Originally posted by: bwvianna
Hey,
I guess I am on a spree of reading your work 😛
Okay first off I wanna say, what a delicious Sanskaar! I went all moony eyes over the guy. Seriously it was a mixture of ASR from IPKKND and Sanskaar. 😃😉
Coming to the story, I loved it.! I am so happy I have read it now and not when you were updating because girl I would be constantly going mad waiting for updates. Seriously I was on the edge of my seat reading this story. Absolutely wonderful work!
I am guessing from this story that you also like Ragini and are a Ragya shipper?
I was all shocked during the whole confrontation with the gun scene. I was all like shit its Lakshya, its Lakshya!!! I literally went to the top and read the whole update again when Sanskaar went 'Adarsh Bhaiya, put it down'! Oh God! Brilliantly done there! Mystery is my thing and gosh! there was so much of it here! You left me a happy soul with this story. Pretty awesome last day feelings! 😃
What I love about your writing is the way you have let everything flow so smoothly. The Sanskaar entry, their first interaction, their constant bickering, their deal, not-so-fake marriage, SwaSanRag confrontation, their first kiss, their awkwardness, their emotional turmoil, their getting together, feeling confession, and happily ever after! This story was like the perfect story of SwaSan, loved it to the core!
You have portrayed every single person so well. What caught my attention was how you did not get Ragini's truth out in front of everyone but instead only in front of selected members. I think Lakshya should have been told. Not a good base for Ragya if he didn't know. But this is a SwaSan story so understandable.
Sapna, you have created a fan in me for your writings.! Kindly PM me on any new stories. I plan to follow it religiously. 😛 Seriously yaar, your SwaSan interactions, their scenes have made a place in my heart.
Coming to the awesome battle between DP and Sanskaar, take a bow! It was so well written. The Adarsh Bhaiya twist, the Kavita being money minded twist, fantastic!
I won't give a person to person portrayal awesomeness, but I have loved each and every character portrayal in this story. And your epilogue. It was justice to such a story! Complete justice.!
Please keep writing. Awaiting more short stories. :)
A very happy new year and loads of 🤗to you too.
-V :)
P.S.: What happened to Parneeta Bhabhi?