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DARK KNIGHT

AUTHOR'S NOTE:

My dearest DK Family 🤗

It has been a while and this post may shock some, but hope it won't be all unpleasant. Much to my delighted surprise there has been some interest in publishing this little tale of mine and therefore it needs to be taken down to facilitate that process.

I know some of you will be disappointed but I also hope that you will support me with my venture just as you so wholeheartedly did with your readership here. I would hope many of you will share my happiness and pray that this does get published as it would be a dream come true for me 😳.

If you would like to follow the progress of DK please do visit and like the page I have just created for it, where I will be keeping things regularly updated and hopefully sharing more concrete news when able.

The link is:

https://www.facebook.com/DarkKnightNovel/?fref=ts

I will eagerly look for as many of you as possible there! Removing the story from here is a very difficult task for me and I have prevaricated over it for very long but I now no longer have a choice. I hope you will understand and support me.

Love always,

Shru

PS: I am travelling tomorrow for a few weeks so if I delay replying to anyone, that is why.


AUTHOR'S NOTE AND INTRODUCTION:

Dearest Friends

First of all, a very big thank you for having borne with all the various fictions I have penned on this beloved Forum since my obsession with SwaSan started. I have discovered a real family here and you have all been way too kind and generous, and I am equally grateful. Those who read regularly are used to my style of writing. Save a few deviations from time to time, I usually write rather long detailed pieces, and mostly a re-telling of the current track in the way I either would like to see it play out, or how I think it logically should.

I now want to diversify totally and delve into a hitherto unknown world for me, and if you do decide to stick by me through this experiment, for you too, as far as my writing goes. For this is intended not only to be a full fledged SS in a series of Chapters, but also an entirely alternative script to that in the show. As many of you know, I don't like half measures! So in choosing an alternate storyline, I have decided to set this in an entirely different time period too. Plus, whilst you will find familiar names and characters, they will behave rather differently from time to time to those in the show. Effectively, I want to try something I have never attempted before, and do so with much trepidation.

In terms of my setting, a glaring warning needs to be given. Most of you know that I like to research all the nuances I want to describe. Here, I am forced to claim artistic license on a few elements, for the sake of the story I see playing out in my head, and the one I want to convey. Writers far better than me have done this, so I hope I will be forgiven! My story depicts the Maheshwaris as (minor) royalty, it sketches a world where Rajasthani "Ranas/Rajahs" or rulers reigned over their principalities and historically, as I briefly covered in Restored from Grace, Maheshwaris are actually a caste rather than surname, and were traders as far as we know, not rulers (as is the case with the Agarwals, Oswals and Khandelwals). Here, I am making them what I want them to be, so I hope that this will be accepted as part of the tale. Plus, I want to set the timeline to the late 1700s/early 1800s but some of the background described will not be entirely accurate from a historic perspective. The Arab or foreign invaders that I will mention in passing within the story were fought by the Gurjara-Pratihara dynasty (the latter apparently credited with setting up Marwar as we today know it), between the 7th - 11th centuries. I have set my story in the late 18th and early 19th century so there will often be references that may niggle those who want a historically accurate fiction, so I will explain here, that this is not that. I am not intended to delve over deep into the historical aspects except to create the wider background and to build up atmosphere, as the story itself has a lot to cover, and the focus is very much on the characters themselves and how their lives are played out. Therefore, please almost imagine a created world, which only borrows loosely from our recorded texts in a wider sense.

I find a certain deep romance and tragedy too associated with olden times, especially the turbulence of the 18th century. It is a setting in which I so visualise SwaSan, who define epic for me and for weeks I have been mulling over placing them there and telling their tale. Very clichd but nonetheless heartfelt, friends in need so prove to be friends indeed and as I struggled with sorting this in my head, Shruti (Lannister) had a detailed exchange with me that tremendously helped various pieces come together for me. Shruti- a very special thank you for your help and input, to keep some suspense for you too I will change certain aspects! Similarly, thank you Anna, Nityah and Yukhti for expressing such enthusiastic interest in wanting to read this- you should all take credit that I take this leap! Also dedicated to my wonderful SwaSanian friends - Shree, Viji, Saku, Purbi, both Sapnas, Vrinda, Kawal, Sakshi- all of you always ask me to keep going and support me so thank you! Also, all my lovely SwaSan family- you all know who you are! Love you lots!

In the post below is a Prologue which sets the scene and in the week, I will work on posting the next Chapters. I am incredibly busy with work in the coming week and will do my best to be regular but please be patient and kind like always! I am not sure how many parts this will be, I have reserved the first page and will play it by ear!

Please do read and leave me your very precious feedback, it means a lot!

