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Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#221

Originally posted by: -Manita-

Thanks a lot Neha......welcome to the forum !!
I had seen your likes on my FF but am so happy that you commented today !!😃😃

Thanx a lot Manita Di 😊

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NinjaInPyjamas

@NinjaInPyjamas

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#222

You'll be updating tom!!! Pakka na!!

*yay*

Youve always been an awesome writer main kitni baar bolu?!😆

Loved this part truly..there is always a very pleasant tone to youe writing...which I like 😃

Your writing is so real life based...its very natural for someone to look into someone else's cell as they search for a no. and the consequent getting hurt as they move suddenly...no OTT like swirling and falling...lol

Am not racking my brains for holi as it is the same 2-3 ideas pop up each time😆

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NinjaInPyjamas

@NinjaInPyjamas

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#223

🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

your husband actually said that!!

🤣🤣 Dont make me averse to marriages from such a young age

🤣🤣🤣🤣

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Manita

@-Manita-

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#224

Originally posted by: togepe30
Loveddddd the part.........Hate Zarine for coming at the wrong time........
no worries jaanu...there will be no dearth of these moments when these two are together😉😆

But m super glad it was she who disturbed them and saw them like that....Hopefully she will keep her distance from Shaan now !
Hai naaa............we all are same to same......me wanted 'her' to see them and make Khanak happy.....such an AH I am.....

Hmm..........Aisa kya hua tha holi pe??

Was that the one instance where they came close?? Thats why she doesnt want him close to her kya?
Good guess............Thank God I decided to post next one tomorrow itself..........

Cant wait for tomorrow's update.......!!
Thanks for liking it.....😃.

Luv,

Vandu

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Daebak

@Daebak

Trailblazer

+ 7

Posted: 14 years ago

#225

Originally posted by: -Manita-
no worries jaanu...there will be no dearth of these moments when these two are together😉😆

Hailaaa......cant wait for when they are together...Me thinks khanak ka to be fiance will get shaan to confess his feelings....Coz only the thought of losing her can make him confront his feelings....Hez trying too hard to hide them as of now....!😆😆 I hope its SOOON !!

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Manita

@-Manita-

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#226

Originally posted by: vatsalya
You'll be updating tom!!! Pakka na!!

*yay*

Youve always been an awesome writer main kitni baar bolu?!😆

Loved this part truly..there is always a very pleasant tone to youe writing...which I like 😃
Your writing is so real life based...its very natural for someone to look into someone else's cell as they search for a no. and the consequent getting hurt as they move suddenly...no OTT like swirling and falling...lol😆

Am not racking my brains for holi as it is the same 2-3 ideas pop up each time

thanks a lot Vatty........yeah, I am pakka updating tomorrow..........
thanks for cute comments........
and regarding Holi thing............to be very frank....I am not a professional writer to come up with some dhamakedaar idea😳😆😆..............same 2-3 ideas pop up in my head too.......so don't expect much....it'll kill the fun.........😆...........

.*Manita sighs again that she decided to update tomorrow*

regarding hubby thing.........yeah he said that really and believe me it is considered sweet after years of marriage😆😆😆😆...............at least he just said dimaag kahan rahta hai and did not scold me left and right...........

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Shamima

@-shamima-

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#227

Awe shaan and khanak clearly enjoyed being together in a locked washroom and awe how shaan just loves to watch her every expression and feels at ease with her with him and awe khanak like a love struck teenager and she saw that he is concerned about her and loved the line where shaan answered her question in his mind that he would have loved to stay locked in the washroom with her and ooh the last line I wonder what happened and csn't wait for shaans reaction to that anyways anther great update 😊

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-Ray-

@-Ray-

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#228

That was SUPERB mani. I was glued with my entire attention till the end, which I do for very few ff/os.....Its mindblowing👏

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shiksha_03

@shiksha_03

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#229

dis part ws brilliant n i m eagerly waitn for tom n pls reveal d whole past tom

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Ramani

@RB81

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#230

hai manita,
tat was a wonderful update..loved the convo b/w shaan-khanak..they r super cute as always..both of them admiring the other but at least i feel tat at times khanak shows wat she feels..but y shaan is keeping all to himself..really i'm thinking when will shaan let khanak know wat he really thinks abt her..and i really expected something to happen when they were close..Hate Zarina for coming at the wrong time..and i'm also happy that it was she who came n saw shaan with khanak..Oh how happy khanak was n shaan is clueless y was she happy..khanak said no to shaan for lunch..she could hav said yes..ok now as vandu suggested n 4m ur reply i think the flashback abt their past answers all these..

final thing,really u got locked in a washroom?but pity u,u were alone there..expecting ur next update n for the past of shanak..
luv,
ramani

Edited by RB81 - 14 years ago

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