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Mallika-E-Zain

@Mallika-E-Zain

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#31

Res

Dude, I know it's a late unres but I'm really tired of saying sorry buddy! So no sorry this time! Lol

Chapter 8

Poor Swara. I feel so bad for her. My poor SwaSan have bore so much pain and sufferings in their lives when none of them was ever wrong. What Swara must be going through?? She comes to know that Sanskaar isn't mad and she had to steal for him, her sister wants her dead and right now she is supposedly eloping with a mad' prince. Seriously that's too much for a person to take in a few hours.

Dude, she's showing too much of an attitude. She can't take Sanskaar's help to get down, huh? But I guess her mental condition is such! The thing that I love the most about the way you right is the perfect description of a character's mental condition and that justifies his or her every action.

Sanskaar is too smart. He knows his plans and actions all too well. Just like a strategical and therefore victorious prince!! How can I resist drooling over this guy??!! He's too amazing! I'm waiting for Swara to come to know about his past, that he's not a criminal and a traitor.

Ragini Ragini Ragini!! This chhori is such a cruel shrewd and no words... type of a woman. The way she manipulated everything against Swara and this time nobody believed her! How bad. I expected atleast Janki to trust her but not even her nor Sharmishtha believed her. *sigh*

Back to SwaSan, Sanskaar lies so easily! And yet again I help adoring him. Such a crazy gal!! LOL Anyways that story about SwaSan being in love and eloping was so cute<3 I was literally smiling like an idiot. Sanskaar you're soon gonna fall for her! He can't stay even a moment without her yeah!! ;)

Swara is acting too smart. Dropping the gold bangle huh? Not a bad idea though. But my girl, you are supposed to stay with Prince Sanskaar only, so its no use dropping your bangles. The way Sanskaar made her wear the bangle was so fhjkghjdskh! These two are too too too adorable and lovable<3<3

That man! The last para was AMAZING!! I loved it.. The way that man said that there might be deeper shades to Sanskaar and what appears may not be true. The way he said that Sanskaar cannot be a traitor because of honesty twinkling in his eyes! I loved the last para. Let Swara know the truth soon please!

Edited by MusicAddict - 9 years ago

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shamina

@Sakkiyah

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#32

Awesome update

In this update I loved the character of old man. He is wise man. He realized the good qualities of sanskar.

And in this update sanskar was also nice. He made a new story about their elopement.

And swara was in a shock. She was trying to find a way to escape. But she failed in her attempt.

Sanskar have a great plan. But he doesn't want to harm any one. In this update the character of Prince sanskar is started to unfold. He is good warrior. And a person with golden heart.

Waiting for your next update

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chandanagimsy

@chandanagimsy

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#33

Awesome update..I mean that Oldman knows them... And he accepted and given anAWESOME advice to swara... Yaar ragini did spin a splendid tale and between who is the one who saw them leaving..

Are they able to hear any conversation...

Now impulsive laksh will definitely marry ragini and will order a death for swasan... Omg..plzz continue can't wait to read

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chandanagimsy

@chandanagimsy

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#34

Omg...awesome amazing loved the update

The Oldman gave a wonderful advice to swara...

Hope she follows and ragini how skillfully she told the story of swasan...

Yaar the mothers believed the story omg

Now if they order death sentence then how will swasan survive.. Plzz update soon

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SIMI

@simsen23

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#35

Shruti...
Thank you for this new chapter.
i was missing Dark Knight.
This chapter is awesome.
Well prince sanskar is concerned for swara ..
But poor swara ,she does not know what her sister is plotting against her.
The swasan journey in moud is perfectly descrined.
Old eyes knows the truth...
Well i am excited for future updates..
Love
simi 😊

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Sakura24

@Sakura24

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#36

Dearest Shru,

Firstly congrats on the new thread, I hope this will soon be filled with some of your finest works.

That chapter, dear lord, how effortlessly everything flows. It was so wonderful to read. You know this is what I enjoy the most about any story I read, the point where the walls are built on the foundations laid down in the initial chapters. You have managed that wonderfully.

