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Posted: 9 years ago

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--Anna--

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Shru Shru Shru 🤗

Seriously! You outdo yourself every single time and I am left amazed after every chapter I read. Absolutely enthralling, captivating and makes me wanna beg for more! While reading I wish that the chapter would never end because I am SO desperate to know what is going to happen in the next one. 😃 You and Viji, both need to seriously consider thinking about writing a book. Believe me you have genuine fans who would read anything you write 😉

I see, its become a thing that I comment for two chapters together - So I guess from now on I shall keep it this way. 😆 I reserve and I forget. 🥱 Nevertheless, time for my long comment, that I know you SO enjoy reading. 😉😆

Chapter 6

Ragini has successfully managed to play the innocent friend to Laksh by putting Swara and Sanskaar together and manipulating Laksh. Seriously is Laksh actually that gullible that he believes everything Ragini says? And this attitude that I called for Swara - damn if you care so much about her - just go and speak to her yourself and stop using Ragini or anyone for that matter as your messenger. 😡 Bratty arrogant prince! I can also see Ragini is playing it smart from before hand by showing that Swara is more interested in spending time with Prince Sanskaar - and with what I have read of Chapter 7, Laksh will finally be putting what he has heard from Ragini and what has happened together and reach a conclusion. Dumb head that he is. 🥱

Swara and Sanskaar are slowly becoming aware of each other. And I am SO happy to see Swara being aware of Sanskaar more and she is thinking of him. We already know she wants to know more about the prince and his tale that she had heard so much about and this growing awareness on a subconscious level is interesting to watch. This bond that they develop is going to mark the beginning of their love story. 😉

Ewww!! Did Ragini actually let her sister be accosted by a soldier who could have molested her sister? Ragini 😡 I know where her hatred is coming from but I cant help myself but despise her for doing this to Swara. Laksh really thought that Swara was in love with a soldier and was being intimate with him? Ewww! Thank god the drug thing came out. Also Ragya exchanging glances? 😲😲 I always say Laksh and Ragini (in the show) and here too - have one thing in common, Ragini likes to manipulate and Laksh likes to get manipulated. 😆😆

Sanskaar killing the soldier who attacked Swara? Awww! My honourable Prince. It is quite apparent that he feels strongly for Swara though he is finding it hard to accept it or believe it. This is such a refreshing change from the show. Sanskaar is much much more compassionate. 😳

Oohhh! How much I love a good Sangini confrontation! Sanskaar plays his games well but I know Ragini is super evil. She may be intimidated for a moment by Sanskaar but this woman will not keep any promise but will mess with him. I am glad Sanskaar has a plan and he is leaving - because some battles can be won from far away. 😉

Chapter 7

WHAT A SURPRISE!!! I absolutely loved the change of story here! ABSOLUTELY LOVED IT!!! AHHH!!! 👏👏👏 Absolutely loved the little part where Swara is out in the open and looks back to the window now aware that it was Prince Sanskaar who was looking at her the first day when she came and she raises a hand to wave at him while the Prince hurries away from there - clearly keeping a watch at her every move but not making apparent or not being aware of his own feelings at the moment.

Absolutely loved how you have defined Ragini here. I understand her and I understand that she too might want to be free and not be caged in her princessely duties and even thoughI understand how she must feel when every person she has ever knows falls in love with the bright and shiny Swara, she must be hurt - but her actions I still cannot justify them. She hates Swara, she is insecure about her and she can be honest about it and not play games but she chose the wrong path and that I cannot justify!

Shru, I have a MAJOR Crush on this Sanskaar! I absolutely DO! I loved how he was waiting for Ragini but Swara showed up and Sanskaar even though for a minute thought that he could lie and pretend again, but the look in Swara's eyes, made him not make that move. Love the line, 'It was one of those moments, that had no beginning and no end' 👏👏👏 So Sanskaar used Swara to get what he wanted and Swara complied with disgust on her face. Come on Swara, that disgust is soon going to be love as we speak of it. 😉 I understand Swara too - she probably does not realize and understand what she has been caught up in and that is why when she saw Ragini - she fought not only for herself but her sister too. But I am hoping she understood the malice behind her sister's intentions and will be accepting of it but not be in denial.

