#*Devil's Den#* Maan Singh Khurana Ki Jawani

HUMOR/COMEDY

Edited by cacoethes - 13 years ago

Edited by cacoethes - 13 years ago

Here is poem by Jane

Some of you may know me from Geet FB by Name

I venture into IF Land

I hope you enjoy where I land

Jane has written many poems about this Serial

About all the characters who give her so much Material

Geet Hui Sab Se Paraye is its Name

A story so inspiring is its Game

All about a beautiful Girl called Geet

And a Maan she was destined to Meet

Maan Singh Khurana is so Hot Hot

He makes all the girls completely loose the Plot

Even when the story didnt quite have the Power

If Maan Sing Khurana was in the Shower

We didn't really damn Care

As long as his chest was Bare

Together Maan n Geet overcame so many Obstacles

I was so glued to the screen I had to change several Spectacles

Many comedy highlights In Geet story there Are

Hilarious scenes in the Out House by Far

My favourate sequence has to be Maan finding Geet in his Bed

Enough praises of that scene cannot be Said

Through out that memorable Night

They were having an all Mighty Fight

Every funny moment ended up in an eyelock so Sizzling

Cold water on her head Jane was drizzling

Maan's expressions were priceless when Geet told him that it was HER House

He thought if he scared her she would go quietly as a Mouse

But He didn't reckon on Geet being so Brave

He was so exasperated he thought she would send him to his Grave

When Maan broke down that Out House Door

Tears of Laughter out of my eyes began to Pour

Arguing and screaming upstairs- downstairs they Ran

Jane became Maan n Geets total Fan

From that day on Geet Maan was totally Hooked

On that day Nissar and Geet Team a Wedding hall should have booked

Then we wouldn't have had to wait this long for the biggest wedding in Serial land

But I have to sing their praises, To Team Geet Jane must give a Very Big Hand

For a Future plot I can suggest

An awesome plot that would be best

I would love to see Maanisha and Nakul falling for Brij

Chasing him around the Khurana kitchen Fridge

Poor Brij, Geet's murder he is trying to Plan

But all his attempts are going down the Pan

It would be so funny to see him being chased

Nakul and Maanisha wouldnt be fazed

Maanisha and Nakul calling him Honey

Would that be hilarious and funny

He would be bothered by these annoying Flies

Before Brij by Maan's hand Dies

Here I must end this my Poem so Long and Boring

Cripes I can hear you lot are SNORING!

Edited by lovetocomment - 13 years ago

From THE STALKER DIARIES

Geet mere hone wali patni 😳 about time she understands why I dont want to do certain things i did not want to do the Bachelor Party because I did not want to spend more money...the wedding already is costing me so much...adding more parties only increases the expenses...plus Geet always keeps on falling in trouble...those CC cameras cost me a treasure 😭 and there is always the Doctor ki fees....regular check-up is fine but those additional ones ruins my monthly budget forecasts and i have to redo them again there is a reason why I threw her a party at home and not in some discotheque...i did not want to spend more money... this girl will have to come to terms with my Kanjoosi.... it is a part of who I am HAAN!

 

I knew my Brij will comeback for me 😳 he  just wants to kill Gith coz he knows she is the haddi in our Kebab Ghar 😕 buddhu kahi ka...all he has to do is only ask and I shall go running to his arms 🤗 previously when I saw him from his behind...it did look familiar...i can sense when he is around...smell his presence....☺️ soon we shall meet...get nostalgic

 

Me and my sexy lathait

I am his dingbat

He is my house cat

Soon I will make him my doormat😈

 

PS- MY JAWANI IS BETTER THAN EMRAN HASHMI'S 😎😉

 

-Maan Singh Kanjoos

 

😆

 

Edited by cacoethes - 13 years ago

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Previous DENS with THEMES

 

 

Introduction on the SHOW's THEME
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1566472

Dadi 
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1567872

Potential Plot lines (MB)
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1568732

MSK
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1569633

Dev
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1570540

Aesthetics (make up etc)
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1571442

Dialogues
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1572317

Brij and Yash
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1573564

Sameera
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1574594

Arjun
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1575672

Marketing
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1576750

Geet
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1577842

Symbolism
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1578747

BABY
https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1580084

Naintara

 

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1581149

Maan and Geet's Realtionship 
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1582079

Anwesha 
https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1583141

 

Meera

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1584065

 Vicky

https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1585110

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1586283

Edited by cacoethes - 13 years ago

res --------------------- Edited by Cute_Ash - 13 years ago

~Un-Res~


yesterday as u all ill remembr i was pretty much angry.. ok very very mucho angry abt the editing of the song sequence.. n sine today' s was edited in a similar fashion with a little bttr effects.. i liked how Sayanthi's moves where repeated on the side while showing Maaneet.. nok jhok on the other end.. tat was  bttr..   toh i dont get why u editors use the colours for the effects so blunt.. tey wud look bttr overlayed... ok wht ever.. i am not talking abt VMs anymore.. me is irritated tat u r making me say all tis n ofcourse about the Auction thingie u do with very well choregraphed n performed dances😳.

intotal Ress is pleased with the epi.. it was ok

actually the beginning was good.. loved Daadi and her shararath,.. Antakshari to pata nahin kis zamaaane ke hain😆 her latkas n jhatkas..

n thn Geet going its is last chance bechara!!🤣


thn Sayanthi was Fab.. beileve me i hav nvr seen the original yet..😳 yea i know!! mayb i shud.. coz i hear Sayanthi was bttr.. 😆 ill chk out.

