SwaSan OS- 'Space' - Page 12

Originally posted by: rafafan

Hi Viji ! Just an amazing conclusion to an amazing series. it was just perfect, the only thing i am sad about is that there isn't going to be a 5th part. Please, please do think of doing Air also, at some stage.

Coming to this OS, I was just so impressed with your imagination and sheer creativity. The way you gave the background for DPs childhood, his bond with his mom, the wonderful folk tale which you have taken so much effort to portray in such a beautiful manner. 👏 hats off to you, Lady. I repeat again that you are probably the very best writer i have ever come across on IF. 👏

While reading your narration of DPs childhood and journey to adulthood and becoming a father, i could almost imagine it like a movie playing in front of me. Too good! I loved the way you have explained his bond with Sanskaar & Swara, also his desire to remain balanced and impartial between all the people he sees as his children. You really explained him very well as "Space" element!

And SwaSan...what can I say. You described Sanskaar's and Swara's pain at their separation so wonderfully. And the climax terrace scene, their love confession, with your reference to the dialogues from Hobbit (Desolation of Smaug) was just MINDBLOWING. So very romantic and passionate! 😳

I must say i also loved your poetic description of the dawn and dusk skies. 😊 Went very well with the concept of Space.

Thanks for writing this OS and the entire Elements series Viji. Of course all your previous works also. I keep re reading all of them again & again, I must say all of them are absolute masterpieces!

Originally posted by: --Anna--

Hi Viji! :)

This was long due. Was really busy in work and I wanted to read the FF with a clear head and now I finally did. 😊

As usual, I am glad you continued to write after 'Earth'. After AP's story, I was looking forward to read DP's version too. You had made AP so interesting - that I was so sure that DP would be given the required justice and so you have. 👏 DP is one of my favourites in the show at this very moment and reading about his past and how his relationship with AP and Sanskaar has shaped up was very interesting. Definitely loved the DP and Sanskaar's conversation - it was beautiful! 👏 👏

Swara and Sanskaar's conversation was heartwarming. Don't you wish they had more mature conversation like this on the show? I do. I wish the creatives could read this and know the maturity in SwaSan relationship that fans crave for.

Obviously, loved the confession and the first kiss. 😳

Great work as usual and Thank you so much for the scrap. Looking forward to reading more. 😊

Originally posted by: misaki

I don't think anything I write here would manage to express even 50% of what I thought about all your OS's. 👏

Read this one first and I just had to read the previous three. I really am happy that I find writers who are so brilliant with their words. I really am. It's not very often that I come across a piece of work so brilliant in the forum. I think I have already expressed this to another brilliant writer(who's work I have also come to love) in this forum, Shruthi. 😊

Although I love reading Fan-Fiction of my favorite ships, most of the times I hardly find them satisfying. It might be for the lack of imagination on their part or me expecting too much. But once in a while I come across such absolute brilliance and I'm left stunned!

I'm so very happy that I got to read it and I hope I get to read more such amazing stuff in the future. I will not be exaggerating in the slightest, when I say I absolutely loved every single one of them.

The AP part was especially something I loved, seeing as I had the opportunity to read Shruthi's OS (Letter from Sanskaar to AP). I have had a lot of time to think and realize how AP could very well be the biggest rival to SwaSan and Sanskaar's happiness.

It was some really amazing storytelling.

Thank you for making my "Sanskaar-less" sunday Sanskaar-ilicious 😆

Originally posted by: .Sarcasmazing.

Mind blown away Viji! Okay this gotta be my favorite in the element's series closely followed by "Earth"

I should've actually guessed "Sky" would be our very own Durga Prasad Maheshwari. That man is definitely someone with a personality as vast as the Sky. I loved how you showed a young DP, a brilliant genius boy with a sensitive heart. I can SO picture the current DP still be affected by the love between Sky & the Earth and his heart always wishing for a happy ending for them which he actually succeeded in by giving Swara & Sanskaar, his blessings 😳

Sanskaar IS definitely his soul child alright. Just like Swara is. There are absolutely NO second thoughts about this. Among the three sons, it definitely IS Sanskaar, who perfectly mirrors DP despite not being his full son. Even AP knows this & is thus even more desperate to make her beloved laadla shine through in her desperate attempts (Yeah I know I am being harsh but it's AP & you know my feels for her right? :P) BUT the perspective DP already knows in who's hands the family reigns are going to be in the future. In one episode, they actually showed Sanskaar & DP sitting on the opposite sides of the dining table & it reflected SO much of the family's standing.

This was SO good & so enlightening of DP's character that I wouldn't have actually been bothered if it was all DDD instead of SwaSan too (Okay maybe a little bothering for my shipper heart but we can scratch that :P) I really like the way DP's character has turned out currently, before he was just TOO one dimensional or maybe was just being built up. You did such absolute justice to him, brilliant Viji ⭐️

SwaSan Aren't these two just magic? 😳 Oh yeah, stupid Sanskaar for having dismissed his confession before. I'll be honest, after Sanskaar saying what he feels for Swara & then being brutally honest & direct in saying, I am not sorry for loving you to her, it was pretty difficult to imagine him being dismissive about his confession but then I realized, it could go your way too with his insecurities always nagging at his brain & the fear of losing Swara tugging at his heart. Gah, such a character this man ❤️ Thank you makers for creating such brilliance onscreen. The confession was SO amazing <3 I loved it & that Main tumhe khaa thodi jaunga & Swara's thoughts following that 😳 I've never watched IPKKND so it was fresh & could totally picture Sanskaar saying it. Cheers for our dearest DP's blessing, the Sky & the Earth were finally reunited in human form ❤️

Can't believe the brilliant series is over. I hope you're ready with your next masterpiece cos we CANNOT wait 😆 Your writing is addiction, please NEVER stop 😳

Thank you for the dedication & the PM Vij :D

Originally posted by: jasw

Wonderful, mind blowing finale to the series Viji. Loved the old folk tale and your description of sky wearing midnight blue Sherwani. Was remembering the scene where Sanskar was wearing the same!😛

Loved DPs character sketch as the space, caring for everyone esp. Sanskar & Swara. Loved the confession with Hobbit dialogues. It's kinda magical.

Haha .. And Mai kya tumhe kha jaonga is so typical Arnav Khushi. Swasan has full potential to reach there! 😃