Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee

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By Nupur

Official MAAN -JAAP

Chookar Mere Max-MAAN Ko Kiya Dhak-Dhak Dil ne Kya Ishaara.......
Badla Yeh Mausam Lage Pyaara Jag Saara.........

Tu Jo Kahe Jeevan Bhar Tujhe MAAN-Jaap Sunaon.......
Geet ko Bhulake Apna Naam Yaad Karaun........
And free mein apni MAAN-jaap Mandali mein admission du Jaag ko Saara
Chhookar Mere MAAN ko....*repeat*

Aaja Teri Look-& you shall-Duboo wali Ankheon mein dekhun
Khushiyaan Jahan Bhar Ki in MAAN ki ankhon mein doondh lun........
MAAN He ab toh Mera Jeevan MAAN-Jaap He Jeene Ka Sahaara.......
Chookar Mere MAAN Ko........*repeat Infinite Times*

~ MAAN's Mirabai~

By Nupur

Hum pyaase MAAN hamara Saawan
Hum Dil Woh Hamari Mandali ki Dhadkan

Aankhon Ko Jab Band Karein Hum
Sapne Max-MAAN ke Aaye
MAAN Jaap Bina Ye Jeevan Phika
Sapne humko Yeh Samjhaaye
Maan Se MAAN Ki Dori Kaa
Tum He Toh MAAN ek Bandhan!!!!

Hum Jab Chhede Ektaara par Gaana
Chupke Se MAAN aa ke Sun Lena
Yeh MAAN-Jaap Hai hamare Pyaar Ki Kaliyaan
Dheere Se Tum ja ke Chun Lena
MAAN aur uski MEERA ka yeh rishta Jaise
Khushboo Aur Chandaan!!!!

By Nupur

Beheta Hai MAAN Ke saath yeh Dil Kahin.......
Kahaan Jaaye kuch khabar nahi'.
Koyi toh Rokle is Deewane Dil ko Yahin
Bhaage Re Maan Kahin,
Aage Re MAAN Chala,
Peecha MAAN Mandali Gaye Naaaa!!!

Yeh Suno challi ek Thaandi Hawa'
MAAN ke sang hamara Maan Bhi Gaya...
Dhhundhhu MAAN aur Maan ko Kahaan...
Batlaaye Koyi toh Mujhko'..
Deewangi Ki har Had Par Kaare'..
Bhaage Re Maan Kahin....
Aage Re MAAN Chala,
Peecha MAAN Mandali Gaye Naaaa!!!


Hai Hai Hai Yeh Madhosh Sama'
Suno Mandali wallon phir Hoga Kahaan.....
Drool Karlo Tum Sab Millke......
Saawan Bhi barasa hai aaj Khulke......
Bhaage Re Maan Kahin......
Aage Re MAAN Chala,
Peecha MAAN Mandali Gaye Naaaa!!!
~N~


By Usha


I was shocked to see Gurmeet's muscles...πŸ˜† πŸ˜†..it is really really REALLY hugee!..There was one interview on tellychakkar..where Drsahti was saying how Gurmeet doesn't eat at night..and he only snacks on apples..so yes i guess this guy is all abt the proteins only...eggs..and what not..πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† I really loveee the SBS segment! Love  the camaraderie between Drashti..and Gurmeet off screen..they were so cute..esp that mirchi part..and that lift scene...HAHA..i always wondered how these actors do such looooonnng eyelocks..and we saw it today..Drashti coudn't maintain the contact...but Gurmeet was kinda into it still, must be the proteins..πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†..oh man that was lame, whatever i just said..πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

@ blue : Of course she couldn't ... I dont thinnk any girl will be able to look into Maan's  eyes for more than 5 secs ... she'll be scorched yaar !!! 😍
 
@ red .... πŸ˜† totally loved that  .... Consider the headlines : "Proteins make Gurmeet Passionate"  .... 🀣


By Caco


a protein shake a day keeps Maan's passion coming our way 🀣 🀣 i cant get over the whole protein thing 🀣

By Caco

Anyone else pondered on why maan took geet's chappal back with him??πŸ˜• he did go to return it right? is ladki ne sach much use pagal bana diya 🀣 he carried it back to his car.....drove home and still remembered to carry it out with him to the outhouse??πŸ˜• πŸ€£ wtf?? guess he wanted to smack his own head with it this time 🀣 pyar mein pagal 🀣

both of them were arguing with the chappal in their hand.....maybe they thought the argument got out of control they would solve it with a chappal fight 🀣 🀣 pyar ki nishani 🀣

By Bugger


🀣🀣🀣 .......maybe he wants to save another nishaani of geet in the dabba of geet's memories 🀣🀣 ....ek drawer se petals nikelenge ..dusre se the torn saree ...3rd drawer mein taawiz and teh 4th will contain this chappal 🀣🀣 ...i think after 50 years he will open the museum 🀣

By Caco

🀣 shahjahan made taj mahal....apna maan will make museum 🀣

By Caco

Maan nanga makes me feel changa πŸ˜†


By Caco

maybe maan has low BP too 🀣 that's why consume eggs n protein shakes to keep the passion flowing πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

By Jyo

Don't worry we forum girls will make a strong bed and tabela for Maneet for their S raat...and instead of offering milk to the dulha,Geet will offer him protein shake on their wedding night🀣

By Blue

Baap re..50 EGGs for S raat..? The bed will for sure break...unable to withstand Maan's passion.......🀣..(Ok i can't believe i just said that..πŸ˜†)

By Caco

omggggggg 🀣 instead of drinking a glass of milk maan will have egg shake 🀣 🀣 n then he'll shake the bed and geet's world 🀣 🀣 🀣


By Caco

we're creating a whole new phenomena here 🀣 maybe from now on every married couple might use this formula 🀣 🀣 🀣 LONG LASTING 🀣 🀣

By Priya.

iterally ROFL ing......OMG OMG ...This must be the most X-rated forum ever...🀣  🀣 πŸ€£ *trying to shake off some Xrated visuals*πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜³πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
 
 
For Maan πŸ˜‰ 
 


By Blue & Caco

Oh Arwen, i think we so need to reduce out intake.. πŸ˜† ..It might just slowly die out on Maan..he might now need something stronger..πŸ˜†
 
That goes with the lingo..Taller, sharper ...stronger..OMG..he now needs Horlicks!.......🀣 πŸ€£

Epang opang jhapang 🀣 🀣 isnt that what those kids shout out during the horlicks commercial?
Maan might start singing that before pouncing on geet on S raat 🀣 🀣 🀣


By An

Eggs in,

Passion out,

Mann lands in an inn,

Hallucinates in doubt,

Scares a girl real,

Thinking she is beauty surreal.

 

Seeing Egg land people's demand,

All eggs trembled,

Broke and became scrambled. 🀣


By Doodle & Pennu

Vandana...say some other song...this one's used in other places...we have 2 options as of now:- All you add the list:-

1. Tum Mere Ho
2. Hui main parineeta (slow version)


@Doodle: What about Mahiii...
slow--fast and wild version during Maaneet's Suhaag raat....🀣🀣🀣

By Fairyashi

Maan with gadar song:
Mai nikla ho JEEP leke , ho HP ki sadak pe, BRIJ nazar aya mai uthe GEET chor BRIJ nu utha laaya!! πŸ€” πŸ€£πŸ€£πŸ€£
I know i messed up with the lyrics badly!!πŸ˜†

By Caco

GEET HUI SABSE PARAYI
THE CONned STORY
 
Brij wants to have sex CONversion coz no legal rights for Gayism in India
 
but Maan doesnt allow Brij to do it....GAYISM ROCKS
 
and so Maan and Brij apply to court to get a CONcession for their Love
 
the court permits them to go on with it seeing their TRUE LOVE
 
and so Maan and Brij finally get the CONfirmation they needed for their marriage
 
and so they get married but then as days go by fights start to occur and then the OYEEs and CHUPs go out of control
 
and so they decide to go for marriage counselling for some CONsultation on adjustments
 
the counselling helps them and they have resolved all their differences
 
and so the CONclusion of this story is that they live happily ever after
 
Geet suffers from CONfusion for the next few months pondering on "Brij mein aisa kya tha jo mujhme nahi tha aur Maan ne mere saath aisa kiya"
 
and so she flees to the jungle only to have met Vicky and marrying the real Khurana
 
while Dev is still living in the world of CONtamination with his psyched wife NT
 
THE END
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By Caco

NT's eyes 🀣 🀣 🀣
🀣 🀣 🀣

^^Dev Vs NT^^
🀣 🀣

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By Caco

HAVE NO FEAR
BIG DADDY IS HERE😎
time for some DHISHUM-DHISHUMπŸ˜†
lekin DHISHUM DHISHUM to PEPSODENT ka kaam haiπŸ˜•πŸ€£
(this part of the write-up esp dedicated to Pari Mehr 🀣)
 
Chunni's bhai standing with the talwaar in his hand full Gabbar Singh ishtyle.....i thought for a moment he might even say NACH BASANTI NACH 🀣 and Maan will come and say IN KUTTO KE SAMNE MAT NACHNA 🀣 🀣
 
ok so Geet has DA BRIJ's flashback....OYEEEEEEEEπŸ˜† 
 
Maan comes just in time to hold that talwaar with a KUTTE KAMINEY MAIN TERA KHOON PI JAUNGA look 🀣 he was so furious...even i was scaredπŸ˜†
 
ok so he punches DA BRIJ's besht FRANND🀣 with a mukka...munda ne mara chauka 🀣 the guy is floored 🀣 throws the dupatta to Geet....fantastic gesture...always saving the girl's honourπŸ˜³πŸ‘
 
gives kuri a look and drops the talwaar.....
 
Gunda 1 comes and tries to blow a punch at him....but Munda the only 1 blocks and SMACKABOO in the tummy and throws him outta the way.....i think he destroyed that guy's digestive systemπŸ˜† 
 
Gunda 2 strikes....ek thappar and he's on the floor 🀣 i wonder how many protein shakes and eggs he had before coming for the shoot 🀣 all that energy.....! 🀣
total filmy hero ishtyle dhulaing all one by one 🀣
 
Gunda 3 and 4 attack together....but our Munda, the student of Kung Fu Panda, is not so easy to take onπŸ˜‰ he's got skills babyyy 🀣 Big Daddy holds them by the collar and pins them up the wall and DHISHUM DHISHUM....left right center 🀣
 
ok so Chunni's bhai comeback and punches Munda right at the face😲OYEEEEEEEE.....πŸ˜‘πŸ˜†
but our Munda gets right back at him and kicks him.....all those time spent on Maan-chi....kuch to kaam ana chahiye naπŸ˜‰πŸ˜† he doesnt exploit himself for nothingπŸ˜†
 
Gunda 2 comes back and attacks from behind....Maan goes in Karate Kid mood and kicks him...and then some badass blows.....DHISHUM....DHASHUM....DHISHUM....DHAPAK....and finally the Gunda is down underπŸ˜†
 
oh and another kick and the Gunda 1 also taken down😎
 
Maan also watches Jackie Chan movies at night and practices some moves.....i am informed the latest he watched is KARATE KID 🀣
 
Chunni ka bro comes back again....they talk about izzatπŸ˜• do they themselves have any self respect that even after getting their asses kicked so many times they keep on coming back for moreπŸ˜•
one word: LOSERS 🀣
 
ok so Praji is standing with a gun and misses the shot.....bakwas nishanaπŸ‘ŽπŸΌ....from that distance even a 1 yr old could shoot and kill 🀣
 
Maan and Geet hide....Gunda 1 returnsπŸ˜† one kick and Gunda is down.....such is the power of LOVEEEEEE 🀣
 
Chunni ka Bhai comes back yet again.....koi nikalo isko yaar....kutta kamina haramzada 🀣 hatapai between Munda and Gunda....Geet prays to Kung Fu Panda 🀣
so the pistol grabs everyones attention....kabhi Maan kabhi Geet....after a long moment of kabhi ye kabhi woh....the pistol gives up too 🀣
 
Gunda punches Munda.....screams Handa 🀣 MAAAAAAAAAAAAAN.....Munda in shock by hearing his name from the mouth of HandaπŸ˜† i liked it though....i hope she calls him by his name from now on😳 she used to call him Maan before tooπŸ˜³πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
 
such is the impact of the scream by Geet that it gets Maan screamyyy too 🀣 Munda is all OYEEE😑 DHISHUM on Gunda's arm....and final blow in the face and the Gunda is out 🀣
IN YO FACE
SO LONG SUCKERSSSSSSSS
🀣 🀣
 
 
😑THE GUILT TRIP😑

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By Caco


Buluuu i know man...he's just πŸ˜• what can i just say about this manπŸ˜† my din is not pura without dissing Maan Singh Khurana 🀣 his snail pace is getting on my nerves but good in a way he's like that or else the show would ve ended in one week 🀣 slow Maan and Phast Geet.....BINGO....no confusion great combination 🀣

By Blue

@Caco: i too wanted a goodnight kiss from Maan's side...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† BUT man he didn't even dare to brush her fringe aside..let alon give a kiss on the forehead...Arghhh..he's slow..and he wants phasst girls..??..How will it balance then..?? 🀣

By Cute_Ash

@All Use Caco and Faz's Royal Ignoree for the rumors me trying to imagine Rakhi aka Geet dancing on Munni Badnam hui to seduce her boss Maan aka elesh!🀣🀣🀣

By Jyo & Ayesha

Rakhi's ex-flame Abhishek might b coming in as DevπŸ˜›...the title of the show will b changed to Rakhi:Hui Sabse Parayi🀣 And ya one more news..show is ending..confirmed...its ending in 2051🀣

***insert 34523456i43356543 ROFL emoticons here *** and if the show ends in 2051, even my grandchildren will watch rakhi romancing with budhaas 🀣

By Shonnu & Sarirah

guys.. plss stop it.. this replacement thing can be really dangerous... if rakhi replaced drashti.. then her jeejus will replace baba ji... and her convo will be.. jeejus dekha aapne ye shaana maan mujha kitna tang kerta ha????
and whenever maan will show her maan- giri to her she'll threat him like...aeeeeee tu mere sath aisa nahi ker sakta... i will call the medias... where is the medias,, main medias kki beti hon ..
...🀣🀣🀣


and imagine maan kisses her.. and calls the press conference... and  will tell them... say see my lips see can you see they are swelled.. how can he kiss me on lips?? yahan ki kiss maine apne pati ke liye bacha ker rakhi thi.... 🀣🀣🀣

and then she'll demand for a Geet ka swayamvar with Maan. Dev, Vicky, Nakul, Rahooool, Mali, all of them trying to woo her 🀣 but in the end that Security Guard of Maan's office will win 🀣🀣🀣

By Bri

Here is the latest rumor/riddle/spoiler/tukke exclusive to Den:

Nissar decided that GC is not acting out all his instructions, so he decided to fire him and hire himself to play Maan, last I heard, he had sent a search party out for Doodleberry to play the role of Geet as she is the only one who got his vision perfectly! Now where is she?

By Anjana, Caco, Javeria & Ayesha


They need better actress then Mouni and from that little clip, I didn't see ny chemistry πŸ‘ŽπŸΌπŸ€£ but, that wud be BAD Idea... They need to find other options 😳 Is Smriti Irani (Tulsi Daadi) free? 🀣 Or howz about Ganga Maataji? 😈 ya Jassi ki Rajkumari (Mona)... Actually jks apart the last might work. Debina & Guru have chemistry from my 1 flash of Ramayana that i watched to verify akscent is ongoing issue.

Caco: Smriti Irani 🀣🀣 i dont think Gurmeet can pick her up in his arms 🀣🀣🀣 
Anj r u INSOMNIAC by any chance?🀣 everytime i think u've gone to sleep ur back with a post🀣🀣

Javs: Tulsi maata will have to pick him up 🀣........it will be a role reversal 🀣🀣

Ayesha: seems like a mommy coochicooing her bachaa 🀣🀣

Caco: more like one of those Johnson Baby Lotion ads 🀣

By Javeria

@shonu: sam-maan = samaan and yea it is luggage of maans past 🀣

By Lana

So this guy knows her payal, jhoomka & now dress size too?? πŸ˜†  He who doesn't allow girls to be in & around 4 ft distance knows how to put on a jhoomka & take off all possible jewelries & that too heavy ones with tassels & all!??

Hmmmm! MSK maajra kya hai?? πŸ˜³πŸ˜†

By Sinistera

The Guy is a Creepy Stalker na ...so he keeps track of everything.....jaab se ayi hai he is observing her like a Hawk....and i pretty sure he makes notes too ...so now is the time to implement everything...the slow process of drawing Geet out of her na na ka Shelll

By Swati 

Regarding maan knowing geet's dress size,  he has held her enough num of times from that hot dance to yesterday's good night lift to have taken all her measurements....🀣

By Gouri

Lana swati is sooo correct.... waise munda has checked her out soo many times and had held her up close 😳.... kurbaan hua dance too he touched her waist, held her in his arms...... the disco hug, he held her waist and then took his hands to her shoulder.... he has been measuring her all along.... ahem ahem..

By Jyo

What do you'll think will happen after the Talwar fight
 
Here is the clue in the form of emoticonsπŸ˜ƒ...
 
😳 Chumma de aaa de tera munna bigra jaye (Maan singing after fight scene)
πŸ˜› Maan after chumma
😲 OYEEEEEE ye Munda kaha se aa gaya (chunni's bro)
😭 Mujhe mat maroo ( Chunni's bro)
😑 Kutte Kaminey main tera khoon pe jaunga (Maan to OYEEE people)
 Maan left with a black-eye after all the dhishum dhishum
😭 Maan sir main aapki abhari hoon (Geet)
πŸ€— AA gale lag jaaaaa (Maan-Geet)
☺️ TUMMMMMM MERE HOO (stalker tune)

By 49erfan

As shonnu would say, Im sure NT released some gas! πŸ˜†

By Pallu

Pallo's noble attempt at modification....

NT's evil ideas vaporized from her brain hearing Maan's tone and got released in FARTYy manner!!!!🀣

By Vini

Only five..? Sheesh come on girl!! I want MORE!! .......

Rmb that new Mahiiiiiiiii version for BriMaan...BRING that in as well!!..

And i want Maan slowly removing Brijjy's rings πŸ˜†...just like how he did for Geet.....that's when the Mahiiii Brijjy version will come in....ahem!!

Mahiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii ohhh briiii-jjiiiiiyyyyyyyyyyyyyy....🀣

By Caco

i think Maan sat down and disentangled her hair πŸ€£ he's nothing less than a nanny to her 🀣

By An

My final Qs and me out of here: Did Geet brush her teeth? If not ... Why didn't Mann give her a bunch toothbrushes and toothpastes to choose from? 🀣

By Caco

no wonder she wanted to go away from Maan everytime he pulled her close 🀣 maybe she didnt want him to smell her bad breath

By Gouri

jyo u want geet to sizzle on zara zara touch me touch me touch me.... zara zara kiss me kiss me kiss me..... zara zara hold me hold me hole me......

 
well about touch n hold maan does not stop at zara zara..... its all bahut sara....kiss he only does that in his dreams..... yet.... lol

By Sin and Jyo

@Jyo........hmm first Vicky will fall in like with Geet..unknowingly that she is the object of wadey Veerjis affections...so then he will redirect his affection to NT...nahh not really....Pari not in the picture rt now....so to distract himself..he will have one-night stands with Tasha, Sasha and Rat Woman.....then a mysterious woman will make an entry...that would be Sameera...and it would be lobe at forst sight for VIcky.....sameera has ulterior motive aka revenge on Maan....so she will eventually ditch him and Rajji will come to pick up the pieces......at least she will try and meet Gurvinder again and run off with him.......then Phinally a new entry or Pari will be back for Vicky.....okay done...so kesa tha??πŸ˜†


@Sin: πŸ˜†U r making Vicky sound worst than a casanova or a Gigolo🀣..and the show will b changed to "Vicky:Hua saare females se paraya"πŸ˜†

@Jyo.....🀣 u see...according to me ...Vicky is into Samaj Seva...he believes in spreading love...hence his disposition is like that🀣 🀣


By Caco and Pallo


lets just end Vicky with Adi 🀣
 
poor Adi has been betrayed by Maan for so many times now....pehle Brij, then Geet, Nakul, Gurwinder....
 
its high time Adi meets his SOULMATE 🀣 and that is VICKY 🀣🀣

Pallo: Yep...Adi is.....GAY HUA SABSE PARAYA!!!!

By Sin & Pallo

@Pallo......heeeyπŸ€—....expert opinion required......Adi with BriMaan ya Adi with Vicky??🀣🀣

@Sin: Pallo clears her throat....
VICKY had a long lasting affair with NAKUL in the past!!!
Can't u ppl see the real reason for Nakul's ducki-ness??? Absence of VICKY!!!!
🀣🀣🀣

@Pallo.......oh Damnnnnn.....thats why Nakul behaves like a Zombie...who has been smacked repeatedly...wowow..me is very very impressed with this theory...🀣🀣

ah whipping up a OS on BRIMAAN...shud be up today or tomorrow!!!
Title will be CHIGGY WIGGY FOREVER!!!🀣🀣🀣

By Shonnu

maan loves paalak... just  like popaye the sailor man..... so he chose this spinach green color...for her.....🀣


By Pallu

Popeye...Oh Pallo sees...She would love to hear MAAN WHISTLE AT GEET!!!! *phoon phoon*🀣

By Caco


if Khurana CONstructions ever goes bankrupt.....i see what exactly Maan can take up as a profession now 🀣
 
i am all iin for STRIPPER MAANπŸ˜³πŸ˜†

By Caco


i wanted Tasha to barge in when Maan was stripping 🀣 she would have gone on Tirith yatra or something 🀣 

By Adi
me too missin sasha....woh toh........ho jati.....🀣🀣🀣......


By Polki

With the denial, acceptance game as Caco said in one of the rumors generated the show will go on till 2050 both will be old and still wondering if the other loves him/her.   πŸ€£ Our grandkids will be sending messages on forums and we will still be saying come on Geet he loves you.

By Pallo

U can take a look at my participation in the DEN and know that I am pissed off that they didn't get BRIJ!!!! I mean...they robbed BUGS BUNNY OF CARROTS....how mean!!!!😑

PALLO's Aakaashvani...uh oh PREDICTION.....πŸ˜†
 One day.....Maan will strip at double the speed....for BRIJ!!! and the day isn't far!
*crossfingers*
🀣🀣

By Sin

hmmm so i will just be talking about Maan's social experiment today....Maan's Social Experiment on Geet thats isπŸ˜†.......have i told u i like man who have brains...and not for show...the one who like to use it too...M Stalker K seems like one of those man...πŸ˜†...i loved loved his determintaion to make Geet realize her feelings....he is not pushing per se...but giving lil nudges here and there....and someday when he cant CONTROL, pushes too....but thats coz the poor dude gets desperate easily 🀣...i m sure by now everyone has used Id, Ego, SuperEgo thing to death....but what the hell....i will do it as well 🀣🀣...so yea...Maan the Man or maniac....was very much ruled by his Id (note his Ego is the size of Asia though.....trust me i know🀣🀣) ....also doing stuff which is self righteous....always want instant gratification....and he is a control freak as well...so then one fine day..he sees a lil Bunny (Geet) who dares to defy him...Him the anarchist......the unknown ruler of the world...🀣🀣🀣...alright alright, i am just being mean here...but come on the Dude used to reffer to himself in thrid-person...🀣🀣...i mean who does that??? *scratches head in confusion* ..whatever its freakin hilarious 🀣🀣🀣....so days pass in them Maan encounters the defiant girl again.....oh yea i forgot to mention...he has a huge super ego as well...its pretty dormant most of the time...but whenever it comes out of hibernation...its a killer....so coming back...he finds out that the girl is in need and despite his Ids demands, his super ego wins and he gives her a means to live.....you know the usuall tiffs and his struggle with his emotions, uptill now......as of now Maan's Id wants acceptance..instant gratification..or acknowledgement from Geet...but his Super Ego always comes in between for him to not push her over the edge.... so now his poor Ego in so much dillema decides to come up with a plan.....Geet ko patao plan...or make Geet acknowledge him...sorry as confused as Maan's Ego what to name the plan 🀣...anways....we start the social experiment:
 
Step 1: Confuse Geet...as much as possible...be harsh and act all tough all the time...but just keep saving her....give her mixed signals.
 
Prediction/wanna be Hypothesis= Girl will start paying more attention to you, hence occupying her mind and making sure that she thinks only of you at all times... πŸ€£
 
Result = Needless to say if M Stalker K plans we will get results...so positive...girl is thinking about him.🀣
 
Side effects/Confounds= ahem..a lil..errm bump on the road...the girl starts answering back and instead of making goo goo eyes at him...starts fighting and complaining 🀣🀣🀣....starts looking more irrestible then ever...so ur Id not in ur total control either🀣🀣 (secret= i tell u the dude digs her defiance)
 
Step 2: Physical proximity...🀣🀣....so yea the rule came up because u see he cant control his Id either...always want to be all touchy feely....and lets face it....the girl is a disaster (MSK's words...not mine) she's always ready to fall..so what if...ahem..someone catches her...*cough stalker cough*.....so it ek teer se do shikar...a small gratification for Bossman's Id and noticing Subject's (Geet) reactions as well
 
Hypothesis/Prediction: the subject will definetly feel the attraction...ahem..most important Assets are used in an efficient way 🀣🀣🀣...the subject might blurt out her feelings or...or...just acknowledge that she is equally effected by his proximity as he is by hers.🀣
 
Results: the subjects getting a little uncomfortable...hmm possibly because of all the tension....or it could be just him....🀣🀣
 
Confounds/Side effects: The Subject has become more flighty...resulting in Bossman loosing his sanity and start manhandling her 🀣🀣..instant gratification is required...however that darn Super ego comes in the way and stops him all the time.....resulting in increasing confusion and frustration for himself.🀣🀣
 
Step 3: At this point the guys is pretty Despo...so blantant expression of Love...ahem...not really...🀣...too scary u see...dont wanna be hurt...so partial confessions and full on Stalking day in and day out..to find out her feelings...nothing to do with his desire to keep her in front of eyes....*serious face* absolutely nothing 🀣🀣🀣
 
Hypothesis: this time the Subject will definitely respond....she has too damn it...🀣🀣...its M Stalker K after all...she has to show some positive sort of reaction
 
Result: hmm finally..finally the subject is getting the lost puppy look...or the startled bunny look....haye small comfort....🀣🀣
 
Confounds/Side effects: now the subject is running away more.....no more voluntary eye contacts from her side...damn it MSK wants his dose of eye action 🀣🀣🀣...resulting in more frustration for himself...and desperation reaching new heights...not to mention Id driving him insane.
 
Step 4: accepting kinda defeat with straightforward method....time for desperate methods...Manipulation...let the subject think that she is defining the relationship...just a ploy to get inside her defences...while also implementing Step 2 and Step 3 simultaneously.🀣
 
Hypothesis: the Subject will have to admit her feelings now...baas...no more running around....M Stalker K is Despo 🀣🀣
 
Result: still under observation
 
potential Confounds: M Stalker K loosening up more.....and still more loss of control...hence resulting in unintentional strip tease 🀣
 
Phew!!!!......finally done...after few million interruptions and a fight 🀣🀣.....seriously m not even responsible for this madness...okay maybe...partially
 
alright i m done with the my thesis...so lucky for you
 
~Sin~
 
By Shradha
in reply to ^^^

they should change the title to: Geet- the social experiment πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

By Campbelli

Absolutely  - Geet - the social experiment via social networking

By Bri and Pallo

Okay, here is one more question from me to divert all you guys from that IF/when nonsense from Geet on FB:

1. Where is Sasha? What happened to her? Did the actress quit the serial? Or will she bring more drama in when she comes?

Pallo: Sasha is conveniently hiding in a closet in the OUTHOUSE expecting to see the *blush hush mush* things from a perfect angle!!!🀣🀣

2. When do you think that Sasha will get exposed?
Pallo: I mean how much more shud she expose??? Walk in with a BIKINI into the office?πŸ˜†πŸ€£

3. When will the saree fiasco and MMS fiasco come out near Maan?
Pallo: NEVER!!!

By Bri & Pallo

Okay this is my reply on FB for that IF/When baby question:

Anamika Das Okay, why are you making this singular as in "child", why can't you make it twins, triplets, quadruplets, sextuplets? http://in.reuters.com/article/idINIndia-45289720100110

@Bri: Pallo wud love triplets....
Maan can get pink, blue and yellow BABY STUFF!!!!
Haaayyyyyeeee!!!
🀣🀣🀣


By Bri  & Pallo

This is my next comment on FB:

Anamika Das In fact I vote for Octopulets for Geet thus making her enter in the Limca Book of Records for being the mother of the first octopulets born in India, and the third such mother in the world http://octuplet.blogspot.com/2009/01/eight-is-enough-octopulets-are-born.html

They'll name them PAUL 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8!!! And if Maaneet settle in HP...then next FIFA WC...we'll see teams rushing to HP!!!🀣🀣


Polki Quote

Aye, fight and you may die. Run, and you'll live... at least a while. And dying in your beds, many years from now, would you be willin' to trade ALL the days, from this day to that, for one chance, just one chance, to come back here and tell our enemies that they may take our lives, but they'll never take... OUR FREEDOM! -William Wallac -BraveheartπŸ˜†

By Vini

G
uys, Check that scene of yst episode..where Adi comes into the Maan's cabin..

