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Posted: 9 years ago

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My dearest DK Family 🤗

It has been a while and this post may shock some, but hope it won't be all unpleasant. Much to my delighted surprise there has been some interest in publishing this little tale of mine and therefore it needs to be taken down to facilitate that process.

I know some of you will be disappointed but I also hope that you will support me with my venture just as you so wholeheartedly did with your readership here. I would hope many of you will share my happiness and pray that this does get published as it would be a dream come true for me 😳.

If you would like to follow the progress of DK please do visit and like the page I have just created for it, where I will be keeping things regularly updated and hopefully sharing more concrete news when able.

The link is:

https://www.facebook.com/DarkKnightNovel/?fref=ts

I will eagerly look for as many of you as possible there! Removing the story from here is a very difficult task for me and I have prevaricated over it for very long but I now no longer have a choice. I hope you will understand and support me.

Love always,

Shru

PS: I am travelling tomorrow for a few weeks so if I delay replying to anyone, that is why.

Dearest friends and readers,

I am finally here with Chapter 8 of Dark Knight. I am so sorry I could not write and post this in the week but am presently crushed under a particularly heavy workload. I have also opened a new thread on recommendation from so many due to concerns over plagiarism and as I can only mark the first page of a thread No Copy! I hope this isn't too inconvenient. A link to Thread 1 with Chapters 1-7 is at:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/swaragini/4551223/dark-knight-a-swasan-ff-deleted-an-page-1-pls-read

Rest of the threads are:

Thread 2- Chapter 8 - 16 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/swaragini/4562761/dark-knight-a-swasan-ff-t2-deleted-an-pg-1

Thread 3 - Chapter 17 - 25 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/swaragini/4576677/dark-knight-a-swasan-ff-t3-deleted-an-pg-1

Thread 4 - Chapters 26- 35 (and Epilogue) https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/swaragini/4600631/dark-knight-a-swasan-ff-t4-deleted-an-pg1-creations-pgs-98-9

I hope Chapter 8 is up to the mark and will not disappoint anyone! It was rather a challenging chapter after all that has happened in 7 especially but on the plus side, most of it is SwaSan oriented and more of their interaction to come in 9, post major revelations. I will try to work on 9 to post it before the end of this weekend. I am still not sure how many Chapters I will need so can only go on as the story develops. There is a lot to tell!

Thank you all for continuing to support me so much on this story! I very anxiously await your verdict. Lots of love to you all!

PS: I am completing minor edits and formatting so please do forgive any of those types of errors.

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My dearest SwaSanians

Here is Chapter 9, this weekend's second instalment! I hope you will enjoy it. I did have a scene in mind at the Palace but instead I hope you will like what I did instead. I was in a real mood to write a very SwaSan-centric chapter and as their relationship really needs to move along, this was hopefully a significant step there.

As ever, please let me know what you think, the feedback genuinely makes it possible to carry on with enthusiasm.

Shruti (Lannister)- thank you for helping me select a good name (not for the area!) and also for the comment about dangers of escape in certain locations! You know what I mean and readers will by the end too 😉.

Viji- hope this chapter is like you said you expect from me 😳

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tootiefrootie11

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Dearest SwaSanians and kind readers of Dark Knight,

Below is Chapter 10, the latest instalment. There may be few surprises and I dare say at least one shock too in this part.

Shruti (Lannister)- thank you hugely again! You know for what- the shock inducing part is certainly credited to you and I hope the other part too lives up to your expectations! Overall, I had such fun on those chats 😉

Thanks also to all those who endlessly encourage me after each part, you are the reason I keep going. I hope I do not disappoint with this piece. Viji- thanks to you too as each time I get your scrap or DM, it helps me to keep ploughing on.

It is gone 3 am (yes, again!) so I will need to "tidy" and minor edit tomorrow- am too tired now! Looking forward to comments as ever!

Lots of love, Shru xoxo

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tootiefrootie11

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Dearest friends,

Here is this weekend's second instalment, Chapter 11- it is late but still Sunday my end! I have an apology to make. I had underestimated my own absorption with writing SwaSan related chapters and this was originally intended to be a small part of a larger chapter, dealing with much action. However, I got so carried away, this itself became too long to be part of a piece so am posting it on its own. The action-oriented chapter will come next and I hope anyone disappointed by that will forgive me and feel some pleasure that the below is entirely devoted to SwaSan and gets the scene set for where I need to send them next! This is a light hearted interlude before things start to change somewhat.

As ever, please share your views, I so look forward to them. I hope this isn't too bad and I will be back with 12 as soon as time permits. Minor editing on-going as its gone 11 pm here and I have a very early start tomorrow and another hectic work week!

Lots of love, S x

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Dearest friends

Without much ado, here is Chapter 12. I have been writing since 6.30pm my time and it is now past 2:15 am am so will keep this brief! This has been a very challenging chapter and I sincerely pray it lives up to the expectations of those who had any. So many have told me they were awaiting this one so I hope you will like it.

