FF~Trespassers Prohibited #1~ Note : Pg 152 - Page 21

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Posted: 14 years ago
Wow part 7?.....I really need to catch-up....
Will you be updating the ' Firends ' FF Manita?.....
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Posted: 14 years ago
Manitaa ..

OMG OMG ..really ... I did that ??

You mean i dint edit my posts ????????
*Whacks myself* !!!!

Sorrry Sorrry .. When you update the next part today .. I will comment for all threee !!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Ha ha very funny mani. I ll def catch up tonite. But may not be the first one to comment like i usually do. @shal even i noticed that you are the second one to post after me but it always remains reserved. Lmao.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: The_May_Rose

Wow part 7?.....I really need to catch-up....

Will you be updating the ' Firends ' FF Manita?.....



@ May.....you haven't read part 7........😲.....😭........
I'll posting 8 and 9 today and tomorrow..................better read and comment before that........................Go ......you have loads of work to 😆😆................

@ Friends..............do you want me to do that?? ..............there were so many technical difficulties I faced during Friends that I realised what CVs must be going through😉😆😆................that is the reason I started this only ShaNak story................no tension....😆...........only ShaNak !!

I will update Friends if I get enough requests but only after 1 month, as I am tied up loads of things right now !!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -Manita-



@ Friends..............do you want me to do that?? ..............there were so many technical difficulties I faced during Friends that I realised what CVs must be going through😉😆😆................that is the reason I started this only ShaNak story................no tension....😆...........only ShaNak !!

I will update Friends if I get enough requests but only after 1 month, as I am tied up loads of things right now !!

Omg!!!!![:O]

R u serious????

I thot u were nt updatng friends coz u dnt hv tym......

I dnt knw u hd sum technical problem wid it.....

Ok here's a request 4m me....

Plz continue wid frnds.....
Whnevr u gt tym.....😃😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
Cant wait for the next part !!!! CONTINUE SOON !!
I totally want you to continue FRIENDS......I love both the couples of that fic !!!
Luv,
Vandu
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: roshnimanoti

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R u serious????

I thot u were nt updatng friends coz u dnt hv tym......

I dnt knw u hd sum technical problem wid it.....

Ok here's a request 4m me....

Plz continue wid frnds.....
Whnevr u gt tym.....😃😃



@ roshani.........not having time was definitely one of the reasons of not updating Friends, though there were difficulties as my FF had all 5 characters having equal space sharing so I could not reduce Kavi Abhi and Ragini's characters to be reduced to sidey's with less space.

will certainly update it but I have a few exams lined up in April......so after 2nd week of April, I'll update Friends Forever.....😊.....
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Posted: 14 years ago
hello...mani...you posting the update today or wot????

yes? yes? yes?....tell...tell
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Posted: 14 years ago

Thanks everyone for the response uptil now...

love you all...

Thanks Hina for the siggy's...

Please press 'like' if you read it and like it...it's a special request to silent readers too...


Story till now...

Parts 1-6 ...Shantanu is the strict boss whom Khanak continuously irritates. They always end up at a negative note. She goes with her friends to a disc, and while returning back, meets with an accident. When asked about family, she gives the cops Shantanu's number. He comes to pick her up and is worried for her but Khanak is shocked at his concern and argues with him instead. They reach her building and find the gates locked. To pass time, he suggests that they go for a drive and they go to Juhu beach !!At the beach, they talk and accept that they are attracted to each other, though only physically ...and they should stay away from each other because it is the best for everybody. They make a truce treaty that says that she will not interfere in his life and he will behave nicely with her. But again she asks personal questions, and he tells her to mind her own business !!
Shaan talk to himself and regrets being rude to her. She talks to her friend Jassi and confesses that she always had a crush on him and therefore she can't keep to herself when things are related to him. She promises to maintain dignity and distance from him. She does exactly that and they don't talk for three weeks though they work at the same office. Zarine enters the office as an associate of Shaan.

Part 7. Khanak is upset with Zarine working close to Shaan and avoids him; Shaan is annoyed at her ignoring him and corners her for the same and by an error they get locked in a washroom.


Trespassers Prohibited
Part 8



I am taking down the part --
Will soon write a gist that helps to understand the story 😊



Edited by -Manita- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Yayyyy... updated!!!
Okay will be back after reading properly!😉
Twice... read it twice. debated to quote your whole update. Really. Each line made me crack up and had goosebumps all over!! Oooohhh..
The best line that cracked me up was Shaan muttering.. "You think only girls have a reputation.." hahahahaha ROFL!!! Best one liner crack from Shanatanu!! So typical Shaan!!!😆😆
The second situation was the qt-ans one!! Hahaha, well these two will never agree or be on the same wavelength or no wait.. they agree to disagree on everything right!!😆😆😆😆 cracked me up aga😆in!! Lovely. Holding my sides as they split!!
Third situation was oh so lovely!! She sprinting up to climb through the window!! Wow.. I thought men did such things!! Loved the role reversal. Again typical Khanak - Shantanu nature and character.
You have their essence well etched out girl!! Brilliant!!! This is Khanak-Shantanu nok jhonk!!
And now last but not the least those heart beating moments.. my heart rate is still terribly fast.. Dhad..dhad..dhad..dhad..😆😆😳
once.. no twice.. no thrice when he nears her... Sigh 😍
The best situation reserved to the end!! Zarine opening the door. Aur kuch accha lage na lage about Zarine, I loved her timing!!! 🤣🤣 And Khanak's shining bright eyes to have Zarine open the door!! Yesss.. *my fist in the air* especially after discovering that he did not pick her up after all... Muhahahaha.. I think he knows!! But chalo I am good with that!!
Those moments when they are close... oh so tender and soft! like tingles running down my spine everytime I read them!!😳 Beautiful 👏👏
And the whole situation handled with such finnesse!!👏👏 Aww you made my day Mani!
Mwaaaaa... Waiting for their past to unfold as I am sure it holds the key to many questions that arise in my head!! but shall be a good girl and wait patiently!!😃😃
Edited by jparker - 14 years ago

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