 
Adi : Can i come in Sir..?
Maan: Come in *looking at files*
Adi: Good morning sir
Maan: Good morning *looks at Adi*
Adi: Sir woh..woh..
Maan: hmm.. *fiddles with his vest buttons*
 
 
For a moment HERE i thought Maan was gonna strip infront of Adi.........🀣🀣
Coz that scene came after his striptease with Geet...🀣


By Adi
seexxxxyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy fr my shirt...........................🀣




Comment
By Vini:
A
HHHHHHH this song was playing in my head!!.......🀣🀣🀣
purrrrrrfect one Adiii!!.......🀣
i think there is a hindi verison of this song right..??? 🀣🀣🀣

Comment by Caco:

yes on GOVINDA....meri pant bhi sexy...meri chaal bhi sexy 🀣🀣🀣
 
i hope i go blind before Govinda becomes sexy 🀣🀣

Comment
By Vini:
🀣🀣🀣....HAHAHA!! YESS!! Now i rmb!!..........🀣..and you wanna go blind..🀣..i understand ya........🀣
 
BTW he became sexy though in Partner when he did this song........🀣..
 
"soni de nakhre soni lagde meinu''
oh keinde pump pump pump up
oh jannah jannah
oh keindie pump up the jame oh keinde
oh jannah jannah oh keinde........"
 
 
TILL now i have NO IDEA what this means.......🀣🀣..and i have no idea why i posted the lyrics of this song..it just came to me..after that "sexyy" song........🀣

By Pallo

No assumption Neha....that's the only siggy my/our eyes are are glued to the whole tym!!! Doing silent eye-talk!!!🀣

By Neha

🀣@ Red...Errrrrrrrrrrrr....care bout' sharin' some VALUABLE eye-talk experiences????🀣🀣🀣...I would really apreciate that.Thankyou.🀣🀣🀣

By Pallo

*Shhhh*
Okay Neha...here is just a slice of their convo!!!!
🀣


Eyes- You gimme a healthy exercise....🀣
Ass- And you gimme inspiration to stay fit and purfect!!!🀣

Awww.....such a encouraging mutualism!!!


By Neha

@ Pallo:🀣I like it..Its a very friendly..conversation, i must say. Its js fascinating to hear an ass speak.🀣🀣🀣🀣


By Pallo

Yep....it speaks in fragrant lingo!!!! 🀣

Oh Sia...how abt u whip up 4 lines...eyes sing for the ASS...and 4 more lines that Assie sings back!!!🀣🀣🀣


By Sia (SWKIA)

Kinna pyara tujhe rab ne banaye,

Yeh baat mujhe sabne bataya,

Sun sunkar haal hain humaara itna bura,

Ke inne pyare ho tum, par ek baar main dekh bhi na sakun...

 

To kya hua agar tum humen dekh na sako,

To kya hue agar tum humen choo na sako,

hum yahin hain yahin hain yahin hai yahin...

tum age dekhkar chao... main piche se cover kar loon

For darling Pallo 🀣

By Bri

@Neha, Pallo, Pallu, Faz, Ash: Your ASSets talk is famous on the sets I heard and the BriMaan talk

By Pallo

U mean if we try harder we may get BRIMAAN!!!!🀣
*rubbing her hands together*
And Geet will be sabse parayi at the end of it????
🀣

By Pallo

Pallo's latest ambition...TO BE MAAN'S SHIRT BUTTONS!!!!
Ufffff the way he touches them!!!!!
🀣
Not GC's I REPEAT.....MAAN's!!!!🀣

By Palluluvsarmaan (Pallu)


HOW THE HELL I AM SUPPOSE TO CONCENTRATE IN HAWANNNN AT MY HOUSE...BABAJI HELPPPPPPPPPPPPPP

By Pallo

Don't beat me up for this but....
I couldn't help wondering if seeing those shirtless priests who will be conducting the Havan  u wont get reminded of shirtless Maan....🀣
God help me!!!! I am going insane!!!!🀣

By Pallo & Blue

You know Devils.....the lightest way Geet can tell Maan abt her preggy condition is.....

"Jaanu...I kno u love me...But are you willing to accept EK KE SAATH EK AUR FREE????"
🀣
🀣
BARGAIN OF THE MILLENNIUM!!!!🀣🀣🀣

i like this deal Pallo!! 🀣🀣

Hope Geet says it like that..it speeds up the rate of the confession scene...🀣

Seriously Vini...By the time the Munda understands one year will be up!!!!
I guess his speed is limited to opening shirt buttons...I think he got loads of practice in that....Did BRIJ's kurtas have buttons????🀣

🀣
Arre Brijjy's Kurta had HOOKS...it was faster to remove then those buttons..all he had to do was rip his shirt apart..and scream "oyeeeeeeeee aaja" simultaneously.........🀣🀣🀣
 
One year..girl add in two years.🀣...i'm sure he still be wondering what is the free deal Geet referred to...🀣🀣...and even with the baby out..he STILL will be clueless...🀣🀣🀣.......

Yep make that two years...
And I guess he used up all his SPEED in seducing BRIJ that he has becum so sloooowwwwww nowadays!!!!
🀣
I am choked by his unshakable loyalty towards BRIJ!!!!🀣🀣🀣
I can almost imagine Brij ripping of his kurta screaming..."MAIN MAAN MAAN CHILLAUNGA KURTA PHADKE!!!"🀣

By music-is-love (Rhea)

And a little off-topic...for all you ASSet lovers...heres a little something!!! Even MSK's jeep has the "ASS" in it ..huh! πŸ˜†

By Vini

DEMOTION..?? Easyyy..he can serve Geet..and take all her orders...🀣..would love to see him serving coffee to Geet...

By Caco 

Geet already has the upper hand in the relation

WHO'S THE GUY IN THE RELATIONSHIP? its GEET HANDA πŸ˜†

By Vini

haii taking lessons from the GURU himself ; Emraan Hashmi.....🀣 We'll never get any CONversation/Communication outta of the scene then...🀣🀣🀣....just action and action..and action.....🀣..the director may nt need to even mention the word Action here at all.............🀣..

Director : *LIGHTS* ...*CAMERA*.......and............*oye oyee wait for me! I haven't said action yet!! Wait! ruk! ruk!!*...........🀣🀣

By Faz 

I would've said he can come to me instead forget Imran Hashmi 🀣🀣🀣 BEHOODA MOI 🀣🀣 But since I'm not as fond of GC as I am of Maan, he can go to Imranji for the chumma de day lessons 🀣🀣🀣

By Caco

if they go bankrupt....Maan will manage to feed family with his STRIPPER self 🀣 hamara kya hoga?πŸ˜† bewafai ki bhi hadh hoti hai😭 i am the doppleganger of Dev Anand but sstill.....i mean how many days can i survive CONning people into believing i am Dev Anand so that they would let me stay in lodges 😭🀣🀣

its time for BADLA😑🀣 lets just KIDNAP Geet 🀣 eent ka jawab patthar se 🀣 he left us....now he should know how it feels when ur loved one goes away from u🀣 I LOVED HIM SO MUCH....par usne bewafai ki saare limit cross kar di

By Pallu

Soni.u want proof? today when her hair is open, she understands that Maan loves her and thats y the ring,,,,the next scene, her hair braided and her tubelight gets offπŸ˜†
PEHLE MUJHE YEH BATAYE AAPNE MUJHE YEH ANGOOTHI KYUN PEHNAYIIIII

MAAN FRUSTRATED
KYUNKI MUJHE AUR KOI NAHI MIL RAHA THAAAAAAA..OKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKK...GIRLS RUN AWAY FROM MEEEEEEEEE..ONLY YOU FALL IN MY ARMS..THATS YYYYYY

By Sarirah (Caco)

My mom said Geet's baby will be an asthmatic patient because she keeps on hyperventilating all the time 🀣 🀣

By Pallo

Mom se kehna...Maan is more than willing to act as puffer!!!! 🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣


By Pallo

Pallo dancing in......

Uhmazin' petticoat tha.....

I could almost hear BG score....

"Dress hain chota sa.....Lambi Chaudi AASHA( Uhm uhm...) "🀣
🀣

By Swati

Dress hain chota sa.....Lambi si AASHA( Uhm uhm...)
Masti bhari raate, hone ki aasa..
Teri godi mein, sone ki aasha...
Tere naino me khone ki aasa....
Dress hain chota sa.....Lambi si AASHA...
Masti bhari raate, hone ki aasa..

🀣

By Nihu and Tanu


Tanu....Hiiiiii

now quickly  say hiii

 
Tanu...quickly runs  to say Hi....

By Nups

Coming to Max-MAAN
Hell the Woman is beginning to annoy me......
Scatter brain takes a new definition with her.
She ONLY displays 4 emotions
Puzzlement
Bafflement
Bewilderment
Befuddlement

& when MAAN touches her.....
Thunder amazement!

By Pallu

add MYSTIFICATION
OBFUSCATION to those...
6 is a greater number Come on Nu...She deserves credit for being able to hang onto the expression for sooooo long!!!!....
🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣


By Adi


jyots itna time u wer gayab ....jaise hi MUNDE ke liye candidates aage aaye...u............OOYYYEEEE munda mera hai........πŸ˜†

By Faz and Ash08

What is a tubelight? 🀣

A tubelight is a light that flickers.
Light flicker refers to quick, repeated changes in light intensity - light that appears to flutter and be unsteady. It is caused when the voltage supplied to a light source changes or when the power line voltage itself fluctuates. The severity of the flicker depends on several factors such as:
    how often and regularly the voltage fluctuates, how much of a voltage change occurs, the kind of light (incandescent, fluorescent, or HID - high intensity discharge lighting systems), the gain factor of the lamp [gain factor is a measure of how much the light intensity will change when the voltage fluctuations - (% relative change in light levels) divided by (% relative fluctuation in voltage)]
  • the amount of light in the lighted area (ambient light levels)
🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣

@Ash - I know what a tubelight is 🀣🀣 Thank you very much, I was asking in terms of the Den lingo 🀣🀣 that was a good one though πŸ˜‰

By Ayesha, Javs & Pallo

Ayesha: Its coz u didnt hide it properly in your drawyer!

Jav: My drawyer? I used to hide it in my kebin πŸ˜†


Pallo: read it wrong and jumped up thinking chaddi talk was back!!! But i guess I'll have to be a little patient
till all sense talk subsides 🀣


By Jyo & Caco

Everyone outside the den in worried state thinking NT might b leaving and then Dev-Geet might reunite again...🀣
 
they dont go to a CON SCHOOL OF CONNING AND CUNNING whose headmaster is Jyombledore 🀣

By Caco

My money's on Nakul...zombie is around most often, so chance uska best hai...Jks A: Msk Wud tear more then his shirt n we may learn about Cchaadiwala truth too πŸ˜› 🀣 🀣

🀣 🀣 then i think i would want Geet to run away with Nakul if that solves the chaddi mystery 🀣 🀣 reminds me of the add VIP UNDERWEAR OR BANYAN πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

By Pallo


Dang!!! I want sumone to open a exclusive GAYLUBBBERS gallery!!!!
We can get such a variety of combos
BRIMAAN
NAkewl-Maan
ADIMAAN
BRIADI
BRINA
GURVINDERMAAN
NAKUL-ADI
VICKY-NAKUL πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

By Pallo

Originally posted by spshastr

@jo - Please ask the CVS to ensure that the Geets revelation is good and Maans reaction is even

better.Just what we expect from him. He joins the dots , anlsyses and then comes back. No immediate reactions

Pallo's brain whipped up the scene that Maan walks away after hearing it...
Returns after two minutes with his car keys and wallet saying..."Chalo lets go toy shopping!!!" 🀣
🀣🀣

By Pallo

And GEET is gonna be not a single mom...a super OCTOMOM!!!!🀣
Kyunki shez gonna have octuplets....right????🀣
Maan can do toy shopping in seven RAINBOW colours and the last baby will have everything

white!!!!🀣🀣🀣

By Richa

@pallu-
pink- meri pant bhi pink and short bhi pink.......🀣


By Pallu

U can go further...meri ass bhi pink!!! Langoor kahin ka!!!🀣🀣🀣
what abt the others??? No one X-rated enuff???

By Blue & Pallo

I like this idea....😳 The more the merrier...πŸ˜†
Then he can name one Maan 1 and Maan 2...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†..or if it is a girl/boy twin..one can be Maan junior..then the other Geet junior..πŸ˜†
 

Back to two????
We had decided to ask for OCTUPLETS!!! right???
Pallo want to see OCTOMOM and OCTODAD handle the lot!!!
πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†


By Pallo

 Yah whipping up a OS on BRIMAAN...shud be up today or tomorrow!!!
Title will be CHIGGY WIGGY FOREVER!!! 🀣 🀣 🀣


Seriously....Pallo would have jumped and made BRIJ under the Dulhan's veil instead of GEET!!!! BRIMAAN wud be legally bound for ever!!!! πŸ˜†


By Caco

lets just end Vicky with Adi 🀣 poor Adi has been betrayed by Maan for so many times now....pehle Brij, then Geet, Nakul, Gurwinder.... its high time Adi meets his SOULMATE 🀣 and that is VICKY 🀣 🀣


By Jyo & Caco

Now lets start with next debate...MSK with or without shirtπŸ˜‰πŸ˜†πŸ˜³

its a tie 🀣

Ok next debate..Maan with or without his pants🀣...Don't say its a tie nowπŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

not a tie....then maybe somewhere in the middle....MAAN IN CHADDIS 🀣 🀣 🀣

By Pallu & Caco


I want Geet to twll him the truth when he is shirtlessssssssssπŸ˜ƒ

sweethurt i dont think that is a good idea....if he's shirtless then rather than telling him about the baby she'll be thinking of making his babies instead 🀣 🀣


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Neha's post - Dil mein he meray dard-e-disco:

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1474717

Shonuu's post - Tum jo aye meri zindagi mein, band baj gaya

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1476467


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DEVILs ALPHABETICAL YAADEIN...(By Pallo)

Pallo's humble attempt at landmarking DEVILs most craazzzy moments!!!!

WARNING- Gear up for a one minute melodrama.
*Pallo's phati hui awaaz reverbrating in the Den*

Nagme hain, shikwe hain
Kisse hain, baatein hain
Baatein bhool jaati hain
Yaadein yaad aati hain
Yeh yaadein kisi dil-o-jaanam ke
Chale jaane ke baad aati hain
Yaadein, yaadein, yaadein

A- Ahmayzin' Ayesha's AMAR PREM KATHA🀣 (Shubh ARAAMBH!)🀣🀣🀣
B- BRIMAAN...etching themselves as a legendary Love story...☺️
C- CON THEORY- foundation of the DEN!πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
D- Doodle and Noodle's ANOKHA pyaar...😳
E- Eye-Popper Bimbo NT's sexually gratifying relationship with Daarji🀣
F- Fraandship Mania hitting the Den!🀣
G- Gurinslish based Maanictionary put together by Vini and Caco!🀣🀣
H- Hamesha and Forever- ANTI-Baazigar pankhaas!!!😑
I- "I like to MOVE IT MOVE IT"- Ass Anthem for Devils🀣
J- Jyombledore's school of tabelagiri😳😳
K- Kamina Dev's kutta style barking for more footage😑
L- Life bettering classes in 'Phaasstness' from Emraan Hashimi to Munda Maan🀣
M- Maahiiiii Chillaying Aatmas EMPLOYMENT SCHEMEπŸ˜†
N- NT's suicide instigating Fartbombs and Padded chaddis!😲
O- OctoMOM in demand by BriπŸ˜†
P- 'Parineeta' theory sing-a-song ding-a-dong...U La La🀣🀣
Q- Queen Daaku An's Talwarbaazi tutorialsπŸ˜†πŸ‘
R- Runner Momma implanting "Runner genes" into Jr. Khurana🀣
S-Sensational Stalker Diaries by CacoπŸ‘πŸ‘
T- 'Talli'-ing Tai-chi sessions with a dash of African Jumbo dance!🀣
U- Ultra-energizing Protein shakes processed and packaged by Caco🀣
V- Vini's BOOMING business BRITHERMOWEAR!🀣🀣
X- X-ratedness the unalterable Mantra of the Den...πŸ‘πŸΌ
Y- Yahaan symbolism...wahaan symbolism...Jahaan jao symbolism hi symbolism!πŸ˜†
Z- Zombie's Nakul's and Mawali Maali's adhuri Kahani..🀣🀣🀣

By Pallo

That ENO worked Caco!!!
*Handing over first customer piece from BRITHERMOWEAR...A floral chaddi* Thanks for the help yaar!🀣 

By Caco

why is it thermo 🀣🀣 i am already so HOT 🀣🀣 give me something that would keep me cool 🀣🀣🀣

By Pallo

Okay a piece from NaKOOL LINGERIE
Hope it is comfy!!!🀣🀣🀣

By Pallo

Pallo's fav scene was KING KONG MAAN on that cliff!!!!🀣 I could write volumes on the evolution!!!

By Caco

i want Sameera to be a terrorist 🀣
 
she wanted some real dhamakedar bombs in her life and was not satisfied with the sex bomb Maan 🀣 and so she left him 🀣🀣

By Pallo

I want Sameera to be a nun...Munda got sexually frustrated and left her!!!🀣

By Caco

kya naseeb 🀣 the first was a nun and this turned out to be pregnant 🀣🀣 no wonder he's so UP FOR IT all the time 🀣

By Pallo

Pallo rolling in!!!!
My Nani commented only once through out the episode...The precap scene...where Maan is driving off....
With full contempt she said.."MEN ARE DOGS!"
My Nana's expression was priceless!!!!🀣🀣🀣🀣
All reservations done?

By Blue & Pallo

She ran to the Dargah..she ran when he was in the lift..and the doors were closing..And now she's running after his car..
 
I swear the baby will be a runner when he/she grows up..and will in turn participate in marathons..🀣


I say we get a pair of cute baby shoes from BRIMOTHERMOWEAR for...it is gonna shoot past TODDLING stage right into SPRINTING stage....Takes after Mama!!!!

By Pallo

Okay...so is this gonna go the "Kiss-Bang-Kaboom-Nahi" style????
Maan tosses Geet
Geet too broken after zillion attempts
TEARS TEARS TEARS
Maan gets to know the truth
Goes crawling back...
Geet stays khafaaed for sum tym
Then COOCHIE COO restarts...
Sounds familiar to me!!!

By Adits & Anjana

oh ya....🀣............sir mujhe aapka finger chahiye......i ws lk WTH......pervs u c....🀣

Kya Dostana Hai!

Ishq Humko bhi hai!
Ishq Aapko bhi hai!
Bas izhaar nahi hai!
🀣

By Jyoti

Anything which belongs to the so called Khandani Khurana Con family is "WOWW": according to the silly employees🀣...According to them if MSK is "WOW" elementπŸ˜‰ then even his underwear is "WOW"🀣...so thats the logic behind why the ring was a "WOWW"🀣🀣🀣

By Caco

CONsummation is the Jaap of the Den 🀣🀣

By Bri

Too many bakras and bakris make the place a bakherkhaana

By Sarirah

me is waiting to see what this DeMello twat is gonna do that will make Maan and Geet CONfess 🀣unme aisa kya hai jo kisi aur mein nahi πŸ€£ he's going to make these slow-poke brains CONfess😲 he must be sth 🀣

By Shyams

🀣🀣🀣May be DeMello will try to marry Geet and Maan will realize this is his last chance to confess πŸ˜†

By Caco and Ayesha

cacoethes: i like Phast girls like u πŸ€£ who dont call me SAR 🀣🀣 ESCUSE me for my engleesh 🀣

cooldude10: Everyone likes phast girl like me. i give them lots of attitood 🀣 ur engleesh is fine! i luve ur akksent 🀣

cacoethes: Thenks sweethurt...AMEN not everyone understands how cool i am with my aksent 🀣 they just want to hurt my fillings 😭talking CRAP about it 🀣🀣🀣

cooldude10: ohno no! i do not men to hurt ur fillings! :( but the truth is alwais bitter na?! πŸ˜†

cooldude10: cacoo πŸ˜”everyone thenks we men to hurt fillings! :( i am upsat 🀣

cacoethes: CHUP...BILKUL CHUP 🀣 we dont mean to hurt anyone's fillings....BOLO NA Ayehsa....HAAN 🀣🀣

By Faz

maybe-just:Instead of these celebrities I wanna see Geet save Maan's virture from Samira's evil intentions  *hindi film ishtyle* With the bachao dialogues! 🀣🀣🀣

Want Maan to be locked & Geet coming in with her dolay sholay + talwar 🀣🀣🀣

By Shak & Pallo


All r planning to make a petition.. To exchange ATMAS's Dev and Brij.

Exchange offer...Woot woot!!!!
Pallo excited!!!!
Hey wait huh...BRIJ...without kurta....DANG!!! Vini hasn't cleared that AMAZON on BRIJJY's chest...sum ppl may go blind with shock seeing that jungle!!!!🀣

By Faz & Pallo

I think we might have to invent a new word for what EktaMai will do to twilight 🀣

Creatorape!!!!🀣🀣🀣
Okay that was a fusion of CREATIVITY RAPE!!!!

By Faz

I think she will go past the boundries of rape 🀣 what's the next worst thing to rape? 🀣 GAYRAPE? 🀣🀣


By Pallo

GAYRAPE.....Okay that'll be pronounced as GRAPE...with the aksent....Ufff!!🀣

By Shak

Sprinkles Gangajal on both of yew.

Hey Makhi Maa ! I tell yew gals, peee loo ENOUGH paani, lemonade etc. Melodrama will be TAUNTING !!

By Pallo

Pallo demands to kno the source of gangajal....
🀣


By Sin & Pallo

@Pallo...so do you think Brijjy jungle can shed enough thread for a sweater??🀣🀣 may be he can offer it as his FRAANDSHIP gift too Maan🀣...cant see the siggy my thing is off....lemme go turn it on then i will see

Vini has started a new business called BRITHERMOWEAR!!!! Made exclusively from that stuff...she was thinking abt calling FAZ to be the face of the business...FAZ wat say sweetie...U'll be PHAAAAMOUS!!!!!🀣
I'll tell her to add friendship bands as one of her products!!!!🀣

By Anjana

G: Mujhe kuch bolna hai

M: aur mujhe kuch kholna hai 🀣🀣

G: Maan!

M: Haan, Maan!

G: Mein baache..

M: Muhje bhi pasanda hai! Chalo praaktize karle

G: nahi mein pregnant..

M: Geet tum meri mangetar ho... daaro maat

G: nahi woh...matlab

M: Chup! bilkul chup! tum baache se zada bolti ho! 

Inspired by FFs i don't read🀣🀣

By Anjana

G = Gouri

Geeta = Geeta 🀣

 

G: Muhje kuch kehna hai

M: Aur muhje sirf behna hai 🀣🀣

G: Kehne do! Muhje kehne do!

M: Behne do! Muhje Behne do!


By Kawaii hime (Maisooma)

About the Geet faining, I know where she got it from. It's written in the book, "How To Be An Abla-Naari Tellywood Heroin". It says on the page 420, and I quote.

"Abla-Naari Ruli No.555: Always, and when I say always I mean it, faint, fall, feel weak WHEN your Hero is in-sight and is in a good conidtion to hold you, console you, carry you etc to a safe place. Failure to do so, will lead to severe consequence

By Anj 

UPCOMING PROMO:*
"Mano ya No Mano, Tum Muhjse Shaadi karoge"
M: Na Phere! Na Pandit! Aur nahi koi Mantra!
G: Yeh Saab muhje chaahiye bhi nahi
M: Chaho ya na chaho, Tumhain meri Biwi banahi padega!
G: Agar mein inkaar kardo toh!
M: Nahi kar paogi!
BK: Mahiiiiiiiiiiii Hui Mein Pati! Luti Mein Apni Izzat Luti!🀣

*Anj mocking CVs and the Queens of Symbolism -->this is not a real upcoming promo

By Anandana

NOW here is a question...everybody has a brain (at least to my knowledge), but i have seen in MANY soaps that the characters do not show any signs of having one....compared to that this is nothing....

By Pallo

Okay Pallo wanna comment only on DEVEERA🀣🀣🀣

Pallo felt elated seeing that he was helping her arrange his ASHRAM when he gets VANVAAS!!!
SANT DEV AND APSARA MEERA...ke gulshan khilenge...BUT CVs...we dun wanna see it...Just spare us huh...And one more time you the break the flow of Maaneet scene showing TOPLESS DEV...We'll make sure U GO TRPless FOR A WEEK!!!!

By Beagle

@Anjana- are you saying Dev's bare chest is visual satisfaction🀣
 
Maan will be so shocked tomorrow, he may drive to his cliff and his grief will make his shirt come unbottoned and we will have the bare chest view again....so whats the bet, we will get to see Maan nunga tomorrow. 🀣Maan and Dev can form a pop band called THE NUNGA BOYS

By Caco


Jhun Jhun Wala National Swimming Competition Winner Dev Singh Khurana   1st Lap: Mujhe bro ko sach batana hai 2nd Lap: Har halat mein batana hai 3rd Lap: Sachai aur imandari ke saath batana hai 4th Lap: Shayad nahi batana hai 5th Lap: Nahi kabhi nahi batana hai
 
🀣

By Caco

ek gadha aur gadhi ki kahani....both of them Pasta deewani   Chapter One: FunGuy and SunDay Origins   One Sunday Gadha goes to a restaurant and orders pasta. Gadhi sees this and is maha impressed. Gadha tells Gadhi...u shine as bright as the sun
Gadhi tells Gadha....u just made my life so much fun

By Caco

Nari Shakti ki JAI HO....and this time not featuring Pussycat Dolls 🀣 🀣
 
bows to Geet Handa for Conning MundaπŸ‘πŸ‘  ghee agar seedhi ungli se nahi nikle to ungli tedi karni padti hai 🀣
 
Maan is like Kurkure
 
Teda hai par mera hai😳
 
🀣 🀣 🀣

By Pallo

*Pallo running in and bumping into soulsita*🀣
*Thud*
Awww...ma butt hurts!!!!🀣
Zandu Balm ....Ne Munni out here???

Pallo loves muggles yaani NON-MAGICAL CREATURES!!!
If sada Maan was a wizard-lizard...all he wud have to say is "KHUL JA SIM SIM" and Dhaaga opens....How utterly unromantic!!!!🀣🀣

But see now he gets to OPEN, LICK, EAT...Britannia Treat!!!🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣


By Pallo


*Pallo stifles BIG YAWN*
Can u ppl stop the MEERA JAAP....
And focus on the KHUL JA SIM SIM bit of Maaneet!!!🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣

By Caco & Blue

πŸ€— u wont leave my side ❀️ *holds both hands and raises upto chest* Bolo na Mali...u wont leave me....Bolo na....🀣

 
*Take Nakul's firm hands*..Woh..woh woh..mein yeh ....yeh...kehna chahte ki..mein..mein..tujhe nahi chodunga!! KABHI NAHI! HAAN! *nods head in agreement* 🀣🀣🀣.........Now tell me u love Mawali more than GC!  Nakul, this Mawali can take it if his plants doesn't get water but NO way can he stand a two timer!  πŸ€£πŸ€£..Becos pyaar mein SACHAYI aur BHAROSA zaroori hain! HAAN! 🀣🀣🀣

fake love for GC 🀣🀣
 
Mawali Mali is my true loveeee 🀣 ye dil sirf tere liye dhadakta hai...HAAN! 🀣
  πŸ€— while we are hugging....there should be someone singing...... *behne de mujhe behne de playy in backround* 🀣🀣

By Caco & Pallo

I just realized the fate of that baby.....Me filling bery bery sad now....Instead of cute pink diapers, pink teddys, pink clothes...he/ she will get GHASTLY GREEN stuff🀣🀣🀣

Munda is environment friendly 🀣🀣🀣 i am sure he wears green chaddis 🀣🀣🀣

By Pallo

bamboo Chaddis...green ones...BIO-DEGRADABLE MATERIAL chaddis is heights of environmentalfriendliness!!!! Light to carry around and airy too!!!🀣🀣🀣🀣

Jyo and Manal

πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†I m going to post videos of that terrific salsa everywhere in the Den..its a top show afterall...best show going on TV right now..with over 6 trps...me a pankha of that show..Maneet r nothing in front of Taps-Raghu ka superflop....I mean superhit jodi🀣..PUN INTENDEDπŸ˜†
Oh My My JYo Dont Torture us 🀣 This Will Be me n Others afta watchin tht Show

By Sofna

Now imagine if Geet wakes and asks him, if he brought her inside the bedroom as his secretary or his mangetar?????🀣

By Marsha

Oh my goodness! I just re-watched the rain scene. And when Maan runs to catch Geet-- it reminded me of Smallville!! 🀣How they show Clark in slow motion because he is super phasst!! Maan is like SuperMaan!!