Talia- you somehow wished for something that was always planned out almost from the beginning of this story so here you go. It is quite different from what I think you and many others probably expected the detail to contain, but I hope it does have some excitement and despite the action, some romance too.

I have work all day tomorrow and plans in the evening but will try and write and post Chapter 13 before the end of the weekend! Please share views and opinions like always.

Love to all,

Shru x

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Dear SwaSan family,

Below is Chapter 13, this weekend's second instalment. I know Part 1 will slightly surprise a lot of you but there are various elements to the story I need to do justice to and whilst the SwaSan bubble I love is so much more compelling, I hope this too will be interesting in its own way. You can enjoy (I hope) more on SwaSan's journey in Part 2 and a little spoiler is that Chapter 14 is likely to be entirely taken up by our Golden Couple!

I hope you will all enjoy 13 and I am sorry if that is not the case! Please do let me know. Around 1.30 am my time so forgive minor editing errors, I will re-work them.

Lots of love as ever,

Shruti x

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My dearest friends and readers,

I don't know how, but I have managed to write Chapter 14 during a mad work week! So here you go!

Leki- you were sad earlier that I might not be able to manage to finish and post today so hope this makes you happy:)

Shruti and Viji- you guys too were really looking forward to this so hope it lives up to expectations!

All those who are always so kind to me and send me such lovely comments and PMs etc- you really keep me going! Hope you all like 14 and lots of love!

PS: Please forgive minor editing issues till I get time to re-read and correct! Need sleep as working tomorrow!

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Dearest SwaSanians 🤗

I am here with Chapter 15, which unusually for me is not posted in the early hours of my morning! 😆 I have a lot of family commitments today as well as SR Anniversary write ups (Leki- am working on them!😃) so have worked on this yesterday and since early today so here you all go. I will start working on 16 soon but when it will be ready, I can only guess once I start writing. Time for the next stage in the Dark Knight's journey and I hope it is interesting! A lot have asked me how many more Chapters and again, I am not sure. There is a lot of tale still to tell so I would guess at least 10 more Chapters if not more! I will probably have to create a new thread for the next set to prevent copying and will post links here when I do!

Thanks for all your support and love and I do hope this one doesn't fail anyone!

Lots of love,

Shruti

PS: Minor edits are being worked on!

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My dearest friends 🤗

Hopefully an unexpected surprise- here is Chapter 16! I told many of you I would start on it today and work to post it in the week, but another straight sitting of 7 hours has ensured it is done and ready to post! I have used the last remaining post I had reserved on this thread so the next Chapter will have to be on a new Thread, which I will link on the first page and on my siggie Index.

Some of you want to refresh your memory on what the background to the Nagabhata Map and how the system worked, although there should be enough detail where required below itself. However, should you need to, please cross refer to Chapter 2, the last paragraph on Thread 1:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/swaragini/4551223/dark-knight-a-swasan-ff-deleted-an-page-1-pls-read

Leki- I hope as I am posting this in your early day time, you will be able to read. I have marked Members Only as No Copy won't work on this page but if you struggle to access, let me know and I can send you it another way!

I hope you all enjoy this and as ever, please do let me have your views as they are so valuable!

It is almost 1 am and I am working tomorrow so please be patient for minor edits and typos from me 😳

Love, Shruti

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I was literally w8 for ur update since u have promised to update on fri

and b/c of waiting i happened to go to ur index and read ZEINTH and read all the comments too just to kill the time

i was about to comment on it but then i see that u have updated

now im still in that blushing mode☺️

so need a little time to come back to my senes

so i can be a little late to unres

plzz dont mind it all ur fault too😳

Wow

was so deeply immersed in the update that I could completely imagine each and every scene of swasan unfolding right in front of my eyes literally 😲

the sky of a new day... the horse...and swasan in the middle of now where... swara's feelings and emotions her thoughts everything...completely imagine swara's expression when she thought that she had a slightest chance to be free from her captivator...each and every minute detail which u wrote is so unfolding in my head.

ohh at sanskar's bag i was imagining it to be "hermoine's magical pouch in HP-7 part 1🤣 how he's fishing out the things from it😆

and when he says "trust me" and the look swara gave and his own realization of her look is also so note worthy👏 i have noticed this one thing while reading dark knight that these are although really small things made they really made great impression at least on me as a reader

the scenes at the mahesh mahal were although predictable but still i just loathe ragini sheis a disgrace to a sister daughter and also a friend😡

MOUD yes it did and will symbolize the turning point in their life

swara's mind working on to give signs to the old man and the lady😆...sanskar's persistence to not to let swara get away from his near vicinity😈...his rather confidant lies😳😳 all were so awesome😃😃

ohh at first i had a heart attack that swara had left a very very solid clue and now some how the army will get to them😲😲 but then ahhh swara's plan backfired...i was so relieved at that *phew*

and sanskar's reaction to that was so in the place.

really like that old man's world to swara

everything that happen there is so meaningful and amazing😊

gonna read it again😳

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