Maaneet were more of GC n DD..
i think tis whole busy scheduling is getting into 'em😳

hmmmm.. yea abt justifying yesterdays Maan-Brij scene.. good mov.. but me still not taking tat long stare MSK gve.. he wud hv simply walked across n seen who it was.. n stalked in style from t front... Its his Kingdom n he is the Stalker King!!

rest.. aiwi.. i ill talk l8r if i get tim.. wrk to do.. !

lastly i hated the Sajna ve (ewwwwwwwwwwwww!! the ooohs n aaahs..  were more pathetic tonight)..  n the other NE files!

Lov~
Ress!

Caco Comedy n Humour.. U r the King.. just lik Maan is the Stalker king..
ill comment aftr i find tim..

Jane n Ten Ben... Welcom guys🤗 donno u guys personally.. but tis is how we know eachother in tis Virtual world by reading eachother! ill read urs Asap !



PS :  CVs n everyone reading.. please dont MU me.. me still hate the dunderhead editors n the CVs who hired em...just not in mood to throw red tomatoes at em tonight.. me got no time for 'em tonight

PPS : i am loving it!!! yest wht i had yelled from a lone corner.. has voices with echoooes n spl effects today.. Lov u all for the red tomaters n everything u throw at som Random amateur VM makrs!!
Edited by mi7chimes - 13 years ago

I have no idea why i reserved today...🤣 🤣  🤣

Welcome Jane and Mrs.Ben Ten

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1. Episode over all was good.
2. What is wrong with the editing team? The hideous effects during the song sequences are so annoying. Its an eye sore. The screen shaking and the zooming in and out is not necessary at all. In fact none of the effects are...I think we the audience, would like to see it plain and simple.
3. Why do we have those flashing lights and horrible camera angles during Sheila Ki Jawani?
4. I like the Geet crashed the party. That is so Geetish. 🤣 🤣
5. I like the office staff. They bring a comic element and I love it! I would love to see them more often.
6. Daadi, having fun with the girls is just awesome. 🤣 🤣 🤣
7. The best part of the episode was Maan Singh Khurana being the intelligent man we know him to be. I am glad that he discovered Brij by connecting the dots himself and it was not in some dramatic way. Intelligent heroes are always more attractive. 😉🤣 
8. Oh mi gosh! How fast is Anwesha? I guess she takes after Devtard. It took 9 months for Maan and Geet to say "ILU" and with so much dragging and tamasha...here we have the non-existent one saying as if its "I love you's" for sale. 🤢 🤢 She is such a despo that she gives Arjun a ring. This girl has no self respect running after a guy who has continuously called her stupid and rejected her. Really? Maan Singh Khurana's sister comes off as so cheap! 😳
9. CV's need to remember that Arjun is hear on a mission...it would be nice to know what that mission is. I wonder if they have been so busy trying to start some pathetic love story between Arjun and Annie, that they forgot he came to seek revenge. Has Piyush forgotten how to act? His face is expressionless. Maybe its the Nikunj effects rubbing off on him from working with her. He seems a bit tired as well.

Humor: All I can say is that I love comedy in Geet! I love the nok jhoks between Maan and Geet. The latest "ILU" ring tone is icing on the cake. I hope Maan gets caught with that during a board meeting. 🤣 🤣 🤣 I have already said this before, but I want to see and entire scene with Maanisha hitting on Maan and Geet enjoying Maan trying to escape Maanisha's clutches. 🤣 🤣 🤣 I'll take comedy any day over the rhona dhona.  Edited by Ann.A - 13 years ago

res😛 Edited by deniac - 13 years ago

Today's Episode looked more like a filler to me with few interesting scenes in between but the Sheila dance turned out to b a disappointment for me

• Shoddy Camerawork and too many light effects with those irritating orange balls which sort of ruins the dance completely because u can hardly see them dancing since the screen had those flashing lights all around
• Editing of the whole sequence was poor👎🏼;There was no need to divide the song into two parts with that dialogue interruption in between and then suddenly Sheila pulling MSK to the dance floor and Geet too starts dancing😕...The song should hv been completed in one flow only😊.//..even when Geet comes to the party,they should hv continued with the song showing MSK trying to manaofy her in the same song...
• Choreography of Maan and Geet was poor👎🏼;I dunno why GC was given no proper dancing steps when he is soo good with western dance😕;I can understand about DD since Geet is shown to b preggy ,so she was not given complicated steps but GC could hv been given some better steps I feel🤔
• The scene where those girls carry MSK in their arms upto the dance floor ,was a bit too much and looked rather funny than cool🤣🤣🤣🤣
• There were certain off-screen moments of slow dance between GC-DD which was edited out and so all had debates on whether its on-screen or off-screen😆;I will just give free ka advice to CVs and SBS/SBB people that if they want to edit out those scenes or they were suppose to b off-screen,then kindly don't expose those scenes to the viewers before the actual episode or if u expose it then say its off-screen,so that viewers don't feel cheated while watching the sequence and blame the editors everytime😆😊

• Shayantani was superb with her cool moves👍🏼;Her choreography for the starting mukhda part was quite good😊..
• Part where MSK picks up Sheila in his arms and swings around was a cool move and captured well😳..
• Even the last part of the dance was good and simple where all 3 r dancing freely without a proper choreography..looked natural to me😊;In fact I liked Geet's approach here,the way she was all cool with Sheila and din't show her insecurity but instead enjoyed the party😉😛;It showed Geet is different from other female leads again😃..

Edited by jyoti06 - 13 years ago