By An

Was Geet trying to faint Matrix way? πŸ˜†

By music-is-love (Rhea)

He looks lucious!! GC..thank u for the wonderful treat to us all who had started
questioning the droolworthy effect of bare chests due to some unpleasant experiences from Friday's episode.. 🀣   πŸ€£ .this brought us back to the *Drool* 😍 😍   mode!!

And how the buttons opened by themselves...dont ask..i guess they just wanted to prove to us that not all bare chests are ..umm...scary!! 🀣   πŸ€£ 🀣


By Anandana

@All: I never new that cliff was that famous...We should have 'TELLYWOOD" sign there and make it immortal like the Hollywood sign🀣

By Anj

@D yeah YT do must be phaasting 🀣 juice nahi hai

Poor Gurwinder... BIL kills wife, BIL's BFF tries to kill him, and now MSK is trying to make him a DAD minus the pleasure πŸ˜† πŸ˜†


@Sin ... i figure we can get lots mileage outta Pregnant Geet puking and then baby pissing, hissing, pooping, spitting....N HAILA half naked FILF 🀣 🀣 🀣 Let's nor forget the must must n happening button sewing scenes πŸ˜‰

MSK = Mera Shirt Kaha? 🀣 🀣 🀣 hopefully on Dhobi Khaanna (DK)


By Pallo

Pallo has a strong hunch that MAAN is a divorcee!!!!🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣

Geet- U sure u don't mind that I had a FAKE MARRIAGE???
Maan- U sure U won;t mind if I had a REAL DIVORCE???

🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣

By Pallo

@ Caco...Chill Maar gal...Koi gal nahi...BRA HO YA PRA....Sada MUNDAs can handle them all!!!!🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣
 
By Shonnu

oh caco......πŸ€—.... i still doubt.... they are running phast phast without considering what they are going to show and how will the viewers will react , who are more literate and serious than them.........🀣.... and we say so much about symbolism.... and i think they have nothing like that in their minds.. i wonder Mr. director would be asking to Mr.script writer.. that your symbolism was phenomenal ..viewers really admired that.. and Mr. writer's reply : nahi sir Maa Kasam... maine kuch nhi likha tha....they are assuming it .......🀣🀣🀣.... ye mere khilaaf saazish ha....🀣


By Pallo & Blue
 
Farzu was eager enuff to make this within a day!!!!! I freaking love the text.....I am a genius!!!! And the homework ofcourse I took care to make...🀣🀣
 
Since you made that homework specially for me..i shall count the chest hair then..
But it will take afew days..and you shd know why..i see myself getting lost in that AMAZON....and encountering living things on the way.....🀣🀣🀣...it will be a tough one..but i will make it thru it..and sent ya the numbers on MON..πŸ˜‰ πŸ€£..Brjjy here i come.. *jumping into that amazon*...🀣..........YUCKKKKKKKK 🀒 πŸ€£
 
Pallo: Light Camera Action....
Welcome to aapka apna mixed reality show...KHATRON KA SAAMA
Main hoon aapki apni host PALLO...
Hamare saath hain VINI jo...BRIJJY ke amazon ke andar jaane waale hain!!!
WISH HER GOOD LUCK!!!!


🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣
 

By Ayesha & Pallo
 
the main forum of geet is turning into a baazigar 🀣🀣🀣 this sounds so MESSED UP MAN 🀣

Dang...I don't like this code word!!!!
I love BAAZIGAR MOVIE
esp that dialogue..."HAR HAAR KAR JEETNE WAALE KO BAAZIGAR KEHTE HAIN!"
Devils please think sumthing innovative...not Baazigar...
Puhleaaaseee...
Pallo's request on Ganesh Pooja and EID...🀣
 
By Anjana

Full on JungleTREK for ShriRam n Sita🀣🀣🀣 N Bat and his DingBAT will run Khurana Constructions to de underground

By Md410 (Arpita)

That is why saare Ayodhyavaasi will sing Ramji ki Nikali sawaaari ramji ki Seeta hai Nyaari🀣
 
By Tanu
 
Rishta wohi.. Soch nayi.. 🀣 
 
Geet hui sabse parayi..aur bani Maan ki lugai  *it means wife in desi language*


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~~.: Poetry :. ~~

By SWKIA (Sia)

You can feel the magic of my love, and hear my heartbeat anew,

Yet you want me to go away, no one should know I once lived too, 

 

Listen closer, Listen again, just once again....before you send me afar,

Ignore this voice and stab your conscience and bear its ugliest scars,

 

Hear your shallow thoughts.... immoral is what I am called,

The shame is only yours, god and I , at your ignorance are silently appaled,

 

Life in my world knows no great virtue or petty vice,

I am pure and true as the one above, the divine seed of life,

 

Take your decision, any which way, BUT speak the truth, speak fully aware,

Let me go for your chance at fickle freedom and strange morailty..is that all you care,

Let me in and I shall bring you happiness in each living moment, divine joy one only a mother knows is there...

By An

Half-Baked are these, but hope ... it'll cheer you up
Mondae Fudge:

Magical are these days,

There are plenty of bright rays,

Entering to touch each corner dark,

Leaving behind a memorable mark.

 

Smiles are passing from one to another,

Taking away the pain and hurt that bothers,

Look out for the girl on the pavement,

Giggling, dreaming of a mysterious sentiment.


By An

@SWKIA:

Let me be born,

So that I can pluck out all your thorns,

Make you a proud Mom,

Wiping away all the gloom.

 

Let me be born,

Coz, I do not want you to mourn,

Wish to see your glowing face,

 And, feel your warm embrace.

 

Let me not remain unborn,

Or, I'll always walk forlorn,

For ever lost in a dark alley,

Where I will never know a mother's verdant valley.


By Shreya


Jab akele khade ho zindagi ki raahon mein,

Jab koi saath na de in fizaayon mein

Haath bada ke dekhna ek baar,

Mujhe paas khada paoge har baar,

Waada hai yeh umar bhar ka,

Na todhege tab thak jab tak hai saath saanso ka,

Is dil mein ek khaas  jagah hai tumhari,

Kisi aur se na ki aisi dosti pyaari,

Rishta yeh kitna ajeeb hai,

Dil ke kitna kareeb hai,

Naa janate hue bhi pyaar karte hain bepanah,

Tumhare bin khud ko paate hain  tanha,

Naa chodna kabhi saath humara,

Tumhare bin na koi wajood humhara,

Bas aise yeh rishta rakhna kayam,

Har mushkil ko has ke seh lenge hum'


By Anjana

Please let's be friends
said the fly to the spider
Sure, let's be friends
agreed the cunning spider

Welcome to my cobby home
Atop this crusty and dusty tomb
Your home is nice, though sticky
You are kind and not at all sneaky


Come try my special cider
It will relax you, said spider
The cider is truly delicious
But, it is making me noxious

May i lie down on your bed?
I need to rest my dizzy head
Certainly you may my precious
Your innocence is so delicious

By Anjana

@An : You know not what I would do for your smile
You do not care to know that you are my heartbeat
You cannot comprehend my pain at your tears
You dare not acknowledge that i am your mate

I care not if i am hurting, so long as your are safe
I know not what my existence would be without you
I do not care what ills the world attribute to you
I dare not anything that may cost me your company


By Sia

Dreams where men were knights and women were angels,

God was above and all were his faithfuls,

Reality checked in and showed an ugly glimpse,

How cruel life could be, and worse the people it brings,

Hearts bled out every bit of love in a shameless masquerade,

Wear the emotional garb to trap, and carry on a nasty pumping parade,

Fear engulfed my being, screams of doubt follow and find,

It's unforgiving pace had long left this girl behind,

But for you I'd never find myself among the dark shadows that chain,

I can now see a faraway silhouette, a chance to be free, to know love again


By Geet.a


And there she stood,

the nurturing wind admonishing her
where were you child, your home missed you
yes- she'd love to think that way,
but this story is for another time, another day
a tale so familiar..so intimate,
that she closes to all her heart's pained gate
with a painted smile, she fights each day,
with a fake laugh she lights his way,
he- understands somewhere deep inside her pain,
and yet doesn't know who is to blame,
perhaps one day soon all her pains he will erase,
she will live again, happy and gay,
but the bruises so deep will leave their scars,
only to be healed with the love of her fated life-mate


By Geet.a


"Ghar Chalein" [:D/] 😍

You brought me back to life,
from a place full of strife,
You called me by my name-my love,
You called out with a voice filled with pain and love

Your love made me ecstatic,
But the pain in your voice made me sick,
I wish I could hurt them in return for this nick
that made you scream out my name- that shattered your heart's bricks

I will not let anyone hurt you- I will die before that
nothing WILL happen to you, I can at least promise you that
You complete me, without you, my love, everything is black
I didn't tell you I love you, but you know already..so I wait for you to react

You tear your dupatta, and place it in my bloody palm,
Is that your confession? I feel a little alarmed
then I look into your eyes, and I feel a deep sense of calm,
"i am yours" you have said, your dupatta is a healing balm

You are hurt, I can clearly see,
Would you let me wipe your eyes,would you stay with me?
You say you have no home, so I say what I really want to finally-
My love, my life- would you come back home..and build one with me?


By Bri


Can you tell me when the sun shone in the midst of the clouds
breaking them apart and forming a golden hue

Can you tell me when the child rose up from its crib
and told mom I love you

Can you tell me a time when the earth, heavens and hell
all came together on a single canvas

If you know what hurts you, what perks you, what jerks you
There wouldn't be any reason for me to shake you out of your reverie


By Bri

My past is my own
Your past is your own
From the moment I met you
Whatever was lost and won
That's all I shall share with you

- lol - as to why I will not tell my past to Maan by Geet


By Bri


@Sia, πŸ€—

From my acts of omission
You shall run
My acts of commission
You shall shun

I am no T.E.A.S.E
Though it seems like I am at ease
I am trying to hide my tears
out of all my fears
 - Geet

We are two travelers
That time brought together
This journey forward
No looking behind backward

I am not free
I don't rejoice in glee
My joy
is in you I enjoy

- Geet/Maan



By Pooja


Dark turned to light,

Grey turned to blue,

Lost became found,

That's when I met you


By Penguin (An)


I bring with me a lamp,

To show you the way,

Out of that aching damp,

To tell you, love always gonna stay.


By Anjana


Please just go the hell away
I don't need your silly little ray
I like my dank dustsy bat cave
You, i no longer want to save"


By Anjana


You owe me your life

At least tell my why
Why you cant be my wife
Answer! Don't be shy
It is my simple right
So please enlight

Though my past is my own

The future you want to own
But, i cannot give you that
As I was betrayed by a rat
Can you live with my reality?
Will you still give me your fealty?
The answers I will not know
Till the truth I let you know


By Sia

Look at me straight, look into my eyes,

Raging desire, brings me a magical high

 

Touch me here, touch me now,

What a rush, all else vanishes somehow

 

Hold me close, Hold me tight,

Such joy, this inexplicable delight

 

Take me in your arms, take me there,

Sheer madness, give up all that I ever cared

 

Kiss my lips, Kiss me wild

Lets make love, you and I-


By Sia


Colors me wild with flames of amber and red,

Oh such is love, fiery as the glorious sunrise and sunset,

 

Colors me calm with gentle waves of blue and aquamarine,

Oh such is love, deep as the mysterious seas and oceans serene,

 

Colors me restless with loud whispers of ivory and gray,

Oh such is love, heavy as the ambitious clouds fighting to break away,

 

Colors me free with enchanting songs of champagne and brown,

Oh such is love, runaway as the kisses of raindrops on a thirsty ground,

 

Colors me joyous with caressing petals of golden and spring,

Oh such is love, cheer as the pretty blossoms to a young meadow bring,

 

Colors me hopeful with flashes of sapphire and midnight,

Oh such is love, dreams of faraway stars and their dancing light,

 

Colors me strong with sinewy strokes of iron and steel,

Oh such is love, peace in an honest prayer and faith in the divine will


By SWKIA


You trample upon my manhood, make me a petty liar,

I'll listen to your heart instead; it shows me your secret desire,

 

You stab my faith and make me doubt what I know is true,

I'll listen to you heart instead; it tells me my love made its way through,

 

You cause havoc in my mind as you beg me to go far away,

I'll listen to your heart instead; it reaches out and pleads me to stay,

 

You ravage my being as you deny and seem unsure,

I'll listen to your heart instead; it speaks from your soul, 'nuf to know '.....we shall endure,


By SWKIA


What we lack is to be aware,

whats right, whats not and when to dare,

Choices may go wrong and the blows may be hard to bear,

 

Lets not cause more anguish, with opinions and judegments in abundance,

Our society is made up of us, lend your heart and make a small difference,

Ttalking and pointing wont help, they dont really need our tuppence,

 

Lets not decide for others and tell them how to live,

But if they fall, its help and love one must give,

Not for us to count mistakes and follies through our faulty sieve,

There is only one, the one above who has the right to forgive.


By Shradha


I know you are hurting

but understand, my love
the separation you put between us
will only hurt us even more

-Maan


ps: is that prose or is that verse...not sure


By Anjana


You are my heart, my own

I have never let you down
Yet trust me you did not
Faith in me, you have not

By Anjana


I know your lips are lying

But, what is your heart sighing?
This riddle I cannot decipher
The truth I cannot just conjure
At least give me a vowel
If not genuine avowal


By Agas

On a fine day, I was taught to be someone else
and it made me feel all the more tense
only to realize that I was nothing else
but just a burden for my loved ones

A life within a life is all I wanted to hold
but loved ones decided never to let me be that bold
When I didn't give them a choice
they decided not to let me rejoice

But fate has it own evil play
it decided to make someone else pay
came along a prince on my way
to save me from the world gone astray

I decided to fight my own battle
to hold to my life's throttle
Away I walked leaving the battle ground
hoping I don't see any of these around

our paths crossed again
only to find he was already in pain
but life was so sweet
with him beside me greet

He made a place in my heart
I didn't want to accept it that apart
Feelings are to be hidden by par
for I have another life within me to stay far


By Anjana


This was calm before STORM
Which is the appropriate Norm
Wounds are being re-opened
But heart also getting opened
 
Shelter was need for the night
Somwhere safe for them to fight
Not each other but, themselves
As bonus we get a few cute elves
 
And with yet another wedding
The bad memories are shedding
Replaced by ones of true love
Something as pristine as a dove


By SWKIA


Bulging or bold, the shape of 'em eyes is what we care to see?

Open your heart and you will find how bright the courage in them can be.

 

The end of his nose didn't he see, isn't that what most think of he?

Look harder and you will find, the man cares to see as far as the truth may be

 

His voice would keep dragons at bay?

Listen closer and you will find in the few words he says, a chance at living life the right way

 

Battles there maybe, sometimes silly and many a time fierce,

Stop n see how he fights and you will find, the man in him, the darling of this li'l universe!


By Pooja

ill fight for you i swear
ill protect every stand of hair

ill bleed and give you my blood

ill die so you can live life the way you should

ill rest your head on my arm

ill defend you from any kind of harm


By Pooja

Will you ever?

I don't think you will

ever fully understand
how you've touched my life
and made me who I am.

I don't think you could ever know

just how truly special you are
that even on the darkest nights
you are my brightest star.

I don't think you will ever fully comprehend

how you've made my dreams come true
or how you've opened my heart
to love and the wonders it can do.

You've allowed me to experience

something very hard to find
unconditional love that exists
in my body, soul, and mind.

I don't think you could ever feel

all the love I have to give
and I'm sure you'll never realize
you've been my will to live.

You are an amazing person

and without you I don't know where I'd be.
Having you in my life
completes and fulfills every part of me.

By Pooja

Love wasn't put
in the heart to stay,
for love isn't love
'til you give it away.

By Pooja

Eyes that are crystal clear,

one thinks he could see forever.

But within you lies uncertainty and confusion,

like boulders in a raging river.

 

The swift current, the choppy waters,

this makes for a rough and tumble ride.

Be brave, be true to yourself,

with me there is nothing to hide.

 

Conquer the rapids, guide this craft,

don't sail this adventure short.

At journey's end, where the water calms,

could lie a safe and wondrous port.

 

So, it's through great canyons, on to the ocean,

let us greet the unknown.

Paddle fast, my love, get to my heart,

for it is there you might find your own.


By An (Penguin)

Under the umbrella dotted with twinkling stars,

A man and a woman stood still in tears,

Balmy breeze dancing in trance,

Begged her to step out from the circle of fears,

And, lead the man for a divine dance.

 

How could I,

Demons of my past chase me,

Pushing me down a dark ravine,

How could I,

A new life is smiling within me,

Gripping tightly the reins of my dreamy hope.

 

The Man,

Eyes brimming with tears,

Stepped forward to wipe away,

Unabated flow of her tears,

Only to be told, don't obstruct my way.

 

Silence speaks,

Says so the angel of the night,

Listen carefully, you will hear,

Unspoken words buried in a painful thought,

Man, she wants you always near.


By Pooja

Bebas hai insaan apni kismat ke aage,
Bebas hai sapne haqiqat ke aage,
Koi ruki huwi dhadkan se puche ,
Kitna tadapta hai dil mohabbat ke aage..


Posted by Jyo

Through the good times and the bad
Together we walk side by side

Any problems we have between us

In each other we always confide


We understand each other's feelings

And to each other know what to say
When one of us is feeling down
The other chases their blues away

Any problem one can't handle
The other takes upon their back
We always lean on each other
When things get out of wack

Laughter rings out between us
More often than not
And when we're side by side
Our troubles are soon forgot

(source unknown)

By Nupur

Max MAAN is the Light......
When Darkness Falls.....
He is the Blazing light in Sight....
In Geetlis Life of Darkened Halls!!!

By SWKIA

Listen to the raindrops as they come crashing down tonight,

They set the tone for us my love; it's just you and I holding on tight,

 

There is mischief in the air as the candlelight plays along,

Look at them pixies and elves singing their magical song,

 

Enchanting scents of lilies of the valley dancing a fox trot,

The chilly breeze surrounds gently, tying us in a happy knot

 

Shall I take you in my arms and touch you some more,

I want to see you smile, the blush of my beautiful rose!


By Pooja

Passion burns in lovers eyes

One look from you, my spirits rise

This flame inside, still burns bright

And from my soul, this light takes flight

 

Lately this rain seems less dreary

Because of this, my hearts less weary

And if in fact we're meant to be

The sky will clear so I may see

 

A future bright and filled with love

Sends cleansing rain from above

To wash away the painful tears

And release my heart of once felt fears

 

Each time I look at you my dear

There seems nothing I should fear

Once locked up dreams come undone

A new life for me has begun

 

My life spins in tune with yours

Twirling and dancing through open doors

A cycle with a touch of fate

Our worlds entwined, creating hate

 

Through our bond, we rose to fight

A love this strong can break the night

Through this fight, we mean no pain

Happiness is all we wish to gain.

~Unknown (twisted by me)

.......................

By Bdgt

Here is some more lines:

I don't want a love

that comes nice and easy
bubble wrapped and teasing
flirty and flighty

I want a love

that scorches me alive
that tears and rips
me at the seams
and tortures
the hell out of me

By Bdgt

So you can make me a part of your tomorrow
But hell, I want to be penciled in even into your yesterday

Be there where you have been

Feel that which you have felt

You think only of the future as sharing

But I so damn well care that the page from history also features me

All your hurts and tumbles

All the reasons why you cry today

Are all not your memories

But mine too...mine too...

Just pencil me in into those past events

And you will find me beside you
And then you will never cry alone
For your every tear will be mine and mine!

By An

This is for Sundae Fudge:
Candles lit-up a room,
Rains brought in news good,
But, two hearts were sinking,
Thinking of the lonely path beyond the woods,
Where the souls will go missing.

By Bri

Burning candles
Melting Hearts

Drenching Rains
Tears  their Twins

Hopes afloat
Drifting in loaves

Tried patience
Tangible persistence

Told ya'
All good things take time oh yeah!

***********

By An

Cruel is the wait for a sinking heart,
That sees time as a mocking piece of art,
Hope is like a faraway charm,
That causes more harm.

By Bri

Cruel, cruel is the lament
But what does cruelty know
The width of its snare

Sinking hearts know not

The goodness of being submerged
To emerge out again
Washed, shining bright, nice and clean

The charm is a harm

Harnessed or let loose
But oh bleigh
There ain't no harm in a charm
That does not sit or stand on its own

By An

It'll rise again for sure,
May be a little bruised and sour,
Again, it'll walk on a grass full of dew,
To begin a beautiful journey anew.

But, when it's darkness that pervades,

One cannot see the colourful shades,
It's the beats of turmoil that one hears,
That, even the hope cannot help him bear

By Bri

Oh, how interesting
That you think that was a  fall
while here I was wrongly thinking
that it indeed was a spring

I am the light

and I only seek the dark smudges
else where would my light permeate
what use would it be to itself

By Agas

True you were with the charm

but it caused more harm

patience is a virtue

not all of us care to pursue

 

but you will win her heart

for she needs to know her heart

but keep your hopes alive

one day they will strive

 

Rain it will again

to wash away her pain

burden turns to a blessing

in the arms of her prince charming

......................

By Bri

Oh well, you said you were undeserving
So here I am reserving

I know you are smirking

Smoothly besmirching

Snide and needling

Dialing my number in analog mode

While I in my digital drone

Remember how self serving

Such a notion

that a love potion
could cure you of all illusion

and let you know how undeserving

You think I would think you as undeserving
Your take on me is so undeserving
Your point of connect is so undeserving

So let me be

Till you know how it is supposed to be

........................

By Agas

Waiting for the day
when your heart opens up the way
stride I will into your heart
to tie the final knot

till then let me beside you
just a forlong distance would do
Will keep up the charm
to keep you warm
 

By SWKIA


Morality, Cruelty, and Reality

Glimpses of my truth are beyond whats happened with me,

 

I am in love with you and know you will stand by me and hold,

The honesty of of my sould you shall seek, from more than what's being told

By SWKIA

What's life if you don't care to dream,

Gibberish or nonsensical as they may seem,

Some came true, scene after lovely scene,

Bring so many smiles to my everyday routine.

 

A girl's got to let the nets and curtains, and the little mistakes just be,

The man's arm dared a maniac's sword, that is what actually mattered to me.

In a play or its protagonist, gotto find something to love you see,

It's what you make of it, even life is never proportioned perfectly

 

By SWKIA

The whispers of your breath and their wicked waltz, ignite in me a wild desire,

The caress of your skin as it cruelly singes my every inch, setting me on fire,

From a man to a slave, caught in your hypnotic embrace I just lost the battle to love-sire

 

The rays of starlite kiss your cheek and the gentle breeze caresses it by,

NO trespassing in my moment of love, Wont allow a soul to sneak in or pry,

They touch you and feel you too, The bloody gall, you are made ONLY for I-

.........................

By SWKIA

Cruel is life, deceitful and wrong, all that lasts is numbing pain,

Find me a shelter, where there shall be no such room, ever again.

 

Hidden behind, I cheat myself shamelessly since, all night all day long,

You'll find no one else, I am that mask, unbreakable and strong.

 

But unforgiving is the truth, will follow and find, what has to be,

Stares me in the face, so ruthlessly; why! Even I had forgotten me.

 

But wait, all's not lost just yet; quick! Let's bury this discovery,

Here so soon? Darned intruder o! Love; bring with such misery.

 

Here by my heartside, building your fortress, that's mighty unfair,

I dig myself in n you pull me out again; leave me alone, I loathe dirty warfare,

 

I fight and I roar, I thunder and I say no more, defy all odds and break all the rules

But the secret's in my eyes; it's what we both know, just how badly I want to lose!

.............................

By Shreya

Hum toh wafa he karne chale the,

Jaane bewafai kaise ho gayi,

Hum toh unse pyaar karne chale the,

Jaane khata kaise ho gayi,

 

Dard na chaha tha,

Par us bhi apnaya tha,

Unki liye toh zehar ka ghoot bhi piya tha,

Har aansoon hothon ko see ke liya tha,

 

Par aaj bhi dar lagta hai,

Sach ya pyaar kise who chunenge,

Dard ko who kaise sahenge,

Bahut dard diya  hai unhe logon ne,

Ab main nahi cheenna chahti unke apne,

 

Har baar unhe saath khada paya,

Har muhkil mein haath unka pya,

Par agar who bhi mujhe na samjah paye,

Aur hum rahe gaye bina kisi saye,

 

Nahin jaante ki kaise jeeyenge unse door,

Ja na honge who na bas unki yaadein majboor,

Dar lagta hai unhe khone se ,

Na ab reh gayi hai himmat ki akele rahoon phir se'


By Shreya

oh pyaar ke ehsaas jis se badhe the hum,

woh ankhen jazbaat jinse jude the hum,

aaj aapne har us ehsaas ko naam diya,

aaj aapne har mushkil ho mere liye saha,

aapki ek kharonch se dil par mere waar hua hai,

aaj hum khud ko rok na sake yeh ehsaas hua hai,

na kabhi ab aapse door jaaonge,

har muhkil ko aapka haath thaam ke seh loongi,

ghar nahi tha mere paas,

par apne ghar nahi muje bhi lauta diya hai aaj,

aaj us rab se waada karti hoon,

Chahe ho jaaye kuch bhi main yahin pe khadi rahoongi,

aapke paas, aapke saath,

na chodhogi main ab yeh haath..


By SWKIA

boss ko pehle achchi see smile ke saath good coffee pilaye

agar phir bhi hain kaimnepan par ade huen

nayi subah unke coffee mein 5 cubes of shakkar milayen

agar phir bhi hain kaminepan par ade huen

aur ek nayi subah coffee mein jamaal gota milayen

agar phir bhi hain kaminepan par ade huen

Usi shaam coffee unke sar par ludka dein,

baar baar kai baar yeh try karen...

aur agar phir bhi hain kaminepan par ade huen,

boss ka hi kuch karen, use hi ludka shudka dein?

By Tanu

MSK:

 
I cant talk to u anymore...I need to say gudbye
I need to walk out that door...n all i can do is cry
 
 
Geet:
 
U said u luvd me...but u were going to break my heart
U said u luv me forever..then why are we apart?
If u really meant for us to be together...then tell me u will try..
coz once u said..that we are forever...n that made me cry...


By SWKIA
(Sia)

(MSK's haal-e-dil...but like I say the sequel will follow...since every nomad finds an oasis if he is strong enough to hang in there).
 
This nomad finally found love in your eyes, feels just right ,
Tell me what I know; this is the moment I craved, here tonight,
 
This nomad finally found his heart, your touch ignites,
Don't hold back; this is the moment I craved, here tonight,
 
This nomad finally found his way, your smile is my beacon light,
Come journey along; this is the moment I craved, here tonight,
 
This nomad finally found an anchor, with you by my side,
Stay with me, stay some more; this is the moment I craved, here tonight,
 
This nomad finally found himself, in your presence, how the great lord unites,
You belong with me, you are mine; this is the moment I craved, here tonight
 
This nomad finally found a mirage, that was all it was, a cruel deceit of sight,
Suddenly I had lost it all, lost you my love, as you revel in my wretched plight,
I found instead, a stranger I had never met; life handed me another blow of spite,
The one I love, the one I want, walked out on me, leaving me very alone - more than ever, tonight-


By Geet


Those three words, and she'll make me the happiest man on Earth,
        Staring into her sublime eyes, filled with tears,
      I marvelled that she considered me worthy enough,
I took her hands in mine...to stop them from trembling in fear

I will be there for you...did I even have to say it out loud?
And yet I did, and waited with patient love
She loves ME, And I felt so amazingly proud,
fool that I was, didn't realize I would receive such a violent shove

I let her hands slip through mine,
I am pregnant, is that what she said?
Her hands had stopped trembling, now it was my time,
I had to leave..I had to feel like I was not completely Dead

My throat crowded with tears
tears that I would never shed.
There was a loud ringing in my ears,
somewhere deep inside my hurt bled

Flashbacks started, and I felt transported in time,
all the times I had saved her, all the times she had denied
What was my fault? what was her crime?
How could I never see or hear? How could I be deaf as well as blind?

Intense pain made me cry out,
cry out in anger and suffering,
I never questioned- I never had a doubt..
that the moment of my happiness will such bad news bring

I retreated back, I could feel nothing,
I would not allow myself to look at her,
I could barely hear her over my heart's crying din,
and she- stood there..ready to suffer with me, ready to bear

My heart was killing me here, and she worried over a scratch?
If she only knew...
I went away, and closed my heart's latch,
Now no one can enter again..not even the wind that blew


From GEET's point of view:

One moment, he held my hands in his,
I knew he would never let go,
I felt pain in that bliss,
For I knew not what he would do after that fatal blow

I told him point blank the reality of my life,
The shock and pain that passed through his eyes stopped me,
As he let go of my hands,his eyes were filled with painful strife,
I tried to tell him..I really tried to stop him...but he left my heart on the floor to bleed

Don't give up, OUR flower whispered to me,
I would never- he was too important,
The foundations of our relationship have been set finally,
And they will become stronger, as soon as I make him vent

He needs to hear me out, and I will make sure of that
I will follow him everywhere, I will love him till I live,
But he recoiled, and for the first time, drew back,
I was in shock, what was I do with all the love he had promised to give?

