SwaSan SS: The Postern of Fate: Epilogue 2 (Final) updated on Page 48 - Page 53

Originally posted by: Geethu_sweetie

Hi Viji dear,🤗

I loved both the epilogues..They are amazing..👍🏼Stay blessed and lots of love..😊

Originally posted by: sneharay

Beautiful update.. 😊

Originally posted by: ...Penknife...

Vijii🤗

This is my 1200th post. I'm so happy it is here.

Nandu 🤗🤗🤗

I am so thrilled to have your 1200th post here, the pleasure's all mine! 😊

Unres

Wait! It's not swara and sanskar who's having the baby! Man you had me there. 😆

😆 😉 I couldn't resist that red herring!

All those stickers, the crib hunting and whatnot it wasn't for their Kid. But somehow that makes it better. Them doing all that for their nephew/ niece, it just shows how much all of their personal relationships have blossomed and strengthened. And that's just splendid. 😳

Yeah, Swara was completely excited about RagLak's soon to be born babe; and Sanskaar was very thrilled about it too. A wonderful Bade Papa and Badi Ma they would be. And yes, the relationship between the 2 sets of couples, has certainly healed and blossomed into a very warm, affectionate and familial one. Both sets of siblings have restored their bond to what it used to be.

As always I adore your Raglak bits. I don't know how you do it but you make them sound so good that I sometimes forget what they were like initially.

Thanks so very much, Nandu. That is such a sweet compliment. Well, I have written pieces before, as you know, where either Ragini or Lakshya or both, were antagonists to SwaSan. But I do feel that both these characters have come a long way, shown sincere remorse for their actions. They have matured considerably, and there certainly has been an attempt to atone for all the pain they caused. In my recent work, I've tended to show them in this positive light. So glad you loved that bit.

I love it when couples do normal household chores together.😳

Yes, that certainly is very cute, and in a way, romantic. 😳 It shows the deep understanding and care between them. I remember while we were young, Bro and I used to watch our Dad vacuum the house on Sundays, get up on a stool to wipe the ceiling fans etc. It was so sweet, the way he would help Mom in these household chores over the weekend.

It always seems more personal and I loved reading those bits.

And sansku has indeed become a joru ka gulam. A rather naughty one I must add. His asanskaari thoughts though.😆

Asanskaari Sanskaar is such fun, no? 😳 ☺️ Naughty, flirtatious and mischievous Sunny----Swara just can't resist him! 😉

Such a happy, blissful piece. They're all so happy that we feel happy too.

What a lovely wrap up to a wonderful story. ❤️

I feel deeply, deeply touched by this feedback, Nandu. 🤗 It means a lot to me, to know that you loved this SS, and this epilogue chapter so very much.

So beautifully written. I loved this glimpse into their future. Looks very promising😉😆

Viji thank you so very much for giving such a beautiful story on this wonderful couple. This story remains one of the best I've read to date. I love you for writing this 🤗🤗

😳 🤗 I can only say, it has been an immense pleasure and privilege to have your feedback throughout this SS, dear. Your comments have been tremendously motivating, and have always made me feel very humbled and blessed.🤗

Cheers

Nandu

Originally posted by: lucky.m

viji

res for epilogue 2🤗

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Oh god...How do I contain all this happiness in my heart reading such beautiful part on our darlins..It just..I am going all awww ..and have this wide stupid grin on my face all along and cheeks blushing a lil with antics of asanskaari sanskaar ..All this together at once..Khusi se maarne ka irada hain kya darlin😆

Lucky...🤗🤗🤗 How can I contain the happiness in my heart, at such a lovely comment from a wonderful buddy. 😳 Seriously yaar, your feedback has been so touching and so very motivating, all through this SS and for my previous writing as well. Means a great deal to me, darling. 🤗😳

Asanskaari Sanskaar is so appealing, no? 😉 He is absolutely irresistible in his teasing, naughty, flirtatious avatar---no wonder Swara can't resist him! 😉

Swara all in for baby ka shopping for ragya's kid ..aww .It reminds me of how much potential these four can hold together if executed properly ..it was such a perfect family setting ..😊

Thanks darling! Yeah, Swara is certainly super excited about RagLak's forthcoming Li'l bundle of joy. 😊 All that glow sticker plastering of the walls and ceiling of RagLak's room, shopping for a crib-cum-baby cot and crib mobiles...😆

