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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#141

Originally posted by: NitaMikealson
Hi Viji,

I knew i had to catch up with the other elements once i read Air. And finally i started with space. Loved it dear.

DP early child hood was great. It gave us an insight of him being the one with Vision. I liked how you explained that while he wants to shower all his fatherly love he is not able to express them due to the fact he never received them.

Ofcourse i will love swasan scene. It was a treat to read. I too like happy endings just like DP. Me off to read other elements now. It my problem once i start something i get overly addicted to it.

Sorry for the short comment. This was really an awesome OS dear. I just want to let you know that. Tomorrow big match. I have to sleep. I keep saying that to myself

Hey Nita Darling...🤗 🤗

So so happy that you loved this OS in the Elements series.

Thanks for saying you loved the background for Durga Prasad's childhood I had portrayed. It certainly played a role in developing his nature, as a man with a broad perspective and vision. He loves his children and those of his beloved younger brother Ram, but, not having received overtly demonstrative paternal affection from his own father, he is often unable to translate the very real affection he feels, into demonstrable gestures.

So thrilled that you loved the SwaSan reunion in the end. As a huge SwaSan fan, that meant the world to me. 😊

Lots of Love

Viji

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maaneetfan

@maaneetfan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#142

Thank you for the wishes Viji...promise I'll reply properly for Air too soon...mwaah!!

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#143

Originally posted by: maaneetfan
Thank you for the wishes Viji...promise I'll reply properly for Air too soon...mwaah!!

No problem at all Tas darling, reply when convenient. I hope to have 2 more drabbles up tomorrow, shall pm you as always. Hope you like them.

Love,

Viji

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shamina

@Sakkiyah

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Posted: 9 years ago

#144

Awesome os

I loved this os.

In the first part you beautiful described about Durgaprasad maheswari. His childhood, manhood. You covered all the important events in his life.

I really loved the story of sky and earth. It is a beautiful concept. The rain is tears of sky for the separation with earth. And I really loved the boy who wanted to change the end of the story

Durgaprasad maheswari loved sanskar as his own son and swara as a daughter.

He understood the feelings of sanskar and gave right advice to him.

And in the end the mutual confession of swasan.

It was beautiful.

Thank you so much for giving such a beautiful os

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#145

Originally posted by: Sakkiyah
Awesome os
I loved this os.
In the first part you beautiful described about Durgaprasad maheswari. His childhood, manhood. You covered all the important events in his life.
I really loved the story of sky and earth. It is a beautiful concept. The rain is tears of sky for the separation with earth. And I really loved the boy who wanted to change the end of the story
Durgaprasad maheswari loved sanskar as his own son and swara as a daughter.
He understood the feelings of sanskar and gave right advice to him.
And in the end the mutual confession of swasan.
It was beautiful.
Thank you so much for giving such a beautiful os

Thanks so much Sakkiyah dear, for those lovely words. 🤗 🤗

So happy to know that you loved this OS. That tale of the sky and the earth is one of my favorites too. So poignant and moving.

I wanted to show Durga Prasad as symbolising the "Space" element: very balanced and having a tremendously broad perspective. He considers Sanskaar as the on after his own heart, and Swara as the daughter he always wanted but never had. He genuinely cares for their happiness and well being.

Am so overjoyed that you loved the SwaSan scene. I am a major LOTR and Hobbit fan, so I referenced those lovely Kili--Tauriel dialogues in their love confession.

Thanks a lot dear

Love,

Viji

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sumana.shesha

@sumana.shesha

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#146

Wow :)

Awesome OS :)

Damn good :)

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#147

Originally posted by: sumana.shesha
Wow :)
Awesome OS :)
Damn good :)

Thanks so very much 🤗

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akanksha

@sharif_lafungi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#148

viji 🤗
as told earlier...kafi phle padh liya hai tumhara index...but the lazy bum that I am...comments are late this much...
I loved this whole series of fire water space earth...
now I don't hv more words to praise u... I ran out of them... 😆
I loved loved the foundation of sky nd earth marriage here...really very beautiful...u hv portrayed durgaprasad in a way that I hv always wished for...
I too feel he is unbiased nd very sorted person in mm...
his action...not only in space but other parts of this series also...are commendable...
I loved swasan here but dp's background nd insight to his character was what kept it more gripping...
u hv a way with words viji...ur thoughts demand undivided attention...it seems as if we have lived through every character...
once again...wonderful job viji...
stay blessed

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#149

Originally posted by: sharif_lafungi
viji 🤗
as told earlier...kafi phle padh liya hai tumhara index...but the lazy bum that I am...comments are late this much...
I loved this whole series of fire water space earth...
now I don't hv more words to praise u... I ran out of them... 😆
I loved loved the foundation of sky nd earth marriage here...really very beautiful...u hv portrayed durgaprasad in a way that I hv always wished for...
I too feel he is unbiased nd very sorted person in mm...
his action...not only in space but other parts of this series also...are commendable...
I loved swasan here but dp's background nd insight to his character was what kept it more gripping...
u hv a way with words viji...ur thoughts demand undivided attention...it seems as if we have lived through every character...
once again...wonderful job viji...
stay blessed

Hey Akku...🤗 🤗

Yaar I was so moved when I read your comment. I must have read it 2 or 3 times. 😊

I wanted to portray an interesting background for DP in "Space" and AP in "Fire". I was so happy to hear that you found these very gripping and intriguing.

That folktale of the marriage of the Earth and Sky is one of my favorite takes from childhood. Very poignant and touching. I wanted to show how this had struck a chord deep within Durga Prasad, given his innate desire for justice and balance.

I always used to admire Durga Prasad's character a lot (with the exception of how he was shown handling Kaveri and Dadi/Ragini's blackmail 😉). That part I explored in my Dyuta Parva --Karna Parva series.

But in the Elements series, I wanted to explore the strength and purposefuless of his character, his role as the unbiased head of the Maheshwari clan. He genuinely thinks of Sanskaar as the son after his own heart. And he does think of Swara as the daughter he never had, as well.

Glad you loved SwaSan's portrayal as well, how they realize and confess their feelings for each other.

To have a cherished reader say that they could literally live through each character, is such a privilege. Thanks so very much my dear.

Lots of Love

Viji