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Posted: 9 years ago
Sapna..
.so sweet n touchy ending...the relationships r practical...n true...m very happy ...i wish twins for dem
prince n princess... 😊
Keep writing
n kudos fr dis SS
love

Simi
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Posted: 9 years ago
Sapna 🤗

This is such a sweet and happy ending!! I loved it. Swasan deserve all the happiness. They finally found their silver lining!! A baby

I loved the way you portrayed the change in equations realistically. Just because they have moved forward does not mean that could have the same relationship what they once had. They shadows will always remain and with time you look past these shadows.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: foresight

😳 😳 😳
thanks so much for your wonderful words...🤗
sanskar is strong enough to take the risk when it is just him...he just gets worried when swara comes into picture, because he cannot ever take a risk with her 😳


That's true and you brought out his protective instincts...the ease in the flow of words, the description of the emotional drama...well played out!

Will get back after reading the finale!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi Sapna,
Read Chapter 15 and Finale in 1 go...

The calmness of the land after the hurricane swirled thru was my take of Chapter 15... True, the hurricane damages almost everything it touches but it also bonds...relationship, friendship becomes the bonding factors. Humans bond in time of disaster...The way you brought all the characters up to the forefront was simply superb. Loved the way you made all the 'wrongs' into 'rights'. Everyone has character flaws but to recognize and move ahead, that is a character by itself...you worded Sanskar's character beautifully...

Finale :

It was like autumn breeze settling in..bringing coolness to everyone and everything when it breezes thru... wonderful ending...


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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Sakura24

Hey Sapna...
'Softer are sun shines of everlasting days' would be my one liner for this chapter. Glad how everything has finally settled in to the smooth waves of peace. Liked the subtle highlights of the bonds, RagYa's perfect future and the cute SwaSan moment.
This was perfect story, take a well deserved bow...
Do write more in future!😊

☺️ thanks so much...yes it is the soft sunlight of early morning that is gracing their lives now...neither to hot nor to cold...just the right warmth in it 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: swa291

It should be twins so both of their wish come true

And i love happy ending


hahah...i think twins might be a bit too much if they are like SwaSan...😆
thanks for liking the ending 😳 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: xoanyaxo

Lovely end to a beautiful story

I'm gonna miss it
Keep Writing
Xoxo


thanks so much anya xoxo 😳 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

Sigh...this chapter reminds me of my favorite word..."Saudade" 😊 Felt so warmly, gloriously happy reading about the bliss in Sanskaar and Swara's life...a little bundle of joy on the way (I would make it twins 😆).

Loved that little insight into relationships in general, especially ones involving family. They aren't always perfect, one doesn't choose ones relatives, after all. But it doesn't mean that the bonds don't have value, that one can't derive joy and satisfaction from them.

Feeling a bit melancholy though, that this story is winding up with this chapter. Hoping you will have more for us, sooner rather than later.

Cheers

Viji

😆 twins might be a bit too much even for our couple to handle, esp if they are like them 😆
thanks so much for liking the bit about relationships...🤗
i did like your Saudade a lot..thanks for the compliment

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Banjaaran...

Oye.. Finale bhi aagaya..

i am trailing so behind.
Showie Sapna was caught up with my Os's and rest.
gonna read all the chapters now.
i am sure i am gonna have a splendid time doing so.😳


hahaha...take your time no rush dear 😃
and your OS and Angel is going really well 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: KawalArora

awesum os n felt so good after reading it. I m happy u completed soon


thanks so much dear...i am really happy this SS left you feeling good 😳 😃

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