Sanskaar might soon be running to feel the kick of his and swara's baby😆 where as here he was a bit apprehensive ..and joru ka ghulam ..these two sisters have definitely tied these both borthers to their pallus😆

😆😆 Hubbies in love with their darling wifeys do become mildly joru ka ghulams. 😉 😆 And here toh you are bang on target, Lucky! Both sisters have tied their respective hubbies to their pretty pallus! 😆 And the Hubbies aren't the least bit upset about that anyway! 😉

Yeah, when Swara is carrying their kid, then Sanskaar will take care of her like a Princess, watch her every step. 😆 I am sure he is going to keep speaking to their unborn babe, stroking Swara's tummy to feel the kiddo. 😉 Typical eager, expectant Dad! But here, poor guy! He and Ragini have become quite friendly over time, and they have this mutual admiration and respect, a lovely Jeeju--Saali/ Jeth--Devrani bond. But to expect him to feel comfortable with feeling the baby's movements over her baby bump, is really a bit much. 😆

and you got in shomi ka kid .one more awwie, and such a cute name ..and he loves sanskaar just like swara said ..who can resist the charmer ..😳😳 Jaanu meri jaan main tujhe kurbaan ..hayee my sunny😳❤️ and upar se you describe him in your words and he becomes even more irresistibly .Taras khao bacho pe viji 😆

😳 😉 Ahir is certainly a cute kiddo na? And he certainly is a very smart, perceptive kiddo. His Sanskaar Jeeju is his favorite adult, right after his parents. Good choice, na? 😆😉 You are so right...who can resist the charmer? 😳 Awww...thanks yaar Lucky. Its really the ultimate compliment to be told that I described Sanskaar in a way you found so appealing. Doing justice to that layered, complex persona; with so many layers, shades and angles to his immensely attractive nature----that is really a massive compliment. 🤗 I am feeling really on top of the world, and deeply humbled by this.

Yet one more perfect part fitting in perfectly👏👏 awesomeness at its best ⭐️👏👍🏼

😳 😳 Darling...I don't know what to say. I got very emotional when I read this comment yesterday. Love you! 🤗 Your feedback means a tremendous lot to me, you know that.

Just loved it to the core and I am gonna sleep in peace in swasan land ..all thanks to you🤗🤗

😊 Hope you slept well, with beautiful dreams of SwaSan. 😉😳

Love Loads

Lucky

PS; again ..one more perfect placement of sunny shutting up swara in delicious yum way and the placement od dailogues ...Bang on👏 like always.juts took me back to the scene⭐️

😳 That scene of the SwaSan smooch...and Asanskaari Sanskaar saying "Tum toh meri biwi ho na, tumse kya sharmaana" ☺️ I just had to put that in here, loved it so much! And I am really overjoyed to know you loved the placement of that scene. So happy that I could make you reminisce about one of the most romantic SwaSan scenes. 😳

Originally posted by: The.Lannister

A beautiful wrap up for a beautiful story Viji 🤗

Thanks Shruti 🤗🤗🤗 Really means a lot.

The whole pregnancy bit left me a bit confused😆 I had assumed it was Swara who was pregnant but nope!😆

😉 😆 I really enjoyed writing that bit! All of it pointed to the expected arrival being SwaSan's unborn kiddo, but then it was RagLak's. 😆

Ahir & Sanskaar presented a uber cute picture. The little one has taste😉 And then the SanLak bit 🤣 Sanskaar is smart, bhai ke liye biwi se kaun panga lega😆

Oh yes, the little one has wonderful taste. 😆 I am sure Li'l Ahir would grow up idolizing his Sanskaar jeeju. A wonderful role model to have. 😊

So glad you loved the SanLak bit. Oh totally---why would Sanskaar go out on a limb and rile up his wife, just to support his bro. 😉 He did try very hard to make Lucky desist from passing that comment about the stickers...but if he didn't follow his advice, then what can he do...😉😆

Loved that dish washing scene...it was cute & ☺️ at the same time.

Couples in love doing little chores together really are cute, na? 😳 And Asanskaari Sanskaar was soon back to his tantalizing plans. ☺️ Such enthralling practice sessions SwaSan are in for! 😉

Originally posted by: Alvapriya

Dear Viji

I am so very sorry for taking this much long😭

Still struggling for time because of college commitments😭

Please do forgive me .

Harshu sweetheart----please, there is no need to say Sorry yaar. I understand work commitments perfectly...and your college studies are crucial. You need to focus on them, and I am very glad you read and comment here when time permits. 🤗

I am giving a brief comment for first chapter as I am yet to read the remaining ones...