SYNOPSIS:

Here is a tale of heroes and villains, of love and betrayal, of friendship and loyalty, but also heartbreak and political intrigue. It is the story of a man who rises to great heights and is also plunged to the depths of despair; he is abandoned and shunned by most of his own. He is driven by revenge but his quest leads him to a love so overpowering, it changes him, and his journey forever. However, he has demons to battle, both his own and those sent by others. Whether his love will be his greatest strength, or his overwhelming weakness, will remain to be seen. Most of all, this is a tale of passion and promise, of a love that spans centuries in its own lifetime with its passion, dedication and selflessness.

NOTE: For copyright reasons and to prevent plagiarism, I have continued the following sets of Chapters on separate threads, which are at:




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Dearest friends and readers,

Thanks again for the overwhelming response you have all given to the Intro and Prologue. I have tried to keep to my promise of a quick update and here is Chapter 1. You may note that my main title is the same as a famous film and the below too mimics both a well known book and film but it is not from a lack of imagination; more so because it seemed fitting for what I want to project. I hope it will be accepted. This Chapter introduces some key characters and also provides some insight into various matters that will need to be set before major action in the script erupts. Please let me know what you think of this part, I have done my best and truly worry about coming up short! I have done this in my lunch break so have minor edits to make, please bear with me!

A note to new reader Shivani- I have made use of the titles you so helpfully clarified for me, thank you!

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Hello all! I am back with my promised update in the form of Chapter 2. Sorry it couldn't be delivered in the week due to work commitments.

There is a world before us, visible to our senses and seen as it often appears. However, underneath that, simmers another dimension. This usually stays locked away from prying eyes- it is the world of our own thoughts and feelings and of that, either only that which we choose to share with others is observable, or that which some can divine- either through force, or through their own finely tuned instincts. There is no clear science to this. Mostly, people will see what you show them. However some people are skilled at seeing further and deeper, or once in a rare moment in time, we encounter those whom our subconscious, or perhaps souls, recognise at a deeper level. We may not immediately know of our connect in this way and we may also often fight such magnetism- there is something frightening after all in an unconscious bond that is neither sought nor wanted. This chapter deals with some mundane and some more subliminal matters. It is about undercurrents floating about, which may all at some point, either cause the various threads running helter-skelter to either crisscross across each other harmlessly, or cause a tangling and pulling, which may cause a break from the existing fabric, or a new forging that will itself weave into its own new structure.

This chapter tries to draw the various threads together to trace out a pattern that will hopefully be engaging to you all as readers and will set the framework for what will soon come in later Chapters! It also starts to delve into some secrets mentioned before which I know a lot of you are curious about. It became longer than intended but I do have a lot of ground to cover and also I had a slight change of plan about what I revealed now and what will come in the next Chapter.

It is 1:30 am here and I am rather exhausted so will complete a thorough check tomorrow; please bear with minor errors! Your likes, comments and feedback are all lapped up with gratitude and humility!


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Hello my very dear friends and readers!

Another update awaits you, courtesy of this being a weekend and thanks to the ideas spilling over which I wanted to pen as soon as possible. Again, this is a long chapter and yes, there are things I intended to finish off on which now must come in the next part. However, in some respects, I like to think this is an important Chapter so I hope the detail will make sense. I have tried to give account of a mystery the tale started with and which I covered in part in the last Chapter. Then there is the second part which again brings together the now colliding lives of the Maheshwari Princes and the Gadodia princesses, paving way for tumult still to come. Hope you will enjoy this but if not, I am sincerely sorry!

PS: Minor editing on-going

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Hello again for the third time this weekend friends! My Chapter 4 is presented for your perusal. It deals with more of what is necessary and whilst much of it will be of no surprise to anyone, I hope I am presenting it in a way that you find readable and engaging. There is more of some characters that are key so I hope this makes sense. Please do read and let me know! I am already thinking of the next Chapters and will try to update as soon as I can. As ever, a big thank you to you all for your support on this story!

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Hello friends,
I am here with an instalment in the week, which was meant to cover more but will now be split into two parts, as to include all here will be too long. I therefore thought of setting this out as a relatively contained piece, especially as it includes an important element of the story. We are still at the relatively early phase of events for Swara and Sanskaar but you will see in this Chapter that much is changing and the next Chapter too will explore that in more detail. I hope you like this- it is dark days for the tale of the Dark Knight at the moment, but we can only have dawn after these hours are past. There is a route taken here which may surprise those of you I see from comments expect me to go exactly the way of the show- in the basic premise of a collusion being formed to discredit Swara, I have but unlike the show, the effects of this one are already not those that one of the plotters anticipated:). I hope you like it and please do continue to let me know! Much love!

PS: Very early start again tomorrow and have been up since 5.30 am today so please allow me leeway to finish minor edits later.