His hand was bleeding, but he barely listened to me,
He walked away and shut himself up again,
His hand was bleeding, why wouldn't he let me see?
He pulled back..and the rebuff made me dizzy

I held on to him, and I always will,
Till he listens to my story,
I will make sure he knows that I love him still,
make sure he knows that He is my MAan, my shining glory



By Pooja


Take of the day with how i foresee the story and how i wish Maan's Char remains


The truth came out

Yr complete distrust initially has caused some doubt

For trust and trust to me is what love is all about

Even though at that moment I have walked  away

I have left behind my love with you to forever stay

Your words have fogged up my mind

And to see a the right way out is hard to find

Cause I believe u can do no wrong

My love for you makes me feel so strong

Even though our relationship seems to have hit a rock

My love is true ,this obstacle  it will cut through

Now I am beginning to understand the depths of your pain

But to make a rainbow it takes both sunshine and rain

I feel the regret of having let you go thru this on yr own

And for making u feel  once again that you are all alone

To have left you feeling down and blue

Even though the feelings in my heart were always true

Even though  I had promised to be yr moon

And shine in yr darkest hour

The hurt  made me  walk away,made me go far

I felt a mix of hurt ,anger and pain

The way I see it ..If u want the rainbow ,you have to put up with the rain

So even though I wasn't a part of this with you

Remember my love is true and pure

I think of you every night and day

Come what ..with you forever I shall stay

I can never let you go

Coz I love you more than u could ever know

To ease this hurt and pain if anything I cud do

I would do just abt do anything just for you

So Whenever u look at the stars,In eternal blue

Each star out there is a reason why I love you

So next whenever you think or feel you are alone,

and that there is no one there at all

Like before  I'll be right in front of you .to catch u everytime you fall

...............

By Pooja

Dil mein jo lehar uthe usse Armaan kehte hain

Khushi hoton pe chalke usse muskaan kehte hain

Yun to dhadakte hain lakhon dil is duniya mein

magar jo is den ki har devil ke dil ki dhadkan hai usse Maan /GC kehte hain


By Pooja


@
All- As for the precap

Even though I have left you  feeling all alone,

and that there is no one there at all

Like before  I'll be right in front of you .to catch u everytime you fall😳

..............................

By Tanu

Geet to MSK...

 
I wish to be the same that I was
Love you the best and make you happy always
Wish that I could turn your frown into smiles
I will do anything and even walk a thousand miles

If I could turn back time
I would go back where we were
We were like made for each other
And I don't know where we are

I hope I can win you back -
Because without you, my life is completely dark
Living without you, would be death
You are my life, my health, my wealth


By Shreya


dard saha tha, par kaha nahi jaata,
tumhe chot dekhi par nasoor dikha nahi pata,
kis or jaaon nahi jaanta,
tumse hai zindagi bas hoon yeh maanta,
aaj dorahe par hoon khada,
tum par karoon vishvas and khud se karoon daga,
bas ek pal mein hi zindagi badal gayi,
meri khushi dard he de gayi..
dard woh jo bhara na jaaye,
aanson woh jo beh na jaaye,
tumse nahi khud se hoon khata,
kyun nahi tumhe kabhi samajh pata,
har mod par ek naya chehra dikhati ho,
kabhi darti ho kabhi duniya se lad jaati ho..
 
GEET
une lagta hai ki main duniya se ladti hoon,
woh nahi jaante ki unke bina toh khud se bhi darti hoon,
nahi dur jaane doongi unhe,
ab nahi tootenge humare sapne,
apni haath ki rekhayoon se lad jaoonge,
sari duniya se chura kar unhe apna banoongi..
........................................

By Tanu

my turn.....
 
Come back to me
You and I both can see
We were meant to be
And I know you strongly agree

Cause you and I have a long history

A beautiful love story
Which neither has any mystery
Nor any sad misery

Together we must stay

Living life our way
Loving each other everyday
Saying come what may

Our paths always met

It was destiny I bet
For we were born as a set
Created to fall in the same love net

We fell in this pure net of love

That fitted flawlessly as a glove
I thank the heavens above
For sending me; u, my dove

Let our feelings take control

And together building a life our goal
You stole my heart and soul
So come back and make me whole

By An

When you broke my heart,

My shirt could not take the pain,
The buttons could not hold it together,
The thought struck, I was following you all in vain

πŸ˜†
πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

By Bri


Rip it
Throw it

Tear it
Trash it

Damn it
Darn it

Deal it a death blow
Take it slow

Lie low
Ride the flow

Fire will blow
Let it once again glow

Take it
Treasure it

- the now and the aftermath


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~~ Poetry 2 ~~

By Bri





He was standing waiting! Waiting for destiny to provide him the answers.

Provide it did, in bits and pieces, in disjointed jagged edged notes

Life is a big revelation

Every step that you take in it a boundary on it's own

Do you smile when you know you are dying?

Of course all that lives and breathes

Comes to an end eventually

The bones just sticks of design

To house a body

To decorate it with the vines of emotions

That tangle and trip you up

When you least know how to escape their grasp

You want a love story

Yet define not what all would make it

A LOVE

And ONE STORY

Euryale - a new dawn instrumental piano

NOTE: This is not a poem or verse - it is just some abstract thoughts

...................................


By Bri
 
Field of Dreams





I was standing reflecting

Puzzling over nothing

Bewitched in wonderment

Struck dumb to be silent

My broken field of dreams

Shattered, burnt, and shroud in gray misery

Rampantly disbelieving

Deeply morose

I stuck my hand to the receding dawn

Pleading for the mist of camouflage by design

To unveil to me

The greenery amidst the shroud of my broken field of dreams
 
By Bri



Ye Rang Hai Kya
Jo Badal Na Jayen

Ye Patang Hai Kya
Jo Ud Na Jayen

Ye Pyaar Hai Kya
Jo Tehar Na Jayen

 
....................

By Nupur

The Khura-Na ne Khan-Ko-Daan kar Diya
Fake Angoothi ko Asli Na Daam de Diya


By Anjana

@An & Mehr & Sin:

i thought you a dove

and expected your love

tell me it is a bad dream

"reality" makes me scream

 

You promised me an eternity

but, walked off when it got gritty

tomorrow i will still have dignity

but, maybe i will leave your city

By An

I know, you knew,
I  may stumble for a while,
But, soon will be with you,
To walk toward our mile.

😊

By Anjana

I slew all your dragons for you

I flew kites in my heart for you

but, you never let me know you

glad my love i did not show you

 

With your promises, my hope flew

But when i advanced, you withdrew

I gave you trust, please give me faith

Come back to me, I can't stand the wait

By An

You finally opened the window to let me see,
The darkness that haunts your past,
I drowned in that grimy, painful sea,
Give me a moment to understand your painful sight

Your hand still holds the string of my Kite,
It won't be long before I am right at your side,
I do not want you to wait for my return,
But, trust me that there will be a new turn. πŸ˜Š

By Jhan

in some corner of my heart
this hope I still harbor
you will not desert me
you have always been my savior

this harsh truth for so long I have carried
I still don't know for sure if I was ever truly married
But there is one more thing that will not be hidden
I love you even though I know it is forbidden

By An

Love is never forbidden,
It may be long hidden,
But, it has a voice of its own,
And when clouds clear,
It'll make someone special its own. πŸ˜Š

By Geet

MAan to Geet

let me gently guide you my love,
let me lead you to our world,
let destiny take over you,
let me swing you into my heart

By Bri

Rumors Rumors Go Away
Jyoti's Tabela has no Hay

Rumors Rumors Come Again
Making Geet Run Again

Rumors Rumors Fly Here and There
Making Baazigar phankas go Haywire

By Pooja

Love comes through the seasons
That give me plenty of reasons
Reasons that I Love You
And make us true

Love comes through the heart
That makes me want to never part
Your heart is all I need to get by
Without making me cry

Love comes through me
Which will set you free
I will give you all my love
That was sent as a gift from above

Love comes through you
That is always new
You come up with the sweetest things
And I know we can handle whatever love brings

Love comes through each one of us
That makes us a must
I don't think I'd make it without you
And your love so very true.

(The above is a part of something I wrote which suits Maan and Geet today)

By liv2laugh

Is show ka naam tho hai Geet huye sab se paraye
lekin har waqt karte rehthe agle cameo ki taiyyari
Ek cameo pura hua nahin ki karli agle cameo aaye
laghta hai lag gaye hai inn logon ko cameos ki beemari 🀣


By Minnie

Funguy Fungus and Saintly Sunday
Were busy making hay
Until a Tara from Hell
Made Fungus' heart swell
Off she went with him to infect Phorenland
Leaving Sunday in Heartbreakland
Hell ka Tara is now off to the woods
In comes Sunday as Red Riding Hood
Sunday the Saint will know of Fungus' transgressions
Call Hell ka Tara and say pass it on NO RETURNS! πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†πŸ˜†


By Pooja

I love you more than words could ever say,

I feel it growing in my heart each and every day,

All this love I feel

Has never felt so real

You give me something no one has ever given me,

It's something you cannot see

Love so strong, and so true

It makes me think of only you

This wonderful feeling you have given me

Makes me want to be with you endlessly

I hate to see you mad

I hate to see you sad

It makes me feel so bad

What you feel, I feel

That's because our love is real

I hate to see you cry

To always have to wonder why?

I'm sorry I sometimes do the things I do

That always make you feel blue

I'm sorry if I hurt you so

My anger is sometimes hard to control

 

I don't like when you feel insecure

Don't worry so much, because I'm sure

That no one can ever take your place

Because I love not only your beautiful face,

I also love the real you inside

There's no way I could have let you pass me by

 

Don't worry you're the only one for me

You, and I, and everyone else can see

I love you with all my heart

No one could ever make us part
 
..................

By Shreya

Na jhoot tha na sach tha,

Par unse humne chupaya tha,

Is baat ki itni badi sazaa mili humko,

Ki na reh gaya vishvaas apne ap par khudko,

Unsi doori na chahte hain,

Har dua mein uhi he maange hai,

Unki bina toh hum hai adhoore,

Na hai koi zindagi unke bina humari,

Har waqt who humare saath the,

Har musibit mein who humari dhal the,

Jab sabne choda akela,

Tab saath paas unke tha mera,

Ab who jaane ki baat karte hain,

Unki shabd mujhe kitna dard de jaate hain,

Par apne dard se zayaada unki phikar hai mujhe,

Kahin khud ko na ghayal karle hoke door humse,

Jaana chahe to jaa sakte hain,

Par ek baar meri baat toh sunte who,

Meri zindagi ka ateet tha,

Jisne mujhe bahut dard diya tha,

Ab who dard unke saath baantna chahati hoon,

Taki phir koi aaye humare beech mein yoon..

.....................

By Anjana

 
In darkness, I will be your sight
In weakness,  I will be your strength
In solitude, I am your shadow
In battle, I shall be your shield
In trouble, I am your saviour

By Anjana

Mein Stalking KARTA SAD SAD
Kyun? because he not rad dad
Geet did it with an unknown cad
That makes him particularly mad
Like he was kicked in the gonad!
So poor Maan is hurting real bad!
Lets all feel sorry for de stupid lad!


By An

On a stormy night,

Howls of a girl went unheard,

Stamping her, walked out a herd,

Tearing in pieces her knitted cloth of trust.

 

Clouds drenched her with its tears,

Sheltered her vulnerability,

Wiped-out marks of fragility,

Wobbly steps snubbed the jeers.

 

Knock of the dawn opened the gate,

She walked out of dingy lanes,

Travelled away far from the game of blames,

 In a desert, she saw the glimpse of soul mate.

 

Scorching Sun bathed her,

Mirage she thought,

Closed her eyes to absorb the man's sight,

Before it turns out be a nightmare.

 

Evening did a little jig,

She walked toward the shore,

Head held high, unmindful of stares,

Waiting for the arrival of spring.

 

Moonless night walked in,

A ship lost its way and came ashore,

The crew stayed on shore for hours four,

Girl met her man, found peace in the din.
😊
 

By Ash08:

Maan to Geet -

I don't want to hurt you
I don't want to mess with your feelings.
I did tell you once
It's just a matter of trust for us.

I can tell from your eyes
What's really on your mind
Too much confusion
I need a little more time.

Should I leave you behind?
Or can we start over?
Give me an answer
But please don't tell me the truth.

Don't say you just want to go
Don't say you are on your own.
Don't say you just want to go
Don't say you are on your own.

...............

By An

I gave you the power to own me,
And, opened the gate to hurt me,
I do not see a reason why you did so,
May be even you do not know you why did so,
Should I take a step forward and trust again,
Or walk away as there may be nothing to gain.

..........................

By Geet.a

I hate you Geet

            Don't make me witness the pain you go through,
I cannot look into your tear filled eyes, the windows to your heart,
they make my heart contract in pain,
pain for you, pain for myself and pain-for the sorry state we find ourselves in

How did this happen? How did I lose it all?
I thought you were happy, I thought you and me were "us"- a unity
Alas, I was wrong- once more..you proved me wrong,
and what is left now for me to speak?

No, I don't want to hear anything,
I refuse to look deep,
I am yearning for your touch
but I remove your gentle hand caressing my cheek

You say you are alone, do you even realize what I go through?
To shut myself for years, and then open fully to you
To give love a try, to allow life another chance,
and see what happened- life has walked past me without a second glance

I can't see those eyes without flinching,
They make me shrink with pain,
they make me angry, they make me sad,
and they make me love you- and hate myself for that

I hate that I love you, I hate that I care..
I hate that you make me cry, with one single tear from your eye,
I hate that I feeling I have, to help you and keep you by my side
I hate that I love you and that's why I hate to see those tears in your eyes

...................


By Pooja


I hate you, because I love you
my emotions need a break
I'm going out of my mind
I swear it's you I cant take
but I blame myself,
granted I didn't know who really you are
but with me I enabled you to get yr way
you kill me with your ways
and I'm always the one to blame
'why do you act like that'
'because you made me act this way'
But I can't complain cause I'm still around
I choose to put up with your charades
and be your fool and your clown
It's the faith that make me stay

Cause somewhere deep inside I believe u and I can see a new day

For I had closed the door to my heart
And  had vowed I wouldn't let anyone in,
I had locked the door and tossed the key
As hard, and as far as I could,
Love would never enter there again,
My heart was closed for good.
But Then you came into my life
And made me change my mind,
Just when I thought that tiny key
was no where I cud  find.
You held out your hand
And proved to me I was wrong,
Inside your palm was the key to my heart...
You had it all along.

....................

Posted by Pooja

Poem by Charlie Finn.

Don't be fooled by me.
Don't be fooled by the face I wear
For I wear a mask, a thousand masks,
Masks that I'm afraid to take off
And none of them is me.

Pretending is an art that's second nature with me,
but don't be fooled,
for God's sake don't be fooled.
I give you the impression that I'm secure,
that all is sunny and unruffled with me,
within as well as without,
that confidence is my name and coolness my game,
that the water's calm and I'm in command
and that I need no one,
but don't believe me.

My surface may be smooth but
my surface is my mask,
ever-varying and ever-concealing.
Beneath lies no complacence.
Beneath lies confusion, and fear, and aloneness.
But I hide this. I don't want anybody to know it.
I panic at the thought of my weakness exposed.
That's why I frantically create a mask to hide behind,
a nonchalant sophisticated facade,
to help me pretend,
to shield me from the glance that knows.

But such a glance is precisely my salvation,
my only hope, and I know it.
That is, if it is followed by acceptance,
If it is followed by love.
It's the only thing that can liberate me from myself
from my own self-built prison walls
from the barriers that I so painstakingly erect.
It's the only thing that will assure me
of what I can't assure myself,
that I'm really worth something.
But I don't tell you this. I don't dare to. I'm afraid to.

I'm afraid you'll think less of me,
that you'll laugh, and your laugh would kill me.
I'm afraid that deep-down I'm nothing
and that you will see this and reject me.

So I play my game, my desperate, pretending game
With a faade of assurance without
And a trembling child within.
So begins the glittering but empty parade of Masks,
And my life becomes a front.
I tell you everything that's really nothing,
and nothing of what's everything,
of what's crying within me.
So when I'm going through my routine
do not be fooled by what I'm saying.
Please listen carefully and try to hear what I'm not saying,
what I'd like to be able to say,
what for survival I need to say,
but what I can't say.

I don't like hiding.
I don't like playing superficial phony games.
I want to stop playing them.
I want to be genuine and spontaneous and me
but you've got to help me.
You've got to hold out your hand
even when that's the last thing I seem to want.
Only you can wipe away from my eyes
the blank stare of the breathing dead.
Only you can call me into aliveness.
Each time you're kind, and gentle, and encouraging,
each time you try to understand because you really care,
my heart begins to grow wings --
very small wings,
but wings!

With your power to touch me into feeling
you can breathe life into me.
I want you to know that.
I want you to know how important you are to me,
how you can be a creator--an honest-to-God creator --
of the person that is me
if you choose to.
You alone can break down the wall behind which I tremble,
you alone can remove my mask,
you alone can release me from the shadow-world of panic,
from my lonely prison,
if you choose to.
Please choose to.

Do not pass me by.
It will not be easy for you.
A long conviction of worthlessness builds strong walls
The nearer you approach me
the blinder I may strike back.
It's irrational, but despite what the books may say about man
often I am irrational.
I fight against the very thing I cry out for.
But I am told that love is stronger than strong walls
and in this lies my hope.

Please try to beat down those walls
with firm hands but with gentle hands
for a child is very sensitive.


By Shreya

I hate that i love you,

Even after the pain that u gave me,

Even after the words that killed me,

I love you the way i do,

I did when i first saw u,

I did when i looked into ur eyes,

Your eyes that held me to them,

Your touch that made my world spin,

But you thought of me as nothing,

As Nothing more than a thrwoaway bag,

Or was it coz i could never make u believe,

Believe that i would stay with u forever,

But does it matter now,

You lied to me anyhow,

Truth and faith is all that matters,

But you never thought as much,

Money fame and worldly pleasures,

Are nothing compared to our being together,

You deceived me, you lied to me,

But might be that was destiny,

Destiny which again told me not to love,

Love that killed me not once,

But with every breath that escaped my lips..


By Anjana

@Minnie πŸ€— don't know if u wrote but,  hope this one cracked u up as much as it did me...

I fear nothing just your tear
I hate that you are my dear
You aren't here yet feel near
my soul tainted by your smear

By Minnie

on DevTara

my views on the best couple in the whole world!

What was Fungus doing swimming in his thought to be Canadian swimming pool?  Saintly Sunday is a total charming chalu.. and smart recognizing Fungus' brawn is  more useful for moving sofa than his brains to talk sense over a mocha!

Hello hello Fungus
I need a mover
Can you come closer
Sure, I can, I am such a push over
My brawn is blazing shinier
But brain just goes dimmer
Without Hell ka Tara my trainer! 🀣


By Tanu

Itna dilkash hai ye Maneet ka safar
   Paaon kaanTon par ho to bhi hai phoolon par nazar 😍

 
Mashallah....kya Jodi hai.... Agar Munda badal sa garajta hai..to Kudi barsaat ki tara cham cham barasti hai...

 
Posted by Neha ahmad

copy pasting my favourite gazal for everyone - i think it goes well on  Geet doesn't it.



Mere Khuda! main zindagi ke azab likhoon ya Khawab likhoon

Ye mera chehra, yeh meri aankhaiN
Bujhey hoey haiN chiragh jaisey
Jo phir se jalney ke muntazir haiN

Voh chaand chehra, sitara aankhain
Voh meherbaaN, saaya_dar zulfain
JinhooN nay paimaaN kiye thai mujh se
RifaqatooN ke, mohabbatooN ke
Kaha tha mujh se ke aaey musafir, raah-e-vafa ke
JahaN bhi jaey ga hum bhi jaingaiN saath tere
BanaigaiN ratooN maiN chandni hum
To din main saeey bakhair daiN gaiN

Voh chaand chehra, sitara aankhaiN
Voh meherbaaN saaya_dar zulfaiN
Voh apney paimaaN rifaqatooN ke, mohabbatooN ke
Shikast maan gaey haiN
Na-janey abb kis kis reh_guzar ka minarah-e-rooshni hoey haiN
Magar musafir ko kia Khabar hai ?
Voh chaand chehra to bujh gaya hai !
sitara aankhaiN to so gai hain!
voh zulfain bay_saya ho gai hain
voh rooshni aur voh saey meri ataA they
so meri rahooN maiN aaj bhi haiN
ke maiN musafir raah-e-vafa ka

voh chaand chehra, sitara aankhaiN
voh meherbaan saya_dar zulfaiN
hazaroon chehrey, hazarooN aankhein
hazarooN zulfoon ka ek sailaab-e-tund lay kar
mere tauqub maiN aa rahey haiN
her ik chehra hai chaand chehra
haiN saree aankhain sitara aankhain
tamam hain saya_dar zulfaiN
MaiN kisko chahooN
MaiN kisko poojooN
MaiN kis ke saaey main baith jaooN

bachooN ke toofaaN maiN doob jaoooN

ke mera chehra, na meri aankhaiN

Mere Khuda! maiN zindagi ke azab likhooN ya Khuvaab likhooN


By Tanu

Geet to MSK
 
 
Kitne jalwe phizaon me biqre magar
    Maine abtak kisiko pukara nahin
    Tumkho dekha to nazren ye kehne lagi
    Humko chehre se haTna gawara nahin

By Beagle

     The heart of love is courage,
The core of courage is love,
Without the one there is no other.
Love listens with courage to care,
The courage to forsake fear, doubt, desire.
Love is wisdom, love is freedom, love is kindness.
Love listens.
Love speaks.
Speak love, and courage will listen.
Bea Early

By Tanu


Our meeting was more than fate.
God knew you were my soul mate.
 
Our time together means so much.
Each moment intensifies the need to touch.

 
Your love has reached my deepest soul.
Longing for you to daily hold.

 
May our love and need continuously grow.
Forever, LOVE, NEED, PASSION to each show.


By Shreya

I love u and u gave me pain,

You love me and I gave u pain,

What is this game destiny plays,

To show its all powerful it has its ways,

For once when I thought happiness would knock,

But then too remained nothing but an empty shock,

The truth, the lies, the bitter sweet memories,

Will be with me forever don't worry,

But the light of my life would walk away,

The veracity of the situation would never sway,

I love u more than my life,

But thru pain and all I will have to strife,

Wish you were there so that I could hold ur hand,

Wish u there so that time would no still stand,

The time stood still when u confessed,

The reality of ur life was the harshest,

I know not which would kill me first,

The pain of my heart or the words of deceit,

You hid the truth that was a part of you,

You made me a stranger you never knew,

Just tell me one thing, answer my question,

Did you ever love me or it was a mere illusion..


By  Anjana

Have faith in de Maan

his love for his woman

will surprise even him

he won't let her light dim

not more then momentarily

he loves her extraordinarly

 

He built a strong foundation

And has a sturdy constitution

he will appreciate the truth

figure out wat is at the root

then offer himself on a platter

after that nothing else will matter

.........................

By Pooja

The truth is out .

But For a second I didn't doubt

And with me and my love  around

U shall never hit the ground

 

The scars of the past shall not remain

All the bad memories shall wane

All the tears will be blown away

My love shall surround you and forever it will be this way

 

Let 's just fight the past

Not even a shadow will it cast

for what is a part of you is a part of me

that's how deep and true  my love is for thee

 

The past sure cant be undone

But does it really matter now that we r one

For I chose to be your moon and not yr sun

So that'll shine in yr darkest hour

And nothing will ever make me leave u or let you go far😳

.............................

By Beagle

HAAAAAAAAA πŸ˜† i was right....Maan striped today....whats the bet dev will strip of Monday? πŸ˜†

The NUNGA BOYS
They entertain
They scream and shout
They cry in pain
But all the while they show their biceps flex
To impress the opposite sex
The sun does not set
The moon does not shine
If they dont show off
their body divine
 

By SWKIA

 
Sums up both Maan and Geet I think no?
 
Ab ranjish hi sahi, par humaare pyar se navaqif to na the kabhi,

zer-o-zabar yun humaare dil ki, magar tumse hi zindagee aur uqbaa bhi

(uqbaa means afterlife)

 
By SWKIA

Ay mere khuda, gham to humaare hisse mein behisaab aaya,

thori si khushi jo maang li, tumhare kudrat ko ye raas na aaya,

 
In viraan galiyon mein log phir bhi mile, ek bhi insaan se mulaqaat na ho paaya,

Aur hum jinko farishta samajh baithe, Zalim woh bhi sirf aadmi hi ban paya,


By SWKIA

Tumhaara yun bekas hona, humein gawaara nahin,

Ruswa hum hue the magar, pasheman-kabhi nahin πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

(bekas= defeated & pasheman = ashamed (in this context)
 
She is saying :
 
I cannot see you so defeated my love,
Circumstances made people malign me but I was never ashamed ...the shame was NEVER mine!


By SWKIA

Dur kisi aangan mein timtimati roshni dekhte hain,
Ghar ki, tumhaari yaad mein yun kho jatein hain,

 
Shayad aise hi kahin hum bhi hote, gar, hum saath hote,
Kuch baatein karte, kabhi khafaa hotein, phir muskuraatein,
 

Boond khushii ke intezaar mein, hayaat se yun na guzar jaatein,
Itne nachaar na hotein jo khudha se qazaa bhi na maang paatein,

 

nachaar = helpless hayaat = life qazaa = death
 
She says ;
as I stare out of the train window (unsaid) at the flickering lights of someone's home, I remember those times, and you.... my love,
Perhaps this is how we'd be- if, we were together,
Maybe talking with each other, sometimes sulking and then again smiling,
 
Not like this, watching life go by while I wait endlessly for a drop of happinees,
So helpless, that ay khudha, I cant even ask for death to come by.
 
(Note: this WONT happen on monday in the show, MSK won let geet stare out of a train window.. just some of my thoughts...thats all)

..........................

By Pooja

Teri aankhon k aansoo ki kya keemat wasool karoon main
Tujhe rulanay walay say kya salook karoon main
Hain tere apnay he tere dushman
Warna tera naam b lene walay ko mita diya karoon main
Kyon tere aansoo dekh nahi pata main
Tu jo ro de to duniya ko rula diya karoon main
Tere zakham kya mere nahi hain
Dil kare tere har zakham ko bhar diya karoon main
Dil chahe tujhe har khushi diya karoon main
Duniya ki sari nafraton ko mohabbat mein badal diya karoon main
Hargiz na kar payengay mujhe tujh se door zamaane walay
Teri ek pukaar par sari doorian mita diya karoon main
Tere aankhon k aansoo ki kya keemat wasool karoon main
Tujhe rulanay walay say kya salook karoon main..

By Pooja

I could walk a thousand miles,

Just to see your perfect smiles.

Although I see what they don't,

They are missing what I w'ont.

My love will always stay pure and clear,

For your the one I do not fear.

Forever and always I'll stay strong,

For you my dear you are my bond.

 

Through clouds above and stars beyond,

My love, the thing I'm always fond,

Will stick with you forever end,

Our heart and soul will always blend.

While people might think were playing pretend

We will stand to defend

Your in my mind your in my heart,

Nothing can ever break us apart.

 

Combined as one,

Our life, Our Love

Will Last Forever.


By Pooja

I shall not be yr sun ,I shall not be yr moon but shall be yr star

So that I can be with you and shine even in yr darkest hour

By Anjana

@N
I demolish only when its required
A chameleon, who can change color
Jo-Glow is optimism personfied
Whereas my passion is logical order
There is reason and continuity here
Something often lacking elseshere
confussion in love is the norm
its only right that these two conform

By SWKIA

The love as I know.....

 

Won't know how to charm you with exotic calamari and champagne,

Only serve you an everyday meal you come home to, made with love' albeit plain,

 

Won't steep you in filthy riches or royal gems and stones to wear,

Only a smile that will heal, chase away your demons and your nightmares,

 

Won't bring you a fancy white corsage or a long black limousine,

Only this passenger to cushion for any bumpy ride you may see in between,

 

Won't build you any chateaus or palaces with enchanting domes,

Only someplace where you are never alone, a happy welcoming home,

 

Won't tell you tales of reaching for the moon or any stars, no promises as magnificent,

Only give you something more real, it stands more true and tall, my commitment

....................................

By Geet

I wait with halted breath and speeding heartbeat,
I wait for you to tell me how you feel,
You look at me with eyes full of love and trust,
oh my love, how do I tell you those eyes have given me a new birth

You are everything to me and more,
you are the one healed all my sores,
slowly by turns- you made me learn to live again,
Over myheart, body and soul, all rights you rightly claim!

How do I look at you,
whose eyes join mine in that vision falsely true,
How do I bear the warmth of your gaze,
that caresses and burns me till I'm all but dazed

But NO, today, I will not give in,
today- you need to know my predicament
I love you, and I feel your pain,
Like you felt when you held me that night in the rain

You promised me to stand by me forever,
and yet you are walking away
I reach out for you...and you're not here
I don't understand..I thought you had told me not to fear..

Here I am..alone once again,
alone from society, alone in my pain,
I thought I had found in you my soul,
Why did you leave me...why did YOU leave me all alone?

...............................

