SwaSan SS: Enemy Within

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Sakura24

@Sakura24

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Posted: 9 years ago

I have mixed feelings about this one.

The first man whoever he is, is cold, dangerous, sharp and avenging...but I like him.

The second coming couple...I don't know the woman sounds some middle aged superstitious, one and her husband a man with a dark past and a very very large ego...his over confidence sort of irks me.

So I take it the first man is the one who would break the illusion of the second? The enemy?

Continue soon. Play your wonderful cards, I'm waiting!

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foresight

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: princess_tara
interesting

thanks so much tara...is that your name? sorry wasn't sure hence asking 😃

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foresight

@foresight

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sarathy321
Nice start...

thanks sarathy 😃

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foresight

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: MysticRiver
interesting!

thanks...hope you find the nest ones interesting too!

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DarkPhoenix93

@DarkPhoenix93

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Posted: 9 years ago

Hi again! I loved the prologue, it's very intriguing!

I am guessing the husband and wife in the second half are Swara and Sanskaar? It could also be Annapurna and Durga Prasad but I am leaning more towards SwaSan.

Is the man in the first half an enemy of Sanskaar or SwaSan? It could also be Sanskaar if the couple are Annapurna and Durga Prasad but it all depends on who the wife and husband are...

Whoever that man is, I am guessing that someone from the Maheshwari family will help him and hence the title of the story?

You've got me hooked and now I am going to be wondering about this story until your next update. Update soon, please

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foresight

@foresight

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Sakura24
I have mixed feelings about this one.
The first man whoever he is, is cold, dangerous, sharp and avenging...but I like him.
The second coming couple...I don't know the woman sounds some middle aged superstitious, one and her husband a man with a dark past and a very very large ego...his over confidence sort of irks me.
So I take it the first man is the one who would break the illusion of the second? The enemy?
Continue soon. Play your wonderful cards, I'm waiting!

what can I say about you saku...you have a sense about the charachters 😳 🤗

i hope you like the next set of cards 😳 😃

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foresight

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: bloomnskyrules
Hi again! I loved the prologue, it's very intriguing!
I am guessing the husband and wife in the second half are Swara and Sanskaar? It could also be Annapurna and Durga Prasad but I am leaning more towards SwaSan.
Is the man in the first half an enemy of Sanskaar or SwaSan? It could also be Sanskaar if the couple are Annapurna and Durga Prasad but it all depends on who the wife and husband are...
Whoever that man is, I am guessing that someone from the Maheshwari family will help him and hence the title of the story?
You've got me hooked and now I am going to be wondering about this story until your next update. Update soon, please

loved you analysis and comments. I won't keep you waiting for too long I promise. I am really glad you liked it

😳 🤗

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-Ros-

@-Ros-

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

Yay another one from you! Sounds very very intriguing.

I'm loving the persona of that first man. He sounds completely on the ball & very mysterious.

The second man sounds quite arrogant though- like the sort who throws himself in the deep end before testing the water.

The woman reminds me of Sujata 🤣.. please don't kill me for writing that comment. 😆 Just because she was being kinda superstitious.. So I made out the second man to be Ram Prasad 😲

I can't wait to unravel this. Ignore my stupid predictions. 😆