Sanskaar calling Ragini Nagini was the highlight! 😆😆 I wish someone could do that in the show too and in all probability Sanskaar 😆 Ragini wanted Sanskaar to kill Swara? 😲

How could he? He has a soft corner for her and he will not let an innocent be harmed. I am sure Swara will one day realise that Sanskaar protected her from a terrible fate! Ragini is so confident that she has managed to overthrow Sanskaar and Swara out and she is going to play on it obviously but this is the beginning of a hate-love story and I am so looking forward to it.

Lovely update Shru! 🤗

Love

Anna

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Niyati Gupta

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Posted: 9 years ago

#443

Unresd my comment on pg 51 sorry I know I M late

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Juanita

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Posted: 9 years ago

#444

Finally was able to read Chapter 7 and it was so Good👏 .I absolutely loved it . As you said it was an important chapter in the FF. Because it has some major plot movements. I knew Ragini would not Back off but i never expected her to be capable of such a sinister plan. Yes i knew she was far manipulative here but got to say you really pulled of the Surprise well . ⭐️

Loved Sanskar dilemma before his escape, him trying to avoid seeing her, not wanting Swara to think Bad of him just like others , trying to prevent any suspicion falling on her . And ofcourse since they are soulmates loved Swara missing him too and was totally dejected to see him ignoring her even if she think he was not in the right state of mind.

So Ragini sent Swara to be killed since Sanskar would have not be able to think of an alternate plan that quick without risking his escape. But Sanskar is capable of counter attacking all her plans. Loved Swara rection first of disbelief and next fear and when finiding out he helped her last night her confusion.

She thought he kiiled the guard . Well i hope her MU get cleared out Soon . So by sending her to Lakshya chambers he was not planning for distraction but rather an Alibi for her. That she was no way near him during his escape. Well AP saw and his plan was failed due to Lakshya not being in the house. But wont Swara being Naive tell everyone everything , if she did it might cause her trouble. Since no one would probably believe her over Ragini. I am little confused about Sanskar intention in sending her to Lakshya bedroom.

So ragini followed them ofcourse she would 😆, Loved the face off between Sanskar and Ragini. Swara finally realized her sister is not as sweet as she hoped. But even then Sanskar gave his dulhan dost an plan but she rejected it for a much sinister plan. Typical Ragini . So who is the mysterious person that witnessed the exchange, i am curious.

Loved the update Shruti, Do continue soon . Waiting for Chapter 8 😊

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1025621

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Posted: 9 years ago

#445

read the last 3 parts together

your fic is awesome 😊🤗

thanks for the pm😊

waiting for more😃

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#446

Originally posted by: coolgal270
So sorry dear Shruti...have been unable to respond...traveling plus a wedding at home...its been too hectic...will read ur updates soon...and reply..really dying to read this..
Lots of love, sumi

Don't worry Sumi, I totally understand. I haven't even been able to catch up with all the replies, just got back after a 14 hour day again! Hope you get some free time and find this worth reading whenever you do:) Love, Shru x

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#447

Originally posted by: rayab_rajpoot
read the last 3 parts together
your fic is awesome 😊🤗
thanks for the pm😊
waiting for more😃

Thank you so much Rayab! Thats' really sweet of you! Catch you soon!

Best wishes,

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#448

Originally posted by: geetkumar
"Oh Ragini, Ragini, How I hate... you. But you fascinate me so much". Like a cobra, so deadly and ready to strike. But we still can't move our eyes from it. How does her mind work? So beautiful and so innocent looking but actually so devious and evil from inside. But still I can't help being fascinated by her. Some how she reminds me of the witch of the Beowulf. who slowly and steadily is shedding her lovely veneer and emerging into an ugly devil.
Swara, a caged bird, doesn't know yet how to break the walls of her cage. I am waiting for the day jab sayiad ko bulbul se aur bulbul ko sayiad se pyar ho jay!!!!!!!!
Sanskaar, he is a double edged sword, isn't he?Ready to attack and protect in the same time.so the attacker had started to turn into a protector. He might be burning in rage and the fires of revenge but he can't change is core character' The goodness in him', which will come forth. All he had been lacking was his guiding light, his Swara.
Sorry weaved my own fantasy here. But what to do, you are that good in casting such spell.
Forgive me. I am falling short of words here. All I can do is👏
Eagerly waiting for the next installment.

