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foresight

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Posted: 9 years ago

#531

Originally posted by: NitaReid

Hope i wasnt pressuring you, Write when you have time or when you feel like it , but just let me know if you wrote anything new . i will love to read

Started a new one 😉

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amimus

@amimus

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#532

Just read the prologue. I am very curious as to who are the people especially the woman who is sacred by the untimely thunderstorm.

Hopefully should be able to read soon.

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amimus

@amimus

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#533

I have throughly enjoyed this Story, the depth of relations and it's affect on oneself is so beautifully explained.

The transformations in Sanskaar from being in total revenge mode to being sobered down with Swara in his life and their love, is shown in such a gradual and natural way.

Love,

Amina

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foresight

@foresight

Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#534

Originally posted by: amimus
I have throughly enjoyed this Story, the depth of relations and it's affect on oneself is so beautifully explained.
The transformations in Sanskaar from being in total revenge mode to being sobered down with Swara in his life and their love, is shown in such a gradual and natural way.

Love,

Amina

thanks so much Amina. 😃

i am glad you enjoyed the story and liked how sanskar;s character progressed.

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Sree

@Sree8410

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#535

Sapna I just read the whole SS at once.

It has beautifully portrayed the change in the equations of relationships. And yes, there are situations resembling to the serial, but the way each character reacted to the situation was entirely different and true to that situation. I loved every character.

Ragini redeemed at the first confession itself and the rest of the family is unaware of it, hence she is accepted as the perfect bahu of the family. Laksh well he is as usual the bubbly, implusive person. Swara chose not to trust her sister as she did before, good atleast here she learnt her lesson. Sanskar changed as a person for good. From a person set out to take revenge to a loving brother, son and a caring and protective husband. Especially his entry was awesome.

Adarsh as villain who would have thought that?😆 And Kavita was just a pawn and she was not actually in love with Sanskar. Poor guy... DP and Sanskar chose to reconcile for the family but with the reality in that too that no relation when joined after a break will ever be like before. And what an ending?? I cant believe that its over.

I'm so happy I chose this one to begin with your SS. Now I'm going to read the rest and let you know.

Edited by Sree8410 - 9 years ago