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Originally posted by: avihothi

Amazing update.
Thanks for pm.
Updated soon.

Originally posted by: maaneetfan

Wow Shruti darling...u have completely outdone yourself in chapter 7...what an amazing twist tho frankly speaking I knew tht if Sanskaar was going anywhere then he would be taking Swara with him...how and when it would happen I had no clue but there can't be a swasan story if they are apart from each other right

Ragini is a hard core evil witch..and smarter than the one in the show even...tht one pushed Swara herself from the bridge but this one didn't even attempt to get her hands bloody...she simply contrived tht Sanskaar would do her job for her!!

Swara is the epitome of innocence...she truly has no clue of any negativity spreading around her ... Sometimes such navet is endearing but when one has such sisters as Ragini one would be expected to be sharper...tho I think Ragini had never felt the need to show her hatred towards Swara before now ...

Really liked how u distinguished the 2 sisters with respect to their personal likes...Swara loving water and being carefree when she is in it whereas Ragini always conscious of doing the right thing and unconsciously just emulating Swara with the hope of being admired ...
Also their personal liking for day and night...Swara is day...full of sunlight and brightness and cheerfulness and straightforward with no pretense and no need to hide...Ragini with her preference for night shows she has much to hide and the main thing being her true nature...even the fact tht she hides her liking for night making others think she is something she isn't...ppl who try to Mould themselves to someone they feel they should be rather than just be who they r have a really tough time keeping up with the pretense.

Swara innocent soul that she is ... What a double shocker for her tht the seemingly mad Sanskaar is actually probably the sharpest man she will have ever encountered and tht the sister that she loves more than. Herself has plotted to kill her??? Tht is going to take a while for her to digest and I think initially she is just not going to accept it and believe it a misunderstanding on her part...

Really liked the scene where Sanskaar picks up Swara and mounts her with him on his horse...can it get any dreamier...sigh...like some highwayman kidnapping a damsel in distress...but I don't think it is going to be anywhere near as romantic yet...

I'm still clueless as to what Sanskaar's mission is and why did he escape and where is he off to? What did he want from laksh's room and since he didn't get it wasn't it very important??

I'm happy Swara at least realized tht it was Sanskaar who had rescued her from tht guard so he couldn't be all bad tho obviously she isn't going to trust him now tht she is aware that even her sister can plot against her how can she trust the so called state traitor

Swasan days will start and really looking forward to those...Ragini overdose was really making me nauseous

Hope chapter 8 is ready soon too. Take care and do rest urself too Shruti

Love Tasneem

Originally posted by: hp_2006

Chapter 6

Ragini is indeed turning villainous in this one..😡

she has started her games to manipulate lakshya against swara.

swara is also drawn by sanskaar's antics even though they are silly and funny she enjoys them and sometimes she is quick to notice his inborn intelligence too..😊 wow just wow..!!she is able to know him so much..

ragini's plan to defame swara was so lowly..😡😲 she paid a soldier for the task.

thank god sanskaar came in time to rescue her..😃

sanskaar even had a heated discussion with ragini about it..wow he cares for swara so much now😳 he even killed the soldier who tried to attack swara..😆too good man..!

I am loving this story..🤗 and love you Shru😊

Originally posted by: hp_2006

Chapter 7

Ha ha..So ragini's prince laksh ji is not willing to believe that swara is at fault..he just believes her innocence..No wonder Ragini has turned so disastrous.

And the way you described Raginis jealousy and insecurities, is just mind blowing Shru👏

So our prince Sanskaar was watching mermaid princess secretly😉 and when Swara saw him turn away from her friendly greeting she felt hurt too..these two are really attracted to each other, unknowingly..😳

Ragini intended Sanskaar to kill Swara..so that her hands wont get dirty in the game..how sick😡

But thank god Sanskaar saw through her dirty plan and didnt even try to harm his mermaid princess..

He even took her away from Nagini's vileful plans

loved raginis reaction when he called her by that name😆😆

but who was watching them secretly is still a suspense

so the dark knight has now turned into a knight in the shining armour to the princess rescue..

i am eager to read the upcoming parts..😃

my swasan love story has started..

