Mind blowing beginning..
I never thought that ever what if the reverse case has happened..it would have been so unexpected..Sanskar falling from the cliff and Swara shooting to save him from that evil man..he falling into the river and flowing through the flooded river holding onto that piece of log for 60 kms and still breathing.Absolutely not possible for a normal guy..Sanskar surely makes the impossible possible.Also he knows that his life doesn't belongs to him..it's for someone else and he have no right to leave her like that..He can't and would not ever leave her alone in this world and so he grabs tha one in a million chance and comes back to life.He remembers nothing but the hazy memories but his heart is enough to indicate that someone is praying eagerly to come back to her.And so he collects himself to make a speedy and stunning recovery..
He gains himself back and only see one face that of a beautiful women..an amazing description of Swara it couldn't have been better..of course he would see only her face above all..she is not just imprinted on his mind and heart put on his very soul forever..the reason of his existence..part of very being.. a lady fighting for his love.His feelings are brought up wonderfully at this point..why would a women like her wants to kill him what he must have done that to her that must have brought this kind of intensity in the womens face to shoot him as her whole existence depends on that action..ofcourse he dosent know that she is doing this just to save him..magnificently written..yup he would have never felt fear from her..only a deep connection..so very beautifully you have explained what Sanskar is feeling at that moment..and then he gives his all to recover and the night comes..Sanskar Maheshwari is back..but that surely is an explosive twist you made in the climax of the first part..the rage and anger I think is due to incident happened with Kavita..he must be thinking that his family must have tried to kill him to save their reputation..Now this would be interesting to read how he takes it all and waiting desperately to watch his encounter with Swara and his family.Also what must have gone through Swara after Sanskar and fallen..her agony at non fiding Sanskar for so many days..Did the family consider him dead.Nup Swara must have not given up even if everything points at Sanskar not being there..She must have believed if she is there breathing his is somewhere too..can't wait to read this in her point of view..
Its thrilling and a very exciting concept..you bring out the very best in Swara and Sanskar..portray their inner emotions beautifully..can't wait to read remaining parts..update soon..
Piya
Edited by svg98 - 9 years ago
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