SwaSan SS: The Postern of Fate: Epilogue 2 (Final) updated on Page 48 - Page 52

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Posted: 9 years ago
@ Anu 🤗
If you are still thinking / open about the choice of musical instrument you want to learn---apart from the veena which is of course, superb; you could consider the mandolin as well. It's traditionally a western musical instrument, but adapted to play Carnatic/ Hindustani Raagas in a marvelous manner. I love going for concerts by maestros in either of these instruments. 😊

Love

Viji
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

@ Anu 🤗

If you are still thinking / open about the choice of musical instrument you want to learn---apart from the veena which is of course, superb; you could consider the mandolin as well. It's traditionally a western musical instrument, but adapted to play Carnatic/ Hindustani Raagas in a marvelous manner. I love going for concerts by maestros in either of these instruments. 😊

Love

Viji


Viji. 🤗

I will consider this. 😊 Seems another interesting instrument.

Love,
Anu.
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Posted: 9 years ago

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Viji. 🤗

I will consider this. 😊 Seems another interesting instrument.

Love,
Anu.



🤗🤗 Wish you the very best of luck and joy with whichever one you choose finally. And good luck with your studies, too!

Love,

--Viji

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Posted: 9 years ago
Nynu, Aheli, Lucky, Nandu, Shruti 🤗🤗🤗


Your comments have all seriously made my day----and ensured this Monday had no blues at all! 😳 🤗 Will start with my individual reverts the soonest I can, dears.
🤗

Loads and Loads of Love,

----Viji

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Alvapriya

RES🤗

HOPEFULLY WILL UNRES TOMORROW.

SO SORRY FOR BEING EXTREMELY LATE😕

STILL NOT FULLY RECOVERED...🤢



Dear Viji
I am so very sorry for taking this much long😭
Still struggling for time because of college commitments😭
Please do forgive me .


I am giving a brief comment for first chapter as I am yet to read the remaining ones...
I wanted to reply in detail but for now I really really have a packed schedule and I dont want to delay more as I am already very very guilty😭
So please bear me this time.
Hope you dont mind me commenting for chapter by chapter.



Oh my god...what a flowing start to the story dear.
Really liked the way you described the plot when Sanskar was unconscious.
Sanskar had only Swara's constant image in his memories
Young exquisitely lovely woman, her shoulder length, luxuriant tresses whipping in the breeze🤗...what a description👏



Oh no.😭...his mind is also reflecting the only memory of Swara shooting him???
[ I literally hate that...TUM-KHOONI -HO phase in serial]
I am in love with that part where you so beautifully described only Swara's memory being stable in Sanskar's mind when his mind was in complete blank state.



Finally he remembered who he was...SANSKAR RAM PRASAD MAHESWARI...
Ohh nooo...his mind is playing flashes of what his family did to him?
So that means Kavita??😔


Looks like he is back into...THEY - KILLED - MY - KAVITA MODE🤢
But loved the chapter😳

Hopefully will read remaining as soon as time permits me to.


Stay blessed
- Harshada


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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum



🤗🤗 Wish you the very best of luck and joy with whichever one you choose finally. And good luck with your studies, too!

Love,

--Viji


Thank you so much! 🤗 🤗

Love,
Anu.
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Posted: 9 years ago
@ Harshu, thanks for your comment dear. Will revert the soonest I can---and no problem whatsoever, with you posting your comments a chapter a time, as you finish reading.

I'm just so glad you are reading and commenting when time permits, in between your college schedule. 🤗

Lots of Love

Viji
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Originally posted by: svg98

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Piya


Piya my dear pal..🤗 🤗

Feeling so very emotional after reading your comment. Immensely moved by all your warm words. Really means a lot.

Shall revert in detail, soonest I can.

Loads of Love 🤗

Viji
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi Viji dear,🤗
I loved both the epilogues..They are amazing..👍🏼Stay blessed and lots of love..😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: iam_aheli_98

Hey my dearest Viji!!!🤗

Hey Aheli sweetheart 🤗🤗🤗

Finally unresed.😃
Awesome update!! Superb update!!!👏👏

Thanks so much, my dear pal. Your feedback has been so tremendously motivating throughout this Fic, and my recent fics as well. 🤗

The kiddo's room decoration was written so wonderfully.😉 The way Sanskar was teasing Swara was nice.😛 SwaRagini's little bro Ahir is such a sweet and joyful baby.😳😃 Awww!! Little Ahir adored his Sanskar jeeju and Lakshya jeeju so much!!!😳😳 Specially his Sanskar jeeju.😉