Originally posted by: --Anna--

Shru Shru Shru 🤗

Seriously! You outdo yourself every single time and I am left amazed after every chapter I read. Absolutely enthralling, captivating and makes me wanna beg for more! While reading I wish that the chapter would never end because I am SO desperate to know what is going to happen in the next one. 😃 You and Viji, both need to seriously consider thinking about writing a book. Believe me you have genuine fans who would read anything you write 😉

I see, its become a thing that I comment for two chapters together - So I guess from now on I shall keep it this way. 😆 I reserve and I forget. 🥱 Nevertheless, time for my long comment, that I know you SO enjoy reading. 😉😆

Chapter 6

Ragini has successfully managed to play the innocent friend to Laksh by putting Swara and Sanskaar together and manipulating Laksh. Seriously is Laksh actually that gullible that he believes everything Ragini says? And this attitude that I called for Swara - damn if you care so much about her - just go and speak to her yourself and stop using Ragini or anyone for that matter as your messenger. 😡 Bratty arrogant prince! I can also see Ragini is playing it smart from before hand by showing that Swara is more interested in spending time with Prince Sanskaar - and with what I have read of Chapter 7, Laksh will finally be putting what he has heard from Ragini and what has happened together and reach a conclusion. Dumb head that he is. 🥱

Swara and Sanskaar are slowly becoming aware of each other. And I am SO happy to see Swara being aware of Sanskaar more and she is thinking of him. We already know she wants to know more about the prince and his tale that she had heard so much about and this growing awareness on a subconscious level is interesting to watch. This bond that they develop is going to mark the beginning of their love story. 😉

Ewww!! Did Ragini actually let her sister be accosted by a soldier who could have molested her sister? Ragini 😡 I know where her hatred is coming from but I cant help myself but despise her for doing this to Swara. Laksh really thought that Swara was in love with a soldier and was being intimate with him? Ewww! Thank god the drug thing came out. Also Ragya exchanging glances? 😲😲 I always say Laksh and Ragini (in the show) and here too - have one thing in common, Ragini likes to manipulate and Laksh likes to get manipulated. 😆😆

Sanskaar killing the soldier who attacked Swara? Awww! My honourable Prince. It is quite apparent that he feels strongly for Swara though he is finding it hard to accept it or believe it. This is such a refreshing change from the show. Sanskaar is much much more compassionate. 😳

Oohhh! How much I love a good Sangini confrontation! Sanskaar plays his games well but I know Ragini is super evil. She may be intimidated for a moment by Sanskaar but this woman will not keep any promise but will mess with him. I am glad Sanskaar has a plan and he is leaving - because some battles can be won from far away. 😉

Chapter 7

WHAT A SURPRISE!!! I absolutely loved the change of story here! ABSOLUTELY LOVED IT!!! AHHH!!! 👏👏👏 Absolutely loved the little part where Swara is out in the open and looks back to the window now aware that it was Prince Sanskaar who was looking at her the first day when she came and she raises a hand to wave at him while the Prince hurries away from there - clearly keeping a watch at her every move but not making apparent or not being aware of his own feelings at the moment.

Absolutely loved how you have defined Ragini here. I understand her and I understand that she too might want to be free and not be caged in her princessely duties and even thoughI understand how she must feel when every person she has ever knows falls in love with the bright and shiny Swara, she must be hurt - but her actions I still cannot justify them. She hates Swara, she is insecure about her and she can be honest about it and not play games but she chose the wrong path and that I cannot justify!

Shru, I have a MAJOR Crush on this Sanskaar! I absolutely DO! I loved how he was waiting for Ragini but Swara showed up and Sanskaar even though for a minute thought that he could lie and pretend again, but the look in Swara's eyes, made him not make that move. Love the line, 'It was one of those moments, that had no beginning and no end' 👏👏👏 So Sanskaar used Swara to get what he wanted and Swara complied with disgust on her face. Come on Swara, that disgust is soon going to be love as we speak of it. 😉 I understand Swara too - she probably does not realize and understand what she has been caught up in and that is why when she saw Ragini - she fought not only for herself but her sister too. But I am hoping she understood the malice behind her sister's intentions and will be accepting of it but not be in denial.

Sanskaar calling Ragini Nagini was the highlight! 😆😆 I wish someone could do that in the show too and in all probability Sanskaar 😆 Ragini wanted Sanskaar to kill Swara? 😲

How could he? He has a soft corner for her and he will not let an innocent be harmed. I am sure Swara will one day realise that Sanskaar protected her from a terrible fate! Ragini is so confident that she has managed to overthrow Sanskaar and Swara out and she is going to play on it obviously but this is the beginning of a hate-love story and I am so looking forward to it.

