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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

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samiya.059

@samiya.059

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

Viji, my dear friend, thank u so much for
considering me worth the dedication for this
such a beautiful and wonderful story.It made
my day.What u called encouragememt from
my end is just the genuine appreciation that u
truly deserve
I am truly at loss of words to express what I
feel for this piece of work...fantastic.I can say
this with my hand on my heart that lady! u
have surpassed the brilliance of your previous
works
" Always be a poet, even in prose."
It holds true for writers as u. It seemed like a
poem to me...the emotions, rhythm ,weaving
of whole story around a concept and beautiful
discription of characters.
I couldn't believe ,I would be reading a story
on Durga Prasad again and again.This is one
character in swaragini who truely is a very
genuine person.I am so glad you wrote about
him .It definitely gave an insight to things
which made Durga Prasad the man he is!
There are times when that the characters we
are reading gets into motion in our minds eye.I
could very much imagine all that happenings of
DP's life.That only a good writer can do.The
events he/she narrates should b such as if
happening b4 u .
I have too feel that sanskaar has qualities of
Durga prasad .He too like his uncle is
intelligent unbiased straightforward and a just
man.
I liked the swason part too,but DP's story was
what made it so interesting
Thank You so much for writing such beautiful
stories weaved on characters we adore.
I hope someday you publish your work and we
read it and say 'hey this great writer is my
friend'
Keep writing and keep shinning
Thanks for pm

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Mallika-E-Zain

@Mallika-E-Zain

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

Quite innovative and beautifulll

Thoroughly loved it.

I wish i cud write like u

Lovely...

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Luv_Ishveer
Quite innovative and beautifulll
Thoroughly loved it.
I wish i cud write like u
Lovely...

Thank you so much for reading and for this lovely comment. 😊

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Mallika-E-Zain

@Mallika-E-Zain

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

Thank you so much for reading and for this lovely comment. 😊

Ur welcom😊

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...sandy...

@...sandy...

Voyager

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Posted: 9 years ago

Wow such an awesome writer you are.. What a way you described DP and sanskaar's relation.. Kudos👏 Brillant choice of words with feelings flooding 😳

The story was simply fabulous..😳 I haven't heard it before though..😆

I liked the entire OS..

Things I want similar in the show:

1)A past with DP-sanskaar-kavita 😃

2)DP-sanskaar private talk after swara leaves baadi.

I liked the dialogue "Don't you think its laksh" .. so true.. 👏

3) Baadi where swara is missing sanskaar 😳

Do write more 😊 would love to read.

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ...sandy...
Wow such an awesome writer you are.. What a way you described DP and sanskaar's relation.. Kudos👏 Brillant choice of words with feelings flooding 😳
The story was simply fabulous..😳 I haven't heard it before though..😆

I liked the entire OS..

Things I want similar in the show:

1)A past with DP-sanskaar-kavita 😃

2)DP-sanskaar private talk after swara leaves baadi.

I liked the dialogue "Don't you think its laksh" .. so true.. 👏

3) Baadi where swara is missing sanskaar 😳

Do write more 😊 would love to read.

Thanks so much, Sandy. Really appreciate your warm comment. 😊 You could go through my previous OS's in the Elements series, have given the links in the preface of "Space". As for my earlier work, I can scrap or PM you the links. Whichever you prefer.

Thanks again for reading.

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...sandy...

@...sandy...

Voyager

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

Thanks so much, Sandy. Really appreciate your warm comment. 😊 You could go through my previous OS's in the Elements series, have given the links in the preface of "Space". As for my earlier work, I can scrap or PM you the links. Whichever you prefer.

Thanks again for reading.

For sure i ll read and comment on it 😳

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nimmi

@Banjaaran25

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

Awww..

such a beautiful beautiful story..

well Hi!😳..

been reading your amazing creations albeit silently (does 'liking' counts?) but with immense happiness..
but this piece compelled me to comment.

after Sanskaar DP gotta be my favourite man.. how could i stop myself from congratulating and thanking you girl for this amazing story written for them.. (loved the folk tale. beautiful concept there).

Beautiful concept of elements.. and each element described so perfectly.

thank you so much..
Much love..❤️