SwaSan SS: The Postern of Fate: Epilogue 2 (Final) updated on Page 48 - Page 54

Originally posted by: Aahana133

Amazing...

Originally posted by: krishuuu

Viji dear...😊

Talia sweetheart 🤗 🤗

I dont remember reserving any spot...thank God ..i would have died finding my reserve spot...😆

Such immense n remarkable response to this SS..😃

I've been just immensely thrilled, moved and humbled by the warmth and love showered on this SS. Its meant a tremendous lot to me. 😳 🤗

Well i havent commented on last chapter..epilogue 1 n2...so here i go...😭

Well in chapter 4 we have witness climax of that soulful searingly enhanting kisss...chapter 5 ..well was 10fold notch higher..i must tell u i read this chapter number of times...tharki side in me was at its peak..i just reread it ..it was incredible..enchanting..ethreal ..baby i was all blushing...😳

😳 ☺️ Thanks so much yaar. I had lost myself completely in SwaSan dreamland when I wrote the intense SwaSan romance in this chapter, and I am just so happy that you loved it so much. Hearing your wonderful compliments about it, made me feel on top of the world. 😳 🤗 Am just so happy that you felt I could capture the beauty of the intense love, and soul deep connect that SwaSan share.

The way sansku cleared all his misunderstanding...thanks to nakul..he regreted his actions nconfessed everything to swara..all planning n scheming..but to his uttersurprise swara undying love n trust for him...pulled him out of his regret whirpool ...n thenrest his history ..😆🤗those love making scenes...amaxingly written...i just blushed ..was all red...morning hall scene swasan romance ..ragini witnessed it..her mission accomplished ..this part was par excellence..☺️

Really feel immensely touched and blessed, that you loved this chapter so very much. Yeah, that is one of the best things about Sanskaar na...the way he feels so intensely, with every fiber of his being. Once he had been informed by Nakul about all the events of the past 15 months or so, he felt an immense, sincere remorse for the plotting and scheming he'd done, in the grips of his partial retrograde amnesia. And he felt terribly anguished about having those misgivings about Swara earlier, even though that was so very brief. He just could not resist that pull and connect he had towards her, after all!

But Swara never let him inflict that pain, that self loathing upon himself. As she told him so clearly, seeing him in pain, would hurt her more than anything else. She had realized those weeks ago when Sanskaar returned, that not remembering her, he did have certain transitory doubts and misgivings about their bond. She could read it in his eyes, like she always could. But she had immense faith in their potent and intense love for each other, that he would come to again feel the palpable bond that they shared.

So happy that you loved the tender, passionate moments between SwaSan. I was blushing while writing them, so very glad that you were happily blushing when you read them. 😳 ☺️

Ragini felt so contented and blissful that Swara and Sanskaar had found their happiness together; that Sanskaar had realized the immense love that he felt for Swara, and that Swara felt for him in turn. I feel Ragini really feels a sincere remorse for all the sins that she committed, and is sincerely trying her utmost to atone for those.

Epilogue1 also was delightful...swasan n raglak work cum honeymoon trip to thailand was terrifically described👏...the visual u created via sansku in villa ..his rules ..all lovey dovey teasing..it was magical...the moments sansku felt bad that he couldnot remember anything of those 15 months😭..i felt connected to him.felt bad for him..but againswara support n assurance of telling each n every moments indetail..was awww worthy...felt proud of her...again brilliantly written...😳🤪

☺️ I SO wanted to send our golden couple on their long overdue and long awaited honeymoon. Thrilled that you loved the setting and the description. Thailand is really an awesome place, I love Bangkok, and Koh Samui is such a slice of paradise! 😳 Sanskaar and Swara certainly had a memorable time there! 😉 And naughty, Asanskaari Sanskaar is so cute, no? No wonder Swara finds him simply irresistible! 😳

Yeah, Sanskaar did feel bad that he wasn't able to recollect any of their precious moments from those past months, but Swara stood like a pillar of support, not letting him feel distraught and anguished. As she put so well, she was looking forward to building new, wonderful memories from their splendid lifetime together. And besides, Sanskaar could always look at their golden memories through her eyes, with her as his witness. 😳