Lovely update Shru! 🤗

Love

Anna

Originally posted by: NitaMikealson

Finally was able to read Chapter 7 and it was so Good👏 .I absolutely loved it . As you said it was an important chapter in the FF. Because it has some major plot movements. I knew Ragini would not Back off but i never expected her to be capable of such a sinister plan. Yes i knew she was far manipulative here but got to say you really pulled of the Surprise well . ⭐️

Loved Sanskar dilemma before his escape, him trying to avoid seeing her, not wanting Swara to think Bad of him just like others , trying to prevent any suspicion falling on her . And ofcourse since they are soulmates loved Swara missing him too and was totally dejected to see him ignoring her even if she think he was not in the right state of mind.

So Ragini sent Swara to be killed since Sanskar would have not be able to think of an alternate plan that quick without risking his escape. But Sanskar is capable of counter attacking all her plans. Loved Swara rection first of disbelief and next fear and when finiding out he helped her last night her confusion.

She thought he kiiled the guard . Well i hope her MU get cleared out Soon . So by sending her to Lakshya chambers he was not planning for distraction but rather an Alibi for her. That she was no way near him during his escape. Well AP saw and his plan was failed due to Lakshya not being in the house. But wont Swara being Naive tell everyone everything , if she did it might cause her trouble. Since no one would probably believe her over Ragini. I am little confused about Sanskar intention in sending her to Lakshya bedroom.

So ragini followed them ofcourse she would 😆, Loved the face off between Sanskar and Ragini. Swara finally realized her sister is not as sweet as she hoped. But even then Sanskar gave his dulhan dost an plan but she rejected it for a much sinister plan. Typical Ragini . So who is the mysterious person that witnessed the exchange, i am curious.

Loved the update Shruti, Do continue soon . Waiting for Chapter 8 😊

Originally posted by: Niyatiswaragini

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Shruti, hii dear😳 again a big sorry for being late 😕, I hv to comment for both the updates 6 n 7. First of all thanxx a lot for 2 updates together. I only know how happy I m that the story is still continuing. I feel like dancing. Superly written, each scene and characters are perfectly fitted. Oh god how I much I love this story. It's really really nice.

👏👏

Now coming to chapter 6,

I love in love with the description of palace u give,, laksh walking through the lavish corridor, makes me feel I m accompanying him. Each n every description is so perfect. Ragini came instead of swara, informing laksh that swara is with prince sanskar. Ragini is manipulating laksh, n not at all to my shock he is being manipulated, I m really ragini is targeting those guards outside sanskar's chamber. Ragini even manipulated swara's reply I mean wow ragini, its better to dont have sister than having one backstabber like you. Sanskar is awesomely doing his duty of keeping swara away from sanskar. Ragini did all this just to see those stupid horses, I know she wants some time with laksh, but at the cost of her sister. Whose this pawan Kumar jaiswal, one more. Is he the one behind all the sh*ts in sanskar's life.

Awww god part 2, of this chapter beyond appreciation SwaSan ka little scenes wow. Swara and ragini dinner together, I knew it something fishy was cooking in ragini's mind. She drugged swara n called her out to defame her, I mean it's so cheap ,, being a sister she should hv some symphaty for poor swara. But no this evil lady. I almost lost myself wen swara was being attcaked by someone, gosh she got scared , but finally someone saved her, god that intensity in his eyes, obviously he is sanskar, I really loved that scene. Ragini came along with laksh, oh man, ragini is such a evil, she made everyone to believe that swara takes drugs, omg!!!! Really cheap on her part. But I M liking how this story is procedding. Sanskar realises intentions of ragini, n called her. After a long time dulhan dost meeting his mad prince. God sanskar takes promise from her , but this devil is all set to destroy swara. God save swara.

Now coming to chapter 7, as u said it was really a mammoth chapter. I was so engrossed in it, I felt my world in 18 centuary. Quote , as usual perfectely defining the the chapter. Actually ragini had really turned out to be a naagin as sanskar said. I liked the beginning and the explanation of how she hurts herself, by all those usual stuffs we observe in any historical show on soaps , but it becomes more achieving wen u do it just by some words giving life to few characters. Amazing. Sanskar And ragini to meet for some further conspiracy. Ragini is really so smart to trick even his partner in crime. Sanskar came to know about rahini's damn plan , she wants sanakar to kill swara. Sanskar and swara talking in eyes. God swara came to know about sanskar, but she is in dillema what he is upto.