Hey Geet! Yes indeed- Ragini well compared to a cobra- ever ready to strike with deadly poison! You know what- I am exactly the same- characters like this, provided they are explained properly, do fascinate and of course not in a nice way but a sort of morbid fascination. Oh yes!!! I love the Beowulf story and good parallel drawn- didn't think of that!

I like the idea of Swara as a bid caged in a way or to me she is more like Sleeping Beauty- waiting to be awakened. Totally true about Sanskaar- he can no more kill Swara than hide from his true nature- that of a gallant knight! Love it when people weave fantasies here- please do! Thank you so much for your kind words! Catch you after next chapter!

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: Forum.Maniac
Shru, what a brilliant one this is! You have again outdone yourself 👏
I always knew Ragini would double cross Sanskaar, but never expected it to be in this way! That moment when Sanskaar and Swara freeze with their eyes on each other, reeling with what they have just learned, was PERFECT! You described it so well ❤️

And then Sanskaar has no option but to act in the way that Ragini wants (minus the killing part). I got sadistic pleasure from the part where he was all business and Swara was wondering how he could be the same masked man that had helped her. Even that moment when he let her believe he killed that man 😆 Their interactions in the future are sure going to be interesting, looking forward to it!

I was as clueless as Swara abt why Sanskaar wanted her to go to Lakshay's bedchambers and why he relented, when she couldn't, so easily. It would be great if you could explain or is this some mystery?

Woohoo! That confrontation with Ragini was epic. I was all prepared for Swara thinking of Sanskaar as the sole bad guy, but I'm glad you revealed that Ragini was in it too and Sanskaar chose to take her away rather than kill her. Though its still not going to be all bed and roses for SwaSan, waiting to see how this will change the dynamics of their relationship! ❤️
Btw that last moment with SwaSan riding away on the horse, I imagined it to be Picture Perfect Our Prince and Princess!

Eagerly waiting for the next part of this FF, Shru! Continue soon! Lots of love 🤗

PS: I love the way you brought out Ragini's deeply ingrained insecurity regarding Swara and how it is about even the smallest of things like loving the light and not just Laksh, like on the show 👍🏼

Thank you Sana my sweet! 🤗 😳😳😳

So glad this chapter is being received like this! I actually conceived this whole story around the idea of Sanskaar taking Swara hostage:).

Aha- you like the attitude Mr Knight showed too? I thought it would be lame to explain to an emotional Swara at that point that he was a hero, not villain! My task is to now keep them interesting! Hmm- Sanskaar wanted to check for something in Lakshya's chambers. If you think back- Sanskaar is convinced that Lakshya betrayed him and there is something he lost which was precious to him (besides of course the map and Kavita and the code key). So he may have wanted to check for that and retrieve it? He gave us because he didn't have much time and AP saw Swara already and it would be too risky and now he had Swara with him, what else can he do?:).

Yay you like the Sanskaar-Ragini face off! I always thought they have such a good equation as enemies if played properly. And I did originally not want Ragini to reveal her face to Swara but changed my mind. As it is, there's enough issues for SwaSan to sort na? Thank you so much for liking all that you described, am so pleased! Will work on 8 this week but it's crazy busy! I'll do my best!

Love- Shru xoxo

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#450

Originally posted by: DivineDarkness
You gonna update now???😳

Leku 🤗

Arrey no yaar:(. I just got back. Had a 3 hour drive on top of a mad 11-12 hours at work. Am totally crazy this week 😭. I know what to write in 8 but it's just finding the time! I'll try for as soon as I can manage, promise! So glad your reading X

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