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I am glad about one thing. They left the disaster of the last few minutes from saturday open for interpretation. 😃
This leaves some hope that they have not messed this thing up completely and they can initiate damage control. 😃
Hopefully we will see something much better in terms of writing, screenplay and execution when they show us the SR again. The one that they showed on saturday was messed up in all these aspects.
I have clearly stated that it was not the lack of hotness that was the problem for me. It was the much larger picture. Something was really amiss. They jumped from showing KC to being in the jungle. It started off well but the build up to something as important as the consumation was missing. The screenplay was really bad and kept jumping all over the place.
I agree that they were both tired but I am still unable to put my finger on how he went from "Geet I will go find us something to eat" to hitting on her when she said "I am frightened, please do not let me go" to "OK we gotta do this tonight. It is now or never." 🤣 That was really abrupt. It was like this was really not planned and someone was flying by the seat of their pants. 😆 😆 😆
I am still scratching my head about why this tearing hurry to do the SR? 😕 😕 😕
I am still confused about this "Main papa banna chahtha hoon" dialogue. Geet is still 18 and has just lost a chid. If memory serves me right, when Maan first took her to the doctor before the engagement, the doctor read him the riot act for getting her pregnant this soon. As far as I know she has not had a birthday since then. Plus she is so young, the MSK we knew would want her to become independent and think about sending her back to school or atleast getting back to work at KC instead of getting her pregnant again. OK she lost a child and conventional wisdom prescribes that she will forget about the child she lost if she gets pregnant again. But I disagree. She had dreams which had to be put on hold because she got pregnant. Where is that girl who wanted to study? If you want to show her as a strong woman, we need to see her going back to school, helping Maan in his business and becoming his ardhangini in every sense.
This is a youth show, there is no place for babies here as you too realize, which is why you took the MC route. Please do not show any nonsense about her trying to conceive and not being able to conceive. It is too Kektaish. Your audience will not like it. Your audience likes light and funny stuff not heavy duty crying. I know Sameera's entry is the next track but it would be more interesting to see her as a business rival challenging MSK than as something else. We would get to see the hot, angry Maan who is mean to her while being lover like to Geet. It would make for some really wonderful scenes between husband and wife and would work to strengthen their bond. I would love to see Geet as a tigress defending her husband and her turf 😉. We have seen Geet crying for so long, show us another side of her - a side where she is willing to stand up to a tyrant who is trying to bring down her husband. Sameera underestimates Geet and that becomes her biggest mistake because she does not know what this girl is capable of. Geet acts all innocent and keeps sabotaging her efforts behind her back. 😆 😆 😆 Maan knows what is going on and is laughing at Sameera too. Geet with her helpers pulls off the ultimate coup with Maan's help and gives Sameera her just desserts. This is something the audience will love to watch.
Rather than watching a sad Geet it will be more fun watching an enthusiastic Geet laughing with Maan, playing pranks on him and generally making him happy. This makes Sameera even more mad. People will also enjoy a smiling and prankster Geet more than a crying Geet. Of course there will be some discord when Geet comes to know the truth but she will have the demand the truth from Maan rather than run away again (showing progress in their relationship 😃). Even that can be handled in a comic way in which Geet banishes Maan to the couch 🤣 🤣 and turns him completely despo to tell his side of the story. Ultimately he gets fed up, corners her and tells her the whole story. Then hubby-wifey make up and decide to face the problem together.
Today gives me hope that they might be back on track...gaadi phir se patri pe aa gayi hai 😃
This leaves some hope that they have not messed this thing up completely and they can initiate damage control. 😃
Hopefully we will see something much better in terms of writing, screenplay and execution when they show us the SR again. The one that they showed on saturday was messed up in all these aspects.
I have clearly stated that it was not the lack of hotness that was the problem for me. It was the much larger picture. Something was really amiss. They jumped from showing KC to being in the jungle. It started off well but the build up to something as important as the consumation was missing. The screenplay was really bad and kept jumping all over the place.
I agree that they were both tired but I am still unable to put my finger on how he went from "Geet I will go find us something to eat" to hitting on her when she said "I am frightened, please do not let me go" to "OK we gotta do this tonight. It is now or never." 🤣 That was really abrupt. It was like this was really not planned and someone was flying by the seat of their pants. 😆 😆 😆
I am still scratching my head about why this tearing hurry to do the SR? 😕 😕 😕
I am still confused about this "Main papa banna chahtha hoon" dialogue. Geet is still 18 and has just lost a chid. If memory serves me right, when Maan first took her to the doctor before the engagement, the doctor read him the riot act for getting her pregnant this soon. As far as I know she has not had a birthday since then. Plus she is so young, the MSK we knew would want her to become independent and think about sending her back to school or atleast getting back to work at KC instead of getting her pregnant again. OK she lost a child and conventional wisdom prescribes that she will forget about the child she lost if she gets pregnant again. But I disagree. She had dreams which had to be put on hold because she got pregnant. Where is that girl who wanted to study? If you want to show her as a strong woman, we need to see her going back to school, helping Maan in his business and becoming his ardhangini in every sense.
This is a youth show, there is no place for babies here as you too realize, which is why you took the MC route. Please do not show any nonsense about her trying to conceive and not being able to conceive. It is too Kektaish. Your audience will not like it. Your audience likes light and funny stuff not heavy duty crying. I know Sameera's entry is the next track but it would be more interesting to see her as a business rival challenging MSK than as something else. We would get to see the hot, angry Maan who is mean to her while being lover like to Geet. It would make for some really wonderful scenes between husband and wife and would work to strengthen their bond. I would love to see Geet as a tigress defending her husband and her turf 😉. We have seen Geet crying for so long, show us another side of her - a side where she is willing to stand up to a tyrant who is trying to bring down her husband. Sameera underestimates Geet and that becomes her biggest mistake because she does not know what this girl is capable of. Geet acts all innocent and keeps sabotaging her efforts behind her back. 😆 😆 😆 Maan knows what is going on and is laughing at Sameera too. Geet with her helpers pulls off the ultimate coup with Maan's help and gives Sameera her just desserts. This is something the audience will love to watch.
Rather than watching a sad Geet it will be more fun watching an enthusiastic Geet laughing with Maan, playing pranks on him and generally making him happy. This makes Sameera even more mad. People will also enjoy a smiling and prankster Geet more than a crying Geet. Of course there will be some discord when Geet comes to know the truth but she will have the demand the truth from Maan rather than run away again (showing progress in their relationship 😃). Even that can be handled in a comic way in which Geet banishes Maan to the couch 🤣 🤣 and turns him completely despo to tell his side of the story. Ultimately he gets fed up, corners her and tells her the whole story. Then hubby-wifey make up and decide to face the problem together.
Today gives me hope that they might be back on track...gaadi phir se patri pe aa gayi hai 😃
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