😉 The room decoration with glow stickers was kind of from personal experience. 😆 My Hubby and I went a bit overboard with glow in the dark stars, planets, comets etc before my daughter was born. 😆 The room would have spread glowing light to half the neighborhood. 😆

I do see Ahir as an extremely cute and chubby kiddo. He is very attached to his sisters and to his Lakshya jeeju too; but Sanskaar jeeju is his favorite, right after his own parents. 😊 He would certainly hero worship Sanskaar once he grows up a bit more; try to imbibe his qualities. 😊


Sanskar's way to stop Swara's teasing was really exciting!!😈 As a result, their kiss was...☺️☺️ And after that his reply to Swara that "Tum meri biwi ho, tumse kya sharmana."☺️ OMG!!! Already I was in SwaSan dreamland after watching this Friday's episode where we got an unexpected lip kiss from our Sanky to our Swara followed by a similar reply.☺️ And after reading ur update, I just can't get over from my SwaSan obsession.😳

😳 ☺️ That scene from friday's episode is playing in an endless loop in my head. 😉 I just couldn't resist putting a scene in this Epilogue, where Sanskaar stops Swara from speaking further in this most delectable, tender, sensuous manner. 😳 He he...none of us will ever get over our SwaSan obsession dear---coz none of us would ever want to! 😉

Laksh tried to tease Swara with kido's room decoration but got mock glare from her instead.😆 Really loved SanLak's bonding.😳 Swara is so excited for the arrival of the new member.😳😆

Yeah, Lakshya tried telling her that the stickers were way too many, but Swara gave him a murderous glare. 😆 Feel so happy to hear that you loved the SanLak bonding here. They have really restored their relationship to being the close brothers, confidantes and best friends they used to be, all through their childhood and teen years. And they certainly enjoy pulling each others legs! 😆 Swara is completely thrilled with the forthcoming arrival of the new bundle of joy. 😉 As you know, I ahd kind of made it seem the expected arrival was SwaSan's baby...😆 but with the twist coming a bit later. 😉

And they way the sisters reacted to the baby's kick was really delighting!!😳 U know, while reading, I was thinking that it was Swara who is going to have the baby, but then after reading the kick part, I got to know that it was Ragini who is going to have one.😳😆 When Swara asked Sanskar to feel the baby's kick, he was embarrassed.😆 RagLak became emotional while feeling their baby's kick.😊

Yeah, that first kick of the growing baby is always a very emotional moment. And as we discussed yesterday, that mild confusion part was intentional..😆 I did make it seem it was SwaSan's baby, before disclosing that it was RagLak who were expecting their first baby. 😆 😉 Sanskaar would certainly feel embarrassed---he and Ragini have become good friends now, but feeling the baby's movements on her baby bump is not something he'd be comfortable with. 😆 I did want to show that sweet, tender moment between RagLak, as they feel their unborn baby's movements together. Its such a special, ethereal moment for expectant parents.

So RagLak's baby will call SwaSan as Bade Papa and Badi Maa.😃 Thank god li'l Ahir didn't have to call SwaSan, his big siso and jeeju by those names.😉 Loved Laksh care for his preggy wifey.😉

Yeah, that was what they finally decided regarding the terms---Bade Papa and Badi Ma. 😊 And yes, thank God Li'l Ahir didn't have to call them that! He is content calling his Didis and Jeejus by the right terms! 😊

Oho!! My Sanskar's mind became asanskari when he saw his wifey's slim midriff through her sari's pallu!!😈 He couldn't stop his uncontrollable testosterone!!!🤣 And started doing his asanskari work.😉 But our Swara madam suddenly realized that they were in the kitchen at the middle of the night.😆 Awww!! How cutely Sanskar was requesting Swara for their Baby Making Practice Session!!😳😆 Loved they way how SwaSan were teasing each other and were enjoying each other's company so much!!!😳😳 This epilogue was really a light headed one.😃 A perfect ending.👍🏼 Loved it.❤️ And thanks for the pm.😃

😳 I was completely in SwaSan dreamland when I wrote that scene yaar. So overjoyed to know that you loved reading it, too. ☺️ Asanskaari Sanskaar is such fun, no? He has such cute and wonderful plans, too! And puts them into effect with perfect determination and mischievous tactics, too! Naughty, flirtatious Sanskaar----how can Swara ever resist him? 😉 😳 The baby making practice sessions certainly proceeded very well, indeed! 😉

You are absolutely welcome about the PM, my dear. Once again, it has been such a pleasure and privilege to ave your feedback.
🤗🤗🤗


With love and lots of hugs!!!🤗🤗
Aheli.



My Dearest Aheli, 🤗🤗🤗

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Loads of Love,

---Viji

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