Epilogue 2was magnificient...bonds shown between swasan nraglak..n all of them was adorable..😊.preparing room for future kid of raglak...sanlak teasing swara..n ahir entry..sharmishta son..OMG..😲.i was soo happy u introduced him...swalak fight on what to call them after baby's birth..it was cute..old glimpse of ragsan frienship u showed revived old memories...😉swasan kitchen romance n his innuendo..i was all red...stupendous update..all together...☺️🤗

So very touched that you loved this last chapter in this SS. 🤗 I did want to show the warmth between the 2 couples. The 2 sets of siblings have restored their bond to the affection and camaraderie they used to share before. Swara is the most interested in preparing the room for RagLak's baby---going all out to paper the ceiling and walls with glow in the dark stickers, spending hours shopping for crib-cum-baby cots and crib mobiles! 😆 😉

Ahir certainly is a cute, cuddly kiddo. 😊 And apart from his parents, he loves his Sanskaar Jeeju the most. I am pretty sure, he is going to grow up idolizing and emulating Sanskaar.

Ragini and Sanskaar have become good friends. They share a lot of mutual respect and admiration, and have a lovely Jeeju--Saali/ Jeth--Devrani bond.

Really happy that you loved those SwaSan moments. Flirtatious, mischievous Sanskaar wants to convey lots of things to his wife with his witty innuendo. ☺️

Waiting for more from ur side...😃

Will be back as soon as I can with my next fic. Could take some time though, owing to several pressing commitments. But I'm sure my SwaSan mania will enthuse me. 😳 😆

Loads of love..hugs nkisses❤️

Talia

Originally posted by: bennetlizzy

Vijji😳😳

Blushing like an idiot here.

Glad I could make you blush while reading this, Nalini my dear pal. 😉 😈 I was blushing a fair bit when I wrote it, too. 😳 ☺️

This is a res..I don't know what I have to say on this. Let me collect my thoughts..

Love

N

UN-RES

Dear vijji, 🤗

I thought you said that the second epilogue would be in a different tone than the first. But in reality it Rather brought more fiery things to life. 😳

😳 So overjoyed that you felt the SwaSan bond was fill of sparks, tenderness and passion. ☺️ When I was penning the second epilogue, one thing which I wanted to just convey that the intensity of the memory loss track (for Sanskaar here), his machinations and plotting driven by his partial amnesia, and the cat and mouse game of wiles and guile with Ragini----that had come to a logical close with Chapter 5 and Epilogue 1. So this one would be a tad different in tone, but of course carrying the tale forward in terms of the intensity and depth of the SwaSan bond; as well as the relationships between the 2 sets of couples. I'm really very touched that you loved it so much. Fiery huh? That's a lovely compliment. 😳

So Sanskaar is Aahir's favourite? Well Banda hai hi aisa. As swara aptly says 'who would not notice and adore those perfectly chiselled features.' My my! Even Michelangelo's perfection couldn't make to reproduce him. If it were I would buy it for sure. But enough of varun kapoor now. Let's not get deviated for our own good!!

Yup, Sanskaar is Ahir's favorite grownup, right after his own parents. 😊 Maybe its because of his endless patience to play baby games with Ahir, maybe its because Ahir loves the way his Sanskaar Jeeju tickles him with his raspy stubble. Or maybe, after all, its down to that well known property of infants and toddlers to find symmetrical features so appealing. 😆 Swara is certainly very right---who can beat her hubby in that department? 😉 Oh, a walking and talking Michelangelo sculpture he is, for sure. 😃

I loved the bonding that Sanskaar and lakshya's developed into. And how they both cared for little Aahir, each in their own way. I'm sure Aahir will always look up to these two as he grows up. And these three will make a good pact. More of a father-son kind of relation than that of brother in laws. Hmm... I'll miss reading now. More than I thought.