I wanted to reply in detail but for now I really really have a packed schedule and I dont want to delay more as I am already very very guilty😭

So please bear me this time.

Hope you dont mind me commenting for chapter by chapter.

Arre my dear...no formalities at all. Don't worry about the length of comments---brief or in detail, it matters to me that my pals let me know what they felt, that's it. 🤗 It would be a pleasure for me, to read your feedback chapter by chapter.🤗

Oh my god...what a flowing start to the story dear.

Really liked the way you described the plot when Sanskar was unconscious.

Sanskar had only Swara's constant image in his memories

Young exquisitely lovely woman, her shoulder length, luxuriant tresses whipping in the breeze🤗...what a description👏

I am so very glad you loved that. I wanted to show how that one clear, compelling image of Swara (whose name he did not even recall), was the only memory in Sanskaar's mind at that time. Apart from that, he mind was a complete blank. He had no other coherent memory apart from this one, just a confused jumble of kaleidoscopic images. And that memory of Swara was certainly spellbinding to Sanskaar... 😉

Oh no.😭...his mind is also reflecting the only memory of Swara shooting him???

[ I literally hate that...TUM-KHOONI -HO phase in serial]

I am in love with that part where you so beautifully described only Swara's memory being stable in Sanskar's mind when his mind was in complete blank state.

Yes, Sanskaar does remember that this intriguing girl was looking so determined, so purposeful, as she took aim with a deadly looking pistol in hand, and apparently fired at him. BUT, there will be a logical progression to this in the next chapters. Sanskaar is a man who thinks things through very deeply, examines all the circumstances, all the available proofs. He is a master strategist and tactician after all, an expert in rationally sifting through all available details, and deducing the rest in order to plug the gaps in his memories. There won't be any "Tum Khooni Ho" shouts in this this, that I can promise you. 😆 😉

Finally he remembered who he was...SANSKAR RAM PRASAD MAHESWARI...

Ohh nooo...his mind is playing flashes of what his family did to him?

So that means Kavita??😔

Yes, 😳😉 It does mean he recollects what he thinks his family did to him, as regards his suspicion of their role in Kavita's tragic death. As you know, I never acknowledged the resurrected/ zombie Kavita---I have always maintained that she would become a pleasant memory of a past love in a corner Sanskaar's mind. That's it. And in this SS too, Kavita is dead, having been tragically killed about 6 years ago.

Looks like he is back into...THEY - KILLED - MY - KAVITA MODE🤢

But loved the chapter😳

So happy that you loved this chapter. 😳 🤗 Regarding Sanskaar's frame of mind---aha! He is back to those days of feeling bitterness and vindictiveness of course, but there will be a pleasant twist to that, I think, when you read Chapter 2. As regards his thoughts of Kavita, and all the hatred and plotting he is trying to summon up. What will his mind and heart say? There will be something which his subconscious, his very soul would try to convey, no? 😛 😉

Hopefully will read remaining as soon as time permits me to.

Take your time, dear. Look forward to your feedback to the other chapters when time permits.

Stay blessed

- Harshada

🤗🤗 You too!

Originally posted by: svg98

Hey..
That was a so very heartbreakingly beautiful update..

🤗🤗 Hi Piya sweetheart...😳 So very touched by your feedback, as always. As I've mentioned before, throughout this Fic and also for several of my previous ones, your comments have been so very motivating. Immensely moved and humbled, by the sheer depth of your reading and the warmth of your feedback. 😳


The beginning was amazing..the weather the winds all indicating that finally the winter was over and the springs of love..their love was here to stay..this Sanskar is really so cute..always in full on romantic mood..waiting to take his wife on an outing but she seems to be busy in something else entirely.. Swara's love for the baby was abundant and visible through her actions..except that she tends to forget everything due to that..with her handsome and cute husband too..

So nice of you to say that. Yeah, I am a big fan of the seasons, especially the transition from winter to spring. There is this quote by Hal Borland "No winter lasts forever, no spring misses its turn". 😊 Very apt for SwaSan, who have supported and stood by each other during those dark, lonely periods of pain and anguish, became each others pillars of support, best friends, confidantes, reality checks and guides. All with an intense, potent, unconditional and selfless love for each other. 😳 And now they are truly experiencing bliss, in the balmy winds and warm, crisp sunshine of spring. 😊

Sunny is such a driven, capable and focused man. He works hard and plays hard too. 😉 😳 He is of course an immensely successful entrepreneur and negotiator, taking their family firm to new heights. But he is also a besotted lover, soulmate and husband to his adoring wife. 😉 He would love nothing better than to take her for a romantic outing...Swara really wants to do that too, of course. But she wants to get the room decor and baby related furnishings ready for the new arrival 😆---and she asks her hubby to accompany her for that! 😉 They still get to spend time together that way...though Sanskaar would certainly be mischievously planning how to whisk his wife away for the actual outing he'd planned!

