FF~Trespassers Prohibited #1~ Note : Pg 152 - Page 22

awesome partss manitaaa....

Originally posted by: jparker

Yayyyy... updated!!!

Okay will be back after reading properly!😉

Twice... read it twice. debated to quote your whole update. Really. Each line made me crack up and had goosebumps all over!! Oooohhh..

The best line that cracked me up was Shaan muttering.. "You think only girls have a reputation.." hahahahaha ROFL!!! Best one liner crack from Shanatanu!! So typical Shaan!!!😆😆

The second situation was the qt-ans one!! Hahaha, well these two will never agree or be on the same wavelength or no wait.. they agree to disagree on everything right!!😆 cracked me up aga😆in!! Lovely. Holding my sides as they split!!

Third situation was oh so lovely!! She sprinting up to climb through the window!! Wow.. I thought men did such things!! Loved the role reversal. Again typical Khanak - Shantanu nature and character.

You have their essence well etched out girl!! Brilliant!!! This is Khanak-Shantanu nok jhonk!!

And now last but not the least those heart beating moments.. my heart rate is still terribly fast.. Dhad..dhad..dhad..dhad..😆😆😳

once.. no twice.. no thrice when he nears her... Sigh 😍

The best situation reserved to the end!! Zarine opening the door. Aur kuch accha lage na lage about Zarine, I loved her timing!!! 🤣🤣 And Khanak's shining bright eyes to have Zarine open the door!! Yesss.. *my fist in the air* especially after discovering that he did not pick her up after all... Muhahahaha.. I think he knows!! But chalo I am good with that!!

Those moments when they are close... oh so tender and soft! like tingles running down my spine everytime I read them!!😳 Beautiful 👏👏

And the whole situation handled with such finnesse!!👏👏 Aww you made my day Mani!

Mwaaaaa... Waiting for their past to unfold as I am sure it holds the key to many questions that arise in my head!! but shall be a good girl and wait patiently!!😃😃

Originally posted by: kubare

Mani darling , ....*Muwah & hugs*

Loved all the 3 parts..I caught up with all hree right now that I missed.

Part 6.....Loved loved ...how you showed Zarine effecting Khanak and how Khanak avoiding or not talking or even smiling at Shaan effected him. 😆😆

Part 7 😆😆😆Now this was truly so cute....him making an excuse and coming early to avoid picking up Zarine to her being angry on hm for helping her out from a tough situation as she belives he's come with Zarine to you ending it with them locked in the washroom...😆😆

Part 8 😆😆😆Just a question before I continue to praise you...is the situation you described of being locked in the washroom ever happen to you or someone you know or ...completely inspired from movies, book etc...😆

Love these two and love how you go about describing each of them so clearly but keeping the mystery surrounding them intact...

Oh and looks like Khanak dislikes Holi because she lost someone very near and dear on that day ...and my guess its her bro Jai...am I right....

Can't wait to read the next part from you soon...

Originally posted by: saaaz

dude,,,,you are killing us....seriously their romance through your writing is killing me...GOSH!!!!

Originally posted by: -Manita-

thank God.................you are here Krishna darling.......
I had been calling you announcing your call since a long time.........😆.........I even dhamkoad people to tell you to post otherwise I won't update........
see, I can't lose my regular readers and I don't pm anyone..........so I don't come to know whether you know I updated or not............😕😆😆............

Darling would never miss your FF I make it a point to check on Weekends if you updated but since I did not come online fro nearly a week...from last Friday missed your update...

thanks for the response................always love your comments.....

regarding -- experience with locking in washroom, 'your truly' has suffered it when I got locked in the washroom of a cinemahall and after entering I realised that the knob to open it was missing.....'meri phutti kismat'.......I was all alone😆😆......nothing adventurous happened.😭😭.....called hubby who came from the movie and opened from outside and added quite unromantically " dimaag kahan rahta hai tumhaara.".😳........now this is called "phutti kismat"😆😆😆😆

😆😆😆Hubbies....😡😆😆😆 they are the most unromantic ones in such situations but we love them nah....😆😆😆😆 with all their short comings 😆😆

regarding Jai...........he is very much alive rey..........ShaNak have been talking about him since past 7 parts...........but you people have come quiet close to the reason of her hating Holi.........that is the reason I am posting part 9 tomorrow itself...........😛😛

Hum....I was confused on that ...that he's being mentioned and all...it can be him dead or seriously injured or someone else very close to her..who suffered . Can't wait for the mystery to be unfolded tomorrow....😃

Originally posted by: rockingneha

Hey! Umm m a silent reader but m so in love with ur FF!! It's very different n hatke! 😃 I'm lovin how the story is progressin n love the cute n sometimes intense nok-jhoks between these two 😆 very grippin!! 😳

And as usual, it was an awesome update! Totally loved it! 👏

Neha