FF~Trespassers Prohibited #1~ Note : Pg 152 - Page 24

i love the kind of bond these two share here...like we can't get along and we can't stay away either😆

cant wait to now abt the past!..

hey Manita......

Ha ha mani wonderful is all i can say now . Stuck in a stupid place. Reading it from the mobile in the dark like a bed time story . Will give my detailed comment when i get back home

mani dear..thanks 4 the update...was waiting 4 it...

amazing manita 🤗🤗🤗

loved the update Manita! I wonder why she does not like Holi? Keep up the great work!😃

Loved it dear!!🤗

Hi Manita
Just read the part 8
Lovely update
please continue 😊

Thanks all of you for the response to part 8......
love you all.....

Thanking all those who posted after my post and who I missed thanking.....

@ Shamima .......thanks honey😃 !! I always love your comments and the way you consolidate the whole story in few lines !!👏

Originally posted by: cadbery

That was SUPERB mani. I was glued with my entire attention till the end, which I do for very few ff/os.....Its mindblowing👏

@ cadbery -- thanks a lot dear ! it was indeed a compliment !!

@ shiksha......thanks dear.....I will try to post the whole past thing today......and thanks for commenting. I have missed a few parts of your FF.....have to read them and then comment.....sorry re....I miss if I don't get pm's..........plz pm me if you update next !!

@ Ramani......thanks a lot honey for that awesome comment !! loved your comments !!

@ manju darlingg..........*hugs*.....you described the bond as I had conceived it.........can't stay together, can't stay away...........muahhhh !!! I knew that you would love the zor ka jhatka that Zarine got😉😉😆...........and wow............the promo idea is cooool.👏...............good.......keep reading FFs all over IF and bring us really cool ideas !!!

@ ammu ...........thanks a lot sweetie....😃!!!..........patience is the key....for the next part !!

@ angel_9............thanks for liking and responding dear....😃........loved your comment !!

@ priya cool,.......glad that you could read it even when you are out of town. and you read it on phone as a bedtime story..............awww, this is sooo cute. flatters me..........!!!

@ naveen..........thanks dear........I hope the wait was worthwhile !! loved the response !!

@ sayni..........thanks a lot dear !!🤗

@ adventure _gurl............thanks a lot sonali........!!

Originally posted by: simiv

Loved it dear!!🤗

Romance in the Loo!! Hai and a 5 star one at that..brilliant!!:)

Loved the convos as usual, a lot of give and take, and I loved all the lines but especially " I did not realize that you were just too close to get hurt!" So much said in those few words...👏👏👏

thanks a lot simi......
@ bold -- It is my personal favourite from the whole part 8..........thanks !!

@ Krithika.........thanks a lot sweetie....Keep reading !!

Heartfelt thanks a lot to all those who pressed 'like' button !!!

love
Manita