By Geet

Call's what you will, we are made such by love ;
    Call her one, me another fly,
    We're tapers too, and at our own cost die,
And we in us find th' eagle and the dove.
        The phoenix riddle hath more wit
        By us ; we two being one, are it ;
So, to one neutral thing both sexes fit.
    We die and rise the same, and prove
    Mysterious by this love


This is a part of John Donne's poem- whom I ADORe for his conceits- Called the Canonization


By Shreya

Jhoot sach kya hai nahi jaanta,

Tumhe meri ho bas hoon yeh manta,

Dard diya hai tumne sacah hai,

Par bharosa nahi kiya yeh shikayat hai,

Tumhari sach ne mujhe nahi toda,

Par tumne dard akele saha baant leti thoda,

Har mod par saath nibhane ka waada kiya hai maine,

Nibhaoonga chahe khade ho samne sab apne,

Tum se zayaada koi nahi mera,

Tumhari muskurahat se hota hai savera,

Bas thoda sa waqt chahiye mujhe,

Taaki phir koi hum pe oongli na utha sake'

 

Now from  geet:

 

Aap apne shabdo se peeche gaye,

Mujhe phir majhdhar mein chod gayi,

Na shikayat hai na rusva hoon,

Par phir ek baar zindagi mein akeli hoon,

Par ab mere paas hai yaadein,

Har us pal ki jo guzare aapke saath hain,

Jee loongi main unke saath,

Par kaash aapka pakad paati haath,

Aapki sazza ki haqdar hoon,

Har sazza has kar main sahoon,

Bas yehi kehna tha apse,

Ki main hoon sirf aapse..


By Pooja

The more I try to move away ,the closer you draw 

Its hard to resist cause yr masculinity is so raw


By Pooja

The truth has been told

O lord behold

In my mind there is confusion galore

For the unexpected truth came to the fore

Though I can see your plight

I need some time to get out of this dark and see the light

I hope our love doesn't lose its way

Hope that feelings don't go astray

My feelings for you shall always remain strong

Cause deep inside I know u can do no wrong  

I know for sure u r no cheat

Let me assure, you are still in my every heart beat

Together with our love we shall fight

Cause awaits a beautiful day, after this blemished night

Its about Us and no longer about you and me

My Love for you runs deep cant you see

Your Courageous act shall not be in vain

My Love will surround and you'll feel no pain

At the moment the situation is rife and I am walking away

But Remember my commitment to you is forever to stay 😳

.............................

By An

  Creator created characters,

  Developed a mind of their own,

  Contacted a brand new Air charter,

  Flew away to pull the story down.

 

  Poor Story looked at the creator,

  Pleading to save it from the doom,

  Seeking glory and not terminator,

  Wishing to flow absorbing a perfect storm.

 

 Sleepy creator looked confused,

 Where to pick from and where to put,

  Was making his brain completely fused,

  Finally, he gave-up and put a big dot.

........................

By Anjana

@An - i luv our rishta... yesterday u stopped becuz u read wat i wrote n it made u pause... today u make me pause wit utter crap 🀣

Good Creativity is confounding
story in short run often confusing
People watching see wat they want
If they don't like, they tend to rant
let the story unfold, see if it can enchant


By Ash

Once given the rainbows
I will not accept anything less
Why start something beautifully
When you know you will dump it in a mess?

Its a show after all
With fiction dictating terms
Detachment is not so easy
When it affects your dreams.

...........................

By Nupur

I didn't even dare watch today's epi after yesterday's Lovely Love Debacle!!
My Max MAAN Jaap Took a turn today, with Jaaping for Get-Guts-Geetli Andolan!
Here Goes:-

O Mera Max MAAN Re, Max MAAN re'Max MAAN re'.''
Use karungi apni akaal, Judaa Maat Hona Re'..
Main dim-wit hoon Yeh Maine Maana
Very Obvious bhi der se Samajh mein aata hai maine Jaana'..
Apna Puny gray matter Baache mei hai Joh Daal diya Maine....
Isliya Tumhare PRISTINE Pyaar ko maine der se Pehchaana!!!

O Mera Max MAAN Re Max MAAN re'Max MAAN re'.
Yeh Angoothi meri oongli se nikal Ke'.
Tumne Agar Sasha ko Diya Pehna'..
Toh Laharaake Aur Balkhake'.
Mera 1 1/2 times wala Saaya '..
Tumhare Taan se Lipat Jayega!