The conversation of Swara and Sanskar was so hilarious..he was so right that the baby wont be able to sleep in so much light..but seeing her wife angry avatar..that was so adorable..typical wife and husband.. Where husband ways tends to do everything the wife says..so very cute..and Swara seems to be admiring that too..whenever Sanskar laughs..he seems to lighten up the whole room..and we all just want to keep gazing at him..truly irresistible..Ahir was so so cute..and if that article is coreect ..no doubt why he adores Sanskar so much..the scene was just too sweet..I was grinning like an idiot the whole time while reading this..Ahir definitely would have part Sanskar in him when he grows up..

I am so happy to hear you loved that scene. I wanted to show Sanskaar completely free from all those burdens of guilt, remorse and self reproach, with the sheer warmth and power of Swara's unconditional adoration and faith in him. He has completely gone back to the amiable, witty and warm spirited lad he always was. The depth and purity of SwaSan's love brings out the very best in them, after all. And Swara certainly is captivated and enchanted by her handsome hubby's boyish, teasing grin and open laughter. 😳

That's certainly true---Hubbies enjoy pulling their wifey's leg, but ultimately they would be tenderly indulgent, and would listen to their wife in such matters. 😊

I visualize Ahir Gadodia as a very cute and cuddly kiddo. 😊 He is very devoted to both his sisters, and very fond of his Lakshya jeeju too. But his Sanskaar jeeju is his absolutely favorite grownup, next to his own parents. Perhaps it is because Sanskaar so patiently plays baby games with him. Maybe he lovces the way Sanskaar tickles him with his raspy stubble. Or perhaps, like the article Swara read, its because of the amazing symmetry of Sanskaar's features. 😉 Who knows? Only Ahir! 😆 But I definitely so think he will grow up idolizing his Sanskaar jeeju, and will try to imbibe several of his excellent qualities.

Oh and then the kiss scene..u seriously blowed my mind away..while watching it in the show I had my mouth open the whole time..but reading it in your words..made it all the more beautiful and mesmerizing.. Oh this Sanskar is so naughty but not his fault Swara tends to run her bullet train and the most amazing and appropriate way to stop her superfast express..it was so unexpected and came as a surprise but it raised my heartbeats..especially Swara seems to lose himself in him..and they way she blushes..Sanskar mischievousness..beautifully written..and yup thank goodness the door was bolted..I don't know who would have entered now to disturb them..

Asanskaari Sanskaar is really super cute no? 😳 So very touched that you found this scene so mesemrizing. 🤗 Sanskaar in his naughty and flirtatious avatar, is really very, very appealing. 😉

The Lakshya and Sanskar scenes was also very humorous..the jhoru ka ghulam dialogue was so funny..but every husband turn to be like this after marriage isn't it..it was also very relieving to see Lakshya and Sanskar bonding as before..I completely agree with Sanskar..Lakshya seems to more of the jhoru ka ghulam..it was great to see them like this all happy and cheerful..Sanskar so loves Swara more than anything.. I don't think there is anything in this world which could determine how much he loves her..their love is eternal and everlasting..growing every second and every moment..the at Sanskar say that he will walk of hot coals ifshe just gaze at him lime that..it made my heart go all mushy and fell in love with them again..

Again, I am so moved that you loved this scene so much---the intense love SwaSan have for each other, as well as the brotherly bond between SanLak. I do think Sanskaar and Lakshya have restored their bond to the brotherly affection and camaraderie which always existed between them in their childhood and teen years. They have healed the wounds and scars to their relationship which was caused both by Sanskaar's misplaced quest for revenge, and then Lakshya's near obsessive pursuit of Swara. All that is a thing of the past, and now they are back to being the brothers, confidantes and very close friends.

😆 😆 Yeah, brothers occasionally tease each other about being joru ka ghulams. But normally ever loving husband does give way to his wife more than occasionally. 😆 😉 Its only natural.