He tells her to get the maps else he will kill her n her family. Ohhh god it is becoming really interesting. Swara is actually very scared. N I dint get the thing of going to laksh's chamber. But I really liked the way Annapurna showed his concern for Swara, sanskar is being a bit rude. But wow the moment it is revealed that sanskar is not going to kill swara but is actually saving her making her his hostage n taking her with him. Ragini ! Best name by sanskar nagini.. !! God swara was sooo soo hurt. It broke her heart her sweet sister betrayed her, that pain aww gawwd , ragini is not at all bothered about swara atleast sanskar wants to save her from this devil.

Wow I can imagine swara and sanskar on the horse ohhh... please update asap shruti i cnt wait for sure. Plzzz its my kind request to you baby plzzz,,, PLZZZ ,,

Love

Niyati 🤗

Originally posted by: piccola1

Brilliant, Shruti ! 👏

I realized that I had been holding my breatg all thru Chapter 7, only when it finished ..what a stunner this was !

Res for now - Couldnt but rush to share my delight with it. But will wait to use my laptop for a "real" reply...

Originally posted by: bones123

Holaa Shruti...

2 updates in 2 days and one at pre dawn !! wah wah...i hope your guests were able to keep you awake during the day :)

Ragini...Ragini...Ragini...I love and hate her at the same time :P Well the love is for the way she's etched out. I kinda get her insecurity and her irritation at 'all sunshine and daisies' people. She feels she's been wronged all her life, being the second fiddle to her sibling and that feeling must be exhausting. It can't be joy when everyone loves the Swara, despite R being the epitome of grace and obedience. I wonder if she showed her true self (not the insane nut who wants to kill her sister), but possibly the one who is not always demure and graceful, she might have had more fans and less hatred for Swara (her festering wound. Btw that description was really apt, it showed exactly how much she hated S, reading it I was like, yup if I ever felt that way I would be making plans to annhiliate 😆)

Also how clever is she, she used Sanskaar's plan against him to further her goal as well as ensure nothing would point back at her. Amazing yaar !

Swara...lovely juxtaposition of a princess from the deserts who years for waters (reminding her of her legacy from long ago). I feel for her. It can't be easy post that incident...especially since she's quite uncertain about what happened except for feeling his presence and remembering that sense of security. Given that there is an uneasy sense of belief for her story, this lively being must feel caged in that palace. And to think even her friend is avoiding her, Poor thing, him shunning her affected her quite a bit.

Sanskaar : So PKJ arranged for the border disturbance, while he sets his plans at the palace in motion. Too bad he underestimated Ragini. I think there was a clear point where he knew he was one-upped by her. But what R didn't expect (neither did I), was how he'd change his plans and not give her the satisfaction of a pure victory. If she plans to get him and her sister out of the way, she'll get it except it was I think not what she expected and surely that's going to make her sit on tenterhooks now given she knows his own diabolical and merciless side.

S&S : Hurt, Surprise, Disgust, Recognition, fear, Befuddlement...Swara went through all of this in that short time span from when he doesn't respond to her wave until he whisked her away in the darkness. *It was only transitory, and yet seemed to stretch endlessly.* --beautiful imagery

Seeing R's duplicity, loved how his protector angle came forward, but at the same time not letting go of his original goal. He uses S to achieve his goals (and get that map and the mysterious bundlee...what is this bundle)...but at the same time is conflicted on seeing her expressions. This was definitely not the way he wanted her to see him, maybe he hoped she'd forget him as the mad prince who fled (?).

Swara and Sanskaar's rendezvous with R towards the end is my fav part of this chapter (and also because it got Sanskaar to use the choiciest snake metaphors for her 😆). I think when the illusion of love shatters it hurts, and when it comes from your sister there is hardly any balm for it.

So they've galloped away into the night. The palace is filled with R's cacaphonious screaming and one mysterious figure watching the entire drama (who is this other person and how do they fit in within Sanskaar's plans ?)

Awaiting the next chapter to see how the befuddlement clears for Swara, how she moves ahead with the heartbreak and how she interacts with Sanskaar. I know she won't make it easy for him !!

Yayyy for the new beginnings and some much needed freedom from the palace of the Ms.

P.S : I totally agree with your comment on the show never having any friends for the main characters. Also, why does nobody ever go to work, how do they sustain...*what does shekhar do for a living??*. I shall leave you all these questions to answer, in addition to the ones around DK :)

Hope you had a good Sunday and got some rest. See you next week :)