SwaSan OS- 'Space' - Page 11

Originally posted by: anu91

Wow amazing one...

Loved it...

Another marvellous, fabulous, fantastic OS [=D>] [=D>] [=D>] [=D>]
I have no words to tell how wonderful you write [:^:]
The journey of Durga Prasad's life is enormous and magnificient [:*:] [:*:] [:D]
SwaSan kiss [L]
[B]"Though they loved each other, they were doomed to be forever parted. Since that day, the Sky feels so grieved at his love being out of reach, that his tears dim his sight and fall on the Earth in showers of rain. And the Earth, trying hard to to wipe his tears, reached her arms up high, which became the peaks of the mountains we know today.""[/B] This is one of most heart touching line which made me nostalgic and a bit emotional [:^:]
The Earth and the sky story is the epic part of this OS [:$]
Hoping that you will write on the last element 'Air' too on SwaSan [:$] [:D]

Originally posted by: SupriyaG96

Another marvellous, fabulous, fantastic OS 👏
I have no words to tell how wonderful you write
The journey of Durga Prasad's life is enormous and magnificient ⭐️ ⭐️ 😃
SwaSan kiss ❤️
"Though they loved each other, they were doomed to be forever parted. Since that day, the Sky feels so grieved at his love being out of reach, that his tears dim his sight and fall on the Earth in showers of rain. And the Earth, trying hard to to wipe his tears, reached her arms up high, which became the peaks of the mountains we know today."" This is one of most heart touching line which made me nostalgic and a bit emotional
The Earth and the sky story is the epic part of this OS 😳
Hoping that you will write on the last element 'Air' too on SwaSan 😳 😃

Originally posted by: -Prithi-

amazing OS

Originally posted by: rerose

Wow lovely OS ,ur title was soo apt,loved it to the core,it was just awesome👏👏😳

Originally posted by: Alohomora.

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Originally posted by: princess_tara

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Hi Viji ! Just an amazing conclusion to an amazing series. it was just perfect, the only thing i am sad about is that there isn't going to be a 5th part. Please, please do think of doing Air also, at some stage.

Coming to this OS, I was just so impressed with your imagination and sheer creativity. The way you gave the background for DPs childhood, his bond with his mom, the wonderful folk tale which you have taken so much effort to portray in such a beautiful manner. 👏 hats off to you, Lady. I repeat again that you are probably the very best writer i have ever come across on IF. 👏

While reading your narration of DPs childhood and journey to adulthood and becoming a father, i could almost imagine it like a movie playing in front of me. Too good! I loved the way you have explained his bond with Sanskaar & Swara, also his desire to remain balanced and impartial between all the people he sees as his children. You really explained him very well as "Space" element!

And SwaSan...what can I say. You described Sanskaar's and Swara's pain at their separation so wonderfully. And the climax terrace scene, their love confession, with your reference to the dialogues from Hobbit (Desolation of Smaug) was just MINDBLOWING. So very romantic and passionate! 😳

I must say i also loved your poetic description of the dawn and dusk skies. 😊 Went very well with the concept of Space.

Thanks for writing this OS and the entire Elements series Viji. Of course all your previous works also. I keep re reading all of them again & again, I must say all of them are absolute masterpieces!

Hi Viji! :)

This was long due. Was really busy in work and I wanted to read the FF with a clear head and now I finally did. 😊