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Posted: 9 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: a_uma

Beautifully written Shruti. very descriptive. .. I could actually imagine the desert scenes while reading..

..Can totally understand Swara's fear.. after all the stories she has been told about "traitor" sanskar and now to find that he is not mad at all and also that she is his unwanted hostage.. I'm sure she will make more attempts to escape..😲

.. also revelation of Ragini's hatred and must be truly shocking to swara.. .. Ragini obviously has made sure that everyone believes her version of the events... 😑..afterall, there is no one to refute her . at the moment, she has the upper hand in this entire episode... am eager to know about Laksh's& Rana's reaction to all this.. will Laksh try to rescue his fiancee.. will there be some kind of confrontation bet the two brothers.. ?

oh..forgot to add.. the old man seems to be very canny... I got the feeling that he's guessed about sanskar's true identity...


Hey Uma! Thank you so much, really pleased you enjoyed this update.
Absolutely re Swara- her whole world has been thrown into turmoil and she's now kidnapped by a person she thought was like a mad child. As to further attempts- it seems you have the measure of this Swara:). I will briefly cover off Lakshya's reactions in the forthcoming but you might find what I have planned for the SwaSan story rather different to that you might immediately expect:).

The old man? Yes, indeed he was canny and he had a pretty good idea who Sanskaar really was. being an ex army man with his son having fought under Sanskaar it wouldn't be unlikely he saw through the disguise or at least very strongly suspected it! πŸ˜ƒ Please keep reading! x

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Posted: 9 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: sujoyricky

Awesome πŸ‘
Beautifully written
Thanks for pm


Thank you Sujay, glad you liked it:)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

Res πŸ€— πŸ€—


Shru...what a tasty treat to wake up to on a weekend morning. ..went very well with my steaming mug of adrak & elaichi chai. πŸ˜‰

Shru. ..please do bear with me this time, will be taking some time to un res for my comprehensive revert. Have work commitments today plus kiddos art class, plus my pending replies to comments (including your lovely ones) on my OS threads.

(Holds ears)...you'll understand, na? I don't wanna give cursory comments on your updates.


Hey sis,

Take your time, totally understand, am much in the same boat as we discussed after all. Your comments are always worth waiting for:)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: manasie23

Hey Shru I was actually wondering when will you update the next part and just as I logged in I got your pm😳 also I think you can that [MEMBERONLY] thing on all the pages not only on the first page .
I loved how Swara was trying to escape at each stage but was failing Sanskaar must be thinking 'stupid girl I am doing this for your own good'
And Ragini has done exactpy what I was expecting her to do and so now both Swara and Sanskaar will be searched for as traitors.

Ahh but the wise old grandfather recognised and understood that Prince Sanskaar is not everyones sees as neither Traitor nor insane.. Ohh and those dialogues about them being in love and not being able to stay away from though was only meant for a cover did something something to my heart😳

Update soon , Love you😳


Hey Manu xoxo

Ah, you were waiting on this update? I meant to write in the week and had started but couldn't manage! Yes I can Members Only but that's still not as safe as No Copy, because logged in members can still then copy things? πŸ˜•

Glad you liked the failed escape attempt and poor Sanskaar- he's badly stuck now πŸ˜†. Yes Ragini didn't disappoint right?! 😑. Yes indeed, the wise old man saw with more than his eyes and so recognised the hidden truth quite quickly and rather accurately. Haha- I so loved Sanskaar's "romance" talk even though he was pretending (ah well sort of!) πŸ˜‰ as he really cannot stay away now can he?! πŸ˜‰ I am going to start on 9 today but have other tasks too so let's see how much I can do.

Love you too xoxo

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Posted: 9 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: Kamala05

Brilliant work Sruti . It is a well planned and prepared story as even the minute details matches the era which the characters live .

Ragini already started her match making game ,so the palace will soon conclude that Prince Sanskaar and Princess Swara elopped .I am eager to know Laksh's reaction .
On other side , Swara tries to escape from the clutches of Sanskaar ,I am loving the fact that she didn't give up the fighting spirit.
Update soon Sruti .😊


Hey Kamala, thank you so much! So glad you like the way the story is sketched out, it's a big relief that my experiment seems to be going reasonably well! πŸ˜ƒ Yes, the Palace will believe that story as they have little other choice, I will include Lakshya's reaction soon but I don't think anyone will be too surprised by it πŸ˜‰. Swara here is rather spirited although hopefully not stupid so yes, she did try and will probably make more plans πŸ˜‰. Will try and post 9 as soon as I can manage:).
Best wishes,
S
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Posted: 9 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: Sakkiyah

Awesome update

In this update I loved the character of old man. He is wise man. He realized the good qualities of sanskar.
And in this update sanskar was also nice. He made a new story about their elopement.
And swara was in a shock. She was trying to find a way to escape. But she failed in her attempt.
Sanskar have a great plan. But he doesn't want to harm any one. In this update the character of Prince sanskar is started to unfold. He is good warrior. And a person with golden heart.
Waiting for your next update


Thank you Sakkiyah! Pleased you enjoyed this chapter. I too like the old man, originally my plan was not to make him realise and say what he did but as I wrote, it seemed to morph:). Yes, indeed, Sanskaar doesn't want to hurt anyone but he is prepared to do what he must; yet he wouldn't really kill innocent people!
I'll be back with 9 soon:) x
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Posted: 9 years ago
#47
This chapter has left me asking for more!!!!!Awesome!!I just love the effort you put into description.It is like watching a video play of the chapter..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: chandanagimsy

Awesome update..I mean that Oldman knows them... And he accepted and given anAWESOME advice to swara... Yaar ragini did spin a splendid tale and between who is the one who saw them leaving..

Are they able to hear any conversation...
Now impulsive laksh will definitely marry ragini and will order a death for swasan... Omg..plzz continue can't wait to read

Omg...awesome amazing loved the update
The Oldman gave a wonderful advice to swara...
Hope she follows and ragini how skillfully she told the story of swasan...
Yaar the mothers believed the story omg
Now if they order death sentence then how will swasan survive.. Plzz update soon

Hello you! Thanks so much for leaving me such nice comments, I have combined both so that I can reply properly πŸ˜ƒ. Yes, the old man knew or at least guessed most of what Sanskaar was trying to hide in terms of his identity. He wasn't heavily disguised so it could be possible. And the old man did give Swara some good advice- to trust her instincts πŸ˜‰. Yes, understandable the Palace has the wrong story and believe it. Re death sentence- don't worry yet as they have to be found before they can be harmed πŸ˜›.

Thanks again and see you on chapter 9!
Best wishes,
S
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Posted: 9 years ago
#49

Thanks a lot Sadhana πŸ€—
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi dearie! Caught up with the whole story n I must say that Im totally in luv with ur story ! I mean I feel like Im listening an ancient Indian folklore- a desi fairytale! ❀️ Just fab! And I am a history n architecture buff, so the way u r weaving in subtle intricacies of both these subjects in ur story telling makes this all the more dear to me... And to top it all this is an AU! :D I generally luv AUs n esp these days since its been atleast 3-4 mnths since I quit the show... :)


Now coming to the chapters as such, Loving my gud old fiery wildcat Swara here! N the cool composed Sanky her perfect foil! ❀️ Loved the subtle variations u hv introduced in his interactions with different ppl n then that spl undercurrent with Swara. πŸ˜‰ N luks like evn his horsey dalng senses that. πŸ˜†


Great gng dearie n yeah thnx a ton for the PMs! πŸ€—

-luv Niks
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