Thanks yaar. Yeah, I do see SanLak as having restored their brotherly bond to what it used to be, in their childhood and teen years. That camaraderie, that sense of being brothers, very good friends and confidantes, is back again. Ahir certainly is going to grow up looking up to both his jeejus immensely. Yeah, given the age gap, they will be quasi paternal figures almost, role models too. A good thing, considering that Shekar isn't exactly my idea of an ideal father or role model. 😕 So Li'l Ahir is in safe hands---very strong female influences in terms of his Mom and sisters, and Jeejus who care for him a lot and will be the male influences. I do think of all, he will grow up idolizing and emulating Sanskaar the most. I wouldn't be surprised to see him patterning his behavior, values and attitudes after his idol and hero. 😊

I was really touched to read that you would miss this fic. 😳 I was in a kinda emotional space after I finished this---I usually am, after I finish one of my longer pieces. All the wonderful, motivating feedback from pals like you has cheered me up. 😊 🤗

There was a moment of confusion when you said swara and Ragini were feeling the little bump and swara just called for Sanskaar. I couldn't understand who was pregnant for a min because Sanskaar was embarrassed and lakshya took a run for it. And then I understood how clearly innocent and excited swara is about the baby. Oh Sanskaar I guess she is in for it. She didn't voice it out like you did but she so wants to. But yes it was never in swara to voice out her wishes. Her wishes somehow seem to get into sanskaar's mind even before she realises them for herself.

😆 😉 As we'd discussed in my earlier brief reply, this kinda/ sorta uncertainty and confusion about who exactly was expecting the baby was intended. I got a serious kick while writing it. 😆 Especially while imagining in my mind's eye, Sanskaar looking positively embarrassed when Swara asked him to feel Ragini's baby bump. 😆 Sanskaar and Ragini have become good friends of course, with a lot of mutual respect and admiration, and share a nice Jeeju--Saali/ Jeth--Devrani bond. But still, Swara expecting him to feel the baby's movements was a tad much for Sanskaar. 😆😉

I think both Swara and Sanskaar were content to soak in several more months more in each others company, having each other all to themselves in a sense. But certainly, the idea of the new life they would create together---that's occurred to both of them. 😳

Men should help women in theie little things vijji! It's good for both of them in so many levels. No pun intended. Really! It makes things so easy! No pun again!! Lol.

Yes, I do believe that no pun was intended. 😳☺️ It certainly would be easy and good on so many levels, as you said. 😆 Ok...ahem *cough* Let me proceed ...😉

Okay, I was really nice to see them helping each other in little things like they were. But the one that followed was just too sweet. There were a sundry of tones in the way he spoke sexy, sweet, teasing. I was reading it over dinner with family. Imagine the kind of difficulty I had to go through when I say I had to shut my phone close right away to stop myself from looking like a fool grinning at nothing. Yet I ended up grinning at nothing.😃😳

I really like to see a couple deeply in love, doing small chores together. It somehow makes their bond seem so tender and caring. It stems from my childhood memories I guess. Bro and I would watch Dad vacuuming the house on Sundays, stepping on a stool to wipe the ceiling fans, and generally helping Mom around the house on weekends to the extent he could. It really meant a lot to Mom, I'll never forget the way she used to smile at those little things Dad used to do. Precious memories!

😳 ☺️ Again, I am so touched to hear that you loved the SwaSan bit in the end. Mischievous, flirtatious and slightly brazen Sanskaar is so cute, no? All that naughty teasing is seriously blush inducing! 😳 No wonder Swara can't resist him! 😉 I am so glad this made you grin like a Cheshire cat----that is such a lovely compliment, and I feel really thrilled at that. 😳 🤗

It was a marvellous journey from the beginning to the end. (the end being absolutely the best) thankyou so much for delivering this to us poor souls in the time it was so needed.

I'm just lost for words, Nalini my dear. Can only say, feel very moved and blessed by your warm words. I am so happy that you loved this SS from beginning to end. I do hope to be back with more fics, soonest I can. Will be taking some days off from writing, as I have a lot of commitments to attend to. Will be on the forum, though. 😊

Looking forward for more, as always

Love

N

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

My Dearest Asmita 🤗 🤗 🤗

No Sorry's needed yaar. Remember Sunny Boy's friendship rules! 😉

Hope your studies are going well, wish you the very best of luck for your preparations and papers.

So very happy to know that you loved this Fic, and the whole track from Sanskaar's memory loss to his realization, redemption again, and the deep, potent and intense love between SwaSan.

Very touched by your warm words. 😳

Loads of Love,

---Viji

Originally posted by: aamias

viji thanks a lot for replying dear 😳😳

i am greatly honoured by your words and as I know u that is i would consider a luck