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Juanita

@BlurredLines

Trailblazer

+ 19

Posted: 9 years ago

#61

Awesome update shruti, i was waiting for it. This FF got me hooked. I like the entire setup and of course you are a great writer. You plot twists and characterization keep me interested.

Swasan eloped, i like how swara keeps looking for a way out. She is still naive i guess to think everyone would belive her once she is back to the palace. What to do that swara for you.

Ofcourse ragini made swara look like a traitor. Well let her enjoy her small victory. She might get lakshya too i suppose as a gift for betraying her own sister.

Do continue soon.

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Sana

@Forum.Maniac

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+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#62

Shru, I love you for this chapter 🤗

This has got to be the best chapter till now from your FF.

I had seriously turned into a fangirl in the wait for this one and you didn't disappoint as usual ❤️

Swara behaves so typically like she used to in this one, acting wary of Sanskaar and still not able to believe how evil her sister is. But I don't blame her, she was pushed into this situation with barely time to grasp what was happening. You depicted her state of confusion really well and all those failed attempts to run away from Sanskaar had me smiling. She is stuck with him

Sanskaar, on the other hand, what do I even say about him. There's probably not even a single thing that he did in this chapter which I didn't enjoy. That cold behaviour towards Swara while feeling guilty about himself, the lies after lies he piled up about them eloping and how he couldn't bear to part with her 🤣, that kiss and sliding that bangle on her while giving that silent warning to her 😆 and finally his reaction on finally someone who doesn't remember him as the traitor. 😭❤️

Loved Sanskaar's interactions with the old man and the fact that he left off money for them, awwh ❤️ and also the advice to Swara I hope she listens to it 😆

Eagerly waiting for the next part, Shru. You've yet again changed the dynamics of their relationship and I can't wait to see how it affects their interactions. 😃 Continue soon 😳

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tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: NitaMikealson
Awesome update shruti, i was waiting for it. This FF got me hooked. I like the entire setup and of course you are a great writer. You plot twists and characterization keep me interested.
Swasan eloped, i like how swara keeps looking for a way out. She is still naive i guess to think everyone would belive her once she is back to the palace. What to do that swara for you.

Ofcourse ragini made swara look like a traitor. Well let her enjoy her small victory. She might get lakshya too i suppose as a gift for betraying her own sister.

Do continue soon.

Hey Nita xoxo

Thanks so much! It's so nice when people say they were actually actively awaiting an update! Keeps me going to write more! Thanks also for the kind words about my writing 😳. Swara- yes she is rather naive and can't really grasp the true evil her sister wanted to unleash on her but she's not foolish in this and just needs time for all the various realisations to sink in:). I will explain more of her perspective in wanting to return to the palace in the next chapter. Ragini will indeed get some surprise "gifts" and long may she enjoy them too as the days of wrong doers always get numbered after a point!

Love of love,

S X

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Juanita

@BlurredLines

Trailblazer

+ 19

Posted: 9 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

Hey Nita xoxo

Thanks so much! It's so nice when people say they were actually actively awaiting an update! Keeps me going to write more! Thanks also for the kind words about my writing 😳. Swara- yes she is rather naive and can't really grasp the true evil her sister wanted to unleash on her but she's not foolish in this and just needs time for all the various realisations to sink in:). I will explain more of her perspective in wanting to return to the palace in the next chapter. Ragini will indeed get some surprise "gifts" and long may she enjoy them too as the days of wrong doers always get numbered after a point!

Love of love,

S X

@bold- i didnt mean she is foolish at trying to run away from a traitor anyone would try that after all she must have hope that atleast her parents would believe her , i just thought her returning wont be able to solve anything since Her evil sister made sure Swara was labelled as a traitor. I just meant even if she returned her life wont be easy. But i agree that she need time for all the realisations to sink in , cant wait to read her perspective in the next chapter

Surprise Gifts, i am waiting to know read what gifts she get .

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tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: NitaMikealson

@bold- i didnt mean she is foolish at trying to run away from a traitor anyone would try that after all she must have hope that atleast her parents would believe her , i just thought her returning wont be able to solve anything since Her evil sister made sure Swara was labelled as a traitor. I just meant even if she returned her life wont be easy. But i agree that she need time for all the realisations to sink in , cant wait to read her perspective in the next chapter

Surprise Gifts, i am waiting to know read what gifts she get .

Nita sweetie

We are on the same page re Swara:), I knew what you meant and weren't thinking she is foolish, I was just almost talking about loud:). Yes exactly like you say, in the circumstances any of us would want to rush back to our parents and home and also in the next chapter I'll make her verbalise her real fears:). Hope you'll continue to like it xoxo

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dilwali

@dilwali

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#66

Hi Shruti it was a wonderful update n u wrote beautifully about swara's feelings n yaaa its now going in a good direction n swasan bond will develop soon n luking forward for nxt updates. thanks for pm sweety

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tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: KawalArora
Hi Shruti it was a wonderful update n u wrote beautifully about swara's feelings n yaaa its now going in a good direction n swasan bond will develop soon n luking forward for nxt updates. thanks for pm sweety

Hey Kawal xoxo

Thank you so much- glad you liked it! Very welcome for the PM- you guys deserve the thanks for reading! Mmmwah!

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Niyati Gupta

@Niyatiswaragini

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#68

Unresd my COMMNT on pg 6 😃

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tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#69

Dear Niyati and Nyna,

Thanks so much guys for unres'ing on your posts and for such considered comments. I want to reply properly but am just about to sit down to at least make a start on chapter 9 whilst my brain is pouring ideas forth so please don't mind if I reply to you once I have dealt with what I can do on that? It made me very pleased to read the comments and my responses will def follow soon:)

Lots of love x