Nahi Chodungi apna yeh Armaan
Ki Main he Banungi Mrs Max MAAN!!!!!


~~~MAX-MAAN~~~ Replies:

Ms Geet Pendulum Handa, na Phir Humse tum Ulaajh Na'..
Nahin toh No Job & No Home status Mein Pad Jayogi''
Hume reject kar ke Pachataogi Kuch Aise''
Yeh Dim-witted ness saari Utaar Jayegi''.
Max-MAAN less existence ki Sazaa Tum Bhool Na Paogi'..!!!
Hume aur Humare MAGNIFIQUE Pyaar Ko Thokar Mat Lagaana'.
One more dopiness aur Main Chala Jaunga Nups Mandali mein yeh hai tumhe batlana!!!

~N~

By An

Pristine Beauty,
I can see through you,
Your blemish free soul shines,
showing me an image on a night,
When the light of moon dims.


Pristine Beauty,
I want to hold your hand,
You can trust me even in dark,
I'll never let go and walk away,
Leaving you alone in a lonely park.

Pristine Beauty,
I want us to grow old together,
Listening to each other for ever,
Never doubting or demanding trust,
Always believing nothing will go wrong ever.


,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

By Nupur

~MAX-MAAN-JAAP~

Geetli Ki Ungali mein angoothi
Angoothi mein Max MAAN Naam Ka Nageena
Ab toh Drool-Swoon-Thud Kiya Bina
Hum Mandali wallon ka mushkil ho gaya jeena.........

Aaj karte Hain Hum kuch vaade
Kyunki Max MAAN ko dekh kar kharab hote hain Iraade
Agar Max MAAN mill gaya Humko
Toh Mill-Jul Kar Pyaar se Share kareinge Usko.........

Ab toh Bhull he gaye ki kab MAAN ko yaad Na kiya
Shaam se Jyaada Raat ko usko Naam liya
Alas par Khandani Angoothi Usne Geetli ka naam kar diya........

Geetli Ki Ungali mein angoothi
Angoothi mein Max MAAN Naam Ka Nageena!!!!

~N~

.........................

By Bri

Birth and Death are the same thing

A caterpillar dies and thus is born the butterfly

The day dies to give way to the night

Sleep dies for wakefulness to be born

What the butcher calls the end

The chef calls a feast

In this jargon of belief

Lies are told

and Lives are on hold

Bargains!!!!!


By liv2laugh: Jhan

@ All
CONFESSION BEFORE CONFRONTATION
This is what we want there will be no concession
What Dev did to Geet was an abomination
Then why are you even thinking of his canonization 😑
We know what we want and there is no suggestion
CONFESSION BEFORE CONFRONTATION

You may want to give this due consideration
We know you completely understand the situation
You are well acquainted with our determination πŸ˜‰
Don't force us to make this our next mission πŸ˜‰

By Agas

I know I mean the world to you
and nothing matters more for you
Only if you dare to say 
will I accept you love today
Hearing your heart in words 
is the "Neev" for teh relationship to work


By Geet.a

A short few lines

We look into each other,
eyes- mirroring reflections of our heart's love,
united in that short moment- you and I,
And we yearn to be united forever

Say what you feel, reveal all your love today,
I won't, I can't let you go, I won't let you walk away,
Today, I need to hear from you what your eyes say
The game is over you think..and yet...once more, come out and play

She has left, once more left me waiting,
I yearn for her love and her touch,
I yearn for her to confess her feelings,
I want to make her mine,I want to be rid of that 'BUT'
And yet, she ran away once more...and left me yearning for her touch

FOR GEET

How do I reveal what my heart feels for you,
I never felt so much. And yet, I feel more for you.
Please let me go, lest I break down and cry,
I don't want to hurt you no more, and so I refuse to try

You ask me to express what I feel,
Why do you think it's easy to do?
You haven't loved with a virgin heart of a girl,
who's come with such a repugnant past

It's not easy my love, to express my love for you,
and yet I will do it...I will try, because I don't want to hurt you

........................


By Pooja


Keep giving me the chance
But on the chance i shall never dance
I cant keep talking to myself but cant say a thing to you
Cause I am still in doubt whether yr feeling for me is true
I am not willing to realize you r god send
Be nice be angry ..walk away nothing wil make me bend
So I'll not say what u want to hear ,ill make an excuse
Cause i am a blown fuse
🀣


By An

Man, you need to go to the market,

Buy yourself shirts plenty,

Otherwise, there are girls plenty,

Who will capture you in their rackets,

Turn you into an Egyptian Mummy,

And, start eye-locks with your live dummy.

🀣

By An

I am here, close to you,

Listening to your heart beats,

Waiting for you to give me a clue,

To begin a journey in search of blessed sights.

.....................

 By Sia


@Vru
 
your heart failure farmaish
 
We are all mere mortals and to be alive we use a fist sized pump,
Strangely its just meant to do its job ; its share of blood dump,
 
But alas, there's more to the tale, and the secret it seems,
The poor thing gets foxed into love, feelings and dreams,
 
Please allow it to just get on with its primary function,
Burdening it so, will destroy it with the darned flow of emotions,
 
Let the smooth blood flow through your arteries and feed you well,
You wouldnt ever believe me, when this is what I tell,
All the stress, sadness and emotions do overwhelm,
It cant handle so much, it'll collapse under the potent spell-

......................

By Pooja

How can I say nothing when you look that hot
I lose my sense and my thought
When u look that way
U take my breath away
U wanted to hear that I love you
I couldnt say it but my feeling is true
So i said Sasha
Cause i wanted to avoid ne tamasha
Now that u are angry ,I'll make it up to you
Cause I am truly madly deeply in love with you
😳


By Tanu

Meera  to Dev...

'Khoye khoye se rehte ho sada...
kya wakai mein soch rahe ho ..yah hai ye dikhave ki ek..ada?'


Dev to Meera....

'Soch raha hun...kab tak chupaunga main ye tumse....
 Raaz jo hai mera...ki aab tak dimag bagair jee saka hun kaise!'
 

By Pooja

When I am wrapped up in your arms,
I feel safer than ever before.
When you stare into my eyes, its a feeling I can't ignore.
When I am close to you I am overwhelmed with happiness.
You're what I've been waiting for my whole life.
You're someone I can share my love with,
you take away my fears.

I am so filled with delight

That this night looks extra bright
Words can't express how much I love you.
But, through this short amount of time,
I hope you realize that my love for you is real.
With you, is where I want to be
because I found someone who loves me just for me.
You give me all the reason in the world
to believe that you won't hurt me in anyway.
And if I ever lost you,
I don't know what I would do.
You probably think I am crazy,
but truthfully I'm not.
Every time that were together,
it's a whole new experience for me.
All I see in this world,
is no one else but you and me.



By Pooja

I  have changed for you

There isn't nething I wudnt do

To see yr perfect smiles

I'd walk  miles

To u and the unborn I say

With u both forever I'll stay

Come whatever may

For there is peace in my soul
After such a long awaited time
That there is love in my life
A love of melody and rhyme.

Once you took hold of my heart
I knew no other could have reached
As whispered fate took my hand
To levels only you could reach.

Now there is no room for lie

There is no need to ask why

For everything between u and me Is real and true

Its been that way right thru

The moon and the stars will brighten up this night

The heavens above will show their delight

So who wud have thought I wud dance

But with u arnd how can I let go of the chance

You in my life
Will live eternally
I knew the first time we met
You were meant for me😳


By An

This is dedicated to Vini: The future star of the Tinsel town

πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† (Just for fun, no offence to anyone. )

Me the Actor,

Who was meant to drive a tractor,

Someone told me in the farm,

I have all the charm,

Acting is waiting for me,

I am meant to regale everyone.

 

My first shot,

I smiled,

My second shot,

I smiled,

My third shot,

I smiled.

 

Expressions were never found,

Cause I dumped them in the dry pond,

They made me the devil,

Despite knowing I am civil,

I jumped up and down,

To make me the happy clown.

 

My fourth shot,

I smiled,

My fifth shot,

I smiled,

My sixth shot,

I climbed a tree,

To breathe air free.

 

A girl is my fan,

Coz I smile again and again,

The scenes never gain,

And, viewers think I am a pain.


My seventh shot,

I am gonna find a new show hot.

,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

By Meg

Maan...


Bahut sexy, bahut kathor
Bahut pyaara, bada shaitaan
Yeh hai hamaara maan

Thoda gussail, thoda smiley
Girls think of him very highly
Yeh hai hamaara maan

Geet ko hasaata, Geet ko rulaata
Lekin jab bhi dekho Geet ko hi bulaata
Yeh hai hamaara maan

πŸ˜†

By Tanu

As i stood there ....stalking forever

She descended in her godess like attire

Softly as her skin shone
I thanked babaji for we were alone

Coming near ...to fulfil a hearts desire
I touched her ...wit a passionate fervor

..............................

By An

You cannot see me,
But, I can feel your presence,
You are standing close to my mother,
Watching her holding me within her.

I am waiting to hold your finger,
Imitate your angry looks my dear stranger,
Throw tantrums to fulfill all my demands,
Give you reasons to smile in dozens.

You'll be my father -- the best,
I can hear your words sweet,
Assuring me of walls to draw on,
A life full of your guidance.

Wipe away all my mother's sorrow
Be there for me when I am born tomorrow,
We will have lots of fun together
I'll make you Dad Proud!

.........................

By Pooja

A poem dedicated to Maneet on completion of Doodle and Nissar's Parineeta metaphor
 
What is love, but an emotion,
So strong and so pure,
That nurtured and shared with another
All tests it will endure?

What is love, but a force
To bring the mighty low,
With the strength to shame the mountains
And halt time's ceaseless flow?

What is love, but a triumph,
A glorious goal attained,
The union of two souls, two hearts
A bond the angels have ordained?

What is love, but a champion,
To cast the tyrant from his throne,
And raise the flag of truth and peace,
And fear of death o'erthrow?

What is love, but a beacon,
To guide the wayward heart,
A blazing light upon the shoals
That dash cherished dreams apart?

And what is love, but forever,
Eternal and sincere,
A flame that through wax and wane
Will outlive life's brief years?

So I'll tell it on the mountaintops,
In all places high and low,
That love for you is my reason to be,
And will never break or bow.



Pooja

All the hues come together to make white
Their union brightens up the night
The heavens show their delight
Come any storm .the flame of love shall always burn bright

.....................

By An

Near a stream in a rocking chair, there sat a word player watching the dance of the words. The words were also crooning softly a tale of love. Each word held within itself a story of the pair walking on the unknown path of companionship. The two were shy but sure and committed to each other for life. The man said, "I may not be you and carry your baggage but I'll carry you all my life." The girl said, "we are equal and bonded for life." They are imperfect but perfect for each other. Words when spoken without a stop of doubt create a life blessed by the Queen of Joy and lead toward the door of Bliss. The word player smiled, picked-up his quill, and weaved the blissful fate of two souls ready to begin the journey together on a pebble dotted path.

Birds were returning home,

When they saw a girl in white,

Stepping out of a car in the night,

Looking like the most precious pearl.

 

The air was breathing calmly,

Wind was roaming in anticipation,

It was the celestial blessed occasion,

When two souls will commit for life.

 

Stars lit-up the sky as never before,

The fire was waving wildly,

Harmony of dark was smiling mildly,

Night beings were all agog.

 

The man waited for her,

He wore an aura of serenity,

Sure about the love meant for eternity,

Ready to promise a walk of lifetime by her side.

 

Birds hid themselves on boughs,

To watch two souls promising,

Buds of happiness blossoming,

The darkest storm saying goodbye.

 

Peacocks of horizon danced in joy,

When the man demolished doubts,

Asked her to hold his hand tight,

And, they both walked toward home,

Looking at each other with Pride.

 ,,,,,,,,,,,,,

By Ash

I've made a vow, to no one but you
I pledge my love to forever be true
I'll take care of you and treat you right
I'll lay beside you all through the night
I'll feed you and clothe you and keep you warm
I'll hug you and kiss you and give shelter in the storm
I'll help you and guide you and clear a path
I'll protect you and shield you from an angry man's wrath
I'll listen to your problems help you solve them too
I'll make you a rainbow and let the sun shine through
I'll take your side even if you're wrong
Just to prove our love is strong
I'll plant you flowers and make them grow
They'll be a symbol of love that only we'll know
I'll whisper your name when no one is near
So low that only you can hear
You'll feel my love even if we're apart


.....................

By Shreya

Dil ke baat zubaan par aaye,

Ek dhage ne baandh diye humare saaye ,

Din raat ab tum paas ho humare,

Har raaste mein tum saath ho humare,

Aanken kholi toh unka chehra nazar aaya,

Saath mein muskaan who humare mukh par laaya,

Har din unki, har raat humari,

Nahi chupi hai koi baat ankhi adhoori,

Khushiyaan ab hain daaman mein

Sari duniya se nahi chupani hain fizaayon se,

Ab nahi dar lagta hai,

Ab man nahi ghabrata hai,

Saari duniya se ladkar humne,

Paa liye apne aur kuch sapne…

...........................

By Jhan

Maan today was in complete stalker mode
Geet looked like a nymph from some heavenly abode
First thing in the morning on awakening
Geet sees Maan's face and is left blushing
They look at each other counting blessings
Maan spies on Geet while being in hiding.

Daadi comes with gifts and acquaintances πŸ˜ƒ
who want to see who tamed MSK with their own eyes
Daadi tells Geet that she is now the family's flag bearer
She will represent the family's pride and honor πŸ˜•
This dialogue of daadi's I know Geet will remember 😲
To keep Dev's crime hidden from everyone Geet will endeavor πŸ˜”
πŸ˜”

When Meera protested that she had yet to see his intended
To Geet in the window MSK pointed. πŸ˜‰
Meera stood stunned at the suddent turn of events
and watched MSK stare at Geet as if in a trance 😍
His love for Geet was clear for her to see
She knew Dev was in more trouble than he could perceive. πŸ˜† πŸ˜†


Geet was being pampered in preparation for her big day
She was scared someone would see Maan and asked him to go away
But daadi came back and Maan had to hide behind the screen πŸ˜† πŸ˜†
The girls trying to get kudi to change was a funny scene πŸ˜† πŸ˜†


The scene I loved the most was the hospital one
MSK taking Geet to the doctor was so awesome
This shows his care for her and the unborn baby
I fell a little more in love with him, call me crazy πŸ˜† πŸ˜†
Their bonding over the baby's picture was a pleasure to behold
This is one of the best scenes to date truth be told 😳


Mira is going to tell Dev that Geet is MSK's fiancee πŸ˜’
Tomorrow is going to be the big day πŸ˜”
I am interested to hear what the loser has to say 😑
it is not that I can decipher anything from his expressions anyway πŸ˜† πŸ˜†
A nice girl like Meera does not deserve to be Dev's friend
His reaction tomorrow is key, much will on it depend


Until tomorrow my judgement I shall reserve
This much consideration the CVs definitely deserve
Sorry if I bored you with my tale
I was lazy and did not want to do an analysis in detail πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

By Beagle

Is someone going to open the new den

I do not want to shock the turkish men
by wearing a dress with my bra peeping
My modesty sleeping
I do want to reserve
but I also want to preserve
all the praise I deserve
minus the bra showing!
 
By Tanu

aby Maneet......dedicates a poem to Daddy Maan


You are my hero, Dad
You're my secure foundation.
When I think of you, I'm filled with love
And fond appreciation.
You make me feel protected;
I'm sheltered by your care.
You're always my true friend; and Dad,
When I need you, you're always there.
You have a place of honor
Deep within my heart.
You've been my superhero, Dad,
Right from the very start.
By Joanna Fuchs


By Jhan


MSK has revealed his true color πŸ˜‰
He is a stalker like none other 😎
Over kudi's beauty the munda can slobber πŸ˜†
now that she is going to be his forever ☺️

........................

By Darlunia

Till then...here is a placeholder!

It's a date they promised...one for the books
No wine or chocolate...just Maan and his looks

Geet in white was a vision to see
The writers...finally woke up and restored the chemistry

They spoke their heart and made us cry
Seeing them together...pinch me...its not a lie

The taveez is tied...their souls meet
The Parineeta metaphor...Doodle, its finally complete!

...................

By Pooja

What a perfect date

Both said their part

Both touching each others heart

He went all out

Clearing her each and every doubt

Now  destiny's bond shall last forever

The feeling shall leave never

For neither is evr gonna let go

And their  love forever will show

For his day shall begin with you and will end with you

And the feeling with each passing moment will be as true

.................

By Pooja

The past has been left far behind
There is no better person than u I could find
For u r so pure and divine
And now that you have confessed everything will be fine
No one will ever doubt
Even if your past ever comes out
For I believe you
and know each word of your's is true
Destiny is what binds u and me
This is the brightest night U and I shall ever see



By Ash

Hold me close, hold me tight
Make me thrill with delight
Let me know where I stand from the start
I want you, I need you, I love you
With all my heart

Ev'ry time that you're near
All my cares disappear
Darling, you're all that I'm living for
I want you, I need you, I love you
More and more

I thought I could live without romance
Before you came to me
But now I know that
I will go on loving you eternally

Won't you please be my own?
Never leave me alone
'Cause I die ev'ry time we're apart
I want you, I need you, I love you
With all my heart

By Meg

here's a poem for RTM sequence before I sign off...


It's just the two of us In a closed room for the night
Somehow my heart tells me not to let you out of sight
You're shivering you need the warmth my heart can give
And deep down inside you know I'm the reason you live.....


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~~ Lists ~~

By Caco

Maan's reaction when Geet tells about baby according to Vini's Time Theory 🀣
 
1 week later: O_O still looking at Geet with shocked face eyes popping out
 
2 months later: Kya?
 
3 months later: ROCK MAHIIII stareeeeeeeee
 
4 months later: Kyun? Kab? Kaise? Kahan?
 
1 year later: par maine to tumhare saath kuch nahi kiya? dont tell me this is the fault of my buri

nazar? πŸ˜• (🀣🀣🀣)


By Tanu

here are sum words...I want ur instant  X-rated reaction
Yaani INSTANT X-RATEDNESS!!!🀣🀣🀣
Letz see who gets the most X-rated!!!🀣

1) Car - the BONnet Blushing to CONnect
2) Street light - for MSKs striptease..on the pole...🀣🀣🀣
3) Computer - to Phocus on the ASSets πŸ˜†
4) Smoke - in my eyes watching Maneet Embarrassed
5) Pink - Time for some ACTION

By indigoblues (Meg)

Ahem Ahem..Brij is a very nice person...I mean I will always be grateful for OYE...but not for the Psychopath tendencies...and all that vampire-ness(kitna khoon peeta hain!)...and...forget him, this is about Maan.

Maan's favourites.

Favourite Food: Hara Bhara Kabab
Favourite Restaurant: Dhaba
Favourite Accessory: Taaveez
Favourite Clothes: He prefers being shirtless
Favourite Drink: Anything Geet doesn't want him to drink
Favourite Song: Mahi Ve/Hum Tum Ek Kamre Mein Bandh Ho
Favourite Colors: Green and yellow
Favourite Place: His office
Best spot for making out: Any khandar, his car, his outhouse..all private places.
Favourite Film Star: Doesn't have time for watching movies when he is living one himself. Cool

By Jyo

 My new Riddle...Who will Vicky fall in love with...options are...
1)Geet...
2)NT...
3)Rajji...
4)Pari...
5)Rasika Rathod
6)Sasha
7)Pinky
8)Tasha
9)Sameera
10)New entry

By caco

NONE OF THE ABOVE....

the answer is: DAAKU AN 🀣

By Anjana

Gawd - They shud officially rename this show UTTARAN 🀣 🀣 🀣

1. Dev's ka ex picked up by Maan
2. Maan ka ex picked up by Rich Dicky
3. Geet ka ex with Nt
4. Sam ka ex with Geet

Only pavitra character here is NT 🀣 🀣

By Anjana

How to Stalk:
1. Have newspaper, file handy
2. Be near doorways or plants u can hide behind
3. Wear black unless that does not blend in
4. shades help unless indoor

By Sin

a) master the art of non-chalance

b)always have a back story to justify ur actions

c) if caought.... always play the blame game...and put the investigator on defence


By Pallu

JYO...PALLO's wishlist on open display-

Pallo trying hard not to be greedy...ONLY 5 wishes JYO!!! REASONABLE DEMANDS!!!

1) Atleast 10 BRIMAAN steaming scenes!!!
2) One SEDUCTIVE dance between them
3) Scarf over face, eyelocks and bumpings
4) Some sensuous dream sequences
5) A passion filled hug....bordering on TUMBLING OVER 🀣


By Pallo


Pallo dissecting STRIP scene....

It is a simple process....Understand it the PALLOgical way!!!🀣

S- Shrugs off first layer of clothing!
πŸ˜†
T-Tosses it aside
πŸ˜‰
R-Rips apart the remaining bacha kucha fabricπŸ€ͺ
I- Instant drooling syndrome attacks everyone
😍
P- pulse rate *KABOOM*
☺️

🀣🀣🀣


By Bri (BDgT)

@Friendship/Dosti: A few things:

1. One can be lovers but need not be friends

2- One can be married but need not be friends

3. One can be swayed by desire but need not be friends

Friendship is something that comes without a by-your-leave and without any strings attached!


Friendship between two people who are attracted to each other and love each other like Maan and Geet is like adding another color to the canvas of their relationship.


There is no number game here, there is no before and after conundrum, there is no order.

Life does not follow a set pattern so doesn't  love nor does friendship!

Love happens spontaneous
Friendship is cultivated

I am happy they are true lovers, true friends and true what ever may come in future :-)

Ok I would love some "true enemity" too :-)

By Pooja

Adding to the above ^^^

All love that has not friendship for its base is like a mansion built upon sand.

Love is friendship set to music.



By Isha (IndiaforumsID)

- Maan in black - HOT check

- Maan in casuals - HOTTER check

- Maan daring (sorta) the crowd- Ooooh check

- Maan brings Geet happiness - BIG check

- Maan smile - SIGH check

- Maan in rain - *FAINT* check

- Maan Geet holding hands and running in rain - *THUD* check

- Maan Geet bonding under rain - check

- Maan going to mow down the goons - CANT WAIT TO WATCH check


By Anjana


TOP Five Rumours of de Day:
1. Guru is kwitting!
2. Baby is bye bying
3. Maan off to jail to enjoy love/shove with Brij while GC off to make love in Bangok with DC
4. Dev dumps NT and Geet dumps Maan, so DevEet can rock baby cradle together
5. NT loves Maneet as much as Jo loves tabellas and Caco & Faz & Ayeesha like Brij ka Talwar

By Anjana


Watched! Let me Employ sleep deprived logic!
1. Maan Singh Khurana perfoming raslilla in dhoti-kurta?  NOPE! NDTV ka Jankrashtami Programming? Yes. 
2. S.B.S. = Sabka Brain Satyanash karta with misinformation 
3. Faz ka post phaado n cool-aid drink maro


By Polki


Here are the titles for all the people who finished their analysis one pages 1 and 2

Eis den ki ragini- Vini

Taj of the den- Anj,

Sab hain tuj pe sweet-Geet,

Sab ko dil ka dorah dene wali- Sarirah,

Pareeneta theory ki acharya- Labanya

Aha moment dene wali chica- Nibiha

Hume pyaar se monitor karne wali chori- Gouri

Apna aur Faz ka tamasha banane wali- Ayeha

Pyaar ki bhakti karne wali- Jyoti

Mahi ki acchaia sunane wali- Sonia

Kisi ko rulana na chahe- Lana

Rangoh ki Swami- Ami

By Anj

Steps to Subdue Stupid MAN
1. Kidnap Munda with Chlorform
2. Tie him up and tape his mouth too
3. Seduce him awake with Garlic...also mutes his vampire powers
4. Tell wat u need to
5. Running shoes to escape phast phast

By jyoti :

6)Wear a sexy saree and backless blouseπŸ˜†

7) Wear sexier lingerie underneath

8) Make him drink a glass full of Protein-Shake

9) BHAGOOOOOOOOOO 🀣 

best way to punish...turn him on and LEAVE 🀣

By Anj

@PG - goood leave donkey work to Dev 🀣 🀣 Afta today am gonna call him DUFFER Dev:
1. itna slow despite bike
2. Can't confess even wit made to order father
3. sunglasses indoors...
Demoted from Dangerous Dev to Duffer Dev 😈

@JO - u maybe the only 1 who gets this... I see him on the cliff n BANG:
1. Sujal
2. Dev
3. Thakur
4. Summit of KK
5. Arjun
Isn't that the same GODDAMN SOAP CLIFF EVERY SOAP STUD CHILLS AT?

Geet running afta car:
1. Kaajaal chasing afta Dev's car before she leaves n forgets about him entirely
2. Kripa losing her baby during Angad's non-marriage to Mishti round 1
3. Arohi running in white in the rain afta finally figuring out wat was stressing him...lead to her mindblowing admission of love and AHole's CRUEL REJECTION via Engagement to Nutty

Need i mention, am not fond of either cliched scene... but, hopefully they will make the later as interesting as they did the former with shirt ripping 🀣 🀣 🀣 I almost expected him to beat his chest tarzan style and jump of the cliff 🀣 🀣 Whack Imagination i know!


That mansion's a bhoot bangla i tell u..... its total bhool bhulaaya space and every occupant a bigger loser then the one before!

1. Dramatic daadi who iss despo to marry off all her grandsons to whomever she can πŸ˜† πŸ˜†
2. Mein Stalking Karta with his attic full of luggage and past baggage

3. Dev who is a dense duffer with his own dog collar


By Anj

PG - Coles Notes (short version) - Seven stages of love:

1. HAB (Attraction)
2. UNS (Infatuation)
3. ISHQ (Love)
4. AQEEDAT (Reverence)
5. IBADAT (Worship)
6. JUNOON (Obsession)
7. MAUT (Death)



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Sun 29

i do not think maan has in him to hold himself any longer...the guy is passionately desiring her...........now he may giv eher the ultimatumn.....keh do warna sab kucch kar doonga🀣...my munda is phaaasttttt.......we will soon see it.........

Sun 29

jyoti munda will once again twist and turn the kudi on a new song  just like kurbaan hua.........once the baby comes out ..it will have lots of questions and kicks for papa maan.....🀣

By An

he problem with Geet and Mann, they have become too serious about every thing and love talking in code language πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† ... Straight talking suggested. Mann to Geet: I Love You and now get lost. Geet to Mann: I know I love you but I have doubts, now you get lost πŸ˜†

By Nabiha

MAAN SINGH KHURANA'S FINACEE MISSING

Geet Handa- Fiancee of Maan Singh Khurana, MD of Khurana Construction has been reported as missing since last Friday night. She was last seen at 9:40PM. 24, September, 2010 roaming around the Manali market buying bangles. She is described as fair female, 5'4", 110lbs, slim build, brown eyes and long brown hair. She was wearing a yellow salwar kameez and chappal.

She is diagnosed to be suffering from amnesia and she needs to be reminded of her status of life everyday. Without it she is always in doubt and at times completely lost. Anyone who may have had contact with geet are requested to check the following things once they meet her.

1.      Ask her anything, if she denies, then maybe you're close.

2.      Make a statement and ask her to say it back after 10 mins. If she forgets, then positive.

3.      Show her something genuine and ask for her opinion. If she replies "fake" then its definitely her.

4.      Ask her to walk anywhere indoor; if her dupatta gets stuck then your good luck brought you to the right person.

5.      Ask her where she wanna be? If the reply is "square 1" then immediately contact the following address.

Maan Singh Khurana

Outhouse (tabela)

Delhi.

Avoid contacting:

1.      Khurana Construction (Dev is there) and

2.      Hoshiarpur

Anybody with any information about her whereabouts will be highly compensated.

Caution: Do not by mistake touch her dupatta, it turns her on and only Mr. Maan knows where the switch off button is.


By Minnie

Announcing the Grand Opening of a new chavanni chaap business OMGee Supplies - When the Den goes OMG Thud .. remember OMGee 🀣

Now Selling for chavvanis *
Water
Smelling salts
Box of tissues
I-love-CVs post cards
Maan and Geet dolls
Taveez for your hum-suffers 🀣
MaanDreamy open button shirts 🀣
Zillion-repeat-watchitis eyedrops 🀣
Chocolate flavored protien shakes for energy 🀣🀣
Scrambled Eggs 🀣🀣🀣

* Hurry offer valid while supplies last


By Minnie

@ All - Ek epis.. and virtual kisses ki bauchaar 😲.. I think I need to sell Umbrellas for the CVs 🀣🀣🀣

Kabhi maare joote
Kabhi maare pappi
Yeh Den wale hain bade sanki 🀣🀣

Pallo

Oye Faz.....kitthe chali???

Studies!!! Oh yeah....Carry on gal!!! Pallo will try to send telepathic concentration!!!! I'll concentrate on the hug here and send the feeling to you...channelize it on ur books!!!!
🀣

Pallo luves ya DA BRIJ!!!!

And yeah make sure the siggies have atleast one BRIMAAN!
🀣

By Sana (1kaarzoo)

if maneet have jungle mein mungle what song the baby will sing chalo batao!!!! πŸ˜†

Pallo


chaddi pehen k phool khilaa hey 🀣


By Shonuu

hats off to geet

the gal does have guts...see maan was involved with brij, adi and nakul...but he never dare to go against the so called society and confess but geet . she truly believes in "jab pyar kiya toh darna kya"...

now i got that why the hell sasha ripped off her sari???why she cant see geet with maan?? Dono taraf ha aag braber lagi hui"

after that CONfession i want jyoti to give some CON riddle on that freshly baked couple...
🀣


By Caco

Geet behind Sasha Mere pyar ka bana diya such a tamasha
I was happy and gay
But for this Geet i left everything at bay
Now she gets back at me with this
I shall go and in her face piss
 
🀣 🀣 🀣

By Shonuu

caco my sexy poet...............🀣🀣🀣.... now maan will be back to his sacha pyar.... NAKOOOL🀣...singing.."yehi apradh main baar baar kerta hon admi hon admi se pyar kerta hon..and you nakool you should console him now... and tell him that this kinda love is tension free, confession free plus expectation free ...as there is no chance of pholo phalo.... 🀣🀣 and golden benefit,,, jab chaho mukar jao.... no problem..........🀣🀣🀣

By Pallo

I tried to get straight for her
But did she even care???
While I struggled to channelize ma orientation
She ogled over Sasha in fascination
And now she throws it in ma face
Challenging me in this OH-NOT-SO-STRAIGHT race!!!!!

By Blue

Still watching the episode..........and NAKEWL.!!.....🀣🀣🀣 i burst out laughing!! 🀣His expresssions.....TOO good...and why does he sound so sad always..?? 🀣

Sana: he has stayed in khurana mansion where the men were ghumshuda sad n gay🀣🀣 lets bring some auratzaad in his life see the change then🀣🀣


By Pallo

Caco....what an irony...in that show Muskaan cudn't get preggy coz Rahul was impotent and in this show she is carrying a life at 18 years!!!!

I CALL THAT PROMOTION!!!!
🀣🀣🀣

By Kawaii

Maan's ishara! Kudi zara aaja! Kudi bole na na! Maan kare gussa! Kudi phere munh! Maan kare hunh! Maan utre maidan mein! "Ab tera kya hoga kudiye...?" 🀣



By An

@Polki:: We will order Cement and make demented all cemented πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† ... It was a fun episode after a fiasco. Kudi ka brain work karega ... Mann has the screw driver πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

By Shonuu

hello deviyo,sajjano....and mix


menu ummeed hegi... mere dialogues channge san..... but tussi

 stop cursing geet pen ji for that homo dialogue ...that was from me to sasha... menu os duckling naal pyaar hega.... per kadi himmat nai hoi...
so dont misinterpret that.... if you dint mind adi asking for maan's finger..then i think this one was less x-rated....
will try to improve

tada apna
Barry Dhillon..
😳

By Jyo & Lana


Jyo the CV's would have wondered do we also fall in the category of 'mujhe Sasha maam pasand hai' if we didn't go gaga over MSK's looks!! πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† Seriously they would have thought we r all bend the 'merry' way!! 🀣 Now this adoration will make them sigh in relief thinking ok all is normal & under control!! πŸ˜†

By Pallo

Ash baby if she cudn't control who stopped her??? She cud chance marofy and exact whatever she wanted outta him...he was in a precarious situation.....HIS IZZAT WUD HAVE BEEN IN HER HANDS!!!!!🀣


By Swati

@Jyo: IF NOT JUNGLE MEIN MUNGLE, IS IT OUTHOUSE MEIN JINGGLE JINGGLE???



By Minnie

Geet aur Meera, Dev ke pyar ki maari inko chahiye Humdard ka Tonic NainTara 🀣

By Meg

Repeated mentions of 'bold' scenes in Geet have drove popular cast member Gurmeet Choudhary ill. Everyone is blaming it on bad weather conditions, improper working hours, improperly manged sets and Gurmeet's girlfriend Debina, who was scheduled to perform in his reel life engagement a few weeks after their real life one. I think for his own safety Gurmeet will not go bold unless a doctor's certificate is given to him stating : I, Doctor XYZ, hereby state that Gurmeet is fit enough to shoot  'bold' scenes.

🀣

By Jhan

I think it is high time Vicky entered as Geet's savior πŸ˜ƒ

See then two bros will have done her a good turn compared to the one who screwed up her life twice πŸ˜‰

So it kinda evens things out 🀣

Also imagine if Geet can take the credit for finding Vicky. Baaki sab chodo MSK will be ready to kiss her for that alone. 🀣

Then MSK returns home with Vicky on one side and Geet on the other (aka like Ram, Sita and Lakshman). When he returns there will be no bharath milaap instead there will be dev dhulayee happening. 🀣

Imagine this scene
Dev: Bro I really need to talk to you
MSK: Yeah 😑 I need to talk to you too.
Dev: Bro I need to tell you something.
MSK: I need to show you something. 😑
Dev: πŸ˜•
MSK gives him one punch and Dev sees stars and planets 🀣

By Pallo


NEW TWIST....🀣🀣 INSPIRED BY DMG!!!!

Maan finds Geet....Truth out...Maan leaves home for good...

Geet- Ab hum kahaan jayenge ??
Maan- Wahaan...(pointing at the moon)
Geet- Kya???
Maan- Haan...I bought the Moon for you. Ab hamara ghar wahaan hain....
Geet- But sir...wahaan pe gravity nahi hain....hum CON KAISE KARENGE????🀣🀣🀣
🀣🀣🀣
Maan- Dun worry MID-AIR CON is more romantic...🀣🀣🀣

By Sin

🀣🀣 i just remembered DevTard expressions 🀣...the whole time he was talking to Geet....he looked dazed and may be he was reading off of teleprompter....behind the camera 🀣


By Tanu

 
Please join the never ending....line of 'prasad' desirers.....outside the holy temple of Goddess Jyombeldore...who KNOWs IT ALL 🀣


By Vini

@Caco/Nakulll: 🀣 🀣 🀣 Hey i love that movie! Thought of giving it a shot..but since Hollywood didn't welcome me..and bollywood as well..i thought of trying it on Tellywood 🀣 ......
 
Awwww u made me a flowery taveez..?? 😳😳😳 Oh Nakul u're THE only one who care for my phlowers! 😳.......Zindagi ki har subha aapse shuru hogi aur har raat aap par khatam 😳😳😳......meet me in the morning in the garden everyday okay 😳😳....
 
 
Okay out of Mali zone..I thought u had a quiz to study..?? πŸ˜†
 
 
@Pallo: BRITHERMOWEAR..🀣 🀣 Okay i forgot the name...I can't believe i say BrithoMETER 🀣 🀣..Maybe we shd have another one as well..This is to test the hotness..with the meter..🀣 🀣
 

By caco

i have been saying bye forever but everyone keeps on calling NaKEWL so i have to come back😳 just because i am a servant doesnt mean u guys keep calling him 24/7...i have a life too🀣

By Caco


List of the DITCHED:
 
Maan Singh Khurana: Girl runs off from the engagement ceremony....girl in the past most likely to have ran off too
Geet Handa: Guy runs off to the jungle
Dev Singh Khurana: wife ran off to Canada
Savitri Devi: Maan's girlfriends
Meera Ben: get's run off by Naintara
 
🀣 🀣 🀣


By Caco

A Verse from MY JOURNEY TOWARDS REDEMTION
 
Naintara, Geet, Meera
Sab ke pyar mein main gira
Bro ke haath hai mujhe maar khana
Redemption ka hai ye zamana
 
🀣 🀣


An & ykannan

Originally posted by an12345678

What will they show after Dev is unmasked and kicked out of this planet. They better end this show after that and put a tag-line in the end: They lived Happily ever after bickering.



then NT will come back.... then maan has to kick her a**...1 month
then Sameera will come back...Geet has to kick her a** 1 month
then we will have Dev rising from the ashes...with some other name...and leaching after Geet...Maan has to kick his a** 1 month...
then Sasha has to play for Maan...geet kicking her a*** 1 month
then I guess baby born...everyone happy...romance 1 month...baby kicks a**....

πŸ˜†


By An

Yash: That is how it's gonna go πŸ˜² ... Me Better Find my I Quit board πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

By Yash

yup. denians hopping mad...with all the a** kicking
Jyo turns Grey...with all the positivity πŸ˜†
doodle gets her noodle...πŸ˜†
Faz and you go chopping and killing with the Da brij's talwaar πŸ˜†
Polks...gives up on Indian TV...πŸ˜†
Caco breaks more mirrors and perfume bottles...πŸ˜†
Ayesha, Manal decide finally what to do with their careers...πŸ˜†

We come with with a new andolan on...how starone...messsed up the lives of 12726423423429234289 women around the world...🀣

By Minnie

On Monday when MSK returns with his bandwalas.. and everyone rushes to him telling him Geet pregnant hai.. MSK roars in front of NT.. Main Geet ke bacche ka baap banane wala hoon.. and faints.. 🀣 MSK obviously needs bed rest.. GC can slip into his hospital gown again and go back to enjoying daytime TV while his double cozies up as MSK in a blanket 🀣 🀣

By Shonuu