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Hello all you lovely people,

Here is Chapter 6 and I have had so many nice messages asking when it will be posted so this is for all those kind people who tell me they look forward to my updates for some strange reason! You will see from this Chapter, that the story is now beginning to move at a rapid pace, building up to the next Chapter, which I dare say will be a crucial one in terms of where the plot goes from there. Here too, I like to think I have included an unexpected surprise but you will hopefully read and tell me. It is a long chapter, and split into 2 parts due to that. As ever, I hope this doesn't embarrass me. Please keep your likes and comments coming as generously as you have been doing so, I am eternally grateful.

As usual, it is a late night for me so minor editing is still on-going.

Viji, Shruti, Anna, Yukhti, Nityah and Sana- here you go dearies, specially to end your wait!


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Dearest Friends and Readers,

I promised that I would aim to update 2 chapters before the end of this weekend, so here I am with Chapter 7. Some of you I have named before and you know who you are will hopefully be happy! We are now at an absolutely key juncture. The story from here veers into the phase you have all been waiting for- yes it is the start of the real tale for SwaSan. I like to think this chapter will go in a way that will shock most. Save a very limited exception, most of you I daresay will not have thought it would go this way but I hope you like what I am about to do here:).

I am changing the title to rebrand that this is a FF. A dear friend told me that it wasn't an SS anymore. I apologise for confusing anyone, but this certainly not ending- there is so much more! I may open a new thread for the next instalments or post in the later pages of this. I will decide and post in the Author's Note section as soon as I know myself! Below is a mammoth chapter, it was way over 12 pages in word but I wanted to share it all and not make you wait. I am now utterly exhausted and it's a second night of not getting done till 3 am. I might need some days to recover to plan the next part and write it! Please be patient and do stick around! I am really nervous about this one as I have poured my heart into it. Please do tell me what you think! Also too tired to minor edit in detail, please forgive errors for a short while.

Without much ado, here is Chapter 7!

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Shru,
I am gonna reserve now, because you know I have NO patience. 😆

SO SO SO excited for this FF and thanks for bearing with me and keeping everything a suspense while you and Lann discussed!! 😆😳

SO excited! 😃


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Shru, Thank you so much for keeping the title a surprise! I LOVE the title!! 👏👏👏 It suits the theme and the concept of the FF brilliantly! 👏👏 I don't have to guess who the Dark Knight is - do I? 😉

Absolutely love the setting in the 18th century and that is what got me interested in the story in the first place. So really looking forward to how all this unfolds. 😳

To begin absolutely loved the quote in the beginning from Charles Dickens. I think it throws light on how this tale can be assumed to move forward though I know you are going to be surprising us with lot of twists and turns. 👏👏

Loved the prologue Shru! Absolutely loved it! I could see it unfolding in front of my eyes and I was taken back to the 18th century. I could see Sanskaar chained and being tortured. Wonderfully described. Also loved how at the sound of Annapurna's voice, he looked up and whispered, 'Maa' - I believe the man is tortured physically, but mentally he is still strong. Especially if this torture has lasted for more than 2 years! A strong resilient Sanskaar - I am gonna love him!

Loved Annapurna's character in the prologue. A strong fierce regal woman coming to fight for her son - Absolutely loved how she threatened Bagri into submission. Her towering persona well defined. I could see the dungeons, lightly lit where the woman stands strong over Bagri and on the other end is her son, chained, calling out for her. Brilliant! 👏👏 Though I wonder what took her two years to come free her son who I feel she does love dearly!

You have outdone yourself Shru and I want more of this! I love historical narratives and this one is going to be brilliant, I can tell it. 😳

Continue soon! 😊

Lots of Love
Anna


P.S : Thanks for the mention! So much love! :*


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Thanks for the mention Shru 🤗 But the main idea itself was so great that I feel honoured you chose to share it & discuss it with me.

That synopsis looks straight from the back page of a Mills & Boon or Harlequin novel I love history & historical fiction as well so I am definitely looking forward to read this story. And like I said yesterday, even if I know the suspense, I will still read it for your writing style alone😳

That description of Sanskaar as a prisoner was beyond perfect. The whole scene played out before my eyes like a movie & then that single word "Maa" & I was reduced to tears without even knowing the dynamics these two will be sharing in the story. There is something about strong men being vulnerable when they are with the women they love like their mothers or wives or sisters...For some reason it was easy to imagine Shalini Kapoor Sagar, the actress who plays AP, very easily as Rani Sahiba. She has that aristocratic touch to her😳 Though why his Ma took two years to come to his rescue IDK?!


And that's it???!!!😲😭 I want more!!! I cannot wait for the next chapter! I want it almost as much as I want that SwaSan date in the show😆 so you get the urgency right??😆 Update jaldi jaldi please








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