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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: rerose
Wow lovely OS ,ur title was soo apt,loved it to the core,it was just awesome👏👏😳

Thanks so much for reading and leaving this lovely comment. 😊

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: Anbhigya
Wowww woww woww... M a fan!!! This series is so beautiful!!! N yesss the moment i read Main tmhe kha thdi jaunga... D first thing came to my mind was arnav khushi... My favourites forever... Thnk u for such a lovely read!!!

Hey Anbhigya 😊 Thanks so much for reading and commenting. Yes, my favorite on screen pair before SwaSan, was ArShi. They were magical too, weren't they? 😊

I wanted to use that famous dialogue on SwaSan. It fits them very well too, I must say.

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: someonelikeyou-
you always have unique shots,which is the sole reason that you tend to be the most famous writer in swaragini forum...

Wow...Falaq...Thanks for that praise yaar. 😳 😳 Glad you liked this OS.

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manasi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#84

This was absolutely amazing... your creativity and imagination are spellbinding... I am in love with all of your OS's... Keep writing😳

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#85

Originally posted by: kaku17
Viji my dear...⭐️🤗

To begin with a heart felt thanks for the acknowledgement you bestowed upon in the beginning of this phenomenal OS...it truly means a lot and girl, am blown away not only by your sheer scale of writing, but also by your humility ...I absolutely do not think that I can motivate an accomplished writer like yourself...what ever I say its genuine and heartfelt...🤗 ...

I have had the opportunity and privilege to read many stories here at IF, not only in this forum, but in few other forums too and I can safely say that, girl, you are one of the finest I have ever come across ⭐️...there were few who actually used to publish their stories...so if some day you decide on publishing yours, do let me know...would be the first one to buy...😃 ( ok not the first, scratch that, but I would definitely buy..I can't guarantee on being first as I am one helluva lazy person...😛..).

well now coming to the story...this was stupendous ⭐️...DP is one of my favourites and the way you weaved the story was magical...the folklore which young DP heard in his boyhood was touching and so was his displeasure at its ending...DP is like what should I say, coconut,( eewww, sorry about that...am unable to guess another word to describe DP at the moment 😛), rough on outside, but a total softie inside...😃...The way DP became the beacon of light showing the right approach to sanskaar and prod him to move towards the path of his happiness was so beautiful...and DP and sanskaar are so alike...yeah sans truly is DP's son after his own heart...😳

As ususal for me the best part was the last one where in you describe the sky's relation vis--vis other elements...👏...beautiful...sky really has an all encompassing vision and like you said all the other four elements look up to it...sky as in space as in ether ( vyom in hindi ) is vast and its difficult to actually gauze its depth or rather its reach...( hope I made sense..😛)

Kaku...😳 🤗 🤗 Thanks so very much for those very kind, very generous words of praise. Oh, I meant every word of that dedication. You see, I had initially conceived of this series as definitely a trilogy (Water, Fire, Earth), with possibly Air also (for which I had planned to write on Lucky). But in the meantime, I got more and more irritated with Lucky's character, and frankly, I did not have the enthusiasm to write such a lovely element like "Air", on a spineless, gutless, lackadaisical and juvenile loser like him. 😡 (Sorry for the rant about Lucky...) 😉

So then I was thinking of just closing the series with the trilogy, but then you guys motivated me to write more. Therefore, I just dropped "Air" altogether, and moved on to the 5th element, Space, or Sky/Ether. So I have the encouragement from you guys to thank for me getting down to conceiving and writing this one. 😊

About me ever planning to publish---you are too, too kind yaar. 😳 I am passionate about writing, its a hobby which is very close to my heart. All I want to do, is to put in the very best I can. And if I manage to convey what I want, in a manner which people find well written, that is the biggest reward for me.

I am so glad you liked my portrayal of DP in this one. He is a very interesting character, and I wanted to explore all the layers to his persona, his back story, and how his values came to built up. I am happy you liked the way I described his bonding with both Sanskaar and Swara. I hope that in the serial too, we will see him guiding their way towards each other. 😊 He does strike me as a true "Space/ Sky" element person--the one with a encompassing, far reaching vision.
Sanskaar really IS like him in many ways, that's why I said he was the son after DP's own heart. 😊

Thanks again Kaku, for reading and your lovely comment.

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#86

Originally posted by: ros_aavir
Really nicely written!

Loved the way you penned out DP's background, the bond between him and Swasan.

I would love it if he is the one who catalyses Swara's confession in the actual show. 😳 I ship SwaRga soo bad! 😆

Hi Ros 😊 Thanks for reading and for your comment. Glad you liked my portrayal of DP and the fatherly bond he has with SwaSan. I do feel he is a much better father figure for Swara, than spineless Shekar! 😊

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#87

Originally posted by: JazzyM
The highest rank is given to 'space' and in your story DP...He fulfilled it to the tee...The way you wrote DP from his times with his mother to the time he took the step to bring in his 'son' Sanskaar back on track...superb writing and imagination..
Blockbuster quartet...

Hey Jazzy.. 😊 Thanks so much! Glad you liked my portrayal of DP and his bonding with both Sanskaar (the son after his own heart), and Swara (the daughter he wanted but never had). I really feel DP is a very strong character and he has the potential to be the one who brings SwaSan together.

Thanks for your kind words.

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#88

Originally posted by: manasie23
This was absolutely amazing... your creativity and imagination are spellbinding... I am in love with all of your OS's... Keep writing😳

Thanks so much, Manasie. 😊