The way Ragini has embroidered her tale is praise worthy, I mean she is such a sly serpent and now have the track set for her to spread her slimy lies. So she has made a traitor out of her innocent sister. God job, I do hope she will enjoy this momentarily success before the skies come crashing down on her.

Swara on the other hand is thrown in to utter confusion. That was portrayed perfectly. For me, she is on a journey of a life time, hopefully of understanding and a hunt of truth...would she discover love on the way as well? I am as curious as you can hope someone to be.

However what I admire here is the way you have managed to keep her princess image intact, she still behaves the way one would hope to see a princess behaving, nice touch there.

The best part, plotting, cunning, smart and strong Sanskar. Finally after his mask was ripped off. I enjoy this portrayal so much that the past week when I had no internet to read DK I couldn't sleep. You have turned me in to an obsessed fangirl!

Did the old man really saw a wee bit more than he let out, it seemed he did realize the young man was not entirely truthful, but had no dark intention so he played along. It was a treat reading the interactions between the all seeing wise old and the perceptively smart young, good job!

So Swara failed in her attempt to find freedom. Sanskar needs to have a word with her soon, not the usual blackmailing and threats but some truth he can spare which would make her less weary of him perhaps?

Can't wait to know what awaits them beyond this chapter. Continue soon...

loads of love,

Sakura

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Niyati Gupta

@Niyatiswaragini

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#37

Resss 😃😃😃

Unresd

Shruti I really liked this chapter dear👏👏, filled with beauty of language n exceptional story frame.

I always run off words when it comes to praising you, you are extreamly talented.😳 I really loved the entire beginning where in swara and sanskar are riding. It is clearly defining swara's plight, she is betrayed by her sister, as u said pretty and soft, these words never suit her. But swara thought she was, how. Can someone be so heartless and selfish. Sanskar is rude yet protective I really loved this side of sanskar he really cares for swara.

😳

Sanskar is really determined and has a tremendous personality. This dialouges are so convincing and adorable that one can end up agreeing to his word but swara resisted till she could, but ultimately no option left she was forced to go with him to MOUD, I really liked the whole scene of the horse ride and his adoring the common man avtar. Hats off. 👏

Mahesh mahal part was bit annoying for me, how could ragini all the time losse her senses n to any extent blame swara, i dint expected her to be soo cheap . Ragini really surprises me by her amazing extent of being desperate and cheap. She blamed swara saying sanskar n swara loved each other so they eloped. Wow!! I thought she would be blaming sanskar for making swara his hostage and taking her away that was wat sanskar told her to do but no, she never leaves a stone unturned to defame swara. Wat a sister. I really love janki's character her, she trusts swara alot, I think annpaurna is also a bit not satisfied with ragini's theory of SwaSan eloping. But let's see, what will they decide.

That scene of the grandfather , sanskar n cottage . awesome I loved it the most weather he wore a mask of pretending to care n love swara but I liked it alot, I think he really somewhere in his feels this. Swara tried to communicate with those people but to her sigh , he couldn't , sanskar is really smart in these tactics. So the family 's son had been in army with sanskar, it appears that something fishy is surely there. That old man is not ready to believe that sanskar can be traitor. Swara please understand him he saved u so smartly dude. He deny but he has some sort of feelings for swara. I really liked old man's last lines warning swara that what seems to be always can't be truth. Hope swara takes his words seriously. Wat I m thinking is that the old man knows about them or might have doubted???

Anyways this was an amazing package shru . thankss for update. Phew I m feeling relieved I unresd it soon.

Love

🤗

Niyati

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amimus

@amimus

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#38

Awesome us date.

Swara tried her best but alas destiny has chatters her course and there is nothing which she can do. Janki true to her character here believed in Swara and I am sure she will keep her trust in Swara, maybe it's wavering now but once the truth is out ahead will be a staunch supporter of Swara

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Sneha Ray

@sneharay

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#39

Fabulous.. 👏
It was the best update of this ff as so far..loved it 👍🏼
Swasan gonna fall for each other really hard in this journey.. ❤️
Waiting for ur next update..update soon nd thanks for pm 😊