i am maha upset with the absence of maaneet, so wont go into the details... here are the highlights...

1, geet's double shaded dress,, deep pink from the back and baby pink from the front...


2, X-files-2.... adi pinky bane detective.... if they both joined FBI.... terrorists ki toh nikal padi..


3.The ultimate Dog tamer The Naintara whatever ... gets all her possessions  back. got her hubby form meera,,and her ear rings from geet.... this Shaani must have snatched the shagun money from the nurse who assisted  in her delivery...like hum khud bahar aaye hain..apne dumm per tu ne kya kiya??? 🀣


4,Mr. bechara 2010 award goes to DEV the &%$&& samajh gaye na???he has no control on anything neither his wife nor his expressions...😭


5,THE desperate  TWO (sasha-tasha) a slogan just for these two.... sab despos ka ek hi naara...Maan humara Maan humara......πŸ˜†


6, the most important thing was sadda maan was not shown in the jungle having some mungle ...but i have an exclusive pic of him...




dekho kya haal ho gaya ha??? chaddi bhi shrink ho gayi ha.....😭😭😭

my message for cvs:

Dil jalon ka..... dil jala ke... kya mile ga...dil-ruba???

my message for dev:

Do or die.... matlab.... be a man or Quit.....

My message for meera:

mere maan ka bed wapas karo OK???😑

My message for geet:

Lagi raho munni behna...

My message for MAAN:

Ao GAY jab tum O saajna... angna FOOL khilein GAY....

in the end...
an exclusive pic of Dev-tara,  Horror-moon (Honeymoon)... NT playing with Dev..



my comments:

plss dont ask...

By Caco

Few lines from "MY JOURNEY TOWARDS REDEMPTION"

Ek taraf hai gharwali
Dusri taraf baharwali
Ek aur hai conned wali
Kahan mujhe jana hai
Mujhko maloom na hai
Ab to sirf Police Station pe tapak na hai
Kaash Naintara rok le mujhe
Police ke dande khane se bacha le mujhe
Hey Bhagwan utha le mujhe

PS: Ise kehte hai...apni pairo pe khud kulhari marna😭

-Dev Singh Khurana

🀣 🀣 🀣
 
By Pallo


NO LOLLI....ME WANTS ADITYA TO HIT ON GEET!!!
I want MAAN's heart, pants everything on FIRE!!!🀣

By Shonuu



the most interesting thing was the bath percap.... guys do you know what makes the Emran hashmi a serial kisser ??? his concept of kissing....🀣most of the movies have a kissing scene on the climax...but Mr. hashmi start his love story with kissing only.... with the will of his partner or otherwise................... 🀣🀣🀣 so here mr. aditya showing his sexy body in the first episode itself while our munda made us wait for three moths witness that eyes candy ....... 🀣

🀣🀣🀣

now i wish GC watches the episode tonight,,,, and get insecure to see my JB doing stripping ... and jump into the ring tomorrow only.....🀣🀣🀣

By Minnie
 
All - πŸ€—  So Munda in hospital.. pheeling Geetli πŸ˜† But me miffed at Ms. Taveez!
She was supposed to "keep Babaji ki Mehr" on Geetli's hum-suffer, instead Ms. Taveez got busy dreaming and caressing Munda's freshly waxed and oiled chest and thuuuuuuuuuuuddddddddd... the elevator came crashing down, leaving Munda alone to suffer with a one inch ki patti on the head and a mask over his nose.. and doctors declaring inki bachne ki koi ummeed nahi thee 🀣🀣🀣

Also, Ms.Taveez went into NT maiyya's hands.. but she did not bite .. WHY???? 🀣🀣 is this what "keeping Mehr means??"  First rule ignored Ms. Taveez - Thou shall bite anything and everything that is

a. Not Munda's freshly waxed and oiled chest
b. Geetli's hands 🀣🀣
By Beagle
 

Positivity, Positivity!

To have it in your life

Use some creativity

And forget your strife

 

Breakfast upon light

And eat some silence for lunch

And if you get really hungry

Catch a rainbow to munch

 

Make friends with the sun

And go to bed with the stars

Fall in love with Fun

And drink Air in a fast moving car

 

Positivity, I just love the word

It's a word often unseen but not unheard

Positivity, brighten your world, and

Let you life unfurl

By Minnie & Caco
 
@Caco - Samjha karo.. Dil ka Dil se Love Konnection hota hai 🀣🀣 Sirf wirelessly signal milta hai.. jab samne hai toh dikhta nahi.. samjhe.. yeh asli wala pyar hai 🀣🀣
 

GEET- hui wireless transmitter 🀣 🀣 🀣

 
By S.stephy
 
Presenting to you the excuse no. 312 exclusively from the Dev's Guide to your Daily Excuses:
 
"Ab daadi ma ko main akela nahi chod saktha"
 
 So folks, hurry up and get your very own copy of Dev's Guide to your Daily Excuses at a discount of 100% (thats right, for free!!)* πŸ˜†
 
And remember: An excuse a day keeps the police station away.πŸ˜†
 
 
*Offer valid until stocks last
 
 
By Jyo & Beagle
 
1)What is Jay's role...is he Aditya or Yash or Vicky or Chicky or cupid baba or catalyst or enemy or what ?ROFL..And how will he bring Maaneet together ??
 
Jay is Fevicol
Fixing the broken Maneet pole
He'll offer Geet a job
On the job, he will see Geet sob
 
He'll add two and two and get four
He'll go to the Khurana door
He'll blindfold Maan unto Geet
And hence Maaneet shall meetπŸ˜†
 
2)What will b NT's game plan to separate Maaneet ?πŸ€”
She will go to her cauldron and fetch out a spell
Uttering which she will make dadi mentally unwell
On trivial matters Dadi will dwell
On NT's suggestion
At Geet she will yell
So through Dadi, the vitch will
Break Maaneet, and go for the killπŸ˜†
 
3)Will Maaneet separation happen to take the story forward ?..If yes How ?
 
Maaneet will now be fixed
And their relationship will not be jinxed
Fevicol is strong
And the TRP game cannot once again go wrongπŸ˜†
 
4)If separation hapens..will it b due to some misunderstanding or out of love ??
 
Out of Love, Out of Love should be seperation
What can one call this wretched operation
Out of this Love operation we will get -Seperation, Desperation, Reparation and IntergrationπŸ˜†
 
5)How MSK will come to know about office fiasco and Dev's karnaama ??Who will tell him..will it b Geet or Adi or Pinky or Meera or he himself will find out ??πŸ€”
 
In cant be Pinky,
Her mouth will be full
It cant be Geet
She will be too far to be pulled
It cant be Meera
She is hot on the chase
To find Geet and get some praise
 
It has to be Adi
He is a gentleman fine
He ought to help Maan bring NT in lineπŸ˜†
 
6)What will b MSK's reaction after finding the truth about Dev..how will he give justice to Geet here ??
 
Maan will kick him, and toss him
And punch him with Glee
Stare him down so hard
Dev will being to Pee
 
He will hand him over to the fine dumb cops
And NTs plan with flop, flop, FLOP
 
7)If Geet goes away from MSK's life because of some majboori..will MSK misunderstand Geet or will go in search of Geet to find answers from her ??
 
He will chase her down
Till the end of doom
He will chase her down
And wipe away her gloom
8)Will Dadi hv a hand in separating Maaneet ??Confused..if yes how and why ?
 
On trivial matters Dadi will dwell
On NT's suggestion
At Geet she will yell
So through Dadi, the vitch will
Break Maaneet, and go for the killπŸ˜†
 
10)No, it will not happen so soon
They have to wait a few days yet to talk to the moonπŸ˜†
 
 
By Minnie
 
I pity poor bimar MSK.. Geetli's head on collision with him must have left him thinking.. Kudi kaunse chakki ka aata khati hai!! 🀣🀣

By Tanu
 
Munda on seeing his Geet..  

Geet on seeing her munda...  

Geet n Munda... playing ringa ringa roses..  

Munda after the BEAR hug...  

 
 
By Shonuu
 
and how painfully he called geet??? that every time he screamed geet and i heard Gith..... Gith.... Gith .........🀣...who felt the same???

and a question for cvs.......... whenever maan returns after a sick leave....why there is always  a HUG???? 🀣🀣🀣.......... and that hug ?? passionate or otherwise .... i lubbed that....... kuch toh mila after so much of intezaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaar............🀣....feeling like saying a beggar's pet line..... "tune bhooke bhikari  ko roti di...Allah tera bhala kare"........ pls consider the symbolism here.....🀣.🀣....
finally.... they met.... now both maan and GC are not very strong after accident and dengue..... i hope this attacking hug of geet wont result into this....


.


By Minnie
 
Shonu - 🀣Me noticed the Gith Gith too... Since we are on an acronym roll... looked to me as if Munda saying Geet I am your Good Indian Traditional Husband (GITH).. Chod Cauliflowerwale ko.. mere paas aao ek kissa suno..  🀣🀣🀣

 
By Minnie
 
Since everyone has gone Gaga for Geetli and her Munda..This is only for Yash + Meera = Yeera/ Sheera/ Yameera/ Yame/ Shame/ ShamWow  πŸ˜‰  Pehla pehla pyar hai.. doosri theesri baar hai 🀣

Gobhiwale ko mil gayi
Uski Parathewali
I don't talk to strangers boli
But I do love duffers man mein boli
Gobhiwala bola duniya badi choti hai
Hum tum phirse kahin jaroor milte hain
Parathewali ka man garden garden hokar bola
Ek nahi toh doosra ??Khurana mila
DevD banega Loota Aashiq
Stuck with NT like a gaddi stuck in traffic! 🀣🀣🀣
 
 
By Minnie
 
@Armu -  I will take Yeda- Yedi ki prem kahani any day to Fungus and Sundae ka prem puraan in Khurana's ka garden 🀣🀣

@Adits - Me too looking forward to this Yedi si prem kahani only to see DevD as loota ashiq ...

Bhai # 1 churaoes jhooti Biwi # 2
Bhai # 3 churaoes Deewani # 1
Biwi # 1 churaoes Freedom forever 🀣🀣

By Pallo
 
For Devils Online!!!

PALLO holding Gobi ka phool....
"Should I? Shouldn't I? Should I? Shouldn't I?
Okay this is one of those rare ocassions when the COCK lays an egg...Pallo gonna do analysis
*Devils strap urselves and enjoy the ride* (Ride...uhm uhm I mean roller coaster ride nuthing deep u get it nah?)


HUGGIES- Anti-Geelapan pampers! (Says who?)
Loved the epic beginning of GITH GITH GITH echoing thru the corridors of the hidden Sanjeevni set (As usual the other doctors are either having sum BB match, wrestling combat ya are laughing themselves senseless over sum SADOfied jokes!)

And then the marathon.....CVs me ij unhappy...U shud have got sum hills and greenery shown while shez on the run...even sum cows grazing if you cud (shaking cows...INSTANT MIL SHAKES AVAILABLE!)...and the topping wud have been planets in the side...Saturn, Jupiter and the wisp of pluto....
It would have emphasized distances....
"FAR ACROSS THE DISTANCE AND SPACES BETWEEN US
U HAVE CUM TO SHOW YOU GO ON...
NEAR FAR..WHEREVER YOU ARE
I BELIEVE THAT THE HEART DOES GO ON....."


And as if she feds on diesel...Geet's Gadi rushed towards Maan.....into his fake SRKish arms....and
"Geela Geela Geela Dil geela geela
Mila Mila Mila koi mila mila
Geela Geela Geela "woh" geela geela
HUGGIES diapers use kia kia"
HUGGY complete...


Now Now...the GEELA means tears nuthing else u dirty devils...
So then began the "Khushi ke aansu"
PALLO's doubt - Why the hell can't they use their own tears...why steal Khushi's aansu? Does this khushi female have sum AKSHAYPATRA sorta TANK?


Neways...sum more staring session...
If eyes cud have ***....then Maaneet's eyes were doing that...(O Lord! Forgive me for ma thoughts!)

And finally Geet speaks up
BOL RADHA BOL....
....and strikes him on the chest....
NOTE- Dard bhi tu dawa bhi tu...

"Ouch" goes the weasel!

Neways he suddenly realizes that they were being watched...
"Saale bird watchers yahaan bhi aa gaye! Ma kabhootar is mine alone. Neways these ppl ain't gonna add to our TRPs why shud they enjoy the fun?" The possessive hint grows more and he takes her away.


And they proceed elsewhere...
Pallo picturizes them making out in the morgue....
" Jadoo hain dead bodies hain
Aur total silence hain
Isko complete karke bina Jaoon kahaan?"

Agreed half-finished things are painful!!!


MEERA BHAJAN MANDALI- NEW ENTRANT!
Yash Malhotra joins the meera bhajan mandali after chance maroing and stealing a hug from the dedicated DEV DASI  (Seriously no pun intended...Devdasis are a sad sad story!)

Ek NT.....Ek Meera
Dono ne Dev ko chaha
Antar kya dono ki pyaar mein bolo
Ek dev ki dasi
Ek khoon ki pyaasi...

Neways nuthing much to say abt the scene except...
OMG OMG THE GUY IS CUTE!!!!


TAVEEZ PEHEN KE PHOOL KHILA HAIN PHOOL KHILA HAIN
I kno he didn't wear the damn taveez but I am just trying to support ma cause...
First external flowering then internal flowering (Figure it!)

Hospital is well equipped I must say...FLOWER ROOM....For seductive purposes! I insist on becoming a doc there!!!

Neways those on spot lines from empty card were great....
Pallo cudn't digest so much love all of a sudden.

Kissy Wissy on forehead again....
ONE INSTANCE I BEG MAAN TO AIM LOWER!!!!
For heaven's sake Munda...A bit lower!!!


And Geet resting her head on his chest...oh so adorable...
she hit him there and....yah again "Dard bhi tu dawa bhi tu!"
By Shonuu
 
ok the show stealer was our kudi...NOT munda.... what expressions??? what dialogue delivery... what a hold (on the character not on maan's shoulder) we should really praise DD for the gr8 job.... though she needed to copy all the gestures by munda like he touched her face (dekh toh lon...itne dino mein meri geet ke gaal srink toh nahi ho gaye??)

 so she copied and touched his face (kaha that na shave mat kerna..now look  your stubble ,,,its uneven now... mera nhi toh IF gals ka toh socho) then he kissed her on her forehead...where there were several other options available.... so does the kudi...she too did kiss him on his forehead....(tit for tat) and i wonder where are those faltoo ke doctors and chipku nurses ???

and when he asked...itna miss kiya mujha??? i said WAH.... you care about GITH...but what about us??? we didnt say a proper hi bye to each other in your absence ...and you are doing GITH GITH.... HAWT kahin ka......😑😑😑

message for cvs:

aapne bhokon ko khana khilaya..... Allaha aap ko TRPs de.... 🀣🀣


By Minnie
 
@ Anj - Why why?? Havent you heard.. dekhne ka paisa nahi lagta.. Munda and his Mundi were window shopping, and reading blank cards 🀣🀣🀣 After NT brings them on the roads.. I like MSK's options

1. Paratha dhaba
2. Card ki dukaan
3. Phoolon ki dukaan🀣🀣

By Geet
 
Maan(heart)- No fair..hey brainy..you're getting all the fun today!
Maan(brain)- you're supposed to beat remember..do that..This is the only way I can get a kiss
Maan(heart)- cheating hai yeh..atyaachaar!! I get a slap yesterday..You get a head nudge and a kiss too..the first kiss from her

Maan(brain)- well..I'm just lucky...πŸ˜†You anyway go out of control every time she's near..so it was time I took control of things

Maan(heart)- I'm not talking to you. hmph

(for those who missed the heart-brain convo)
 
 
By Pallu
 
Denizens, CVs cannot survive without us. We need to pull up our pants now🀣 We cant blame CVs if they show stupid stuff🀣 Or should we blame GCMs when they show illogical stuff🀣
 
By Minnie
 
Green Goblin.. tussi mahan ho... Seriously I am liking DevD now, especially after his dhaasu dialogue to his Tweety Bird of saath jeene marne ki kasam and bhugtoing it for janam janams🀣 This is what you call Amar Prem = Eternal Lovestory 🀣🀣
 

By Faz

@AWL - The Hand Ka Kissa

Munday's hormones were raging out of control ji ...hence the touchy feely was going into Xrated mode...enterting exhabit back 1 🀣 then Munda was pheeling slighty more romance ka jharu types hence literally throwing himself on Kurri Geet🀣...in an *desi accent* UNCONTROLABLE way πŸ˜† Kurri was being stupid...she was doing hai mein 80's ki sharmili heroine act...🀣whilst in the 21st century people would've been absorbed in other activites which are far more satisfying  than doing the gaze hai mein mar jawan 🀣 Whilst Faz wacks herself and comes out of her dream 🀣🀣🀣

 
By Yash (Ykannan)


First part :

He comes close, she says dont come close...he inches forward slowly, she keeps stepping back, he comes closer and closer and now he is almost inches away from her...
when he holds her right hand with his left and her left hand with his right and pulls her up against him.
As he pulls her against him..realization strikes her about their closeness and she realizes there is more to the phone game than he is pretending.
He pulls her tight against himself and nods his head, as if asking..what now??
Then she starts pulling her right hand away..which has the phone..and he doesnt let that happen, as he is holding on to her wrist behind her.
He uses the left hand to hold her other palm, feeling it, as he pulls her as close as she can get such that they are touching every inch of their body with the clothes being the only barriers..

then he says, I have come close...now what?? 😳

Part 2

He drawls in his lazy seductive voice.."I have come close, now give me the phone"
She nods her head saying no, unable to resist herself..looking at his eyes.
Now he uses both his hands to cover her hands holding the phone, making no attempt to take it out and looks at her saying "You still want to play this game".
She says, "No I wont give"
He looks at her lips as he runs his fingers over her hand behind her, smiling, knowing that he is affecting her.
She is visibly affected and starts to lose control..when she says "Maan"


Part 3 (last part)

He gets distracted and surprised, hearing her utter his name,..a small smile curves up his lips as he looks into her eyes, then down at her lips and then back into her eyes...feeling happy that I got to hear this after so long..and asks "Maan?"
She shakes her head in acquiescence, saying "you may be Maan sir at office, but not here!"
He has a small smile curve up his lips, as he looks down at her lips again...and drawls...
"Yah..but you still have to give me the phone". As he is talking he goes back to feeling her hands with his hands..
She shakes her head saying no....and he says "Or else.." as he looks at her lips again, inching closer...
She says "No I wont give.."...and as they are pretending to fight over the phone..it drops out of the window!!

πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

Hopefully that was detailed enough!!! 😳

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By Usha

Guys ... I just got permission frm 49erFan to use the life wala shooting AV ...just look at the 2 .... the shooting scene and the aired scene ..... AWESOME ......
 
Trial:
 
 
 
Aired:
 
 
 
This is driving me crazy !!!!!!! Just look at Dhrasthi ... she's almost blushing and Gurmeet befikr hokar smile kar raha hai !!!!!! 😍 Dn then the aired scene ... what passion .... !!!! Totally killing !! Hats of to GurTi ... they are awesome together !!!!

................................

By Pallo



There sits the confounded Castle!!!


By Pallo


 
Faz ...U wanna attempt that herculean task???
Okay this is am open challenge to neone in the den... neone brave enuff to COUNT THAT STUFF!!!!


.....................................
 
By Smita (spshastr)

[Usne khud ko hi kiss kiya?? 🀣


By Pallo

 Pallo presents to DEVILS

GEETOON NETWORK!!
                                 Relive you smiles...with ur crazes!!!

A walking Talking bundle of contradictions...He looks like a assemblage of
muscles and more muscles...But the quote "BRAWN WITHOUT BRAIN" aptly
suits the character. So presently to you all.....COURAGE, THE PINK
OVERDOSED COWARDLY DOG urrrfffff DEV KHURANA!!!



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NaKool...
speculations and whispers in the DEN hint him to be the true khurana subjected
to a Ekta Mayyish cradle swap at the time of birth. His blossoming love story
with Vicky was nipped in the bud and the separation of Vicky drove him to
ZOMBIEitis!!!...But then came light in his life in the form of MAWALI
MAALI...Now the quacks have becum more audible and fill the den often!!!



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Mawali Maali
Having struck gold in the form of Nakool...That Maali has becum a pig living on
Nakewl's money....Every QUACK of Nakool's is followed by a "OINK OINK" of
Maali...So presenting to you...MAWAALI MAALI....PIG of the century!



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DOSTANA has created a frenzy but this trio are the face of that frenzy. Right from
"Choochi cooes" to "Tum Mere Ho" stalker tunes...they grab it all. The TRIO have
given dostana another whole new horizon to expand....Introducing...BRIJ, MAAN
and ADI!




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"Mujhko bhi toh lift karade...Thodi si toh lift Karade..."
A perpetual saga of lift and DHAK DHAK...Maaneet have replaced the eternal
Scooby Doo Shaggy pair in the Den...
Perseverance shud be learnt from them...The neva stop trying to get into each
others arms!!! DEVILS TAKE A BOW!!!



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Sometimes the pic says it all...and this is one of those times!!!
*Pallo falls silent*



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"Dekha hain pehli baar Mr. Chopra ke aankhon mein pyaar!"
The cutest and most dhamkedaar character of the show Dadi...has a new-found-
love in Mr. Chopra. The older the wine the more expensive it is....
OLD IS TRULY GOLD!!!



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"Chiggy Wiggy wid you OYEEE..."
Their love story began in one CHANNE KE KHET and is now the talk on very
tongue in every town. Brimaan have etched themselves as the most loyal and
inseparable jodi in history...When ADI (the gay hua sabse Paraya!) left them
realizing that they two were meant to be together without him...It called for the
GENESIS of a LOVE so pure....BRIMAAN is our evergreen fav!!!




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Marathon Queen Geet Handa and her pursuer Maan Khurana.....featuring as
ROAD RUNNER and Wile E. Coyote....
*Bip Bip*



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*Protein shakes, spinach and Muscles*
Maan embodies them...
With Geet as the beauty Olive Oyll and Bluto, the brutish Buffoon...we have a
complete package of Maan, Geet and Dev!!!



*Dhishum Dhishum*
*Pallo drumming her fingers on the table*
That was bound to happen....
Wat say Devils?



..................

By Rhea




By Resmi (mi7chimes)

here u goo devilsss!!😈....


now lemme laugh my heart n brains out!! 🀣🀣


By Manal
 


By Meg










By Anjana


LISTENING AIDS THAT GEET NEEDS TO EMPLOY ON MSK*
1. Chloroform

2. Good Duct tape for his hands n mouth

s


*HP Brij Sphasial for Girl


By Gargi
(for Maan)







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~~ .: Poetry 3 :. ~~

By Pooja

kya kaho uss shaqs se wo mujhe bewafa
lagta nahi,
aisa lagta hai jaise wafa nibhana uske
bass mein nahi,

kya iljaam lagao uspar mujhe chod jaane
ka,
aisa lagta hai jaise mere saath chal paana
meri kismat mein nahi,

kya gujarish karo usse pyar ki aisa lagta
hai,
jaise uske pass gam ke siwa kuch bhi nahi,

hasta hai wo bass jaise duniya ko dikhane
ke liye,
par sachhai ye hai uske paas aansoo ke siwa
kuch nahi,

kabhi-kabhi baant leti thi khud ko mujhse
jabse chod gayi hai mujhko,
aab uske gamo ka raajdar koi bhi nahi,

sabko khush rakhne ki koshish karti hai
har pal,
par khud ki khushiyo se jaise koi wasta
nahi,

janti  hai wo har kisi ke dil ki baat
par kabhi khud ke dil ki baat kisi se
kehti  nahi,

wo chahe kuch na kahe,har baat uske dil ki
mujhe chhupi to nahi,
karle dikhawa job hi  par maloom hai
mere dil ko wo mere bina khush nahi,

aey khuda use dena har khushi iss jaha ki wo
mujhe chod gayi  hai kisi wajah se,
maloom hai mujhe wo bewafa nahi....

wo bewafa nahi.....πŸ˜‰

-OMG Foolish Girl on behalf of MSK
...................


By Tanu

Poem for Geet...
 
 
As I walk on this wicked world
Searchin' for light in the darkness of insanity.
I ask myself .....Is all hope lost?
Is there only pain and hatred, and misery?
 
And each time I feel like this inside,
I turn around n look in ur eyes....
And i knw...wit u by ma side....
I shall have my life...made all divine..'
'
Geet...
 
 
As I walk on this wicked world
Searchin' for light in the darkness of insanity.
I ask myself .....Is all hope lost?
Is there only pain and hatred, and misery?
 
And each time I feel like this inside,
I turn around n look in ur eyes....
And i knw...wit u by ma side....
I shall have my life...made all divine..

MSK......
 
 
thinking of you is all i do,
about how much i miss you,
when i think of that beautifull smile,
i know waiting for you is worth while


By Swan

Dev you better go to Canada
Else the devils will come at you with a danda
NT will welcome you with a jhanda
Stay away from Geet Handa

By Ansah

What must be NT thinking... πŸ˜†

dil sey kabhi mujhe yaad kiya karo

itna gair na samjao..call nahin toh

miss call toh kar liya karo

By Beagle

The woods are lovely, dark and deep,
But I have promises to keep,
And miles to go before I sleep,
And miles to go before I sleep. πŸ˜†

Robert Frost


By Jhan

Why are all the devils so glum?
Soon GC will be be fit and fine
very soon he will be shooting again
Cheer up I cannot see y'all morose
Is this poem enough
or do you all need some prose?

By Shreya

 
Zinadgi bhar ka saath nibhane ka waada kiya hai,

Har dukh se tumhe bachane ka irada kiya hai,

Na aane denge aansoon tumhari aankhon mein,

Apne se zaaayda tum par bharosa kiya hai,

Har khushi ko tumhari jholi mein daalnge,

Har kaante ko apne seene se laga lenge,

Bas saath na chodna humara,

Baaki har sitam hum husk e she lenge'

......................
 
By Shreya

Love is not when we stand near,

Love is when  u hear,

Not the words that pass my lips,

But the sighs that die within my ribs,

Love is not when I lie to u,

Love is when u realize why I do,

Love is not when I hide the truth,

Love is when u know the pain I go thru,

To tell those words which were not true,

I love u for not being with me always,

But for being with me when nobody does,

I love u even after the distance that separates us,

Coz words were few but the emotions never ran out for us'.

 
By Pallo

looked around and saw all black
No colors, no views only lots of black
A faint shimmer of white light flooded in
Ma tears chopped them to seven rainbow hues
Yet an eerie sense of loss gripped me tight
I was sinking again into a realm of no light
Why the rainbow when all was going to still remain black?
All I wanted was one ray of care....
But no...I can still see all BLACK!


By An

Happy Fern : COOL Lines

This is for you:

I became a Question bank,
On my way to the money bank,
Met the Man called Mr. Humble,
Who was fixing his beard jumble,
Asked him questions and questions,
But his humble answers gave me a big tension

By Pallo


Chopping chopping I tried to go
Mr. Humble hopped away
Ma endless question scared him so
He reminded me he was gay!🀣


By Jaya


Daaku, Faz & Pallo
You guys are nuts...but we love you
Babaji...help me stop trying to follow suit
These four-liners...need to get the boot!


By Pallo

4-liners ain't ma thing
Makes me go ding dong ding
Leave ur fear hop into the ring
together we'll go ding dong ding!🀣


BHOOTNI u thinking what I am thinking?🀣🀣
-----

Once upon a time lived a jerk
His greed and lust went berserk
He ruined a blossoming life
and skipped away without ne strife
And as time passed he tried to repent
But sumthings just aren't meant!!!🀣🀣 Okay that was serious!

By Jhan

That Meera is a pain
She does not have a brain
She is just a stupid know-it-all
I have doubts of her being a woman at all
How can she with Geet not empathize
Instead with Dev she she does sympathize 😑
She stood idly by and watched him destroy Geet's happiness
Why can't she mind her own freakin business? 😑


By Beagle

FOR GEET TODAY:

I wove my dreams with fine silk thread

Intricate patterns of roses in red

Lilies dressed in pristine white

Yellow daffodils bathed in sunlight

 

Depheniums of midnight blue

Violets of a different hue

A world filled with a rich palette

Yellow, blue, green, orange and scarlet.

 

As the gentle breeze blew,

As the streams tinkled through.

I approached my dreams on tiptoes,

Held them gently and hugged them so

 

But as the thunderclouds appeared

The colours slowly disappeared

What I held was a dream no more

And as I watched helplessly, the intricate pattern tore

 

Surrounded, not by flowers dancing in the breeze

and kissing sunlight,  but dead leaves

Taunting sounds doing their rounds

Their high pitched tones astound

 

Shattered fabric

Splintered glass

Shredded dreams

Fall on the grass

 

But rise I will and weave again

A delicate pattern, hiding my pain

For there is no greater tragedy

Than a girl who wallows in her misery

 

My world will be filled

With roses red and delpheniums blue,

Yellow daffodils and crysanthamams too

Lilies dressed in pristine white

All dancing and kissing the sunlight

Their fragrance sweet and warm

That will hold me tight

and keep me safe during storms.

-----

@Swan and Yash- Thanks!  


I usually suffer around the clock 

Of something terrible called writers block

A disease so severe you see

I had to dump my job and flee


The fog does clear sometimes

And when it does, my bells begin to chime

The words are still so bad and lame

They are not going to bring me fame. πŸ˜†


'

For DEV


Dev, with a delectable arse

Is a cheat, a fraud, a farce

Always filled with confusion

Tightly packed with Delusion

He only knows how to flex

His muscles for the opposite sex

But alas to his dismay

He might as well be gay

For no woman worth her salt

Will be blind to his faults


His brain is in deep slumber

His body, unattractive lumber

He better tone up his sorry butt

For soon Maan will turn him into powdered peanut


'


Meera everready batteries

Put them in

When Dev's lights turn dim

She is ever ready

To go steady


So she is blind

But she is one of a kind

She is dumb

She wants to get stuck with chewed up gum


'

For MAAN


Tubelight is blinking

His Brain is not thinking

The stars are twinkling

And he hasnt got an inkling


My heart is sinking 

That he not linking

the dots that are not blinking

Because he is busy with the stars that are twinkling!

'

For Myself


I really must be a looser

I really must be one

Sitting and typing empty words

When there is so much work to be done


I have places to go and I have people to meet

Many roads are undiscovered and waiting for my feet

There are mountains to climb 

and Oceans to swim

I have to keep the flame from going dim


There are treasures for me to find and keep

ALL when I find my SLEEP🀣

,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

By ykannan

@Aditi: When Kekta serials ruled indian television
My mind was in utter confusion
but nothing would deter
this unfaltering devotion

but little did I know
the shows would go
for timeless eternity
and I would have to
pull myself out of this maddening fatality.


By Beagle

Why is Maan still angry?  


The king of the jungle is cross
He is all roars and sharp claws
Fiery eyes, a burden of hurt
His behaviour, again, sharp and curt
Could someone explain to him
It is not all dark and dim
He just has to find the truth of  souls
Dark as coal
The fox is sly, dont let him to by
And everything will be happy as can beπŸ˜†


By Beagle

dont want Dadi evil

I want her nice
I dont want Dadi medieval
Believing in cruel lies

I dont want Dadi fool
I want her sweet
I want Dadi Cool

Disbelieving that cheat


By Meg

She believed in the truth

And life gave her lies
She believed in sunny weather
And life gave her cloudy skies
She believed in love
And life gave her hate
She believed in destiny
And life taught her fate
She believed in what was right
But life said it was wrong
Life never gave her what she wanted

But she always remained strong. πŸ˜Š

...................

By Meg

NT

Oh Dev You're Mine
Oh Dev You're Mine
Tere Ishq mein had se guzar jaaon..

main sach kahoon to..kahoon to..kahoon to..mar jaaon! πŸ€£

 
By Jhan

@ daaku
Dev is such a loser
He will become NTs follower
Meera will be hopefully wiser
Geet-Myra joining forces will be super


By An

Dev is a puppet,
Whoever pulls the strings,
Beats his trumpet,
And, make him dance on their rings πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†


By An

@Ash:

Meera and Nayantara,
Watched carefulyl the moves of their baby,
Who was dinning in a hotel sitara,
Waiting for his new master,
Short-circuit happened when he opened the pitara πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†


By Jhan

Meerabai knows she has lost
Dev switched sides to NT pretty fast
Again because of Dev a girl is in trouble
I hope Meera learns a lesson valuable
Never trust a man who cannot make up his mind
He will use you and then toss you out on your behind

By An

@Jhan:

All in love girl is blind,
She cannot sense the hostile wind,
Or, see the man having no brain,
She is ignoring the ominous heavy rain.


By Pooja

Meera bani geet ki dost
Nt ko dekh dev ko laga he saw a ghost
Nt chahti hai dev ka pyaar
par its too late dev has found a new yaar
Par Nt ne chali chaal
Aur meerabai was left behaal
But CV's aapne kiya  kamaal
becuz the epi was total dhamaal



By Pooja

Meera ko chod
Uska dil tod
dev gaya NT ke pass
cause uska dimaag charne gaya hai ghaas
Successful hui NT ki chaal
Ab hoga Dev ka isse bhi bura haal
Dev jaise insaan ko dekh ke dukh hota hai
Dev- NT- Meera reminds me of kuch kuch hota hai

.........................................

By Tanu


It's such a shock, I almost screech,
Eagerly wishing for Myra to preach
But when I see NT...i lose my speech!

In fact, what really makes me blue,
is to find myself ...losing either of the two!

- A SHOCKED n SAD Dev     *who doesnt exist* πŸ€£



By Tanu

The IDIOT boy 


He wandered down the unknown grade 
Beyond the limits assigned --
A youth whose Brains often flayed
And generally made him whine.

He thot to delve alone on a SUNdae,
in a way that none might know
If he could think any clear.


Now he is in the ditch, and Oh how..!
After all d Nayano ka Tara is here....!

.......................

By Pooja

Nahin samne yeh alag baat  hai
mere saath hai tu ...mere pass hai tu
bichad ke bhi mujhse juda tu nahin
khafa hai lekin bewafa tu nahin...........

By An

When well-set plans go haywire,
And, the day hangs by a thin wire,
New routes are discovered,
Unique options are explored,
The failed plan may have given a smile,
The new track  promises a walk for a long mile.


By Tanu

MSK ----> Geet

If i culd hv...this one chance...

a chance to this.... true romance..

i culd renounce my life...n sacrifice every ounce...

just to have u in my arms...n spend my life living this trance....


By An

Geet to MSK:

You are not there but I can feel your presence,
My trust in you says to believe in the same fragrance,
You are there somewhere close and have not walked away,
Waiting for me to find you and walk on your way.

By An

Dev:

I am a man without a head,
They stole it, hid it under the bed,
Everyone calls me Evil Dumb,
But, I am just a plain defective bomb 🀣

 
By Caco

I ditch, you ditch, they ditch
It's the thing about being rich
People love being a bitch
The dont let anyone hitch
All these give me the itch
 
🀣 🀣

By An

Meeting Mr.Rich makes you a witch,
Wait a minute but you always wore a weird style,
The barber never ever cut your hair fine,
While you were busy sipping poisonous vine 🀣

By Caco

🀣🀣🀣
 
Sipping poisonous vine
Ruining people's life is how i pass time
The Prince kept on stalking
While I was hunting

By An

Near the street light,
I saw her for the first time,
It was a winter night,
She did not catch my attention.

Again, my eyes saw her the next day,
She was wearing red and hair was open,
Sitting in an open ground, she was playing with clay,
I smiled cause she became a beautiful picture .

A week later, it was night again,
She was standing holding an umbrella,
I crossed the overflowing drain,
Walked toward her like a fool in love.

A month ago, we got married near the street light,
Surrounded by strangers and friends,
It was night but everything looked bright,
I kissed my most beautiful wife.


By Beagle

dedicated to the den-

Hello darkness, my old friend 
I've come to talk with you again 
Because a vision softly creeping 
Left its seeds while I was sleeping 
And the vision that was planted in my brain 
Still remains 
Within the sound of silence

In restless dreams I walked alone 
Narrow streets of cobblestone 
'Neath the halo of a street lamp 
I turn my collar to the cold and damp 
When my eyes were stabbed by the flash of a neon light 
That split the night 
And touched the sound of silence

And in the naked light I saw 
Ten thousand people maybe more 
People talking without speaking 
People hearing without listening 
People writing songs that voices never shared 
No one dared 
Disturb the sound of silence

"Fools," said I, "you do not know 
Silence like a cancer grows 
Hear my words that I might teach you 
Take my arms that I might reach you" 
But my words like silent raindrops fell 
And echoed in the wells of silence

And the people bowed and prayed 
To the neon god they made 
And the sign flashed out its warning 
In the words that it was forming 
And the sign said "The words of the prophets are written on the subway walls 
And tenement halls 
And whispered in the sound of silence

 
.....................
 
By Blue (Vini)


Dev's reaction when entering Kurana mansion in Today's episode
 
I walk in my home
To see my great dome
Instead i saw a clone
Who resembled my wife in my phone
I thought, i must be hallucinating! That can't be my wife!
But after blinking once, twice and thrice
I chant OM shanti OM
Coz YES that IS my wife
 
🀣🀣🀣

By Pooja

Bechari NT ke haath se gaya dev nikal
Meera ko dekh gaya hai wo fisal
NT ko lag rahaa hai darr
She is like beta ab jaldi kuch kar
Cause she doesn't want to go to jail
Bechari ka ek  ek plan ho gaya hai fail

Dev ne bhi kar li hai himmat
Ab Nt ki badh gayi hai musibat
Ab Maan se hoga uska saamna
Bhagwan usse bachale meri yehi hai kaamna

=======================

Dev chala hai banne lead
The actor has sown the seed
But lead banne se pehle acting to seekh
u cant emote when the focus is on you even in bheek
MSk ke na hone se hua hai tamasha
that kuch bhi scene dikha rahe between Geet , nt, meera .tasha and sasha
Epi was Super Khichdi today
Hope its better on Monday

Gc jaldi theek ho jao
Aur aake apne is show ko bachao

By Marsha

The episode was a circus,

CVs lost focus,

It was one big ruckus,

Left me feeling clueless.πŸ˜•


Dev you big doofus

You're worse than mucus

For once can you focus?

Who am I kidding you big fungus!🀣


**************************************************

A Special Dedication to Dev Khurana


