DARK KNIGHT- A SwaSan FF- T2- DELETED- AN- PG 1 - Page 69

Originally posted by: nut-kut-86

Ab aapne last main hi aisa kuch likha hai ki mujhe us baare mein bak bak kiye bina reh sakti aur phir pure chapter k baare main bhi tho batana hai tho ab aaapko bahut saari bak bak sunni padegi. Tho abhi last se ab pata hai tho k swara juth bol rahi hai.ya tho kuch chal raha hai uske dimaag mein jo swasan ko baacha saktta hai.par kya yeh idea kaam karjayega.kya who dono bachenge ya unka saath yahi tak ka hai.kya devendra uski baatoon mein aa jyga.kya sanky swara ke mansube samajh payega. Kya swara mahesh mahal pahunch bhi gayi tho sanky ko sahi saabit kar payegi.apne aap ko behguna saabit kar payegi.kitne saare sawal .aur ab ek darkhwast swasan ko plz saath mein rakhiye .koi bhi mushkil dono saath mein hal karke ek dusre ka sahra banenge.ab sach kahu tho devendra ek jhatka tha maine kitne jaan ke option soche the.yaha tak k bagri bhi mere dimaag mein aaya tha.aur kuch bhi bolo devendra bhi intelligent hai who samjh gaya par tamasha na ho isiliye aur sanskaar key code de isliye who use aapne base camp le gaya. Aur swara ka dev ke saath ride.sanky par kya biti hogi.aur sanky ka sach pata chalne baad un dono ki baatein sahi thi yaar.ab sanky ko pata chala k lucky galat nahin tha.ab kya who swara se aurr dur chala jayega. And person near by village and persuasion skill who kya tha kaun tha kahi pawan jaiswal tho nahin..sorry bahut bak bak ho gayi aur bahut saate sawaal bhi.

Originally posted by: geetkumar

I am so sorry for the late reply. My internet is giving me so much of grief. Before this I typed comments thrice. But due to some reason it showed that there is either no network or the reply did not get posted. This is my final attempt. I just wish that it gets posted.

Coming to chapter 15, Annapurnna Maheshwari won my heart. Wow!!!! what a lady!!! She just commands respect. Not only from her family but from the readers as well. And boy what fitting reply.

But what pains my heart is the helplessness of a parent/ parents whose child is falsely accused of a heinous crimes which he/she has not committed . The accusations, the humiliation, heaped on them and the parent is too helpless to protect the child. Though Durga Prasad is angry, he too is burning in the hell of self loathing and remorse.

Oh!!!!! my poor Swara, she became so attached to the Haveli for the time spend with Sanskar. She doesn't want to part with Sanskaar and is dreading the time of separation. Looks like I jumped into a hasty conclusion that Swara will realise her feelings soon. It seems she still needs time to understand her heart's desire. Or do we have a surprise in store for us hmm...😉?

Now what is this?😲 Ooohhh... Some time I so desperately wish that Sanskaar would have been a little heartless. But that is not his nature, is it? Our dark knight has a heart of gold. Of course he had to jump into the mess and save the poor man and take the punishment on his head or in this case on his back.

OMG!!!!!! I have written such a long post .😲 I think I have bored you enough. Do forgive me.

Haven't read ch 16 yet. will write as soon as time permits.

Love Geet.

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

Hello dear Sakkiyah xoxo

If I caused some surprise and doubt and confusion, my job was done! I wanted the suspense element to run through these series of chapters, and to continue them in the next few too. And yes, Devendra very much knew the identity of Sanskaar and he is clever enough to have realised who Swara was as the news of them running away was major all over the kingdom. He is an old enemy but one Sanskaar didn't know was a foe. As for the map, he already has 2 maps- the part his kingdom guards and the 4th part stolen from Sanskaar and now he gets a bonus of the Maheshwari portion. You'll see what happens in the coming few chapters:). And you were absolutely right about what Swara was trying to do, poor girl. I, glad you had enjoyed this and I'll wait for your view on the next one:).

Love, Shruti X

Originally posted by: ll_megha_ll

First of all congratulations for the new thread didu...

Wow...

I am speechless...

What a wonderful chapters...

Just loved it...

No words to described...

Continued soon...

Thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: Yuvika_15

Reopened upon request