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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Amrtina

awesome final part

just loved their cute scene
I will miss this story😭
I will read it again and again


thanks so much 🤗 you are so sweet so are your comments 😃 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: maaneetfan

Awww the cutest chapter!!! All is well and the heart is full with happiness and it is filled more with the news of Swasan baby!!!

Such an adorable finale but makes me sad to see it end :(:(

U hv written the entire story so beautifully Sapna!! Hats off!!!!


thanks so so much for liking the story and my writing 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: arohijsp

Awsome finale!
I love happy endings! What more better than Swasan going to become parents.
Thanks dear, I have become a fan of your work. You're a very talented writer! Take a bow!!
Keep writing:)


thanks so much arohi. 😳 😃 your comments have left me blushing 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sarathy321

Hai dear. .
So, this is the end of ma favourite story ...
U finished it very well ...
All d best for ur writings ...
Pls come up soon with a new ff on swasan...will be waiting for ur pms and regular updates...
I am going to read this ff again and again...
May God bless u and keep writing


thanks so much arathy ...for saying this is your fav story 🤗
thanks so much for your wishes...🤗 your comments are so sweets 😳 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: hp_2006

Aww😳😳 such a sweet and lovely update yaar Sapna 🤗

Swasan expecting a baby too..😃 I was about to ask you in the last update comment whether you have any plan for Swasan kid or not..And I am so happy that you gave us one..😛 Happy to see pregnant Swara..

Happy for Ragya too..

Please start a new story sooonnn...😃😃😃

😃


thanks naina 🤗
haha...i am getting telepathic here 😉 😆 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: simsen23

Sapna..
.so sweet n touchy ending...the relationships r practical...n true...m very happy ...i wish twins for dem
prince n princess... 😊
Keep writing
n kudos fr dis SS
love

Simi


thanks so much simmi...a big big thanks for your wonderful comments on the relationships as well as the SS 😃 😳 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago

thanks so much dear...glad you loved every part of it. 😳 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: moonstonespirit

Sapna 🤗


This is such a sweet and happy ending!! I loved it. Swasan deserve all the happiness. They finally found their silver lining!! A baby

I loved the way you portrayed the change in equations realistically. Just because they have moved forward does not mean that could have the same relationship what they once had. They shadows will always remain and with time you look past these shadows.


thanks so so much 🤗
you are so right about relationships...they cannot be the same as what they were...they have shadows of past now also in them that cannot be wiped off. very insightful the way you have put it 😃 ⭐️
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Posted: 9 years ago

thanks so much dear 😃 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: JazzyM

Hi Sapna,

Read Chapter 15 and Finale in 1 go...

The calmness of the land after the hurricane swirled thru was my take of Chapter 15... True, the hurricane damages almost everything it touches but it also bonds...relationship, friendship becomes the bonding factors. Humans bond in time of disaster...The way you brought all the characters up to the forefront was simply superb. Loved the way you made all the 'wrongs' into 'rights'. Everyone has character flaws but to recognize and move ahead, that is a character by itself...you worded Sanskar's character beautifully...

Finale :

It was like autumn breeze settling in..bringing coolness to everyone and everything when it breezes thru... wonderful ending...



I really like how you have put it. calmness in the land after the hurricane . that is exactly what it was. i am so glad you liked the bonding in the aftermath of the hurricane. and you are right, adversity does bring you closer together esp with your loved ones. thanks so much for your wonderful wonderful words and comments. they have raised the story to a new level 🤗 😳 😃
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