shergil per..gunjannn..

Gunjan: ma'am ap janti nhi hai..yeah apni college life mein is tarha k kcuh hotay thay..woh tu kuch umer k asar hoa hai…

Nupur: she chukled… I think u shud leave warna late hojay ga… best of luck champ…

Aditya: thanks dear..wasy ap bhi arahi hai…

Nupur: han janab ap chalein hum aay…

Edited by drfizaahmed - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update API
loved it lodsss
Beautifully written
loved it to d coreee
felt bad for Mayank as well for Nupur too...
bt loved Diya for being such a nice frnd...
loved d cute family convo...
loved it lodsss
love u lodsss API 🤗🤗🤗
Edited by -Anila- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing update... Nupur ne b bht brdasht kiya he per ab mayank ki halat ni dki jati... Hope so sb thk ho jaye
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Posted: 12 years ago
nupur samarat gumjan and aditiya convo is a nice touch
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Posted: 12 years ago
beautifull part , mayank's pain are emoted beautifully by u hope Nupur Frgv him soon
bcs it steal shws Hw mch she love shim and care fr him :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome updt fiza
cont soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
haww... poor mayu... yeh nupur kab uski baat sunegi!😒
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Update kaha hai??????????????????????????

tu update kar k dekh kaise teri tabiyat thik ho jati hai..:D:D
actually update karna he teri bimari k dawai hai- aisa doctor Faria ne kaha ...lol lol

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