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This story will always be cherished! Have enjoyed every bit of it, Viji. The sheer and inherent poetry in your words leaves me hypnotised and empowered! Kudos.
PS. I swear, I couldn't be more awestruck when I saw the names Malhar and Bhairavi - the two which I used for my IshVeer Five Shot back in May. And yes, it was a five shot too! Coincidence. 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey..
That was a so very heartbreakingly beautiful update..
The beginning was amazing..the weather the winds all indicating that finally the winter was over and the springs of love..their love was here to stay..this Sanskar is really so cute..always in full on romantic mood..waiting to take his wife on an outing but she seems to be busy in something else entirely.. Swara's love for the baby was abundant and visible through her actions..except that she tends to forget everything due to that..with her handsome and cute husband too..

The conversation of Swara and Sanskar was so hilarious..he was so right that the baby wont be able to sleep in so much light..but seeing her wife angry avatar..that was so adorable..typical wife and husband.. Where husband ways tends to do everything the wife says..so very cute..and Swara seems to be admiring that too..whenever Sanskar laughs..he seems to lighten up the whole room..and we all just want to keep gazing at him..truly irresistible..Ahir was so so cute..and if that article is coreect ..no doubt why he adores Sanskar so much..the scene was just too sweet..I was grinning like an idiot the whole time while reading this..Ahir definitely would have part Sanskar in him when he grows up..

Oh and then the kiss scene..u seriously blowed my mind away..while watching it in the show I had my mouth open the whole time..but reading it in your words..made it all the more beautiful and mesmerizing.. Oh this Sanskar is so naughty but not his fault Swara tends to run her bullet train and the most amazing and appropriate way to stop her superfast express..it was so unexpected and came as a surprise but it raised my heartbeats..especially Swara seems to lose himself in him..and they way she blushes..Sanskar mischievousness..beautifully written..and yup thank goodness the door was bolted..I don't know who would have entered now to disturb them..

The Lakshya and Sanskar scenes was also very humorous..the jhoru ka ghulam dialogue was so funny..but every husband turn to be like this after marriage isn't it..it was also very relieving to see Lakshya and Sanskar bonding as before..I completely agree with Sanskar..Lakshya seems to more of the jhoru ka ghulam..it was great to see them like this all happy and cheerful..Sanskar so loves Swara more than anything.. I don't think there is anything in this world which could determine how much he loves her..their love is eternal and everlasting..growing every second and every moment..the at Sanskar say that he will walk of hot coals ifshe just gaze at him lime that..it made my heart go all mushy and fell in love with them again..

Finally all seems to be well between four of them..no words for describing the feeling movements of the baby..it brought tears to my eyes at..Sanskar was a little hesitant.. But that's okay in his part..it was also great to see this side of Lakshya..he always appeared to a spoilt brat handed everything on a silver platter..but it was nice to see this side of him..a responsible more mature side..Ragini has also grown to be a great person with time..repenting all her deeds and loving all of them with all of her heart..Sanskar will to be called bade papa and badi ma for Swara also showed how he was still remorsefill for what he has done at the time and wanted to make up for all that he did..on his misunderstanding..


Oh the sizzling chemistry between them..seriously burns the screen on fire..and when reading it in your words add an altogether a exquisite charm to it..Sanskar's thoughts were so naughty..watching her wife like that..even my cheeks turned red at the direction of his thoughts..but yes whenever they will have baby.. Sanskar and Swara got to be the best parents ever..the next part was too adorable..Sanskar seriously has no control over his raging harmones..Swara dialogue was awesome..firstly mujhse kya sharamana and when his ho so hot husband goes shameless..she is like kuch toh shaam karo..No wonder why Sanskar has turned so mischievous and naughty..his intense voice surely could melt anyone in a pushy puddle..I was seriously blushing myself she reading this..his plans to full fill his target are with news ways and technique's..now we know why he is such a successful business man..always think of his goal..reminds me of a predator planning his moves gracefully to enchant his prey in his spell and then take it away..I could see the sparks fly when Swara pushed him and he caught her..gosh he so intense the way he said you will pay for this..speechless..and the way Swara reacts to him..they are made for each other the way she fit right into his arms and their passion for each..everything is just beautiful..like their love which is immortal..forever and ever..

I will miss this story very much..I know I have said this many times before but u r just an amazing writer..with every update of your..I fall in love with Swasan and more than than reading their stories in your words makes me speechless..I do not ever want to stop reading..please always keep writing.. Bcoz we all love your stories very much..as said want them to read on and on..

Piya
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: -FlameOfHope-

This story will always be cherished! Have enjoyed every bit of it, Viji. The sheer and inherent poetry in your words leaves me hypnotised and empowered! Kudos.

PS. I swear, I couldn't be more awestruck when I saw the names Malhar and Bhairavi - the two which I used for my IshVeer Five Shot back in May. And yes, it was a five shot too! Coincidence. 😆


Hey Anamika my dear pal 🤗 🤗

So touched by your warm words yaar. 😳 Truly feel blessed that you loved this story and my writing so much. 🤗😳

Wow...that certainly is a coincidence about Malhar and Bhairavi. 😆 Do you play/ sing classical music too? Or are you a aficionado?

I'd learned Violin (Carnatic classical, though I can play some Hindustani classical pieces as well). My personal favorites are Raag Yaman Kalyan (Yamuna Kalyani) and Raag Sindhu Bhairavi. Love Malhar and Todi too. 😊

Lots of Love and Hugs 🤗 ❤️

Viji
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum


Lucky 🤗 🤗

So we're going to comment on each others threads today looks like. 😆

Love ya, sweetheart!

Viji


Un res darlin ..you just made my weekend perfect😳..Cant ask for more

Love
Lucky
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Posted: 9 years ago
Aww!the 2nd epilogue z so beautiful...
&ur writing style z cherry on d cake.
I love it.
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Originally posted by: svg98

Res for epilogue 2
Piya


Hey Piya 🤗
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Thanks Sadhana 🤗

So glad that you loved it.
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Loved the wrap up, Viji..❤️..left me with a warm, cuddled in kind if feeling!😳😳 Thank U for making me feel so happy and contented ! 🤗🤗
Loved the suspense about the baby ! Didn't catch it was Raglak's till the end 😆 So the younger siblings took the plunge first..here as well! While our adorable love birds continue with their extended honeymoon ?😳

Loved the proposed kiddo names..Ahir, Malhaar..but had one curious question. Hmmm..the Varun Sanskaar Maheshwari was a given. But why not a Helly Sanskaar Maheshwari? 😉



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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum


Nandu...🤗

So thrilled to have your 1200th post here. 🤗😳


Unresed on 67 viji dear.🤗

Thank you so much for this update tonight
I can have a SwaSanilicios sleep tonight😆
*floats away in SwaSan land*
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: lucky.m


Un res darlin ..you just made my weekend perfect😳..Cant ask for more

Love
Lucky



Lucky sweetheart 🤗 🤗

So immensely touched by your comment----I will go to sleep with a huge smile on my face. 😳 Will reply in detail tomorrow or day after. 🤗 🤗

Lots of Love,

---Viji

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