Since You've Been Gone The Dev Khurana Version  

NT, my wife; You are my life!

At least you were , till that day you left me feeling confused.

I rolled on my bed dreaming dreams of you or was it nightmares? I don't know!

Still feeling baffled.....I took a shower, and Yes by myself.

Out I came in a towel flaunting my pecs, in dadi came without her specs

asking, "Dev, where is NT?" I said "she left me feeling empty".

"Oh dadi do I look hot?"  She said "that'll be a NOT"🀣

 

One day,

while I was driving, this car was honking,

and in came my blast from the past.

Dressed in pink rompers she drove me to bonkers,

and we had pasta and a sundae.....oh what a fun day!πŸ˜†

Oh dear Myra.....you are my Tyra

just come and hold me please.

 

NT left me feeling cold

She was always so bold

I liked doing what I was told

Now I feel so uncontrolled

 

My wife was the smart one

That leaves me the dumb one

She made me refrain,

from using my brain.

 

She told me I could sleep with Geet

Oh boy.....It was quite a treat

Now I pretend to feel bad

By the way do I look sad? 😳

 

Dev you make me feel sick

You slept with another chick?

I want to stab you with a tooth pick!

Better yet....here is some arsenic!

 

Oh Myra don't say that,

I'm not that big of a rat.

NT is the cat

that made me do that!

 

Oh Dev I believe you...let's hug,

because you do nothing but bug.

Your love is my drug,

That I can't help but chug!

 

Myra, that was so easy

I'm so cheesy and sleazy

Doesn't she know I'm a charmer?

Someone should alarm her....

Oh well!😈

.........................

By Caco


Areh deewano

Mujhe pehchaano
Kahan se aayaa
Main hoon kaun?
Main hoon CON...main hoon CON...
Main hoon...main hoon....CON
Dev Singh Khurana, who is always turned ON...!
🀣 🀣 🀣

 
By Pooja

Dev can never be a saint
Cover his face with black paint
Maan shud bajao his band
He shud be thrown in quicksand


By Darlunia

My Friday morning gibberish!

Update padke lagta hai ke writers gabra gaye
Aur old MSK ko dekhke Phankaas kush ho gaye
Maine tho socha tha ke naya plots laayenge
Aur usse DD aur GC kho aaraam bhi denge!

By Jhan

Golmaal hai bhai sab golmaal hai 🀣🀣🀣
Jisko dekha KC me pahunch gaya hai 🀣🀣🀣
Hamare saare tent dreamz ka satyanash ho gaya hai 😑
CVs tumhare maaf kiye jaane ke din khatam hone ko aaye hai😑

By Darlunia

Poetry competion entry...come on An, Pooja, Marsh, Jhan...chop chop

What's up with the den this week
Not just 1 or 2 but many are feeling weak
Is it the worry for GC that did you all in
Speaking for myself, laughter was not the best medicine!

By Jhan

I think many of us for GC are feeling sympathy πŸ˜‰
That is why so many of us fell sick to show empathy πŸ˜‰
This shows if nothing else  us den vasis have unity πŸ€—
BTW of coherence in the eppy today there was a scarcity 🀣🀣🀣


By Marsha'

@All: 🀣

The Nonsense

The episode was a circus

CVs lost focus

Nothing but a big ruckus

Left me feeling clueless

 

Dev you big doofus

You're worse than mucus

For once can you focus?

Who am I kidding you big fungus!


By Minnie


Every time MSK disappears with his tambu and reappears in KC his bandwalas show up.. Geet never has a clue where MSK is .. but bandwalas always do.. So Bandwalas, just sent this fax to Geetli madam..

Dear Ms. Geetli
MSK's honewali Titli
We are MSK's bandwalas
We are of no real use fellas
When he disappears with his tent
We follow him without a hint
Why are you such a dimwit
Getting worried for him to bits
While us bandwalas have a beer
With MSK's wood chopping antics to cheer

- Kaale Kapde Bandwale Bhaiyyas 🀣


By Jhan


If Maaneet meet in the office in everyone's presence 😑
The devils are going to show their displeasure πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†
The CVs are going to soon feel the TRPs' absence
They are going to feel the pressure 😈
Maaneet must meet in the jungle
and they must do jungle mein mangal
What is the use of that stupid tent in the background πŸ€”
Put it to good use is all we are saying 🀣


By An

Big Fungus is planting a new science,
It's called Conscience,
But, lost in the market his brain,
As it was the day of heavy rain... πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†


By Pooja


As it was the  day of heavy rain
And he slipped
thats when his brain flipped
Now he wants to be putla of sachai
Wait till Maan does his dhulai


By Polki


Sasha and Tasha confused

leaving us viewers amused

Dev showing consideration 
doesn't realize for a lawyer will need donation

NT is left to wonder
about Dev's next blunder

Adi and Pinky helping
viewers hoping that will keep Dev and NT from yelping

Meera has a feeling
when Maan finds the truth, he is going to hit the ceiling

Maan no where to be found
No one knows for office he is bound
everyone waiting for him like a good little hound
By Darlunia

While fungus was in the market
He pondered what he would do next
The growing conscience did not feel right
He simply does not have it in him to fight!

By Pooja

Tanu have a shake
and take a break
In the den relax and chill
Drool on Maan's pic and thamo yr Dil
(🀣 ..thats how bad it can get )

By Jhan

Chalo all it is time for another important andolan πŸ˜‰
Tent me hi hona chahiye Maaneet ka milan 🀣🀣🀣
If they do not listen to us, Daaku and Faz uthao talwar
and shuru ho jao , it is time for some killing 🀣🀣🀣

By Jhan

To a long and boring meeting I have to go
With a heavy heart I bid you all adieu 😭
I may not be back for another 3 hours
Enjoy the discussion and cheers πŸ˜ƒ

By Darlunia

Have fun at your meeting Jhan
I will, in the meanwhile, be pareshan
No one to rhyme with me today
Oh Babaji...help me through this day!!!

🀣

By Beagle

Big Fungus is planting a new science,
It's called Conscience,
But, lost in the market his brain,
As it was the day of heavy rain... πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

As it was the  day of heavy rain
And he slipped
thats when his brain flipped
Now he wants to be putla of sachai
Wait till Maan does his dhula


@An and Pooja

Do not be harsh on the boy
He is just a toy
Sadly, NT's ploy

He has not a brain
It was flushed down the drain
Of a high speed train

He has not a heart
He has no part 
In riding his life's bullock cart

So do not be harsh
But be kind
For he has no control over his mind
A species like him is hard to find. 

Put him instead in a cardboard box
Along with your dirty socks

By Caco

Being at the jungle
Makes me feel good about being single
Very soon i will with Geet mingle
Rest of my life with her entangle
MAHIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII😭 
🀣 🀣

By Pooja

@Beagle
Put him in a box
along with my dirty sock
the guy is expressionless like a rock
Us viewers he loves to mock
How he is still  on screen is itself a shock
If they continue to show him
outside the PH building will be a big fat lock


Darlunia

Speaking of Fungus's expressions
He should be making it his life's mission
To get some acting lessons
If not, it will keep giving us all major tension!


Tanu

Dev-tara

My knees start to shake,
When you're in sight.
My mind is filled with wonder,
My heart with fright.

Oh when will this feeling stop?
what will finally work?
A cuppa Sundae fudge ..or may be a lil Devily nudge

By An

Why you all hate my sight,
When I am walking all right,
Don't throw stones at me,
I will soon jump in the sea,
Give me a chance to escape,
Wearing the most hideous cap ...

Dev. πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

By Tanu

Oh dear beefy cake..
all is done just for ur sake..

imagine having ur beautiphool face
kicked..slapped...thrashed ..n finally defaced..

run run....far away from this case
for once caught..u shall b lost without a trace

By Pallo

Oops I made a boo boo
In NT's ear I did a coo coo
she sent one look of evil "You...You"
I had to rush off to the loo loo
~ Dev Khurana!

By Beagle

@Pooja
To him his expressions do not matter
He lets his BODY do all the chatter
He thinks it is sublime
and does not know showing it is a crime

He still may excel
in a role as a statue very well
Or perhaps as a patient
of constipation in a basement

As for the lock
It is a ticking clock
He may contribute to the ticking 
But if they continue picking
Storylines stinking
and logic blinking
POP! will blow the clock
Taking with it the whole lot. 

By Pallo

Did sumone say IQU is sick?????

Pallo gone into depression
GC to IQU kya progression
Crying n more crying sessions
Sickness attacking in constant succession

By Beagle

Dont ask questions
That can find too many answers
Dont ask questions 
That might give you multiple cancers
I think it should suffice
If I give you good advice
Dont go to the sea
We will watch you drown with glee
Do not think of escape
You have committed rape
Quietly take the stones
Let them hit your bones
Let us hear you moan
There is plenty worse 
That can happen to one so cursed

By Ykannan

@Jyo:

Please Please share your good fortune,
for we devils are going crazy
ripping MSK's chaddi
writing sonets for our galti
of watching Dev ke ansoon ki balti..

🀣

By An

Jyoti is having fun,
Baking Denizens as bun,
Holding beans in dozen,
Acting like a cruel Zen πŸ€£

By An

Jyoti is dancing,
Coz her birdies are crooning,
She is here fooling,
while we all sweating under cooling 🀣

By Mariam

Jyo u better tell us now
Otherwise i will start rhyming anyhow
And as u can see im so bad at it
So stop teasing and tell us every bit

By Caco

I feel like such a bore
Cant tolerate reading about Dev anymore
Thought will have fun dissing him
But my brain is overload with talks of the bloody grim
I feel out of focus
Better go join a band and sing the chorus
πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†


By Ykannan

Ok Jyo you asked for it: Here I go

My name is Dev

I am a toad married to a Babe

who has big black eyes

looking into which make me cry

But I am big fool

Who cheated a princess
who is to marry a king

Who will kick my ding

I have a friend myra

Who loves me to pieces

Little does she know

I am looking only to swing

I have a BIG bro

Who will soon throw

A big party

for I was a smarty

So I shall give myself up to the cops

So that they can kick my Ass

And  save me and my lass

From spilling blood drops


By Bealge

 
@An

I am warm
The heating is on
I am alone
The children are in bed and there is no one on the phone
I am curious, for Jyo's happiness does not seem spurious
I wish she would stop dancing, stop prancing
I wish she would spill
Our curiosity she should kill
Else, I am going to have to reach out for a headache pillπŸ˜†

By An

@Yash:

I am a girl simple,
You can spot a pimple,
I am in love with a jerk,
He does not come with any perk,
Met him when he was in school,
Everyone called him the real fool,
He is still a fool though I find him cool,
Cause someone fixed me with a blind tool
.

Meera bai


By An

@Beagle:

Let's go on a search,
Looking for a birdie within reach,
She can spill the beans exclusive for us,

Pulling us out from the zone of stress.

Or better, start baking our own beans,
That have the potential to scream,
This is what is going to happen,
This will make all the scenes dampen.


By ykannan

@Jo:

Hame aise na tadpaoo

Aur yad karaoo

dev ki acting

NT ki batting

aur myra ki catching

baal safed ho gaye

intezaar mein

ki kab jayegi geet tehelne

jungle mein

aur hoga milap

tent aur jhaadiyon mein


By An

When girls stand at point advantage,
They tease the girls standing at disadvantage,
Cause they have the edge,
While others are falling over the edge πŸ€£πŸ€£πŸ€£

__________________

By Beagle

@Yash-

Oh King of toads

You are no fool

You are just uncool

I thought you were a prince,

But you make me wince,

I thought you were rich

But you are so Kitch

 I thought you would make me queen

Of luscious streams of paper green

But married to you

I don't even have a bean

 

Yes, you had to cheat

Now live with it

Dont fall at her feet

Or you will be sweeping dirt and grit

 

I was not party to your crime

My soul is pure and divine

Do you take me for a fool

To step open eyed into your brothers blood pool?


 
By Pallo

I ruddy pity ma spouse
He is worse than dead louse
His stuck up face shows he can't act
Guess I'll have the accept the fact
~ NAIN TARA


By Pallo

Pallo feels the poetic air
Devils sure do have a natural flair
Dev's paralyzed face is one helluva inspiration
To set the latent talents of devils in action

By An

I went to the jungle for 20 min,
And, you all committed the sin,
Made my KC a comedy zoo,
Where everyone is chasing two,
Playing ringa-ringa roses,
Pocket full of abuses πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

MSK

By Darlunia

Dear Fungus...Marsh's friend
If it was just your walking, that we could mend
Seeing you act makes me wish
That I'd died and never watched this shit!!!

By Ykannan

@Marsh

I love your grass skirt

for you look like your wanna flirt

I am all ready my babe

waiting for you in my cape.

🀣


@Gouri:

Happy to hear you get to go to kolkata
And meet doodle
Eat some sondesh and noodle
And have a happy tata.

By Beagle

@An-

There is no stress
When we have the press
Lets find a journalist or two
Who can shake out our blues

Our very own spell bound bean?
Fully magical and green
A lean and mean machine
Fully prophetic and pristine
Our very own magic bean

And then WE will dance
All around in a happy trance
For we will know the unknown
And can watch the others moanπŸ˜†

By An

But Beagle,

Unknown is very exciting,
Known may look enticing,
But, it comes without icing,
The result quite disappointing.

Time to celebrate the unknown,
Take it toward the dazzling crown,
Wait for it to come dancing as a surprise,
Transforming into known when Sun arise.

By Ykannan

@Everyone:

I am so pooped
I feel dope
I thought Jyo had beans to spill
which I would grind in a nice mill
have a happy tortilla and a pear
but I am left staring at a polar bear

By Meg

Under the stars
Away from everyone
Under the moonlight
Chand and the Sun
Your radiance dazzles me
Yet I cannot take my eyes away
Oh Geet, thou art
Brighter than the day
With only the nightingale
In the company of her song
We will fulfill all those desires
That have been waiting so long....

By Beagle

Bri-

What's not to understand
The episodes have been very bland
I am not being humble
when I say, our talk is mumble jumble
We only discuss crap
But still, this den is a vicious trap

 
NOTE: Poetry 4 is continued after four posts 😊
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~~ .: Extracts from The Stalker Diaries & Msg from Ms Taweez :.~~


By Sarirah (Caco)

Extracts from The Stalker Diaries
 
i am so cool that i have decided to build crappy pyar ki nishaanis with my beloved secetry and elope to Swizzerland with her because i dont care about Dadima's fillings anymore.
 
-Maan Singh Khurana. 🀣


By Sarirah

From THE STALKER DIARIES:

Geet told me that she is pregnant πŸ˜• i promise i never did anything. Everything was always done in my daydreams. And now my dream just turned into a nightmare! But in the end i still remain cool because no one does it like me. 😎Take that suckers.πŸ˜‰

PS: I LOVE MY DARK SPOOKY ROOM MORE THAN MYSELF

-Maan Singh Khurana

🀣🀣🀣


By Sarirah

From THE STALKER DIARIES
 
Talk to the hand Geet. 😑 
 
STAY AWAY FROM ME WOMAN....but ye aurtein...in logon ko to kuch samajh nahi aata....i friggin broke another wooden block because of her....first the mirror and now this....doesnt she understand it's RECESSION??
 
Hitting myself against wooden things aint helping....i should have sticked to Maan-chi...! 😳 oh well doesnt matter as long as i get to flaunt it and show-off πŸ˜‰ plus my driving just proves how COOL i am...!
 
PS: I AM TOO SEXY FOR MY SHIRT 😎 
PSS: I LOVE MYSELF EVEN MORE NOW β€οΈ
 
-Maan Singh Khurana


By Tanu

talker entry in Stalker diaries.....
 
 
Yh....it was my day to get ripped again....off that sexy..shiny torso........only to sway in the cool breeze...!! And man..when...the munda SCREAMED his lungs out...i wished..i culd hug him tight... but alas...he had ripped all my buttons..😭 *or velcro as some think*
 
 
But darn my luck.....o babaji....why everytime..the mundas hot sizzlicious chest is near me..u take it away..from me... n make him SWEAT out....without me.. Dont u knw..its my TAQDEER to be on that sexy chest...😳
 
 
----MSKs.. Shirt..😎    Moto:  Take.. me... tear me.....rip me....strip me.... but dun leave me 😳


By Caco

From THE STALKER DIARIES
 
Geet needs to lose some weight....i mean seriously....have some mercy on me woman! And with that superbaby growing inside 😳 KILL ME!  dont even want to think about what the future has in store for me!
 
BTW I am so Phast that Geet fainted during daytime and i reached home with her at night....by the time i reached my bedroom the owls started to hoot too...Cool right? I say no one can ever be as cool as me😎
 
PS: To undress or not to undress that is the question.....hmmmmmmmm πŸ€”
 
-Maan Singh Khurana
 
πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

By Caco

I am Edward Cullen. I can read minds. People come to tell me things....but i already know what they want to tell me. This has to be the coolest thing ever 😎 I was thinking of challenging Paul the Octopus in the next World Cup....hmmmmπŸ€” i think i'll do it HAAN.
 
PS: BREAKING MIRRORS IS MY THANG!
 
-Maan Singh Khurana
 

By Caco

Ye aurtein😑 yes i will get back to hating them again. Like i have any more choices left 😳 i need a shoulder to cry on. Where is my Brij now? Oh right in jail. Is aurat ne mujhe kahi ka nahi chora. i feel like a DHOBI KA KUTTA....na ghar na...na ghat ka😭 

PS: I AM STILL COOL OK😑 just another round of Maan-chi with some flashbacks and everything shall be under CONtrol again😎

-Maan Singh Khurana

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By Caco

From THE STALKER DIARIES
 
Geeet that was an expensive shirt 😑 πŸ˜³ Adi is ready to give up his life for Geet? πŸ˜• Isn't this supposed to be my dialogue or something? πŸ˜• I mean i am the hero of this show...Adi trying to steal my limelight? Bolo na Adi are you?? HMMM? 
 
I am so COOL that i walk around exploiting my abs in the Office.....Khurana CONstructions could't have been in more better hands 😎 
 
PS: CALL ME A MCP BUT IT'S NOT MY FAULT....EVERY GUY WANTS TO SCREW VIRGINS...I CANT ALWAYS BE AN EXCEPTION
 
-Maan Singh Khurana
 
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By Caco

From THE STALKER DIARIES

 
Swizzerland na sahi Manali hi sahi. I just hope Geet did not screw up with the tickuts. I want to reach Manali PHAST.... got lots of work to do...HAAN! πŸ˜‰ Maybe i'll wear my NIKE shoes so that whenever I look down they'll encourage me to "JUST DO IT"....!!
 
PS: YES THAT SUITCASE IS FULL OF PROTEIN SHAKES...😎
 
SUNO TO: MUNNI BADNAM HOGI DARLING MERE LIYE 😈
 
-Maan Singh Khurana
 
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By Caco

From THE STALKER DIARIES
 
Pheww! God bless Nakul for those breakfast in bed with Protein Shakes. All those running at the Railway Station 😳
 
I am so COOL that I can feel Geet's presence whenever i want to. "Feel Senses" demanded at office....i feel her....not demanded at station so i dont feel her even if she's standing just behind me...i just get cooler every passing episode 😎
 
 
PS: I STALK GEET...THE TAVEEZ STALKS ME 😳
 
-Maan Singh Khurana
 
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By Caco

From THE STALKER DIARIES
 
Agar roop tera mastanaπŸ˜›
To body mera kaatilana😎
Geet ko laga mera pyar beimanaπŸ˜•
Miss Brij and my Dostana
 
 
-Maan Singh Khurana
 
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By Caco

From Dostana Diaries
 
Dost dost na raha
Pyar pyar na raha
Jise maine apna mana
Woh Bunty ke piche bhag gaya
 
😭😭😭
 
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By Caco

From THE STALKER DIARIES
 
Thande thande pani mein nahana chahiye....aur Geet ko seduce karne ke liye towel mein ghum na chahiye! 😈
 
What did i tell you about this girl being a turn off...last night it was that tree like falling on the bed and today...what does she mean by making me wait till my hair is grey? ...CHUP....tab to kuch karne ki bhi taqat nahi hogi mujhme...! MAHIIIIIIIIIII 😭
 
She keeps on hurting my fillings  wait till i get her alone in my kebin and ask her if she wants to go to the discotheque with me πŸ˜‰ we'll do salsa on Kurbaan Hua and then i shall nail it when Hum Tum Ek Kamrein Mein Bandh Ho coz i know she is my Deewani after all my Roop is so Mastana😎
 
PS: I LOVE SHOWING MY BOXERS OFF... IT IS COOL...HAAN!
 
-Maan Singh Khurana
 
πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
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By Caco


From THE STALKER DIARIES


Another chance gone in vain....not my fault i was turned off by Geet again....!!  


Story of my Life 
the tent was ready
i was greedy
but Geet as usual was unsteady 

People call me slow but i have my reasons too 😳
i wanted to join her in the tub
but then i realized i am in love with a low voltage bulb
if i went in
she would scream and create a public scene

Kill me 

PS: I AM A STALKER AND AM PROUD OF IT....NO ONE DOES IT LIKE I DO😎

-Maan Singh Khurana

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By Caco


From THE STALKER DIARIES

I LIKE TO MOVE IT MOVE IT

Did you just see how COOL i am at bhangra πŸ˜Ž 

Okay I am just going to let you know about this little secret of mine. Apart from Kapalbatthi i am interested in doing Bhangra. Daler Mehndi is my favourite Panjabi singer. 

Tunak tunak tunak tun....tunak tunak tun...tunak tunak tun ta na na....

sorry i got a bit carried away....so where was i....oh right....so you see at times when i am not stalking Geet....i secretly practice bhangra in my room unknown to the world...that is why i am so good at it.

Dont be shocked... there are times when i dont stalk Geet...HAAN!

PS: HIL HIL KE NACHO NACHO 

-Maan Singh Khurana

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By Caco

 
From THE STALKER DIARIES

I am back sweethurt....missed me?πŸ˜‰

And guess what? Latest I discovered I have the power of Wolverine β­οΈ did u see how phast i healed....even after that lift fell from the 3rd floor....i managed to give one whole round of the hospital....and STALKED Geet..! How COOL is that? πŸ˜Ž I say no one does it like I do...HAAN! 

I can also play SRK better than SRK himself...I am just the best!

PS: KISKA HAI YE TUMKO INTEZAAR MAIN HOON NA πŸ€—

-Maan Singh Khurana

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By Caco

From THE STALKER DIARIES

Geet  I have absolutely no idea what to do with this girl. No matter how much I try to turn her on, she turns me off. 😳
 
Come on miss
I just wanted a darned kiss
That would have finally given me some bliss
But your stupidity makes me want to pissssss 😳
 
Ye aurtein kuch bhi nahi samajhti. Like hello I am a guy. There are some things which are like important for men.
 
PS- AYO, I'M TIRED OF USING TECHNOLOGY.
 
-Maan Singh Khurana
 
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(those who did not understand the meaning of the PS google the lyrics of the song AYO TECHNOLOGY 🀣 and if u still dont get it I FEEL SORRY FOR YOU 🀣 just PM me and i'll tell you🀣🀣 but please try and figure out yourself)
 
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From THE STRIPPER DIARIES
 
People have started telling me I am no more a stone. I give facial expressions a bit these days. AWESOME RIGHT 😎 It was quite hard for me to maintain that same expression all the time. Plus hinting people of expression change with my glasses has made the frames loose 😳 And i can't even give my glasses for repair. I have no money.  Aur jo bhi tha Naintara ne woh bhi le liya 😭
 
I know i am DUMB. But you know what, sometimes I myself get shocked with my dumbness. I have finally given divorce to Naintara, and what was i thinking? πŸ˜• How did I even think that I stand a chance against a mastermind like her. I gotta admit that I miss the days when Naintara used to all the thinking. Making my brains do some work is so darn tough. πŸ˜’
 
PS- I HAVE A PEA-SIZED BRAIN. (kisiko bolna mat)
 
-Dev Singh Khurana aur andaaz hai mera katilana 🐷
 
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By Polki

Dear Devils,

Of course by now you all know who I am, and with whom I am. As upset as I may be about not being with Maan, I have accepted my fate and decided that for once I will be good and fulfill my assignment. Don't get me wrong, I am still trying to find ways to get back to Maan, there is always one scheme or another running through my head; however until now none seem to be feasible options. What do you expect, I am a tiny metal box.   

Yes, since I have to bring Geet and Maan together in the true sense, not the little dance they have been dancing since I came into the picture, I have decided to transfer some the protection powers to Geet, if you noticed, the girl has started to use her brain in innovative ways. After all we need Maan to realize that she is his equal. One more thing that has gotten my blood boiling is he still keeps on thinking she is 'Bechari'. Dude are you really that dense, didn't you see what she did, she put her own life in danger to protect you, a bechari wouldn't do that.

So I am thinking that maybe just maybe I may encourage Geet to pick up a talvar. I know you den girls will really love that, but lets see I haven't made up my mind completely about that.

I think I am done with my pravachan to you mere mortals. But I need some help from you guys, can you all suggest some ways for me to get back to Mr. McDreamy Maan. Ahh kya man hain.

Ms. Taveez

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By Polki

A message from Ms. Taveez.

Hello Devils,

Some of you may wonder why I only talk to you lot, the truth is that outside the den, it seems that there is nothing but a dark abyss. I am scared to go out there

Anyways, I was quite the entire weekend because I was thinking, I was thinking about how to get back to Maan, I was thinking about how stupid one Ms. Geet was' removing me from the attic. 😑.
Just think about it, when munda goes back to the house with his heart broken, be may want to visit that Pigoen coop again, he may look for me, yes me and what will he find nothing, nada, kuch nahi, why because she, she removed me from the attic πŸ˜•. He has in the past always acknowledged that I am what ties him to her, now he wont find me
😲 I wonder if he will think that it is a sign that he can't find me. Nahhiiii!!!!!!!!

How am I supposed to do my job, if she keep on taking me in her grubby hands and time and again takes me away from my munda 😍 He is so dreamy. hai la. (Taveez come back to her senses)
Why doesn't she get it, that he is supposed to be her hunsafar, yeah yeah, what happened on Friday was sad, but people it is not the end of the world. If it were I would have stuck to Maan and never let him put me down.

They both need to understand that they are destined to be together, the sooner they understand that, the faster I get to put myself around him. 😳

All I have to say is that all you intelligent people think, think about how I can get back to my munda and take my place around his neck. I will be waiting for your answers.

Ms. Taveez

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By Polki

F
rom the Diaries of Ms. Taveez

a reply to MSK's diary entry.

Dear MSK 😍 dreamy MSK

You may think you are Maha Cool, but you always have to bend down to get to me. 😳 Oh! Now if I could only get a view of that backside while you are bending, I will feel like my life's purpose has been fulfilled. So if you can keep this request in mind I will be much obliged.


Love you always MSK

Ms. Taveez

PS: All you people I know my job is to unite these two, I haven't forgotten it, so no posts on that matter.

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By Polki

A message from MS. Taveez to Blue


Dear Blue,

From your lips to God's ears. But could you also pray that I get to see munda's behind before I go around his neck. Please Please Please

Ms. Taveez


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By Polki
 
Dear MSK,

The girl is stupid, no matter what you do she will never get in through her thick head that you love her and everything you have said to her is all true.

Really do you really want to be in a relationship with someone who still thinks after all the declarations of love that this is all fake...No

I know I want to be with you, but I have to accept defeat... Run  Munda Run as far as you can away from her.

I will live the rest of my life in your thoughts...OH! wait you actually have me.  Yeahh!!!!


Ms.  Taveez
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By Polki

Dear Devils....

I am back and with a vengeance....don't worry she already put me around her true humsafar's neck...so even if I am parted I will find my way back...no matter what NT does or Dadi does...it is time to take a stand...also they don't know how munda got me...so I don't think they are going to try to return me to Geet....they may stop her from seeing him...but bhgwan ke ghar me dar hogi andher nahi....

Also Geet needed to do this on her own...she has always said this was her fight and that she needed to fight this alone...I know Polki didn't agree with this before, but I think after seeing Sherni Kudie today, she is okay.....


Wait till munda is all better, she will still need his support.  Its not easy to fight the world on your own...no man is an island and kudie can use all the help she can get.

So keep faith...invite all new people into kudie's life with open arms and sit back and relax...

Kahani abhi baki hain

Ms. Taveez

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By Polki
 
Dear Devils,
 
Did you all see how I tried today, but what can a tiny little metal box do?  You can't expect me to jump onto Munda from Kudie's hands.  I tell you she loves to hold me tight in her grubby hands.  I tied to hold onto the door, but my plan failed..πŸ˜•

Don't worry my beautiful Devils,  I know that I will lend up again where I belong; around dreamy Munda's neck.  Once again resting on that wonderful chest.

Moving on, munda has woken up and it is only a matter of time before he comes looking for me, sorry I mean Kudie.πŸ˜†

So relax, enjoy the show.  As they say kahani abhi baki hain.

Ms. Taveez
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By Polki
 
Dear Devils,

First let me make it clear, I am a SHE.  You may wonder why I have to clarify my sex, well because there were some devils laughing at the fact that Polki referred to me as SHE in her bavishyavani.  Hello,  I want to feel munda and I  love the sight of  his behind, me is not GAY.

Well now that the issue of my sex is cleared. Lets move on to today's show.  My munda woke up, yes he did πŸ˜ƒ he even lifted his hand, yes he did πŸ˜ƒ and he smiled when he saw kudie.  

See how smart I was to slip out of her grubby hands so that she had to return to the hospital once again.  Now that she has found me and has been told that munda is in the ICU, I am just hoping that I get to fulfill my assignment.  

Every time I think I am successful, something or another happens. πŸ˜•  I have a feeling that munda and kudie may not be together just yet, but relax- I am working on it.  

Hopefully kudie puts me around his neck once again and I am back where I belong.  Around dreamy munda's neck😍

Ms. Taveez
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By Nabz, Ayesha & Polki
 
LMFAO 🀣 taveez is a shee? πŸ˜†
 
Of course taveez is a SHE, maan is not gay to hang a HE around his neck! 🀣
 
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Polki
 
Dear Devils....

The other day one of you said it rightπŸ‘πŸΌ, I am like a GPS and you know why? because I am always trying to find my way to munda.πŸ˜›

Munda is awake and nothing will stop him from seeing Kudie as Yash said it, "Pyaar meh log kya kya nahi karte."  πŸ˜³Okay I am paraphrasing, but that is allowed since I am a small metal box.  Tomorrow I will be back where I belong, fingers crossed.

Naintara listen to your Pati DEVπŸ˜†.  For once he is saying something that makes sense.  Now no matter who you bring to stop them, they will  be together and also as Kudie said he will take the side of truth against family. πŸ˜ƒ Plus you aren't really family are you Princess of Patiala.  πŸ˜•You just married his moron brother for money.  Oh! and if you think you can take over the business and kick Geet out, no worries Yash to the rescue he just made her CEO of his company.  Wow and 18 year old with no experience is going to run an entire company.  Someone sure surpassed you.  Are you sad.

Anyways devils remember Yash is a good guy, so support him too.  I believe he is Vicky since only family members are given patient information.  Also I really liked how he teased Geet about the Maan Sir bit.  Ms. Taveez thinks he has good Devar potential.  Hey CVs if you read my letter, Ms. Taveez demands you make Yash into Vicky.  Make the transition smooth and rational, Please.😊

What do I care? tomorrow I will be around munda's neck once again.😍

So that being said, enjoy the den Devils.

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By Minniemau (Minnie/MM)
 
@ Poli - Loving your dairies! Please tell your Ms. Taveez.. do her job well instead of caressing Munda's freshly waxed and oiled chest, next time..  no elevator should crash and she should bite any hands that touch her.. other than Maan and Geet's especially NT's 🀣

By Polki
 
@MM....Ms.  Taveez does her best to keep the munda out of trouble, but when you put a little metal box in a large hollow metal box, what do you expect....πŸ˜•

As for causing harm to negative forces when they touch me, I was never given the powers to harm... I know how unfair, but you should complain about that to Babaji above.  I wish I could cause major bodily harm to NT, but that shall only remain a wish, until munda is in full form.  I will be giving him strength to fight for kudie against NT so don't worry.  

As for me wanting to get onto munda's waxed smooth chest, what harm does it do...every girl has dreams and mine are being on his chest.  πŸ˜
 
 
By Minnie
 
@ Ms. Taveez via Poli -  You can dream all you want.. better do your job.. remember you are to keep Babaji ki Mehr on Munda.. next time I find your day dreaming and Munda gets hurt.. I am sending you to Devji 🀣🀣  And you better start practicing some kick boxing in that hollow metal box of yours.. do not under estimate Hell ka Tara... after all she is an alien! 🀣🀣
 
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By Polki
 
Dear Devils,

Okay what is up with all the flowers?  Didn't someone say yesterday that flowers weren't allowed in the hospitalπŸ˜•.  Moving on, that hug lasted a little too long, I am sure many of you will disagree but this is my opinion.- seriously 5 mins for a hug is a little too much.

Okay so the kudie still has me in her grubby hands and she still hasn't put me around his neck, why O why?  Come on woman, there is a reason why you put me around his neck in the first place...put me back..

Also the girl lied, tsh! tsh! is this what your babaji has taught you?  As a servant of the powers above I am disappointed, you better tell him the truth fast, else if something goes wrong don't blame me..

For a metal box today was meh!  Would have been better if I was back around Munda's neck.  Kahani badi filmy thee...

Ms. Taveez
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By Polki
 
Dear Devils,

Today I am in the mood to be very intellectual.  I am tired of just ranting on and on..maybe it is time to use my brain and stop depending on the two love birds to use their brains do the right thing.  πŸ˜•

Yes, you read right, I have given up, even a small metal box can run out of patience.  πŸ˜‘So I have decided to give the two a little Gyan.

First I would like to talk to Kudie, woman your man is not so weak.  He got injured and yet within two days he was on his feet, giving orders to all, making the hospital into his office. πŸ˜† He can handle the truth even his reports state that he is healthy. ⭐️  So I want you to remember the words of George McDonald- To be trusted is a bigger compliment than to be loved.  πŸ‘πŸΌYes, trust the abilities of your man, trust his strength, trust his love for you.  Once you stop distrusting him, he is a brick wall- a hatta katta naujawan, everything will start to point you both in the right direction.  As Samual Johnson would say, It is better to suffer wrong than to do it, and happier to be sometimes cheated than not to trust.  Not that I am saying that what happened to you was right, but you need to start trusting.

Now for you Munda,  listen to me,  I know you have a nagging feeling in the pit of your stomach that Kudie is hiding something😲 trust your instincts, don't let her once again get away with not telling the truth.πŸ˜•  I know your hormones start doing somersaults whenever you lay your eyes on herπŸ˜‰, control munda control.  As Ralph Waldo Emerson said Trust thyself; every heart vibrates to that iron string.  Trust your heart, Kudie taught you to love, she helped you open your heart once again to the joys of the world😳, trust this heart of yours and today this love of yours needs you.  Also when she tells you the truth keep in mind the words of Walter Savage Landor- Delay in justice is injustice.  Don't let her down, I know the fight is going to be difficult since you have to fight your own flesh and blood. πŸ˜” But this will be the test of your love so don't loose.  πŸ˜Š  

Now the two of you listen, don't loose hope.  Stay together and win,  beware of Naintara, she is always up to no good.

And yes Kudie, when are you going to put me around Munda's neck.  I am getting tired of waiting.  I am supposed to protect the two of you and make sure you both are always together, but in order to achieve that you have to put me around your humsafar's neck.  I can't be a GPS all my existence.  I helped you find him now do what you have to.

Ms. Taveez

still editing...adding previous entries


Edited by devilsden - 13 years ago