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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#101

Originally posted by: anu91
Wow amazing one...
Loved it...

Thanks Anu 😊

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Supriya Gupta

@SupriyaG96

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#102

Another marvellous, fabulous, fantastic OS [=D>] [=D>] [=D>] [=D>]
I have no words to tell how wonderful you write [:^:]
The journey of Durga Prasad's life is enormous and magnificient [:*:] [:*:] [:D]
SwaSan kiss [L]
[B]"Though they loved each other, they were doomed to be forever parted. Since that day, the Sky feels so grieved at his love being out of reach, that his tears dim his sight and fall on the Earth in showers of rain. And the Earth, trying hard to to wipe his tears, reached her arms up high, which became the peaks of the mountains we know today.""[/B] This is one of most heart touching line which made me nostalgic and a bit emotional [:^:]
The Earth and the sky story is the epic part of this OS [:$]
Hoping that you will write on the last element 'Air' too on SwaSan [:$] [:D]

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#103

Originally posted by: SupriyaG96
Another marvellous, fabulous, fantastic OS 👏
I have no words to tell how wonderful you write
The journey of Durga Prasad's life is enormous and magnificient ⭐️ ⭐️ 😃
SwaSan kiss ❤️
"Though they loved each other, they were doomed to be forever parted. Since that day, the Sky feels so grieved at his love being out of reach, that his tears dim his sight and fall on the Earth in showers of rain. And the Earth, trying hard to to wipe his tears, reached her arms up high, which became the peaks of the mountains we know today."" This is one of most heart touching line which made me nostalgic and a bit emotional
The Earth and the sky story is the epic part of this OS 😳
Hoping that you will write on the last element 'Air' too on SwaSan 😳 😃

Hi Supriya

Thanks so much for reading and taking the time to leave such a detailed and lovely comment. 😊

Glad you liked the portrayal of DP's youth and his upbringing which lead to the persona he is today.

Was also very happy to know you liked that "bedtime tale" of the Earth and the Sky. As I mentioned, this was a folk tale I had studied many years ago, and I had really liked it. But could not find details about it when I searched now. Could only find an Armenian poem which had a kind of similar theme (not the same), so I just mixed it with my memories of the folk tale and imagined the rest 😊

I am so very glad you liked the SwaSan terrace scene 😊. I am a HUGE SwaSan fan, so when anyone tells me they like a SwaSan scene I wrote, that's like the best compliment 😊

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

Rocker

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Posted: 9 years ago

#104

Originally posted by: -Prithi-
amazing OS

Thanks Prithi 😊

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#105

Originally posted by: rerose
Wow lovely OS ,ur title was soo apt,loved it to the core,it was just awesome👏👏😳

Thanks so much for reading and for this lovely comment 😊

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

Rocker

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Posted: 9 years ago

#106

Originally posted by: Alohomora.
Ress

Thanks Noura 😊

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#107

Originally posted by: princess_tara
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Thanks Tara 😊

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rafafan

@rafafan

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#108

Hi Viji ! Just an amazing conclusion to an amazing series. it was just perfect, the only thing i am sad about is that there isn't going to be a 5th part. Please, please do think of doing Air also, at some stage.

Coming to this OS, I was just so impressed with your imagination and sheer creativity. The way you gave the background for DPs childhood, his bond with his mom, the wonderful folk tale which you have taken so much effort to portray in such a beautiful manner. 👏 hats off to you, Lady. I repeat again that you are probably the very best writer i have ever come across on IF. 👏

While reading your narration of DPs childhood and journey to adulthood and becoming a father, i could almost imagine it like a movie playing in front of me. Too good! I loved the way you have explained his bond with Sanskaar & Swara, also his desire to remain balanced and impartial between all the people he sees as his children. You really explained him very well as "Space" element!

And SwaSan...what can I say. You described Sanskaar's and Swara's pain at their separation so wonderfully. And the climax terrace scene, their love confession, with your reference to the dialogues from Hobbit (Desolation of Smaug) was just MINDBLOWING. So very romantic and passionate! 😳

I must say i also loved your poetic description of the dawn and dusk skies. 😊 Went very well with the concept of Space.

Thanks for writing this OS and the entire Elements series Viji. Of course all your previous works also. I keep re reading all of them again & again, I must say all of them are absolute masterpieces!

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--Anna--

@--Anna--

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#109

Hi Viji! :)

This was long due. Was really busy in work and I wanted to read the FF with a clear head and now I finally did. 😊

As usual, I am glad you continued to write after 'Earth'. After AP's story, I was looking forward to read DP's version too. You had made AP so interesting - that I was so sure that DP would be given the required justice and so you have. 👏 DP is one of my favourites in the show at this very moment and reading about his past and how his relationship with AP and Sanskaar has shaped up was very interesting. Definitely loved the DP and Sanskaar's conversation - it was beautiful! 👏 👏

Swara and Sanskaar's conversation was heartwarming. Don't you wish they had more mature conversation like this on the show? I do. I wish the creatives could read this and know the maturity in SwaSan relationship that fans crave for.

Obviously, loved the confession and the first kiss. 😳

Great work as usual and Thank you so much for the scrap. Looking forward to reading more. 😊

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misaki

@misaki

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#110

I don't think anything I write here would manage to express even 50% of what I thought about all your OS's. 👏

Read this one first and I just had to read the previous three. I really am happy that I find writers who are so brilliant with their words. I really am. It's not very often that I come across a piece of work so brilliant in the forum. I think I have already expressed this to another brilliant writer(who's work I have also come to love) in this forum, Shruthi. 😊

Although I love reading Fan-Fiction of my favorite ships, most of the times I hardly find them satisfying. It might be for the lack of imagination on their part or me expecting too much. But once in a while I come across such absolute brilliance and I'm left stunned!

I'm so very happy that I got to read it and I hope I get to read more such amazing stuff in the future. I will not be exaggerating in the slightest, when I say I absolutely loved every single one of them.

The AP part was especially something I loved, seeing as I had the opportunity to read Shruthi's OS (Letter from Sanskaar to AP). I have had a lot of time to think and realize how AP could very well be the biggest rival to SwaSan and Sanskaar's happiness.

It was some really amazing storytelling.

Thank you for making my "Sanskaar-less" sunday Sanskaar-ilicious 😆