It was such an amazing compliment, to have you say that reading the SwaSan scene made you fall in love with them all over again.🤗🤗 Thanks, that means a lot. The sheer intensity of their feelings for each other is what makes their love so special na? They would really walk over hot coals for each other---not that the person would ever let them do so, in the first place! 😊

Finally all seems to be well between four of them..no words for describing the feeling movements of the baby..it brought tears to my eyes at..Sanskar was a little hesitant.. But that's okay in his part..it was also great to see this side of Lakshya..he always appeared to a spoilt brat handed everything on a silver platter..but it was nice to see this side of him..a responsible more mature side..Ragini has also grown to be a great person with time..repenting all her deeds and loving all of them with all of her heart..Sanskar will to be called bade papa and badi ma for Swara also showed how he was still remorsefill for what he has done at the time and wanted to make up for all that he did..on his misunderstanding..

So glad you loved the bonding between the 2 sets of couples. Yeah, the respective siblings have restored their brotherly/ sisterly bond and all those past reservations, discomfort and wariness has been dispelled.

Feeling the unborn baby's first movements and kicks is always a very emotional moment na? Sanskaar was feeling embarrassed and slightly awkward at being asked to feel the movements, of course. 😆 He and Ragini have become quite good friends, have a lovely jeeju--saali/ jeth--devrani bond. But to ask him to feel the baby's movements inside her baby bump is a bit much! 😆😉 But of course, when it their own baby growing inside Swara, he would be so thrilled and excited to feel their kiddo moving. 😳

Lakshya has matured a lot, he certainly understands his responsibilities and the consequences of his actions. Ragini too, of course, has sincerely repented for all the wrong things she did, and has done her utmost to redeem herself. They are a loving couple now, and Lucky really cherishes her.

Sanskaar---what can we say about this man. He has such depth to his nature, all his actions are so sincere and heartfelt. He does feel remorse for that period when he was plotting against his family; but has decided to make amends for that in the best possible, constructive manner. He doesn't waste time wallowing in idle remorse or self pity, but devotes himself to the family and to their business. And above all, to his beloved wife. 😳

Oh the sizzling chemistry between them..seriously burns the screen on fire..and when reading it in your words add an altogether a exquisite charm to it..Sanskar's thoughts were so naughty..watching her wife like that..even my cheeks turned red at the direction of his thoughts..but yes whenever they will have baby.. Sanskar and Swara got to be the best parents ever..the next part was too adorable..Sanskar seriously has no control over his raging harmones..Swara dialogue was awesome..firstly mujhse kya sharamana and when his ho so hot husband goes shameless..she is like kuch toh shaam karo..No wonder why Sanskar has turned so mischievous and naughty..his intense voice surely could melt anyone in a pushy puddle..I was seriously blushing myself she reading this..his plans to full fill his target are with news ways and technique's..now we know why he is such a successful business man..always think of his goal..reminds me of a predator planning his moves gracefully to enchant his prey in his spell and then take it away..I could see the sparks fly when Swara pushed him and he caught her..gosh he so intense the way he said you will pay for this..speechless..and the way Swara reacts to him..they are made for each other the way she fit right into his arms and their passion for each..everything is just beautiful..like their love which is immortal..forever and ever..

I was so touched that you loved this scene so much. 😳 🤗 I was completely in SwaSan dreamland when I wrote that intense, romantic scene between them, and I was overjoyed that you loved reading it. ☺️

I do see SwaSan as having a true soulmate connect, they are two inextricably linked halves of a seamless whole. One could say, they are passionately intertwined twin souls, whose love is really immortal and eternal. I am so, so happy to know that you found the chemistry between them to be intense and crackling. As a SwaSan fan who loves their bond, this is such a marvelous compliment for me. 🤗 😳

Sunny is certainly in a most romantic mood. 😉 Part feral predator, part tender, teasing lover. And Swara is all pliant and passionate on her part, as well. 😳 They are really going to SO enjoy this planning and practicing for their baby making session. 😆 ☺️

I will miss this story very much..I know I have said this many times before but u r just an amazing writer..with every update of your..I fall in love with Swasan and more than than reading their stories in your words makes me speechless..I do not ever want to stop reading..please always keep writing.. Bcoz we all love your stories very much..as said want them to read on and on..

I am truly lost for words. Just want to say again, I feel immensely blessed and humbled; and on top of the world literally, by the warmth of your feedback. I do hope to keep writing on SwaSan, and will be back with more as soon as I have a good plot in mind.

Piya