SwaSan OS- 'Space' - Page 10

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

Viii 🤗 You are incredible hon! Firstly, am humbled by the dedication. I selfishly asked you to write as I love to read it all and so I feel a bit of a fraud for accepting the dedication but loved it anyway! 😃

You always praise me for research so this time I have to say all that 😃. That story was beautiful- as soon as I started to read that bit I was transfixed, it was redolent of Aesop's Fables for me- does that make sense?! It reminded me of all I loved about reading in childhood basically and has stayed with me.

I love DP and I was overjoyed to see him assessed here and in such a lovely, human way too- 👏👏. The whole DP-Sanksaar-Kavita, then tied in so neatly with SwaSan was lovely- really made me feel like the circle completed.

The SwaSan interactions as ever were poetically beautiful and the whole thing had a balance and flow that you usually nail with all your writing. Again, sad that the elements series is ended but I have it in my favourites now to read when I want to, thank you again for it all!

Originally posted by: rithika2015

just just beautiful update. big hug for this my dear.🤗

i just love the way u write. the way u give a backdrop for every character is just amazing.

i can just feel what DP really is thru ur os. the connection between the bed time tale and swasan relation was too awesome..

i guess i need to use many more adjectives to describe how much i loved this os. the same is the case with the previous ones too..

swasan hayee what is there to say about them. their confession was perfect and i could visualize them.

hope we get see something like this in the show where DP understands sanskaar and his feelings and atleast ask him what he wants rather than taking his own decisions in a haste.

finally thank u so much for this series of OS.

i request u to keep writing more and more they are a real treat to read.

i wanna read an os from u on the relation of swasan after they move on or after they start a family from laksh's pov. i believe it would be treat for all of us to read swasan story and laksh redemption in ur way of writing.

please do consider my request..

Originally posted by: Nithya.G

wow beautiful update viji 👏

loved it a lot ❤️

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

<font size="2">Hi Shruti 🤗 🤗

I sincerely meant that dedication to you guys. As you know, I was kind of toying with the idea of writing "Air" as the 4th to finish the quartet. But I was initially planning that on Lucky, and well, you know my emotions on that loser at the moment...I've already joined your rant in your Sanskaar's letter to Lakshya post 😊

I just didn't have the energy to write an 5000 plus word OS on a character who's spineless, brainless, conscienceless and shameless. 😊 I mean, even if he had one of these aspects, I still would have...but he failed all! I didn't want to waste such a wonderful element as Air, on (Un)Lucky...

So then it seemed I would have to end it with the Trilogy (Water, Fire, Earth), but then you guys were all wonderful and motivating. 🤗 So I then decided to skip "Air" altogether and move on to the 5th element, "Space". Thanks to all you guys for that encouragement!

I am so glad you liked the back story for the Maheshwari clan, and the "bedtime tale" I had put in. That was loosely based on a folk tale I remember studying way back in school, but couldn't find anymore. So I mixed it with an Armenian poem I found with a roughly similar theme, altered with dollops of my very Indian imagination 😊

Am so happy, that you liked DP's portrayal, and the way he is a father figure to both Sansku and Swara. I wanted to make the SwaSan reunion in the climax as special as I could...coz I am bracing myself for some pain on screen now.
So I am really happy, too, that you liked that part. For some reason, the dialogues from Desolation of Smaug--- between Tauriel and Kili, about starlight I mean---popped into my head when I was imagining this scene on the terrace. I just had to reference it. Am a HUGE LOTR & Hobbit fan, what about you? 😊

Thanks again Shruti, for all your lovely comments, all through this OS series.

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Originally posted by: aash2302

Hey!!!! Awesome story it is... perfect on every seneed. It flowed like a poem..

Please please pm me when you update your work..

I don't want to miss such good stories from anow amazing writer

Love

Aashritha

Originally posted by: anju10

woww lovely update dear
great work 👏
awesome
thanxx for the pm

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

🤗Lux is a total waste of space (pun intended)😆so glad this didn't get centred around him. @bold- Oh my dear Lord- I was so tired yesterdaywhilstreplying and therefore I blame that on leaving out a big thing I wanted to say in my response. I am a HUGE LOTR fan! I mean total obsessive. Read them,watched the series, have the extendedexpensive versions and have watchedupteem times. When the very early film was out, I was going through a very bad phase personally and I even went alone to thecinema to watch it for arepeat watch as didn't have anyone to go with me- seriously! Also aTolkien fan. As the Hobbitfilms came out in December and I spend that time in the States with my sister and BIL, it was ourtradition to watch them in the IMAX in Orlando- incredible! The Tauriel Kili references were PERFECT for SwaSan!👏⭐️Also just wish they had made Swara a bit more Arwen? You know,giving it all up in defiance tobe with Aragorn? But maybe, someday we will see that in theshow?!

Seriously, I havethis soul connect with you and Medha for sure- so many freaky similarities- I love finding people like thatthrough these mediums😳.

Originally posted by: luvakanksha

Very wonderfully written

Loved the way this os describes dp and sanky relationship

Swasan are always too cute

Originally posted by: Javeria3991

Awesome one shot

I love the way you begin the perceptions of DP and the lovely tale. And the addition of dialogues from the hobbit and IPK simply made the tale superb.

enjoyed a lot reading quartet.👏

Continue writing.